Talion in Equestria

by Silas5399

Chapter 5

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Before the chapter begins I am not going to make Luna talk in the old way and before any one says anything think about this how was nightmare moon able to talk normally in the show when she showed up. Not only that I am going to have enough trouble with Zecora rhyming has never been my thing. also for some reason many of the links a put in this chapter will not work properly so you will have to copy paste them sorry about that.


As I walked through the forest we reached our destination a complete replica of minas morgul complete with catapults ballista's and trebuchet's.

I made golems and moving armor during my preparation for nightmare moon Stone golems where able to control the earth and plants around them while iron golems are able to refine earth into various metals and gave talion a stable supply of armor to create moving armor. The stone golems where about 20 feet tall and easily manipulated the stone and they continued to finish the bridge that connected the city to the forest. The iron golems where 29 feet tall and they absorbed stones boulders and rocks with their left and as metals came out their right and into giant metal containers that where to be put into a storage area under the city when night came.

As where walked across the bridge the stone golems acknowledged us then returned to their work and when we neared the gate I saw my archers on their rounds as they patrolled the walls.

As we went through the gates as through the levels of the city we saw many patrols of solider walking through the streets each group consisted of 20 spear men 15 sword's men and 12 berserker's.

As we reached the tower at the end of the city I noticed the tower guards guarding the doors to the tower doors.

I dismissed the timber wolf as they left the city I entered the tower the inside was a circler room with pillars around the room and the Palantir was in the center of the room on an alter with a protective force field around it.

I also added a throne at the back of the room the throne was made of gold with red cushions in the bottom the back and on the arms.
Once I sat down on the throne I finally took my mask off and put it on the arm of the throne. "I hope celestia does not do anything drastic this could turnout bad if she does" I said as a relaxed and took a deep breath. "But if she does I will be ready to defend myself" I said as I got up from my throne and looked out the window.


Pegasus guard


"We found him" I said to my partner "we should report to the princess.

"AAAAAH" I heard as I turned my head to see my partner had several arrows in his wings as I turn back I saw a group of armored archers aiming at me as I toke cover behind the tree I was hiding in I heard several thuds and then ran for my partner as I grabbed him and began to fly away to canterlot


Three hours of flying later


I finally reached canterlot as the other guards saw me and my partner they rushed to help us and as they took my partner to the medical wing of the castle I said "I need to report to the princess" they nodded as they began to escort me to the throne room and as I entered I entered the room the princess saw me and said

"Everypony leave the room" celestia said.

"But princess" One of the greedy nobles of canterlot said

"I said leave" celestia said in a angry voice and as everypony left the room only me and celestia remand in the room. "Did you find him" the princess asked me in a serious voice.

"Yes we found him in a large city in the middle of the forest but their were strange creatures made of rock and metal and their were archers along the walls of the city and wounded my partner" I said as the princess look changed to worry.

"Is he alright" the princess said with shaky voice.

"Yes he might not fly again for awhile but he will live" I said as the princess look softened and then changed back to serious.

"Is their anything else anything at all"

"The only thing we saw was that he lives in the tower at the back of the city but it is also the most protected and their must have been thousand of soldiers in that city"

"Ok take the day off to check on your friend" celestia said as I walked out of the throne room.


Celestia POV


As the guard left the room I prepared to teleport to ponyville before luna walked into the room

"Celestia what are you doing" luna asked me.

"I am going to teleport to ponyville to see if twilight has found anything on this creature.

"Then I want to come to" luna said with a determined look in her eyes.

"Luna you only just returned you need your rest" I said.

"No" Luna yelled "I want to thank the creature that helped free me of that nightmare".

"Fine" I said giving in to her request as I teleported both of us to twilight's house.

"Princess" twilight said happily hugging me "I think I found something" my eyes widened.

"what did you find" I said as she handed me a book with a bookmark on one of the pages.

"I think he is a wraith" my eyes widened as I remember the power of a wraith "but I don't think he is just any wraith from what I read his power only match one kind of wraith" Twilight said.

"And what is that" I said wanting to know what our new resident in the forest is capable of.

"A ring wraith" the moment she said those words my hands were shaking ring wraith's were able to learn anything dark magic related in an instant and could use it with ease and they had a nearly inexhaustible magic supply and they could never die. "What should we do should we reach out to him and try to make peace because the last recorded ring wraith in history was a warlord that nearly took over the world before he vanished into thin air.

"Yes we will try to reach out to him but we should prepare for the worst I will send a letter to canterlot and have them send a battalion of guards here and we will make our way to the city he created in the everfree" I said as I wrote the letter.

"But what if he see's this as an attack" twilight said with a scared look on her face.

"I don't know but we must be prepared" I said as I sent the letter

"Sister don't you think you are a little to worried if it is true that he is a ring wraith then he could have easily killed me and been on his way but he helped free me and did not harm me in anyway.

"I know" I said as I sighed "but we must be prepared for anything for all we know that could have been a act to trick us into false security do he can attack us.

Luna took a deep breath and sighed "Ok but I will be their as well to make sure you do not do anything drastic" luna said


The next day


Shining armor brought a force of 500 to ponyville with everything prepared we made our way to the city in the everfree to visit this wraith.

As we neared the city I saw was a force of 100 stone and iron golems we at the gates of the city across the long bridge separating us and them and I saw a few hundred archers with their bows drawn and ready to fire. As I was about to step forward a saw something flying in the air surrounded by black and green smoke as it landed in the top of the wall it was the wraith twilight described but with out the mask it was a creature I have never seen before all wraith were alive once before that became what they were but he was something I had never seen or heard of before half of his upper body turned a ghostly green as it amplified his voice simpler to the canterlot voice

"May I ask Why you have brought this army to my city gates princess" He said as the sky darkened "did I not tell you what would happen if your guards attacked me and yet you bring a army to my gates you better have a good explanation for this or else" he said with a demonic voice and as I continued to walk forward the guards stay behind and the gates opened as I walked inside to talk to the wraith and hopefully not start a war we can not win.

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