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The First Re-Mark

by iowaforever
A traveler arrives in Our Town, challenging all that Starlight believes in. But then, Equality is truth... right?

Stable. Calm. Orderly.

That was what Starlight Glimmer had sought when she set up her community, a place where all ponies would be equal in everything they had or did. No fighting, no competition, no cutie marks: it would be the perfect symbol of Equality by which the rest of Equestria would rally behind.

But one stormy night, a mysterious mare arrives to question Starlight about her beliefs, doubting whether Equality is truly what Ponykind needs. Surely such notions are those of an older time, and Equality is a future that Starlight can defend.

... isn't it?


Special thanks to Avenging Hobbits for editing and proofreading.

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Everyone
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
Drama
 
SO

12986 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

6 Chapters:

  1. "Call me Revelation" 2018-09-22 16:46:31 UTC
    2448
  2. "The Basis of Division" 2018-09-23 14:22:42 UTC
    1704
  3. "Invasive, Dark Magics" 2018-09-25 01:19:37 UTC
    3101
  4. "Nothing More to Give" 2018-09-28 01:39:03 UTC
    2861
  5. "The First Step" 2018-10-07 15:21:07 UTC
    2024
  6. "Make a Change" 2018-10-12 02:52:37 UTC
    848