The Great Dream

by MajorPink

Rainbow Party

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Author's Note

Before you read, I did upload this story before but I took it down and rewritten it so it hs better grammar and more filling parts. The story is smooth now. If you think I am missing something comment below and I will try and fix it. only comment ways I can fix my writing style and not just to tell me I'm bad at writing


Rainbow Party

Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie were meeting at Sugarcube Corner for a sleepover that was gonna last a few nights. It was just going to be the two of them and no one else. On the way to the meeting spot, Rainbow Dash was stopped by a flashing light that caused her to follow. She followed the light to the edge of the Everfree Forest. She huffed and started to walk back not wanting to follow the light deeper in, but before she could turn around she heard someone call for help. Rainbow's ears perked up trying to hear where the distress was coming from. Not to her surprise, it was in the forest and without hesitation, she ran in looking for the pony in trouble. It was too dark for her to see, the trees blocking the moonlight making it sort of pitch black. Rainbow tried to look for her surroundings but she noticed that she was completely lost. Her ears fell flat as she looked around not able to see where she was let alone know where she was in the forest.

Pinkie Pie picked up a few things before heading to Sugar Cube Corner. She planned a whole night of them making Smores. Pinkie skipped along the path humming to herself. She was thinking of all the fun things they would do together through the few nights they were spending together. Pinkie heard a voice behind her as it sounded like Rainbow Dash. She turned around dropping the things she was holding.
"Dashie! We were supposed to meet at the bakery" Pinkie said as Rainbow stepped to her.

"Yea about that Pinkie. I'm not going to make it" Rainbow said heartbroken.
"Awe I had a big night planned. What came up that was so important," Pinkie asked trying to hug Rainbow.
It's nothing, don't worry about it" Rainbow said pushing Pinkie off her. Pinkie was confused also hurt that her best friend could not make it to the activity they planned for weeks. Pinkie only watched as Rainbow Dash walked away. Pinkie was on the verge of crying as she just sat on the ground with her ears lowered.

Rainbow Dash was rushing around trying to find a way out of the forest. She looked up and knew the brush was too thick for her to fly through, but she could fly low to the ground to make herself faster. Rainbow Dash started to fly in a direction that she had a good feeling about. After a moment she flew right out of the forest. She sighed with relief then landed and started on her way back to Sugar Cube Corner. After a good few minutes, she found Pinkie Pie sitting on the path crying softly to herself.
"Pinkie! Are you ok" Rainbow Dash said running to her.

"Y-Yea I'm just sad at what you told me.." Pinkie responded as she wiped the tears from her eyes.
"What do you mean? I was lost in the Everfree forest" Rainbow said confused helping Pinkie Pie up.

"You said you couldn't make it," Pinkie said sniffling.
"Pinkie I'm here now and we are going to have a fun time we have been planning this thing for weeks," Rainbow said smiling. Pinkie smiled and picked up her stuff. The both of them walked together talking and laughing but Rainbow's mind was stuck thinking about what happened to Pinkie.
"Hey Pinkie, what did I say to you word for word?" Rainbow asked.

"Oh well you walked to me and told me that you were not going to make it to the sleepover, it made me so sad," Pinkie said opening the door to the bakery.
"Well, whoever that was it wasn't me, I'm way too excited about this sleepover," Rainbow said hugging Pinkie. They both walked into the bakery as Mrs. Cake was there to greet them.
"Hello, girls are you two ready for the sleepover." Mrs. Cake asked.

"You bet Mrs. C!" Pinkie exclaimed hoping to her.
"OK calm down Pinkie, I want you two to promise me that you won't leave me a mess to clean up when I get back," Mrs. Cake said holding the keys to Pinkie.

"We promise not to leave a mess Mrs. Cake" Rainbow and Pinkie said taking the keys. Mrs. Cake smiled and hugged them both before leaving them to their night.

Rainbow closed the door behind Mrs. Cake and looked at Pinkie who was going through her bags she brought. Rainbow watched closely as she tossed out random items. Rainbow sat still watching as pinkie tossed a spoon that hit Rainbow on the nose. She looked at her nose and rubbed it as Pinkie pulled out stuff to make smores.
"let's get started!" Pinkie said running to the kitchen as Rainbow followed.

" Hold on Pinkie lets get changed into our Pajamas," Rainbow said grabbing Pinkie's tail.
"Oh fine," Pinkie said running to the bathroom to get changed. Rainbow chuckled to herself as she pulled out some marshmallows she had laced with ecstasy. Rainbow switched out Pinkie's marshmallows with the ones she made then quickly got dressed in her pajamas. Pinkie skipped back into the kitchen and took out a marshmallow and ate it.
"OK, how many do you want Dashie," Pinkie asked chewing the marshmallow.

"Just one Pinkie, " Rainbow said smiling.
"Just one? I'm going to eat ten!" Pinkie exclaimed. Rainbow blinked a few times knowing that it was a bad idea.

"Pinkie maybe you should only eat one or two, not ten," Rainbow said trying to change Pinkie's mind.
"Rainbow that's no fun, it's a sleepover we eat and eat then we sleep," Pinkie said eating another marshmallow. Rainbow Dash gritted her teeth as Pinkie made a few smores and gave one to her as Pinkie was eating one. Rainbow watched her for a while and after seeing the marshmallows have no effect on Pinkie she ate her own Smore kind of relieved.

Pinkie ate two more s'mores made with Rainbow's marshmallows. In the meantime, Rainbow Dash was feeling funny as she ate another S’more. Rainbow looked at Pinkie then at her hooves as she began to sweat. Her heart rate picked up as she watched her coat and skin peel off of her hooves. Blood pooled under her as it swirled making a hole. Rainbow fell into the hole and smashed into the ground causing her to lose her breath. She sat up and looked around seeing the Everfree forest around her.

"H-Hello," Rainbow called out as her voice echoed through the trees. Rainbow walked for a while then she saw Pinkie laughing sitting on the ground blood surrounding her. Rainbow Dash walked closer.

"Pinkie?" Rainbow asked tapping Pinkies shoulder. Pinkie stood slowly and turned to Rainbow With the biggest smile screaming bloody murder as her eyes burned out of her head leaving dark holes and a charred face. Rainbow kept watching as blood ran out of pinkies ears and mouth and pooled under her. Rainbow then tried to fly away but couldn't take flight. When she looked at her wings she saw they were broken so she ran off as tears fell from her eyes. She looked behind her to see if Pinkie was still there but saw nothing so she stopped and looked around only seeing darkness still hearing Pinkie scream. Rainbow covered her ears and closed her eyes tight as she heard Pinking calling her name. She opened her eyes to see Pinkie standing over her.

"Dashie are you ok your so hot?" Pinkie asked helping Rainbow Dash up as she started to cry.
"P-Pinkie please don't eat another S’more" Rainbow pleaded.

"Why Rainbow what's wrong with them," Pinkie Pie asked holding Rainbow close.
"I, I laced them with ecstasy, I thought it would brighten up our night I'm sorry Pinkie," Rainbow Dash said looking at Pinkie with tears streaming down her face.

"Why didn't you tell me Rainbow that is so dangerous." Pinkie said scolding Rainbow Dash.
"I know Pinkie I'll ask from now on, I just had the worst trip in my life," Rainbow said wiping her eyes.

"What did you see," Pinkie asked.
"Well, I looked at my hooves and..." Rainbow stopped as she looked at pinkie to see her eyes were black holes. Blood started to drip out of the holes where Pinkie's eyes were supposed to be. Rainbow jumped screaming and ran away. Rainbow tripped over her own hooves and fell through the ground. She fell as the darkness surrounded her. What felt like hours she then fell into a table then rolled off of the table onto her back on the ground. Rainbow looked up to see a small light swing back and forth. Before Rainbow could sit up Pinkie jumped on her pinning her to the ground. Rainbow looked at Pinkie who has a huge smile on her face.

"It's time for you to smile Rainbow!" Pinkie said holding a knife with her hooves. Rainbow struggled as Pinkie stuck the knife down into her cheek. Rainbow whimpered in pain as Pinkie laughed. Rainbow then used all her strength to pull the knife out of her cheek with pinkie trying to push it back down. She struggled as the pain from the wound made it hard for her to fight back. With all her strength Rainbow managed to push Pinkie off her and run, but Pinkie chased after her laughing the whole time. Rainbow Dash looked behind her to see how close Pinkie was only to see that Pinkie was almost on top of her. Rainbow stopped to try and trip up Pinkie which caused Pinkie to ram into her. They rolled on the ground and Rainbow managed to get on top of Pinkie. She then grabbed the knife out of Pinkie's mouth and stabbed her until her laughing stopped. Rainbow dropped the knife breathing hard looking at Pinkie who was now bleeding out on the floor, what she was hoping is that Pinkie was not gonna be a problem anymore. Rainbow fell onto her back blacking out from pain and fear. When she woke up she smiled and chuckled a little knowing it was a bad trip. She rubbed her eyes and walked into the kitchen to find Pinkie and when she did her eyes went wide as her heart rate picked up, what she saw was Pinkie Pie laying on the floor with multiple stab wounds in her chest and stomach. Rainbow ran to her as tears fell from her eyes

"Pinkie! Pinkie please" Rainbow yelled as she put her ear to Pinkie's chest listening for a heartbeat but heard nothing. She cried on Pinkie's lifeless body as she then tried to bring her dead friend back to life, but no matter what she did it was useless. Rainbow then started to panic as she got up and went to wash the blood off herself.

" I, I wasn't here I was, I was at home sleeping," Rainbow said to herself washing, making sure to get all the blood off her coat. She ran out the door and flew up to her house hiding her pajamas under her bed along with the knife still covered in her friend's blood. She looked out her window as Mrs. Cake walked into the door of the bakery and her scream is heard throughout the town. The first to arrive was Twilight Sparkle as she was in town near the bakery. Twilight ran to see what was going on only to see Mrs. Cake breathing hard and crying some.

"What's wrong Mrs. Cake," Twilight said running to her.
"Pinkie Pie, help, blood everywhere," Mrs. Cake said what she could as she was in shock. Twilight went inside seeing bloody hoof prints leading into the kitchen. She followed them to see Pinkie Pie dead on the floor covered in blood. Twilight gagged and ran out to Mrs. Cake

"Can you go get Applejack and Rarity, I'll keep everyone out till you get back," Twilight said covering her mouth with her hoof. All Mrs. Cake could do was nod and run off to get Applejack and Rarity. After a few minutes, Applejack and Rarity ran up with a lot of questions.

"What is it Twilight? What has got Mrs. Cake all upset?" Applejack asked tilting her hat back.
"Go into the kitchen, we need a plan we don't need anypony to see this," Twilight said as they walked into the kitchen seeing Pinkie's lifeless body. Rarity gasped and ran out tearing up as Applejack walked out looking at the ground more angry than sad.

"I have an idea but we will need a cart," Applejack said
"What do you mean, Fluttershy should know about this and Rainbow Dash" Rarity spoke up stepping to Twilight.

"Rainbow Dash was supposed to be with Pinkie last night," Twilight said looking at Rarity who stepped back some.
"So what you're saying is Rainbow Dash could have been the one who killed Pinkie," Applejack said holding tears back.

" It's a possibility," Twilight Said as Rarity walked back and forth.
"OK Rarity go tell Fluttershy to meet us at the hospital entrance," Twilight said as Rarity nodded and ran off to get Fluttershy

"And Applejack go get a cart and hurry back," Twilight said as Applejack ran off to get a cart. Twilight looked into the sky as a tear fell to the ground. After a few minutes that felt like hours, Applejack ran back with a cart and stopped by the door of the bakery as Twilight went inside with Applejack. They walked out and put Pinkie pie on the cart and covered it up. They ran to the hospital where they hoped a doctor could help Pinkie.

Fluttershy and Rarity ran up to the hospital to meet Twilight and Applejack. Fluttershy still had tears falling down her cheeks as she approached the hospital.

" OK, so girls we need to find Rainbow Dash to see what happen to Pinkie Pie," Twilight said walking away from the hospital as the rest followed her.
" Oh when we find her I'm going to tear her a new one," Applejack said walking fast.

"I can't believe Pinkie is gone," Fluttershy said flying above Twilight
"I can't either Fluttershy, I need you to check Rainbow's house to see if she is there," Twilight said as Fluttershy nodded flying off to her house. Twilight, Applejack, and Rarity followed on the ground. As they reached Rainbow's house Fluttershy walked in and found Rainbow sitting on her bed looking out her window at the bakery.

"Rainbow please come outside, please," Fluttershy asked as she put her hoof on Rainbow's shoulder. Rainbow turned and looked at Fluttershy, both of their eyes were watering up. She got up and slowly went to the ground as Applejack was the first one to confront her.

"What in the hell happen to Pinkie!" Applejack yelled which made Rainbow stumble back.
"I just," Rainbow tried to say but couldn't speak.

" I just what, Rainbow tell me what happened!" Applejack yelled louder as she pushed Rainbow back
"I killed her! Are you happy!" Rainbow Dash snapped at Applejack. Applejack looked at the ground her face covered by her hat and turned around. It looked like she was turning to leave but Applejack kicked Rainbow in her muzzle knocking her to the ground on her back. Rainbow sat up accepting her punishment as Rarity walked to her and smacked Rainbow across the face causing her head to turn. Rainbow didn't move she only spit the blood that was building up in her mouth on the ground. She then looked up at Rarity as she huffed trying not to cry and walked off with Applejack. It was Fluttershy's turn as walked to Rainbow and just pushed her back down to her back but then ran off crying. Rainbow sat back up and she looked at Twilight who was only watching her.

"Well Twilight what are you going to do, beat me to death, rost me alive with magic because you would be doing me a favor," Rainbow said holding her face in pain.
"Rainbow unlike the others I'm not going to beat you or roast you. I want to know what caused you to do this." Twilight said helping Rainbow Dash up to her hooves. Rainbow began to tell Twilight what she did and what happened to what she could remember.

"Dash you knew way better than doing drugs like that," Twilight scolded.
" I know Twilight I messed up, I messed up so bad," Rainbow replied wiping the blood off her nose.

"Don't worry Rainbow I'll figure out a way for you to get your friends back," Twilight said smiling slightly.
"No Twilight they will never forgive me for what I did to Pinkie," Rainbow said flying up to her house as Twilight followed.

"You don't know that Rainbow you have to give them a chance," Twilight said following Rainbow to her room.
"They won't give me a chance!" Rainbow Dash snapped at Twilight.

"You have to believe in them," Twilight said stepping back.
"I believe that Applejack will kill me with my back turned," Rainbow snapped again.

"Rainbow stop talking like that you know what I meant," Twilight said putting her hoof on Rainbow's shoulder. Rainbow's eyes watered as she started to cry.

"It's going to be alright Rainbow, stay here I'll convince your friends to come and see you so you can explain to them what happen, just like you told me," Twilight said wiping Rainbow's tears off her cheek.

Twilight flew down to go get her friends as Rainbow dash pulled the knife out from under her bed looking at it. Pinkie's Blood was still stained on the knife. She sat it on the bed looking out the window hoping her friends would understand what happened. Rainbow felt someone pull her wings back rather hard and before she could turn her head to see who it was she felt a sharp pain in her back between her wings. As she looked behind her she saw Queen Chrysalis standing behind her holding her wings in her magic while smiling.

"Thank you for making it easier to kill two ponies with one knife," The Queen said chuckling. Before Rainbow could say anything Queen Chrysalis took the knife and cut Rainbow's wings making them useless. She then stabbed the knife into Rainbow's back again before throwing her from her house sending her down to the ground. Rainbow fell as she looked up at the Queen who was watching her. After a quick seconds Rainbow crashed into the dirt landing on her back causing the knife to shove through her and out her chest. All rainbow could do was look up at the Queen as her blood pooled around her. Rainbows life faded away quickly. Rainbow's eyes closed slowly as Queen Chrysalis smiled hugely.

"Two down four to go," Chrysalis said as she flew off laughing darkly.

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