Equestria's Greatest Warrior (Rewrite)
Chapter One
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Finally started the Rewrite, if you haven't noticed, the story should be much better than the old one, also with an even more overpowered character, Story Spoiler:I fixed up the meteorite scene, making the person who sent him to Equestria more playful and wanting entertainment more than anything.. I also decided that my character shall become as powerful as possible, within the first few chapters.
I also need to say again, I want the readers to he involved in this story, that why I made a discord directly for this story, where your can share ideas on what mlp episodes I should cover, what the next power my character should get, and other stuff, the link to this discord is in a comment I left on the main page of the story. It's an unlimited use and time link so it's pretty much there forever.
Anyways thanks for reading my story, hope you have a great read of my future chapters!
K Thx Bye
Signed
GogetaSama
Chapter One
Chapter One: A New Beginning
-Story Start-
It's July 24th, My name is ... I don't remember my real name. I had decided to take a walk to forget how utterly uneventful my life really is, it was nice to just walk and enjoy myself while looking at the scenery of the countryside feilds. That was, until that fucking rock landed near me.
July 24th, 2016, 3:46p, some kind of meteorite has peirced the Earth's atmosphere. We have no idea what his meteorite was made of as it gave off an... Otherworldly glow. No one at the department has been sent out yet, it will most likely get investigated tomorrow morning and then brought back to be studied. That was, until some unpredicted seismic activity accured well after the crash down of said meteorite, it was then pushed up to now.
The walk was ended when a meteor hit the ground a about a mile from where I was, it gave off a light i could see, hell people could probably see it from miles away. I didn't know what to do at the time, but something compelled me to go to it, and that's what I did. When I got close enough to the crator to see what it was the light was almost blinding, yet I responded to the call of the rock to come to it, I never knew why it had to be me who found it and I guess I'll never know.
The moment I saw the rock after climbing down to it, I was mesmerized by the way it glowed all the colors of a rainbow, it was like looking at something you knew wouldn't be seen ever again after it was gone. I still felt a pulling sensation, making me want, no need to touch it, to pick it up and hold it closely. I hesitate to touch it, slowly reaching out to it, pulling back a little every time it gave off a particularly strong glow, untill finally, I grabbed it. At first I closed my eyes , as if waiting for something to go wrong, when nothing happened I opened my eyes slowly, only to see that nothing had happened and the rock wasn't pulsing anymore, but still gave a faint glow.
I picked it up, still holding it at an arm's length away from me, I still feared that I shouldn't have come here at all, but the call to pull it close was strong, and eventually, I gave in to it and strongly hugged the rock to my chest. Suddenly the glow from the rock grew to encompass the entire crator, and the blackness enveloped my vision.
When the people arrived to check the site, the meteorite was gone, leaving only a crator. The workers spread out asking different close by families if they or other members of their family had found a glowing rock. None of the families asked knew anything about said meteorite, but one oddity was found, it seemed one David Harrison had left his home earlier that day, taking with him some of his possessions. We recorded everything he took with him, what he was wearing and how old he was. From what we gathered, he was a 1.8 meter tall caucasian male with a lean build, brown hair, and green eyes. He had left the house wearing a black jacket, red undershirt, dark blue jeans, and black shoes with red highlighting. Although, what he took with him was odd, it seemed that everything electronic in his room was gone, meaning he had somehow left with his phone, play station 4, full desktop set, a laptop, a flat screen TV, and several other things...
And that on this day between 3:50 and 5 pm, he had fallen off the face of the Earth.
I woke to a void, when I looked around all I could see was a faint glowing buttun in front of me, it said "Begin Character Customization?" Y/N I tried to think of what had happened to me, or if I had went to bed and this was a dream. I then remembered what had happened, I had held that stone, then...
I opened my eyes to nothing but darkness, I immediately started to look around, but I couldn't see anything but myself. That's when I heard a voice, a very smooth and inviting female voice.
"I see you are confused, don't worry, you'll understand what happened to you soon." I looked around, desperaely looking for the voice. "You cannot see me? That is a real shame, I'm told that I am quite beautiful. Oh well, let's continue shall we? I have been searching your world for someone to take a certain position in another world, a very special world that you know really well. I needed someone who had a good heart, but could do what was necessary to people who did not deserve forgiveness. That's where you come in, you have the qualities that I needed in you, but also something more."
"What do you mean by that?" I said, by this point I had decided this was a dream and that I had been playing Kingdom Hearts too much.
"You have the ability to assimilate powers from anyone you meet, unfortunately, your Earth has no one to copy powers from, making your ability useless. But in this new world, it will be very, very usefull,. Especially with the occasional visit from others. So I decided you deserve a chance to be my pick for this job. So, since you'll need some way to defend yourself, please choose four or five powers, they can be from anything you've seen in life."
'infinite growth' "The Gamer plea-"
"NO, not that one, too overpowered, pick something else."
'damn' "I guess Ki from Dragon Ball Z, Chakra front Naruto, please let me have Kurama, Rietsu from Bleach, and -"
"You know what, you can have The Gamer, and that will be your last power"
"Acceptable"
"Good, now what do you want in your Gamer ability like?"
"Just make it all encopensing, also, can I have a fiction adaptation ability?"
"I guess you can have it. That is pretty much what your power is anyways."
"Ok then, thanks... I guess."
"Good, now off to your job you go!"
"And this job is?" I asked, still convinced that this was a crazy dream.
"Why to provide a good story of course, oh and also, you may call me, hmm since you can't see me just call me Yami, ya little weaboo. Have fun my little Displaced."
"... Shit, this isn't a dream is is?"
"Nope"
And with that, I was unconscious.
“... Shit” I swore, “It really wasn't a dream. Wait, then where am I? From what… Yami said before, I should probably be in Equestria.” I looked at the option screen in front of me again.
Begin Character Customization?
Y/N
I had decided, I had a chance to be a new person, in a world of friendship, and I was going to take it. I knew my parents would miss me, but they would get over it, I was planning on moving out soon anyways. They will probably assume I'm dead at some point too. Oh God, how long will they mourn? Would they ever forget me? How would it affect my other family members? No, best not to overthink it, they will get over it eventually.
So, I pressed yes
Beginning Customization
Please wait…
Loading Profile…
Calculating Stat Values ..
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Presenting Profile Page…
Name:???
Level:1
Exp:(0/100)
Race: Not Selected
Power Level: 5(average power level of mortal without access to an energy source, like Ki.)
Health:80
Ki:locked
Cha(Chakra):locked
Rie(Rietsu):locked
Ki Regen:locked
Chr(Chakra) Regen:locked
Rie(Rietsu) Regen:locked
All stat values start at 10 other than Int and Wis, as they were loaded from previous life.
Str(Strength):8
Affects character's overall power.
Agi(Agility):12
Effects overall flexibility and Dodge rate
Sp(Speed):13
Effects overall Speed of character
1 point = mph sprinting speed.
Mind:15
Affects the memory of the character, how much they can recall, how fast they can perceive the world around them.
Int(Intelligence):23
Affects the character's ability to think rationally and make strategies.
Wis(Wisdom):18
Affects the character's ability to think beyond prelayed knowledge, to “think outside the box” as it were. High wisdom can create a Sixth (or in the case of energy users Seventh) Sense.
Chr(Charisma):5
The character's ability to understand others on an emotional level, and to be more knowledgeable on social cues and interactions.
Status Points:10
These are spendable points you gain from each level up, you also start with ten points.
Debuffs are loaded from previous life.
Buffs
You must earn your Buffs, too bad you still have Debuffs.
Debuffs
Introvert:
You are severely introverted, this causes Socially Inept Debuff if left alone too long.
-2 Chr
Socially Inept:
You remained an introvert for several years, causing severe lack of social interaction.
-3 Chr
Neutral Buffs
These are buffs that both positively and negatively impact your character.
Speed over Strength:
You have a naturally speed based build but you also have never (willingly) worked out in your life other than when forced to.
-5 Str but due to frequent forced exercise the penalty was lowered to -2 Str but also +3 speed and +2 Agi.
Please select your name and race
Name:
State, think, or type your name in.
A keyboard icon was at the bottom of that last bit, 'huh, why isn't my name alre- wait…’
“WHY CAN'T I REMEMBER MY NAME!?” I screamed
Do to interference by Gai- Yami, you must choose a new name.
“... That bitch.”
Please choose a name
Name:
Fine, if I have too, don't remember liking my old name anyways “ I choose Hikari” 'what, why Hikari?’
Please choose a race, or a mix of races. You can only mix up to four races.
Race:
Human
Saiyan
Namekian
Arcosian
Majin
Demon
Hollow
Visord
Biju
Vasto Lorde
The Italicized races are the only races that you can't mix with other races.
“Holy shit… that's a lot of choices and mixes I could do.” I stated, “yeaaaa, not picking those last five, they all could have some kind of massive drawback.”
I thought about it for a while before picking human, saiyan, namekian, and arcosian. It then gave me four labeled sliding bars with percentages on them, at certain percentages it gave different buffs for belonging to that race. I immediately moved namekian up to 1% giving me a Regen Buff for regrowing limbs at a low rate, along with moving arcosian to 2% giving me immediate access to Ki and a significant boost to my physical stats by around 15, and a good boost to my power level as a result. Then I evened it out between saiyan and human as best I could, 49% saiyan 48% human, that gave me full access to saiyan instincts, transformations, and having a tail. The human side gave me minor survival instincts, emotional affected powers, and from both human and saiyan being the dominant races, I kept my human appearance. The emotional affected powers buff basically made my emotions affects my power, giving me a power boost whenever I am pissed. Along with that, the Saiyan side also gave me a physical stat boost of 5 and the human side gave me a boost of 10 to mental stats
Race selected:Mix (Saiyan,Human,Arcosian,Namekian)
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Calculating Stats…
Presenting Profile…
Hikari
Level:1
Exp:(0/100)
Race:Mix
(Saiyan,Human, Arcosian,Namekian)
Power Level: 500
Health:80
Ki:100
Cha:locked
Rie:locked
Ki Regen:locked
Chr Regen:locked
Rie Regen:locked
Str:28
Agi:32
Sp:33
Mind:25
Int:33
Wis:28
Chr(Charisma):5
Status Points:10
Buffs
Minor Namek Regeneration:
You can now regrow all body parts other than the head/brain and heart
Regrow limbs within 2 hours
Regrow organs within 6 hours
Can cut Regen time in half by focusing on regrowing the limb and/or organ.
Arcosian's Innate Power:
Due to you being, even slightly, related to the Arcosian race, you get their Innate ability to use ki and their Innate power
+15 to all physical stats
Ki usage gained
Saiyan Warrior Race:
Due to being at least 45% Saiyan and it being your dominant race you gain all Saiyan traits and access to obtain the ask transformations.
+5 to physical stats
Human's Strength of Will:
Due being at least 45% Human, you gain human's minor survival instincts, emotionally affected power level, and rational thought processes
+10 to mental stats
Debuffs
Introvert:
You are severely introverted, this causes Socially Inept Debuff if left alone too long.
-2 Chr
Socially Inept:
You remained an introvert for several years, causing severe lack of social interaction.
-3 Chr
Neutral Buffs
Speed over Strength:
You have a naturally speed based build but you also have never (willingly) worked out in your life other than when forced to.
-5 Str but due to frequent forced exercise the penalty was lowered to -2 Str but also +3 speed and +2 Agi.
'Huh, so that's what it's like to get suddenly many times stronger' suddenly a red box appeared in front of me
please choose the type of world you would like.
Pony
Anthro
Human
'Well shit... Guess I'll go with Anthro then' I thought. I cleared my throat, dry at the prospect of actually entering this new world, "Anthro" I stated. Then a new red box opened as the old one closed
Anthro Selected
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Placing character in forest...
Knocking out character for transport...
'what wha-'
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