Equestria's Greatest Warrior (Rewrite)

by ssjvegito

Chapter Sixteen

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Chapter Sixteen: Luna's Work and… Moar Moves!
-Story Start-

When I was full, and after a disgusted yet prideful look from the chefs, we left the dining room and headed for the throne room. We passed by ‘Tia as we went and said a quick goodnight to her as she seemed very tired and was most likely heading for her room. Again, I placed the illusion of Dark Light over myself as we entered the throne room.

I immediately saw the guards had changed, the new ones wearing dark silver armor. They were more diverse, having an equal mix of Unicorns, Pegasus, Earth, and Thestrals too. I am not sure why, but ‘Tia's guard is much more focused around Unicorns with a few Earth ponies and very few Pegasi. Scratch that. I know why and it's a very simple reason. Racism. It is very controlled and is looked down on by most, but it is still there and someone in the guard’s high ranked must be racist.

Enough of that though, I'd deal with it later. For now, I wanted to help Luna with her sessions. There might be a very small amount to deal with, but considering that Luna probably isn't completely caught up with recent events, she would need some help. I was hopeful that some of the few that came actually had good requests.

It was after a few minutes that the first pony showed up, she was in a very fine looking business suit. I actually thought that she was a lawyer until she introduced herself and I realized who it was.

"Good evening Princess, my name is Octavia, I came in order to ask if you or your sister had a preference of music for the Gala," she said in a very polite manner, ending it with a bow.

I guessed they hadn't chosen any songs to be played yet. I wondered if I could teach them a couple of songs from my world. It would be so funny to get them to play Final Fantasy music and no one know what it's from.

"I guess my sister and I would have to choose a selection of songs, or, I could give the job to you to pick out songs that you think would fit the Gala. I guess you could also ask the advisor for my sister and I here, Dark Light, too,” Luna replied, looking to me with a smirk. Well played.

Octavia turned to me, "Do you have any requests?" She asked me.

"Hmm, it depends. My songs are not very well known by equestrian citizens as I have traveled the world. If you feel up to learning a few songs from me in time for the Gala, then I would have some requests," I told her.

She put on a fake smile, "I believe I could learn a song or three in time for the Gala." I think I offended her talent.

She left soon after and we had another hour or so before another person came in. Someone that shouldn't have been able to get in. It was that damn pony from 'Tia's court, Fake Love. I had thought the guards would have put an alert out to not let this guy in, but I guess not.

When he decided to speak, I felt he had come close enough. "Heeyy, baby, names Fa- mmhff!!!... umfgaan!?(again!?)"

"Yes, again. I thought I told you to never come here again. I even told the guards to keep watch for you so that you couldn't even if you tried. Yet here you are, going after Princess Luna since Princess Celestia is now out of reach. Do you remember what I said I'd do if you didn't leave?" He started to scream, even if it was muffled by my hand. "I see that you remember, now then, I hope trying to gain one of the princesses was worth it.

His eyes widened before he started screaming as I picked him up and held him above me. His screams were now much louder as I took my hand off of his mouth. He must have begun to realize what I was planning to do, along with the guards and Luna, as he started to plead for his life while Luna ordered me to stop as the guards surrounded me.

"Hikari! Stop this! I already heard about him from my sister and while he does deserve some dungeon time, he doesn't deserve to have his spine broken!" Luna yelled out to me. I guessed she was right. Besides, this could have killed him instead of just paralyzation like I wanted...

"Fine, but I'm still gonna beat the shit out of him." I let him down and told the guards to surround us in a circle. Once they did so I spoke again, "This shall now be a fight till K.O. between me and you, scum." I snarled. "No one is to interfere, just make sure he doesn't run away." After I finished talking I backed up a little from Fake.

Fake seemed to notice that fighting me was his only way out and put up his hands in a boxing stance. I didn't bother to take a stance against him. Though, I lowered my power level down to around his, about one thousand six hundred. Damn, even this asshole was stronger than Raditz. You know what that means kids? Yep, TFS reference time!

"Your decently strong, you seem to be worth one point one Raditz," I told him.

"What does that even mean?" He asked.

"It's a way of measuring power, and unfortunately for you, at full power, I am worth two hundred fifty thousand Raditz," I said, he seemed to pale, before smirking, guess he didn't believe me. "Although, I have lowered my power level to match yours, so you should have a... slightly fair match," I finished.

"I don't care what you say, I don't believe shit until I see it for myself! Hrraaaa!" He yelled while charging at me.

I quickly took a simple stance and dodged his sloppy right hook, before throwing a solid straight punch to his face. He stumbled back before facing me again and taking his boxer stance. We both stared at each other for a bit before I sped forward, catching him by surprise as I hit him with a quickly thrown together combo of basic moves. I finished with a right back spin kick, knocking him towards the guards.

They just caught him and pushed him back into the ring. I suspect they are on my side in this. Fake also seemed to realize this and got a little angry. It showed as he ran towards me with a very telegraphed punch. He should have known how this was gonna end badly for him by doing that since he said he was a boxer and his moves, even though they were beginner ones, showed he had training.

I decided to quit messing around and shot my power level up to two thousand. The moment he threw the punch, it was over. As the blow came close I put up my forearm and deflected it while bringing my right up for a gut punch. He was winded painfully and backed up holding his stomach while I calmly strode forward. I came up close and bitch slapped him with enough force to send him flying to my left, through the guards as they parted for him, and into one of the marble columns. He sank to a sitting position before passing out from the pain.

I just stared at him for a minute before speaking, "Get him to the palace doctor and have him checked over, then throw him out when he wakes up. This is enough of a punishment for ignoring my warning about going after the princesses." Then I pointed to a random guard, "You, make sure all palace door guards are notified to not let this bastard in. The next time someone does, it will be them getting their ass kicked. Got it?"

The guard I pointed at rapidly nodded as he ran off towards the barracks, probably to tell all the guards what happened so that those who get the next shift will know. Then I turned around to see Luna, who looked both greatly appreciative, slightly horrified and a little disappointed.

"I am glad you defended my honor, but I wish it was me who stood up for myself." She said, “I do not suppose you will be the one cleaning up the blood on my throne room floor?" she finished with a grin, “nor the one paying my cleaners to wash it up…”

I just stared at her for a second, then spoke, "Ok then, not what I was expecting you to say. Anyway, I need to go, I got things to do." Namely training, "I'll see you soon Luna. Have fun with the rest of your sessions," I said as I walked out the doors to the throne room.

"I won't!" Luna yelled as I left.


I had left abruptly, I know, but I really wanted to train for a bit. Not to increase my power, well kinda, but to create new skills. So with that, I set up my HTS Chamber and set it for three years. Now all I had to do was think...

What should I get though? There were so many things I could do. A new power source? New moves? New transformations? Maybe even assimilate a new race? I just didn't know what to go with.

Then it hit me. I could try to remember a world so that it would appear on my Tenkaichi training system, but I would have to remember a show, movie, or even a book. That in itself was hard to do, ‘cause I won't claim to have the best memory. I mean, I barely remember my childhood at all, only key moments.

All I needed to do was remember something, anything, useful. Even that was hard to do for me. Wait, could I just import a special command as a combo move?

Move Learned:
Dragon Rush:
Lvl 1 (0/100)
A twenty hit combo with multiple ways of ending it, can be modified to fit the needs of the user.
Damage varies: 1500 to 3500 depending on moves used.
Cost varies: 300 to 1000
Current ending moves:
(DBZ Budokai 3)

Oh... so I could. Well at least I had that. Though, that didn't use my fiction adaptation. Probably just created the move through a memory of how it was performed. If I could import game mechanics then I could import a lot more broken shit.

I thought it was time I gained new transformation though. Starting with this one.

Move Learned:
Legendary Super Saiyan
A higher grade form of Super Saiyan, said to be the true version that is told about in the stories. Can cause madness and insanity: negated due to Gamer's Mind.
Gives an x80 to base, but increases by 10 every minute it's in use.

Huh... not super useful, but could be in the right situation.

Incoming call from: Yami
I've been thinking, I was kinda being a bitch by putting limits on Fiction Adaptation every time you use it. So I’mma go ahead and take those off, you can barely think of anything to import anyways. Also, nice job figuring out that if you know a move well enough you don't have to use Fiction Adaptation to import it. Have fun!
End Call

Didn't even give me a chance to say anything... Bitch. Well, not so much a bitch, she did take off those limitations that she was putting on in frustration. Little did she know that I had just remembered that there were fan-made transformations. I could abuse the shit out of this now.

Three Moves Learned:
Super Saiyan 5:
A fan-made Super Saiyan transformation, is told to be a form of great power that rivals even the strongest being.
x300,000 to base

Potential Unleashed:
Unlocks your potential in transformation form. equal to your strongest form, but without any strain and only slight changes to base look.

Ultra Instinct:
Mastery: 1%
Time Limit: 1 minute
A technique that is almost impossible to learn, even for gods. The being that uses this relies completely on instinct, cutting the time between thought and action to nothing.
Mastery is how close you are to completing the technique, while below 75% a time limit to use is in place. Can be stacked with Transformations, but only after 80%

'Oh, so that's how it feels to learn Ultra Instinct in an instant. Huh.' And then everything faded to black.


Author's Note

I havn't said this in awhile so... take it away Gamer System.

This story is Proofread/Edited by Duskhoof and Miles Skywalker.

Thank you,
Hope you all enjoyed the chapter.
K Thx Bu-Bye
GogetaSama

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