The Beginning - Chapter 1
Author's Note
so, this is the WIP basis basically that will be fleshed out later in separate chapters, but this is it so far, leave comments to your opinion on like the story board of my story, more will be added as time goes on, this is my first story, and this is also like, the thing i will base the fleshed out version on, so, I'm talking on the FoE redux group (it is also pretty awesome) so, give me your suggestions and opinions in the comments, etc. etc. anyways, have a good one! :)
story board
One day, a small fox pup was abandoned in the everfree, and about 5 years after that the caribou take over, he is no normal fox though, his wings make him incredibly special, and most likely worth a ton, which some guards will be happy to use
Blaze ran through the everfree, wings flapping every now and then so he can jump over roots, he sees a strange brightness, and hears a strange sound, so, he cloaks his wings with his magic, and sneaks over, unsure of what this strange place is. As he pokes his bright orange head out, it gets quickly grabbed by some passing guards, who pull the scared shitless fox out of the forest, and quickly pin the fox down on his stomach, and hold him there not sure what to do with the struggling fox, who tries to yell at the guards, a pony and caribou respectively, to let him go.
“Let me go you stupid beasts!” And with that statement blaze struggles harder, but due to the fact that he is tiny compared to the guards, he is held down, and then, he gets cuffed, and lifted. he continues to struggle, making the guards laugh at his efforts. he stops and pants, held at least half a foot off the ground. Blaze smirks and zaps the guard holding him with his magic, he gets dropped with a swear, and he tries to run back into the forest to escape, but is quickly grabbed again and punched in the stomach, knocking the air out of his lungs and also making him cough
Then, the pony guard speaks “and what are you? Maybe we can get a potion so we can sell ya, don’t think any of your species can talk, so you should be worth a pretty bit”the earth pony smiles, and blaze’s eyes widen and he struggles again, then gets knocked out, stopping the magic hiding his wings, showing them in their full glory, making the guards smile even more as they dragged the sleeping fox off.
A few days later, blaze having been changed, and collared, black obviously, and was now sitting in a shop, collared and confused, he, no, she was still able to hide her wings and zap anyone looking to buy her, any scaring anyone that thinks just because she walks on all fours, that she isn’t intelligent, scaring off a few buyers. She is sitting in a window, messing with her magic, as nobody was able to find where she output her magic, much to her amusement. So there she lay, orange fur contrasting the white surrounding her, making ponies and caribou alike look at the strange animal, full of wonder, a few mares and cows run up, wanting to pets her, but she just zaps them away, then a strange sign gets put up, as she is from the forest, she never learned how to read, but she can tell, this won’t be good for her.
It’s been a few months for blis, as she was renamed, she tried a hunger strike, but she eventually just got force fed, they managed to disable her magic with an enchantment to a collar, so she has been pet, and even hugged against her will, and due to the fact that she has lost the ability to hide her wings, they have gotten clipped, she never gave up though, even when she had been muzzled because she had bitten a mare that had gotten to touchy, when they declawed her, for nearly the same reason, or even when they made her trip nearly constantly, she was lucky in one way though, her body was tiny, and she still was able to stop any advances that went past hugging, much to the annoyance of the males that tried to do said actions, so there she still sat, tripping out of her mind, and then, as they gave her her lunch, she crawled over, the trip making walking an impossibility, and as she ate her laced food, her muzzle having long been removed, she began to crack, and her spectators saw it, she was beginning to give up, she was allowing the mares and cows to pet her, even hug her, and the trip stopping, allowing her to see, it had been months, the summer she had been captured on, had turned to winter, and she had a bow on, which she was unable to remove, she lay there, and began to chew her paw, having nothing else to do. Then with a tinkle of a bell, the door opens, and she gets ready for most likely a cow to come and hug her, but it never happens, though there is the sound of bit tinkling, then hooves walking over to her, and she knows what has happened, she has been sold. As she freaks out, she gets quickly muzzled, and picked up, then put in a box, she continues to panic, trying to get out, but is quickly injected with something, and falls asleep in the crate.
The now vixen gets carried to her new home, this will not be fun for her, but for her new master it will be.
She wakes up, still in the crate, but judging by the rocking she is feeling, she is in a carriage or something, she moves into a better position, as she does, the rocking stops, and something rolls the crate she is in onto the top, making her squeal in surprise. There is laughing as she struggles around in the enclosed and cramped box, trying to get right side up, as she tries, she gets rolled again, this time onto her nose, making her yip, but whoever is doing this to her is kind enough to put the box back upright, only to open it, and king her shrink back, the sky hurting her eyes and also, she is scared who could find her struggles funny.
“Why hello there” a voice is head from outside, she is unable to see who is talking though, much to her disappointment.
