Chryalsis Always Wins!(Revamped/Dark Ending Version)

by Guilty2501

Rating: mature
Tags: Porn, Sex, Nightmare Rarity, Queen Chrysalis, Non-consensual, Violence, Princess Celestia, Twilight Sparkle, Anthro, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 1766

The original of this story was supposed to be about what happened when Chrysalis won in season 2 and this is how I would approach this story concept.

Now a quick warning I do have Garfield23's permission to do this and name it this. This is all my original work though, I promise this is more of a re imagined version because like Spike2000 I want this to be a darker ending. It means I hope for the story to match the original as an alternative but not to be better.

Here's an overview. Chrysalis wins, she blasts Shining before the magic shield burst of love can be used and Chrysalis gets to conquer Equestria and form both an evil alliance and a Changeling empire. This is pure smut.

Here's a link to the original story and it's sequel to show why Garfield23 let this fail so badly.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/252406/chrysalis-always-wins
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/264585/chrystal-gamble

Also a special thanks to Spike2000 who I'm naming as co author, he asked Garf to write a proper ending to Chrysalis always wins and Garfield23 declined but did suggest me to do it. So without Spike2000 this wouldn't be happening here's a link to his page

https://www.fimfiction.net/user/307113/spike2000

This story isn't as good as others but I tried my best.

Published 2018-10-10 00:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-10-10 00:30:01 UTC

Chapter 1- Well what do you know....I win!

“No! Please! No stop! Shining I love you” Cadence begged as Shining armour was taken to the dungeon with the other prisoners and the Princesses were presented to Chrysalis. She had won, she had crushed these pathetic ponies and their woefully prepared defences, she had won the battle, the war but also now each Princess stood with their magic suppressed and their hands tied behind their backs. Chrysalis also had those 6 mares that bore the elements of harmony in the dungeon she’d deal with them later. Cadence was still struggling, she’d come close, oh so close to defeating Chrysalis but at the last moment Chrysalis had knocked Shining out and had bound Cadence “You bitch! You’ll pay for this!” Cadence snapped but Chrysalis simply laughed as she traced a clawed finger over the busts of the three princesses “Get your finger off me!”

“Why should I?” Chrysalis said making a point to grab Cadence by the breasts and began roughly groping her “You know what’s going to happen? I’m going to violate you…each mare in this country is my breeding slave!” she then added “But you Cadence as my first catch will be my first breeding mare!” she let Cadence go “At least that would be the case had I not secured Celestia and Luna! I never expected to seize you two! But here you are!” the two were forced by the changeling guards to bow to Chrysalis, Luna struggled a bit but Celestia had been subdued by her time in the cocoon, her mind had gone dancing and Chrysalis knew she’d enjoy all other pathetic mares begging for mercy but seeing Celestia drooling like a broken slut was too much “HA! Look at your ruler! Her powers are gone as is her mind!” she put her foot on Celestia’s head and added “I could squish her head to goo but luckily for an old bitch, she has a really hot body and the Spawn created from her will be a pure Changeling Princess!”

“You changeling scum get your foot off my sister! She is the rightful ruler of Equestria!” Luna protested but a guard poked her back with a spear and Chrysalis grabbed their crowns “What are you going to do with those!?”

“I’m going to turn them….!” Chrysalis began as she spoke her horn lit up and the crowns were turned into collars attached to the throne by chains. The throne of Celestia then turned pitch black as the throne was traded for the anti-magic throne “Into your slave collars!” each of the collars was placed on the princesses as a changeling guard burst in “What is it?!”

“One of the 6 element bearers escaped!” he said as he looked horrified “The pink one tripped me and then…the rainbow one jumped on me and they others ran for it!” he gulped “We managed to get back the purple, yellow and white one but the orange one escaped”

“Thorax? Thorax…Thorax” Chrysalis said in a disappointed tittering voice “You know the price of failure!” she zapped him through the gut and the changeling guard fell “Stupid fool” she whispered as she turned to the head of her guard, recently promoted and ready for action “Pharynx, take a legion of my troops to pursue that orange menace and bring her back! If she reaches any of the other towns we could be in for a fight” she then turned to the princesses and said “It’s time for your clothes to be removed”

“Yes your glorious highness” Celestia said as she tore her own dress off, desperate to please her mistress, her glorious body was revealed, her breasts were held in a pink bra and her panties were also pink but she ripped them off “Does my body please you, your grace?” Chrysalis nodded as Celestia smiled in joy and turned to Luna.

“No sister…please fight it!” Luna begged but her resistance was pointless as Celestia grabbed her body and ripped her dress off “NOOOO!”

“Oh what a naughty Princess…no bra or panties” Chrysalis said as she couldn’t help but touch herself to watching Celestia obeying her “How about we see some sisterly love?!” she laughed as Celestia grabbed Luna and began to make out with her “Ohhh yeah….yeah entertain your mistress…come here Cadence!” she dragged Cadence over and ripped her dress off revealing that she wasn’t wearing a bra but was wearing a pair of light blue panties “Oh you Princesses are such naughty sluts! Stop squirming!” she grabbed Cadence’s ample breasts and started groping her, her magic began to rip off the last shred of clothes that Cadence had and it would mark the end of Equestria “Now Celestia be a dear and get your sister ready for me!”

“Yes Mistress!” Celestia said as she forced Luna to the ground and straddled her “Don’t bother resisting…you are now just an immortal slave!” she put her hand in between Luna’s legs and started to finger Luna’s pussy “Ohhh you are so wet! Is it just me or did you just blush?! I get it…the reason you became Nightmare moon!” she kissed Luna rubbing their breasts together as she did and Luna seemed to relax “You wanted me! You wanted this! You naughty incest driven sister!”

“No…NO!” Luna protested but her pussy was now leaking onto the floor and a side effect of the anti-magic throne meant any sexual excitement made the victims of such thoughts desire sex like a drug. So Luna became an addict in a few moments and her mind could only think of it “Mis…Mistress please…fuck me!” she finally begged after a few minutes of Celestia’s attention.

“Luna no!” Cadence screamed but Chrysalis smirked as she had made Cadence’s collar so that unlike Luna and Celestia she’d retain her mind, she’d do the same to the mane 6. She watched as Celestia and Luna then switched positions so that Luna was sitting on top of Celestia's face and her pussy was hovering over Celestia’s face “Luna! Celestia! Stop!”

“mmmmmm” Luna moaned as she began to lick Celestia’s slit and Celestia returned the favour “mmmmm!” Luna began to tremble, clearly Celestia’s tongue was so much more talented than her own and she whimpered “Oh Tia….ohhhh you know how to lick my damp pussy!”

“Um your highness?” one of the guards asked as he walked in “We found the statue?”

“You did!?” Chrysalis said in joy as the statue of Discord was rolled in and she walked up excited to see it “With this…no creature will be able to challenge my rule!” she paused and added “Discord…I know you can hear me…I’m going to free you and I’m willing to allow you to have Ponyville” she turned to Celestia “Use your magic to allow him to speak!”

Celestia’s horn glowed as Chrysalis allowed her to use her magic “Hmm what an interesting offer” Discord’s voice sounded from the statue and then his voice took on a more curious manner “So what’s in for you?”

“You see how I have crushed the princesses?” Chrysalis asked as Discord mumbled confirmation but then Chrysalis laughed “I know you desire freedom and chaos but Celestia locked you away for only brightening up this world! I know there are powerful foes that my changelings and I cannot defeat….but with you our chances look a little better” she paused “So if you’ll agree to help us…Ponyville will be yours to recreate the chaos capital!”

Discord was silent for a long while as Celestia and Luna kept licking each other “Hmm tempting but the thing is…serving you is of no interest to me!” Discord snapped but Chrysalis laughed “Oh what is so funny?!”

“I have no intention of you serving me…I know controlling you is impossible and as I see it…if I form alliances with powerful magic users like you and King Sombra when he returns. My rule will be secure!” Chrysalis said as she then added “All we want is the freedom to do what we want! With your help we can resist threats like the ones you know are out there!”

“Can I think about it?” Discord asked as Chrysalis nodded and his statue was wheeled out.

“Now then it’s time for me to demonstrate why I enslaved you!” Chrysalis said as she hovered the Princesses over with their flanks in the air and she walked in between them “You two want pleasure but we all know that…you both desire to serve me and Cadence you don’t get a choice!” she then used her magic and from her groin a cock appeared, it was long, thick and with many bumps along its length “Ohhhhhhh I’m now so horny!” she grabbed Cadence’s flank and rammed the cock into her pussy “Ahhh yeah! I’m going to lay my eggs in you!” she grabbed Cadence’s breasts and used them as leverage to fuck her harder. Celestia suddenly got under them and began licking Chrysalis’s cock “What a good slave! Luna get Cadence to lick your cunt!”

Luna nodded “Yes mistress!” she got in front of Cadence and forced her face against her pussy “oooohhhhh!”

Cadence struggled but had no choice as she was giving Luna pleasure regardless “mmmnooommmm!!” she protested but then to her horror she felt Chrysalis’ cock pulse and then flare “Oh god!”

“How marvellous!” Chrysalis groaned as she climaxed inside Cadence and filled her up “Ohhh yeah!” Cadence slumped over holding her stomach, as she began to cry and knew instead of Shining’s foal…it would be Chrysalis’ army “You’ll have to…” Suddenly a scout flew in “This is getting annoying! I still have to rape Celestia and Luna!”

“The orange one made it to Ponyville” The scout reported.

Chrysalis was furious and roared in rage “DAMN IT! To stop that town from resisting we’ll have to kill a lot of mares….mares we could pump full of eggs!” she snarled “The remaining 5 will pay for this! Bring me…” she then remembered something, she was about to demand Twilight but then she changed it “Bring me Rarity in the bed chamber!” she turned and cupped Luna’s face “I think you and her….have something in common…a bad dream…or a NIGHTMARE!” she bellowed the last word as she began to cackle at her genius idea…this was the beginning of Equestria’s end and the rise of the Changeling Empire!

Author's Note

As I said before all credit to Spike2000 and Garfield23 for being so nice.

This story will likely have 7 chapters haven't decided yet, it depends on how well this story does.