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With her lower lip trembling, Rarity gazed up into Capper’s face. He was pressing her against the door of the small room at the inn, his sleek feline paws on either side of her body. She could feel the warmth from his breath, the living, breathing body only centimeters away from her own. Inside her, she could feel the impact of each of her heartbeats, and they increased in pace as she raised her eyes to meet Capper’s gaze. There, she would see an unbridled desire for her, a yearning to close those centimeters of space. She could feel her face flush.
“I want you,” Capper murmured to her.
She felt a small whimper of desire resonate in her throat.
It was the first time he’d ever said it like that. They’d been dating each other for only a few weeks, and in that time they had kissed, then had pressed themselves together, and Rarity had felt how much her desired her and her slender pony body. But he’d never said it out loud until that moment.
Now, as the two panted and stood caught in a moment by the door, the sound of his voice asking for her to succumb to him was enough to make her feel weak. She wanted to faint, just collapse against him and let him take her. She wanted him too then, so much, but couldn’t make herself speak.
She realized she was trembling slightly. Capper seemed to notice this too, and he cracked a slow, toothy smile.
“Not scared of me, are you?” she shook her head.
“Oh no, never of you,” she said, her voice unsteady. “I’m simply… unsure of what we do next. We purchased the room and… well… here we are.”
Capper’s smile broadened.
“Yeah, here we are,” he practically purred.
Rarity felt one of his paws slide away from the wood of the door, to where her neck met her jawline. His velvety touch traced down her face, and underneath towards the tip of her muzzle. Then, he puller her face gradually up towards him into a breathy kiss.
The moment their mouths met, Rarity felt something break in her. She fell towards him, moaning against his lips, and the space between their hips and stomachs dissolved. She felt his hips instinctively buck towards her at the pressure of her weight, and the two stumbled away from the door together. She was pawing with her hooves at his jacket then, wanting to get as close to him as possible, wanting no barrier between them. Before she realized it, they were tumbling backwards onto the expansive, soft bed towards the opposite wall.
The impact of them hitting the mattress broke the kiss. And the two start at one another, studying each other’s faces. Rarity could see Capper’s eyes trace every inch of her face, neck, hips… and lower. Her blush returned.
She nodded a soft consent as one of his paws began to move down the curve of her side, reaching achingly slowly towards that point where her inner back legs met. He hesitated, just back from her marched slightly, and she whimpered for him to continue. Then, she felt his touch against her most intimate parts, and she let out a cry of ecstasy and surprise.
“Oh, Capper,” she whined. “That feels… incredible.”
His mouth moved to her neck, and she felt kiss after kiss as he continued to run his paws gingerly over her opening. Then, gently, she felt pressure and a release as his touch moved deeper, sliding inside her.
Her hips twitched forward against the intensely pleasurable sensation, and she clutched his back and fur as he continued to touch her. Please her. Delight her.
“Oh, Capper,” she moaned again, repeating his name as if urging him to continue.
“Rarity,” he murmured again her neck. “My Rarity.”
Between her legs, Rarity could feel herself getting hotter and wetter with each stroke. She was hungry for him now, ravenous even, and she realized that she wanted more from him. She wanted him to pleasure her more intimately, more intensely.
“Darling,” she moaned into the fur of his neck. “Kiss me there too. Lick me, make me feel entirely yours!”
She felt his paws stop moving briefly, and his head moved back a little from her body. She looked into his face, and found he appeared a little confused. Maybe he was hesitant? But then, as soon as the expression was there, it was gone again, and he smiled at her. As he removed his paw from inside her, she moaned loudly. He kissed her briefly on the nose and she went silent, simply panting for air.
“Your wish is my command, my lady,” he said in a low purr.
And with that, he began to move lower, and lower, until…
Capper had no idea what he was doing.
He knew how to kiss ladies, sure, and he was even comfy with touching them until their body released. He loved leaving them as twitching, groaning lumps of pleasure beside him in bed. He also certainly didn’t mind pleasuring himself with their bodies either. But if there was one thing he’d never done, it was to use his mouth on a girl.
For one thing, he’d only ever been with cat’s before. And going down on a fellow feline sounded like a good way to get a hairball.
But this was a pony, a beautiful, sultry, classy pony, and he already knew she was far less fluffy down there than a cat. Besides, she was asking for it, and what sort of tom would he be if he couldn’t fulfill the request of a lady like this? How hard could it be, he told himself. It was probably just like using his paws, the same motions, the same strokes. Just with the tongue and lips. He could do that, for sure. He’d always been good at improvising.
He put on his best, most confident, most seductive smile as he glanced up at Rarity. She was looking back down at him, expectant, mouth open, body practically shaking with anticipation. To build that, he paused, hovering his face just above her nether regions.
“Should I?” he said, sticking out just the tip of his tongue at her.
“Please,” she said, almost ravenously. “Please, I need it!”
He let out a low chuckle, trying his best to seem confident and teasing, and lowered his head towards her pussy.
Hoping she wouldn’t see the nervousness in his face, he paused just long enough to take in the sight of her. The opening was already sick and wet from his touch, and nearest him,a nearly heart-shaped lump gleamed in the light. It looked swollen, welcoming, and seemed to pulse a little as if with her heartbeat. He had never had his face so close to a girl’s pussy before, but he recognized that this was the clit, the pleasure-sensor for women. This is where he’d have to focus all of his attention.
He flashed a quick, cocky grin up at Rarity, and readied himself. Then, letting out a soft moan, he opened his mouth and extended his tongue. Quickly and firmly, he pressed the base of his tongue firmly against Rarity’s clit, and she let out a sharp yelp of pleasure as he did. He maintained that pressure, and with a sharp flick, he licked her with the entirety of his tongue.
The next events happened in a quick series of his various senses. And all of those sense screamed that something was wrong.
Instantly, there was a burst of odd flavor against his tongue, something metallic, almost copper in taste. And it was wet. Wetter than before, like she’d already cum into his mouth with just one lick. But it still didn’t feel normal, like something was there on his tongue afterwards, a lump. And most of all, he heard Rarity screaming. And not the fun kind of screams. These sounded… horrified. Pained.
At last, he looked down, and found that where Rarity’s clit had once been, there was now a mound of raw red. And blood was trickling from it onto her white fur.
“OH MY GOD!” she was shrieking. “WHAT DID YOU DO?! WHAT DID YOU DOOOO?!”
Capper began to speak, but he again felt that odd lumpy feeling on his tongue. He extended it, and then went crosseyed as he could to look down at his tongue, where he found…
Was… was that Rarity’s clitoris?
Capper went still with shock and horrified awe. Yes. That was what had happened, he realized with a sickening dread. His lovely, sandpaper cat tongue had taken Rarity’s clit off in a single abrupt lick. And it was now sitting there on the center of his tongue, like a tongue stud.
He felt every muscle in his body tense as Rarity continued to scream. He kept his tongue out, still staring at the thing, as Rarity writhed on the bed in front of him in obvious agony.
“AHHHHHH WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?”
“I… I… I didn’t know I could do that!” he said plaintively around his extended tongue.
“YOU LICKED MY PUSSY OFF!”
“N-no just the clit!”
“AHHHHHHHHHH!”
Capper felt tears welling at the edge of his eyes.
“W-what do I do?!” he wailed.
“I DON’T KNOW, I’VE NEVER HAD ORAL SEX THIS BAD BEFORE!” Rarity roared as she clamped her hooves tightly over her still bleeding vulva. “YOU ARE A VERY BAD KITTY! BAD KITTY!”
The words triggered an instant reaction in Capper. He lurched away from her, feeling instantly sick. He was a bad kitty. He was terrible. He’d maimed his girlfriend while trying to go down on her. This wasn’t just the worst date, it was the worst of all possible timelines! The worst life! He felt the urge to vomit rising, and he swallowed hard to keep it down.
Wait…
Swallowed.
HE SWALLOWED!
He gave a gasp as, far too late, he felt the lump of Rarity’s flesh slither down his throat. His mouth was empty now, his tongue bare. Oh no...
“PUT IT BACK!” Rarity was screaming. “GIVE ME MY CLIT BACK YOU BASTARD!”
“I…” Capper said, knowing there was no right away to say this, no coming back from this moment. “I… actually just…”
She fixed him with a look, eyes watering and red and furious. She looked like a wild beast, but even then he could see realization spread over her.
“…DID YOU EAT IT?!”
“Y-yes?”
Rarity simply screamed and she began hurling things from around her directly at his head. Pillows, the bedside clock, a small ashtray, a box of, sadly now useless, condoms. Capper dodged and ducked quickly towards the door.
“GET OUT!” she bellowed. “GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT! AND CALL ME A DAMN DOCTOR!”
She didn’t have to tell Capper twice. He almost sprinted to the door, already thinking of the nearest hospital. Unable to help himself, he paused into the doorway, smiled sheepishly, and shrugged.
“A-at least you know you’re with someone who swallows after oral?”
The lamp narrowly missed his head as he ducked out and slammed the door shut behind him.
-END-
Author's Note
I AM NOT SORRY AT ALL. This was so much fun to write, I laughed so hard at myself throughout it. Anyway, I hope you maybe "enjoyed" the sex scene, and that the rest made you laugh or deeply uncomfortable. Either one works for me.
This was done as a commission for thatotherotherguy, the magnificent bastard that he is. <3 If you want to ask me for a commission, check out my user page and blog post to see if I'm still open for them!
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