A Flurry of Cute

by Nathan Hon

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Human, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, Flurry Heart, Original Character
Length: 4047

You find a strange box on the side of the road as you return home. Inside, was something that may just kill you with cuteness.

You find yourself strolling home after a day at school. In your arms, was a brown, cardboard box, which contained a certain thing inside.

You take it home to investigate- And might as well, spend some time with this something you’ve found.

Besides, whose heart wouldn’t be melted by Princess Flurry Heart?

Inspired by My Little Dashie. Also, finally decided to add cover arts! You can find the original art here, and special thanks to my best friend irl for helping me modify the drawing!:twilightsmile:

Published 2018-11-04 14:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-11-04 14:10:01 UTC

“Who would ever resist you, little filly?”

It is a bright sunny day in your neighborhood.

You just dismissed from school, and you’re walking back home with your belongings, ready for the weekend. You’re just a typical high school student- A spec in the grand scale of things. You don’t pose any crazy or magical talent, your grades are average, your life was rather simple.

So what’s about to happen to you, might just be a gift sent by God himself.

You walk along the stone pavement, passing a bunch of locals nearby. Your home isn’t too far, but not too near either. It isn’t in the urban area the school is located, but rather somewhere close by. Like usual, you walk until you leave the town, and into the countryside area, where your house is located.

But, today, in particular, something interesting catches your attention.

About a few blocks away from your house, you see a brown cardboard box, with something like a note on it, located on a bench across the road. You are curious to know about it, so you cross the street to get a closer look. Once you sit on the bench, you grab the box and put it on your lap. It is then you feel that there is a bit of weight in said box. Something is inside.

You take a good look at the box. One side of it has two little Purple Hearts, and the note you notice earlier says the words “Take good care of this Package”. You flip open the lid, to see the most surprising sight.

It’s a filly. In a box.

You gasp and close the lid to avoid her getting seen by anyone. You look around, making sure no one is here to suspect you, then you take the box and rush back home, without even thinking whether it’s wise or not.

Once you open the door to get in, you settle down your package before you close it behind you. In excitement and curiosity, you take off your shoes and rush upstairs to your bedroom with the box containing the filly. You even locked your door so that literally no one else but you can investigate said box.

You sit on your bed and open the box.

Inside, was what seems to be a tiny pony, which is known as a filly. The filly has a soft, white yet pinkish skin, it has curly hair consisting of purple and blue, and to your surprise, it has a horn and a pair of giant wings. It’s almost as big as her body, even. You cooed at her cuteness- As she was sleeping soundly when you got her. She curled herself up into a ball.

With the gust of air flowing into her compartment, she shivers a little and yawns with a squeak. She merely opens her eyes to meet your gaze. She smiles.

“H-Hey, little one...” You stammer out in shock. “Why, Aren’t you the cutest thing I’ve ever seen.”

She giggles. With a little flap of her wings, she gets herself out of the box. Now, you are in complete fangirl mode as you see the gentle filly with her big head and tiny body. Her eyes look so mesmerising to you. You have no idea what to do- Should you pick her up? Nah, you’re gonna disturb her. She rolls around in your bed happily as you tuck the box away near your bed.

You lie your whole body down on your bed and whistled to catch her attention.

“Heeeeeey~” You call, supporting your face with your hands.

She turns and lies down in front of you. You continue to squeak at her being adorable.

“Awwww, you’re really cute,” You say, patting her head. She seems to like it. “What’s your name, little one?”

The filly stays silent. You guess that she was still young, maybe she’s not a good speaker. But she did point back to the note on the box, so you go over and take a look.

“Flurry Heart?”

She nods with a giggle.

“*chuckles* Such an adorable name for the cutest little thing I’ve seen,” You say. You give Flurry a tickle, which puts her in a sea of laughter. “I wonder where you’re from... Are you from around here?”

She shakes her head.

“I guess I should’ve seen that coming,” You say. You pick her up, since she wasn’t too heavy. Flurry Heart twists and turns in your arms like a baby and nuzzles you. You sit on your bed and gently rub her mane, which gives her a lot of comfort. You gently boop her tiny muzzle, as she flashes you a smile.

As you aren’t looking, Flurry Heart leaves the warmth of your lap and trots to the door. You don’t expect her to be able to open the door herself, so you let her go.

But she did.

For the next five minutes you stay stagnant on your bed, until you realize Flurry Heart was gone from the room. You get up in a panic, and rush around the house on both levels to make sure she was okay. You go downstairs and go to the kitchen. You stand in shock as you see Flurry on the counter about to squeeze detergent into her mouth.

“NONONONONONONO!” You yell, rushing over.

You snatch the bottle away, thank god, and pick her up to carry her back into your bedroom. But quickly, she escapes your little cradle and flies around the house. She flies around the living room and the kitchen, both on the first floor. She soon tries to investigate one of the power outlets in the wall. Going against all logic to you, she tries to stick her hor into it.

You stop her just in time.

“Flurry, Stop!” You warn her, “I know there are things you want to know and see, but they are too dangerous for someone like you!”

She looks at you curiously. On one hand, you think that it might just be the fact she doesn’t understand you. On the other, you think she doesn’t want to listen to you.

And the latter is correct, evident from her shaking her head and teleporting away.

“H-Huh!? *sigh* Flurry! Where’d you go?”

Flurry pops her head out near the side of the staircase and giggles coldly, as she races up the stairs. You follow suit to see her running straight to the bathroom and about to start chugging on a bar of soap. You pull it out instantly and wash it out with water. And boy did she not like it, as seen from her resisting to put her soapy tongue out.

You try to catch her once more- And fail again miserably. Her next point of domination was your parents’ bedroom. She messes up all the blankets, and throws a pillow at your face when you enter.

You aren’t happy now.

She raises another pillow, seemingly asking if you want to join. In a little fit of anger, you grab it, and proceed to slam the pillow onto her. But Flurry was fast- She dodges your attack, and in a hint of fear, flies back into your room for safety. You put the pillow down and go down to the living room, take your bag out, and reached in for something that you could spank her with.

And you happen to have a long wooden ruler lying around.

You take your ‘Weapon of Choice’ and creep up to your room. As soon as you open the door, Flurry blasts magic in your face. You drop the ruler onto the ground, which she notices. She tries to pick it up with magic to investigate what it is. But you thought, ”Not this time!” And proceed to grab it before it reaches her, cancelling half of her magic. You and Flurry keep pulling back and forth over who gets to keep it, and you know right then and there this is a child that needs to be dealt with.

You eventually got it back, but Flurry slaps it right off your hands. It’s then you realize she flew up to you, and this starts a pretty intense staring contest. She gives you a pretty forceful pinch on your neck, and you do pretty much the same while you hold her. You push your nose against her muzzle, which she returns. She wasn’t happy either- But for what? Flurry looks like she was staring into your soul, and you do the same, neither side wanting to give way.

Both of you are very angry about each other in the way.

Finally, she pushes you to the wall behind you and tries to fly away. You reach out and grab her back in, and before you could think about what you’re doing, you slap her on the back. She lets out a cry, and her wings weakened.

You angrily put her back in the box she came in, give her another slap on the same spot, this time a little bit more forcefully, before putting her back in. You close the box and turn it upside down so she won’t escape without you knowing. You sigh, and sit down at your gaming chair to chill out, and play video games with your headphones on.

***15 minutes later***

“YAAAAAAAAAAAS!” You celebrate after winning a round of your favorite FPS game. “Let’s goooooooooo!”

You are talking with a friend online as you both scream into your microphones in celebration.

“Bro, that was a siiiiiiiick kill,” Your friend says. “Go again?”

You’re about to say yes until you finally realize something. The box, now put near your desk, has been rattling for the past 15 minutes. You cold also faintly hear the sounds of someone crying, even through your headphones that pretty much covers all background sounds.

“Hello?” Your friend calls.

“Ah, yes. Uh, gotta go do something. Ttyl.”

You leave the call, and let out a depressed sigh. You take off your headphones and hear sounds of sobbing and crying. You instantly realize who it must be. Letting out a moan, you unwillingly put the box upright and open it. But the second you do so, Flurry Heart closes it with a cry and levitates the box with her in it to a corner of the room.

You go over to try and open the box again. “Flurry...”

She lets out another cry as you try to pick her up. She shivers in the box, not looking at you. You suddenly realize why she’s so scared- Because you were spanking her, yelling at her, and you trapped her in a fit of anger. Your heart broke at the sight of the little one crying. She levitates herself onto your bed with a magic bubble, crossing her hooves.

You understand- She didn’t mean to do all that. She was just curious, and she is a bit of a baby, still.

“Flurry?”

She gives a hmph with a cute yet angry voice.

“I’m sorry,” you tell her. “I didn’t mean to hurt you. I just want you to be safe.”

The filly turns a little but then continues to turn her back to you. You sit on the bed, hoping to get close to her, but when you sat to her left, she turns away from you in fear.

“Please, why would I want to yell at you, Flurry?” You ask. “I want you to be okay. I don’t know where you come from, what exactly you are, and why you’re here. But what I know is that you’re here, and until I find a way to get you back to where you’re supposed to be, I have to keep you in one piece.”

She gives a hum in curiosity.

“I don’t want to yell at you,” You say, smiling. “I’m sorry, Flurry. I may not know much about you, but what just happened... *chuckles* It reminds me of me when I was a kid. I’m just like you once. Always playing around, being bad, all that. I get into trouble too. And I understand how it feels when I’m the one taking care of someone else. I know you won’t know what I’m saying, but I just wanted to tell you that I’m not mad at you. I want to make sure you’re okay, because I don’t want you to be harmed. You’re so cute, why would anyone want to resist you? They would never want to lose someone like that.”

She finally turns to you. Your heart completely melts as you find her cheeks stained in tears, and she looks at you with big eyes, begging for you to show mercy upon her.

“Will you forgive me?”

You reach out your hand. Surprisingly, she knew what it means- She gently puts her hoof down onto the palm of your hand, and you shake it very gently with a smile. Soon, she giggles and tackles you with a big hug. You both chuckle as you finally make up. You’re just happy to be friends again.

Suddenly, the phone rings from outside the room.

“Oh!” You say, putting Flurry down. “Flurry, you stay here. I need to do something. Don’t move, okay?”

She nods at you after you show her to stay through body language. You go down to the living room and pick up the phone.

“Hello? Oh, hi mum, what is it?”

“Dear, how’s school today?”

“Good, good. You have something to tell me?”

“Yes, I do. Your father and I will be working a bit late tonight, and we probably won’t be home until you’re off to bed. You can order something to eat, I’ll pay you back after.”

“Ah! I see. Don’t worry, I wouldn’t order things too expensive.”

“Good to know. Have a lovely day, sweetie~”

You smile as you hang up the phone with a goodbye. You start to jump around excitedly- You can play with Flurry however you want for the day! You run up the stairs to tell her the good news.

“Heeeeeey Flurry~” You call. “Looks like I’m gonna have all the time to spend with-“

You open the door, to find her, once again, disappear into nothingness. You are confused- Until Flurry hits you from the back with a rubber ball.

“Wh- Hey! Stop that!” You giggle.

She sticks her tongue out and blows a raspberry to you. She flies down the stairs.

“Oh, you’re on now! Get back here, you little pipsqueak!”

You chase her down to the living room. Then, it became hide-and-seek as you search around the house, trying to find where your little companion is. You see this bulge on the green rug beneath the table, so you suspect she must be there. You reach in, but she teleports with a bang. Then you find her in the bathroom tub, but once again with no success on catching her.

Then came a minute of panic as you have no idea where she went.

All of a sudden, you hear rattling in the fridge of the kitchen. In complete horror, you open the door to see her stuffed inside one of the shelves, shivering. You gasp and pull her out instantly.

“Achoo!” Flurry sneezes from the cold.

“Oh, you poor thing...” You say, hugging her close to your heart.

She enjoys your warmth very much, as evident from her nuzzling and snuggling in your arms. You couldn’t help but smile and rub her head. To help her calm down, you prepare a cup of warm milk for her so she wouldn’t be so cold. She seems to like it.

She gives a bit of a burp, which you giggle at.

“Better?”

Flurry nods at you with a smile. Leaving your arms, the cat and mice game continues as she takes flight, teases you to catch her, and starts to fly around the house again. You chase after her with a laugh, running around the house freely while trying to corner her. It was a bit hard to navigate for you compared to her, but hey, it’s all in good fun.

Finally, you chase her back into your parents’ bedroom. You got close enough to attack her with a lunge.

“Gotcha!”

As soon as she goes in, you lunge over and catch her mid-air, then collapsing on the bed. She tries to get loose, but you grip onto her tight, stopping her from flying. She giggles in cheer- Giving you a sign she’s having fun with you. A minute later, she stops struggling and turns to you, allowing you to hold her and look at her lovely face.

You both give a smile before you pull her into a hug. Seconds later, it becomes a tickle attack.

“*laughing* Stop it! It’s so ticklish!” You laugh.

You try to tickle her back. She gives out the same uproar of laughter, and neither of you wanted to stop. You and Flurry share a nuzzle on the nose as you push them against each other, with a hint of playfulness. She engages in a bit of a slap-fight with you, before you tire out and lie down, holding her on your body.

“Mmmm~ You’re so soft and cuddly, Flurry...”

She slithers up to reach your face, leaving you both with your eyes fixed on each other’s. It looks like Flurry wants to play some more, having little playful fights with you. But, you could tell, she’s tired. All you did was pat her head, very gently, and help her to get comfortable.

“Do you want to sleep with me tonight?”

It feels like you don’t even have to ask that question- The filly already enjoys your company very much. She’s literally nuzzling against your head right now from behind, pretty forcefully. A tug from her as you turn over to face her pretty much answers that.

To that, you give a warm, genuine smile.

You go to bed quite late that night.

Flurry Heart was already waiting for you when you open the door after you’ve taken your shower. She tries to get herself comfortable in your blankets. You give a chuckle.

“Flurry?”

She turns to you and happily flies up to give you a hug.

“Awwww, you squishy little biscuit,” You say. You carry her into bed. The moment you step in, and pull the blankets up, Flurry proceeds to snuggle against you very sweetly, squeezing you from the neck. You let out a blissful sigh, and hug her back tight. Her cheek presses close to yours, as she hums in cheer while wiggling her hooves in excitement.

You get up to turn off the lights, then climb back in.

It seems to you that Flurry wants to challenge you- She keeps nuzzling and cuddling in absolute cheer. Does she want you to do the same? Whatever the case, you snuggle her dearly. She giggles and pressed her little forehead against yours, as you two push a little back and forth.

“*giggles* Cuddle fight, hmm?”

She bursts into laughter, digs herself under the blanket and starts to nuzzle against your body. The nuzzling was very ticklish, so you retort by pulling her out and squeezing her really tightly, forcing her to come into close contact. After a few good minutes of wiggling and tugging each other, you both laugh along with each other. You found the perfect place for her to sleep- Right up against your face.

Then, out of complete shock, she kisses you on the cheek, like she was your actual daughter.

“*gasp* Huh?”

She maintains the kiss for a few seconds before letting go, to give you the cutest smile. Her eyes close and her grin spread across her whole face.

“Awwwww...”

You kiss her back on the muzzle, making her let out a giggle. After looking around, making sure your parents aren’t around in your room, you fold open Flurry’s left wing to wrap around your head. Like a loving parent, you kiss the filly. When your lips come into contact with hers, she blushes.

You let go after 10 seconds.

“*sigh* Why are you so cute?” You ask her, softly chuckling.

She joins in the laugh. Both of you sigh blissfully, with your companion in your embrace. She still gives an occasional nuzzle upon you, which you gladly accept. Running your fingers through her mane, you realize what it’s like to have a daughter. Whoever’s mother this little bundle of joy belongs to, must be the luckiest in the world. You thought this little girl may be a bit of a hassle to deal with, but in fact, she’s a kid with a big heart. You know, when you love her, she will love you back too. But be in her way a lot, and you two won’t get along.

She’s still so young, and love is what she needs the most.

As you both drift off to sleep, you hear her faintly muttering something you can’t distinguish. But, a single, 3-word sentence from her, though spoken unclearly, melts your heart.

“I love you...”

You gasp and smile as you kiss her for the last time.

“I love you too, dear.”

Next morning, she was gone. But, in the box where you first got her, lies a letter and a stuffed toy of your favorite little filly in the world.

You feel very depressed, and even almost started crying that Flurry’s gone. She was such a great companion and such a funny little kid to have. You had so much fun with her. You wanted to see her adorable face again- You miss her. But, then again, all children has to leave their parents someday. All you did, was tightly cuddle and nuzzle against the plush toy of your friend, and give a sniffle or two.

You hear your parents knocking on your door. You were going out for breakfast.

“Coming!”

You settle the plush toy down, kiss her on her cheek, and leave the room. On the desk, you left the letter unfolded on your desk, ready for you to read it once you come back.

To Flurry’s Babysitter,

You may not know who I am, but what I do know is that you’ve been taking very good care and had a lot of fun with my daughter. I’m glad to hear that, as she can be a bit of a hassle, but a bundle of fun to have.

Let me spill the beans for you.

I’m a Princess of Equestria, the world of the ponies and other creatures. What happened was that Flurry, my daughter, accidentally messed up her teleportation spell while she and I were having fun in my castle a few days ago. I panicked. I thought I’d lost her forever. Luckily, with my magic abilities, I was able to track her location, and that’s how I found out where she went, and I managed to also track down what she did.

She was in this box- And I’m happy because it was at a good size to fit her inside. Though hard, I managed to teleport there and put a note down, just in case anyone took her home. Unfortunately, I couldn’t directly take her home, since my magic wasn’t strong enough to bring her back home simultaneously at that time. Thankfully, you took care of her while I came home alone to rest, and that night, I had the magic I needed to return with her.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for being so kind to my lovely daughter during her stay. I’m not sure how to reward you, consider you’re in another world. Whatever the case, I’ll find a way to reach out to you again and offer you my thanks in person. As for Flurry, don’t worry. I’ll find a way to help her reach out to you again someday. I promise.

Once again, thank you for taking care of her. Here’s my blessing towards your future.

Yours Faithfully,
Princess Cadance.

P.S. Nice job on snuggling her. She really is cute, you can’t deny that! :)

Author's Note

Just a random idea that slipped my mind when I was thinking of new cuddlefic ideas.

Flurry is so cute~!:rainbowkiss::heart: