A Curse From a Dark soul

by WwolfJade123

Critical

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Doctors and Nurses wanted to go and help the dragon, but can't because of Applejack, Rarity and Pinkie Pie blocking their way, shooting angry glances at them. Fluttershy guided Spike to Twilight, he rubbed off some blood on his face to look a little presentable when he meets his baby sister.

Twilight was worried as hell when she saw Spike, she wanted to help him but because of the little filly in her grasp, she can't do whatsoever. She watched on how Spike move towards them, he was in a critical condition, it was a miracle that Spike could still stand and walk, or even move in that condition; He's feet had cuts and bruises, he's abdomen was bleeding with a big cut, he's arms were broken but his right arm was holding a sword's grip, he's wing bases had cuts and finally, his face, it was hard to see his face, his right eye was forced closed, avoiding the bleeding from the big cut in his eye. The bandage that was once on his torso, was now covering his left ear's bleeding, it seemed to be cut off, his snout was bleeding real badly.

The filly in Twilight's grasp started to fall asleep while she was breastfed by Twilight, Twilight noticed her fall asleep, it was the cutest thing in the world --Well right next to Rainbow when she falls asleep. She didn't have to worry about the filly looking at his big brother wounded, she turned back at Spike who was almost there. She smiled at the dragon and he smiled back.

Finally, Spike was in front of Twilight. Twilight noticed something about Spike, he had grown, his height was the same as Fluttershy. Fluttershy let go of Spike then walked out the room, closing the door behind her. Spike looked at the filly in Twilight's grasp, his expression was just like Fluttershy, but more emotional.

"She looks just like Rainbow," He tried to keep his voice in a usual state, but it was clear as day, he was weak.

Twilight turned back at the sleeping filly,"Why does every creature I gave birth looks like their Dad? Why won't they look like me instead?" Spike and Twilight gave out a big chuckle, but not big enough to wake the filly.

"You really think I look like Father?" A big smile was on his face, proud to be a son of a Princess and a King.

"Hmm.... Yes," The two burst out in laughter, they didn't know why, but it was fun laughing. Twilight wiped the tear from her eye that formed while they were laughing. Her expression was hard to resist if you were a stallion, but her smile faded and turned into sadness,"Spike. Who gave you those injuries?"

Spike looked down at the filly,"Twilight I can't tell you that,"

"Tell me,"

"Twilight you'll just be brok--"

"Spike. Please. Tell me," She maintained her voice low,"What happened?"

Spike sighed,"It looks like I have to tell you the--- AHH" Spike screamed in agony. Twilight looked at his injured son, and lend out a helping hoof. His abdomen started to spurt out blood, his feet failed him as he fell on the floor, thankfully, Twilight teleported one of her pillows in her bed catching the head of the falling dragon.

The door slammed open revealing two nurses and at the back was a doctor. The three dashed at the side of the injured dragon, looking at every injury he had. It was clear that most of his bones were broken, another nurse was rushing in with a bed. The two nurses that first came in, gently levitated the critical dragon to the bed, the doctor were saying code words that only doctors and nurses know what it meant.

They left hurriedly out of the room. Twilight fought back tears, she looked back at the filly, the filly started cooing in her sleep, Twilight gave a loud 'Awe' watching the filly coo. "You know what me. No negative vibes for now. Now you have a daughter to take care of," She convinced herself and started to smile at the filly.

Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy walked in the room, they all were happy and sad for Twilight. They looked at the little filly sleeping in Twilight's grasp. Applejack turned at Twilight, she was hurting in the inside, Applejack put her hoof at Twilight's back, she looked at the farmer. Applejack had a wide smile, that smile is what Rainbow always does when Twilight is down. All started to start positive conversation.


Nurses and Doctors rushed their way through the countless crowd that were falling in line or just waiting for service. All were in shock to see Spike injured that much, all watched the running doctors and nurses find their way to the emergency room from all the crowd. Whispers started to occur when they saw them pass by.

The hospital's main door slammed open, revealing a worried and exhausted dragon. Everypony in the room stopped except the rushing nurses and doctors on their way to their patients, then looked at the dragon. The dragon's eyes widen when he saw the rushing doctors and nurses carrying a critical dragon on their way to the emergency room. The dragon followed the rushing ponies. When he caught up with the ponies, he looked at the dragon lying on the bed.

"Spike! You're going to be ok, Son. Don't worry, stay strong," They were still rushing, he grabbed Spike's claw.

Spike tried to open his eye,"Father?" His voice was faint, nopony heard him except Parthox.

They stopped in front of the emergency room. Parthox wanted to go inside, but one of the nurses stopped him and said to wait outside, he protested the nurse stopped him again, this time she said this is for the good of the patient, he stopped and sat at the seats beside the emergency room. The doors slammed shut, leaving Parthox sitting and waiting for a nurse or doctor to come out.

He started to hate his high hearing, he could hear the doctors doing the surgery, he could hear the blood dripping on the floor. His patience ran out, he stood up and then he paced back and forth. Nurses goes in and out of the room, carrying IV's or packs of blood.

"What do we have here?" A doctor questioned.

"half of the bones all over his body are broken, thankfully no internal organs were injured. We are trying to stable his blood and keep him asleep for know,"

Steam started to come out from his snout. Three nurses started to come inside the room, he didn't care that they are there. Parthox heart started to hammer real hard, he banged his head on the wall, if he had been there sooner he would've protect his family and their friends.

"Gahh! He's bleeding even more! Give me more blood"

Tears started to fall from Parthox's eyes, he punched the walls letting out all his emotions. He removed his fist from the wall revealing a little crack, a memory ran pass his mind.

A loud thud that came from the training room, it was Parthox, he punched one of the volcanic rocks. He removed his fist from the rocks, the rocks started to crack then shattered into pieces, Parthox blew of the smoke that had formed in his fist, then looked at the baby dragon observing him, he gave him a proud and victorious grin.

"Now that's how to break a rock with you're fist!" Spike started to cheer up and clap, he ran at his father and hugged him tight.

"You're awesome! More awesome than, Rainbow Dash!" Parthox petted Spike on the head, the two laughed in sync, and in that moment Parthox and Spike formed a bond that should have formed before.

Minutes had pass, or maybe hours, Parthox can't tell, he had been pacing all over and over, hearing blood spurt, hearing clangs of metal and tearing of cloth. He didn't know what to do but wait, wait for a doctor or nurse to say he's alright, wait for this mess to be all over.

A White Unicorn came over at him; she had a ruined mane and tail, her forehooves had two diamond bracelets, her eyes were cerulean. The Unicorn came over at Parthox, she sat at one of the seats, and didn't talk, but kept sighing. "You're what to, Spike?" Parthox asked, his voice was tired.

He seemed to get the Unicorn's attention,"I-I'm his friend. You're Parthox I presume?" her voice had a Manehatten accent.

Parthox looked over at the Unicorn, he was shocked at what she said,"Yes, how do you know my name?"

"Twilight, she told about you being Spike's father,"

He scoffed,"Twilight?" She nodded,"She never changes doesn't she?" A smile started to surface his face, but faded away,"Spike isn't doing well, the doctors and nurses inside are having a difficult time trying to recover him, but you know him, he's strong, he'll come through this,"He paused,"Please if he wakes up, tell him I love him Miss...."

"Rarity," She flipped her mane, and looked at him with a sad face,"Why? Aren't you staying?"

Parthox stood up,"Yes, but I came because a letter was sent from Twilight yesterday. She said she needed help with a curse, that possessed Rainbow Dash, I came as quick as I can, but not as quick it seemed," Parthox started to walk away, leaving the hospital.

Rarity was left alone, she was staring at the tiled floor. Minutes had pass by, doctors and nurses came out of the room, guiding a bed to it's destination. Rarity followed the ponies, the walk was long, but that took time for Rarity to observe the unconscious dragon on the bed; his body was full of bandages, but there were some parts that hadn't have bandages.

They stopped at a door that had a golden plate number; eighty-three. They walked inside the room, the nurses gently levitated the dragon, transporting him to the bed right next to his trolly. They connected the IV at the stand, they injected Spike's left arm with a transmitter that was connected at the monitor.

The monitor started to beep. Spike's vitals can be seen, his heart rate was over a hundred bsp, his blood pressure was at one hundred eight over sixty-eight mmkg, oxygen saturation was at fifty below percent, he was doing well after the surgery. The doctors and nurses left the room leaving Rarity with Spike alone.

"Spike, if you can hear me, I want to say..." She grabbed his claw,"I want to say, I....." Rarity hesitated,"I......." Rarity looked away, then turned back, she was missing something from the unconscious dragon, his eyes, his beautiful green eyes were missing, they always brighten up Rarity's day, this time she didn't hesitate and passionately kissed Spike's lips and whispered in his ear;"I Love You, My little Spikeywikey,"

Rarity left the room with a big and joyous smile on her face, when she was at the hospital's main door, she looked outside and saw three dragons; two were armoured and one was wearing his armour, the one wearing armour was Parthox and the two were one of his prized guards, helping him.

Rarity went outside,"Parthox!" She ran at him. Parthox turned back at where the voice occurred, he saw the same Unicorn that talked with him just a moment ago, he saw her running in his direction, he already knew why she was running, so he continued suiting up for a deadly battle. The Unicorn had arrived, and teleported a brush with her Cutie Mark out of nowhere and brushed her mane and tail looking a little presentable, the brush disappeared, he had seen this type of magic before when he was with Twilight.

He handed Rarity a circular plate that had a red crystal in the middle, Rarity hesitated and gave it back. She closed her eyes, her diamond bracelets glowed a purple aura, she opened her eyes and saw purple instead of a cerulean colour. Armour started to equip at every inch of Rarity's body. Parthox was impressed, he turned back at the castle, but interrupted, again, by three other voices behind.

He turned back and saw three ponies, two Earth Ponies and one Pegasus; the first Earth Pony had a orange coat and a yellow ponytailed mane and tail in the end, the other one had a fluffy cotton candy mane and tail her coat and mane had the same colour; Pink, she had a saddle bag with a sword lock. The Pegasus had a canary coat and a long pink mane and tail.

They arrived and chatted with Rarity. Pinkie Pie scanned her saddle bag and gave Fluttershy a small necklace, the necklace had a white bunny pendant, that suited well with Fluttershy. Dangerous animals started to jump out from the bushes; Manticores, Crocktices, Chimeras, Hydras, and even parasprites and every other dangerous creature all over Everfree.

Ponies ran inside their houses, some stayed and fight some of the monsters, some played music leading the parasprites away from Ponyville. Fluttershy couldn't bare it all, her eyes were here to there and there to here, she couldn't stop worrying. Then at that moment, anger started to boil inside her, she forced closed her eyes, the ponies around her started to back up.

She turned red, steam started to come out of her ears and muzzle, she can't hold it anymore,"WILL EVERY CREATURE STOP!!" She shouted at the top of her lungs, she had summoned the royal Canterlot voice, all creature that heard it stopped, their spines shiver when they looked at Fluttershy, her eyes were black, she was smiling, she looked at the creatures fighting and chuckled, her right eye glanced a red sparkle, warning every creature.

All stopped and then apologised, some kneeled just to apologise and some offer to fight, she didn't accept the ones that wanted to fight. A Manticore came near her, Fluttershy didn't even flinch then the manticore started to growl lowly trying to talk to her, Fluttershy didn't understand what the manticore was talking, her necklace glowed a yellow aura.

"--e creatures are here to help. Our families in the forest have been hit by the explosion that had occurred from this very place, causing the death of some creatures and some in a severe and critical condition," The manticore just talked ponish.

Fluttershy backed up a little,"You talk ponish?" The guys looked at the two creatures talking, confusion was in their eyes.

The manticore had confusion in his eyes as well, he looked a little offended by what Fluttershy had said, but he himself have heard stories from his subjects that this very creature is powerful, and scary, he believed that last bit when Fluttershy shouted and took the most scariest glance that has ever seen in Equestria,"No mistress, I believe that you talk Manti,"

"Manti? When did I learn to talk Manti?" She thought. Fluttershy noticed her necklace glowing, she looked at the pink Earth Pony standing next to Parthox, she had a sly grin at her face. She also noticed what the manticore had said, she turned back at the manticore in front of her,"Please, don't call me mistress, Fluttershy will be fine,"

"But you--"

"No buts. Now, why are you here again?" Fluttershy tone was gentle, making every creature in Equestria, sooth and be comfortable around her.

He kneeled at his slightest and lowered his wings as he flatted his ears,"My name is Tigro, former king of the Everfree forest, I have killed over a thousand of creatures,"He paused, a little embarrassed,"May we be at service, to fight beside you. A explosion that had occurred from this very area, causing the deaths of some family and critical injuries on my subjects,"

Fluttershy looked from left to right, right to left. Every creature had pleading eyes, they were willing to fight for revenge, Fluttershy thought it through, if she said no they will burry the burden of their loved ones death inside and blame themselves. If she said yes, their lives would be sacrificed but for the good and freedom of the creatures that have live in the Everfree forest, and the burden inside would have been removed and they can live and remain peaceful.

Fluttershy sighed and nodded. The manticore smiled, he looked back at his subjects and roared, his right paw reached out on the orange sky. Fluttershy noticed the time, it was sun down, it looks like they are going to fight in the dark. Fluttershy looked at the group of ponies at the back, her eyebrows met and and smiled so did the others, the fight is on.


Twilight was looking outside the window, some doctors and nurses came in and asked permission to get the little filly for some medical treatment and to check her vitals. She stood up and looked carefully on what was going on outside the window, trying not to be spotted, she felt lonely when they took her, she was wearing a hospital dress, her crown was on the mini cabinet beside the bed.

She saw her friends and Parthox together with some creatures talk and all started to ready for battle. She closed the windows with curtains, and started to look around the room, well she had nothing to do but that. The room itself wasn't that fascinating, but something in that room made it special. The scent. She breathed in and out. The scent was special, it had a lilac scent.

She closed her eyes remembering when she breathed in lilac in this very room, one memory came to her.

"Rainbow, wake up?" That voice, it was familiar. Rainbow tried to open her eyes, but they won't open. She tried and tried until the voice came again,"Rainbow Dash, please wake up," The voice started to sob and sniffle on Rainbow's side, this time she really put all effort just to open her eyes, and thanks to Celestia, it opened, but the vision was blurry.

"Where am I?" Rainbow's vision started to clear.

The voice gasped, Rainbow turned her head at where the voice was. She saw her wife worrying for her, she was crying, Rainbow's heart was stabbed a thousand times, she did not want to see her wife crying. Rainbow stood up on bed, the pain started to vanish as she stood up.

Twilight tried to stop her, but there is no stopping Rainbow Dash and she knows that,"I'm fine Twi, don't worry" Rainbow wiped the fresh tears that fall, with her hoof,"Now tell me what happened?" she stretched her back.

Twilight's gaze fell on the floor,"Well you and Applejack were on a train going to Appleloosa. A accident happen on you're way to Appleloosa. They said that the train was going too fast that the breaks won't work, cows started to cross the railway, the conductor switched to the emergency breaks, thankfully it worked, but with the amount of speed, the carts that were on the back flew up in the air landing on the front,"She sighed heavily, water started to resurface her eyes,"You knew what was happening when you saw the cows on the distance, you quickly flew ponies out of the carts. It took you not long, except the conductor refused to come with you, then he switched on the breaks, you grabbed him and Applejack and threw them out of the train, you tried to follow but you're tail got stuck,"The tears flowed at Twilight cheeks, her voice started to break,"You were in this hospital for two days, we are at the Fillydelphia General Hospital. It was the nearest they could find,"

Rainbow Dash hugged Twilight tight, shushing her. Twilight cried on Rainbow's chest, soaking it wet,"Look, you made me all wet now, I won't need to take a bath if you continue to cry," Twilight laughed a bit a the joke. Rainbow rubbed Twilight's pregnant belly.

Twilight's cries turned into sniffles, she looked back up at Rainbow, she was smiling at Twilight. Rainbow, once again, wiped out the tears that had formed from her cheek,"I thought I'd lose you,"

Rainbow was surprised, she put her forehead at Twilight's, avoiding the horn,"Twi, remember this; I Rainbow Dash, pinkie promise to NEVER hurt, leave or kill my dear wife; Twilight Sparkle, and our little bundle of joy" They broke their embrace and looked at each others eyes. Both were sparkling, Rainbow leaned over, Twilight did the same, the two kissed passionately giving out all their emotion at that kiss.

A smile crept it's way on Twilight's face. The door creaked as it opened, Twilight looked at the pony that had entered, she smiled at what she saw, it was Scootaloo. Scootaloo ran over at Twilight and hugged her. Twilight returned the hug, Scootaloo must be broken when she heard Rainbow Dash was controlled by some guy that wanted revenge,"Is Spike going to be ok?"

Twilight was shocked, she thought she will question how Rainbow was doing,"Y-yes. The doctors that came here to get the foal and said that Spike wasn't ok, but he is alive,"

Scootaloo broke the embrace and looked at Twilight in the eye,"Rainbow Dash? Where is she?"

Twilight's heart was stabbed a million times just hearing her name,"I-I don't know," Her gaze fell on the floor,"I'm sorry, Scoot but I haven't heard news about Rainbow Dash either, they refused to tell me what was her condition," Her voice was all in the blame, and Scootaloo didn't want to see her like this.

"Hey don't blame yourself. The doctors said that you can come out of you're room and visit you're little filly in the nursery," Scootaloo ran her hoof over Twilight's wings, assuring her. Twilight smiled at the Pegasus, she thought of how they are the same with Rainbow Dash in so many ways a pony can think of. She looked at Scootaloo with a smile and nodded.


Author's Note

The main four will be fighting Vision/Rainbow Dash with the help of Parthox and some of the creatures that lived from the Everfree Forest.
Spike is still in a critical state.
Twilight's world started to fall piece by piece.


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