Spike's Comeuppance

by Deergenerate

Rating: mature
Tags: Drama, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Fetish, Spike, Sex, King Sombra, Non-consensual, Thorax
Length: 2641

Sombra decides to get his vengence on Spike by going through one of his friends.

Sombra has managed to piece himself back together after being shattered, and only one thing is on his mind. Getting revenge on the 'Brave' and 'Glorious' dragon that lead to his second defeat.

What better way to get vengeance on a weakling like Spike, then using one of his friends? In recent days, it seems that his closest friend is a certain Changeling that showed up in his stolen empire. How exotic?

Fetishes: Rape, forced M/M, tied down sex, forced to watch, light tentacle, and other such smut.

(Takes place before To Where and Back Again.)

Published 2018-11-03 01:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-11-03 01:40:01 UTC

No Mercy

Spike slowly came too. His head was heavy and he was very groggy. He was also cold, his back and butt in particular. He opened his eyes to see snow.

"Wh... what?" He looked around. He was propped in a sitting position, with his back against an ice wall. He was in the same Ice cave that he had met Thorax in fact.

Speaking of Thorax, he saw the changeling directly in front of him, on his side. Thorax was unconscious and shivering, not from the cold, but from fear. Purple mist was emerging from the sides of his closed eyes and he was whimpering loudly.

"Thorax!" Spike cried out as he tried to get up, however he found himself stuck in position. He was chained to the wall by dark steel shackles.

"Ah ah ah." A dark voice taunted from above. Tendrils of inky blackness flowed down from above and took shape on the ground below. They took the vague shape of a pony, before slowly solidifying.

Standing before Spike was a Dark Grey unicorn with a flowing shadowy mane. His curved crimson horn was shining with purple mist like magic, and his eyes shone green with red pupils. He stared down at Spike with a predatory gaze. Then he maliciously licked his lips.

"Sombra!" Spike screamed out in fear and anger. "You let Thorax go right now!"

Sombra only laughed. "I guess your starting to believe your own lie hatching." He knelt down so his face was barely an inch away from Spike's. "You cheated in beating me. How does that make you brave again."

Spike growled at the monster in front of him. "What do you want from us Sombra?" Spike asked with a growl.

"I would think it would be obvious what I want dragon." Sombra stated walking backwards towards Thorax. "But since you are so dumb you cannot piece two and two together..."

Sombra walked up besides Thorax and turned over to Spike. "I. Want. Retribution." He whispered.

"Retribution? For what!" Spike replied. "You were a villain and we stopped you!"

"You stole my empire you dirty beast!" Sombra shouted in reply, his eyes flaring as he stomped his hoof.

"You ruined my slaves, you appropriated my heart, you instated Cadance as the ruler, and you allowed this... monster... to corrupt my kingdom with it's very presence!" Sombra shouted before he kicked the down Thorax in the side.

"I think your definition of a monster is incorrect." Spike stated. "He is nice, he is good, he is kind. If you want a monster, look in the mirror."

Sombra narrowed his eyes, before he laughed it off. "You're right. You're right. Let's just skip the philosophy and move onto my revenge shall we?"

Sombra walked around to Thorax and released the spell he was using to keep him unconscious.

Thorax's eyes slowly fluttered open. "Sp-spike? What is going on?"

"Thorax!" Spike shouted. "Run!" His voice was ripe with desperation, as if he already knew what was about to happen.

Thorax turned his head to see Sombra, who was right behind him, with a dark smirk on his face. He gasped, and tried to pull himself up, slipping over and falling in the snow a couple times.

Sombra sighed as his horn started up. "Nopony ever realizes that this kind of thing is always easier for everypony when they don't try to fight it."

Black tendrils shot down from the dark shadows of the room and wrapped themselves around Thorax's legs, causing him to fall to the ground face first. The tendrils slowly dragged Thorax through the snow towards Sombra. Once he was Sombra's feet, the tendrils wrapped around his forelegs and chest, binding him in place.

Thorax whimpered a little as Sombra walked in a circle around him, slowly. "My my my, despite being a monster, this changeling does strike me as being rather cute."

Sombra picked the changeling up in his magic and repositioned him, so that he was face down, ass up in an incredibly revealing stance.

Spike's eyes couldn't help but widen. "W-what are you doing?"

Sombra slowly walked around so that he was behind Thorax. A shadowy tendril slowly slid it's way across the ground, towards the changeling's rear. Sombra smiled and licked his lips. "I told you what I am doing several times. It's your own fault of you don't realize what it is by now."

A lump formed in Thorax's throat as the tendril slowly snaked its way up one of his back legs.

"Oh, he is much to tight to actually fit me. How dissappointing. I guess I just have to help him with that." Sombra said before the tendril harshly shoved itself into Thorax's ponut.

Thorax threw his head back and screamed in pain. He started to thrash slightly as the tendril went deeper, but stopped when he realized that only made it hurt more. The tendril suddenly pulled back, then pushed forwards again. It was slow and clumsy at first but it slowly got a rhythm going, widening out Thorax's virgin hole.

Thorax screwed his eyes shut and gritted his teeth, grunting and groaning as the tendril did its work. In the mean time, Sombra stared Spike dead in the eyes as he violated his friend.

Spike screamed out and fought against his chains doing nothing more than hurting himself a little. "Stop it Sombra! Do me instead! Thorax did nothing to you."

Sombra laughed at this. "You're right, he didn't, but, this is much worse for you isn't it?" Sombra set his hoof on Thorax's rear and gropped it a tad. "Its so nice isn't it. Sitting and watching such a seductive show. Would you like me to unchain one of your claws? So you can enjoy this as much as I am?" Sombra vulgarly stated as a second tendril emerged from the dark and stoked off the tyrants own twitching member.

Spike growled at Sombra, tears formed in the corner of his eyes.

Sombra laughed at this. "How pathetic. Crying over a changeling." Sombra smiled as he licked his lips once again. "I am going to keep this up until Thorax here is screaming for more like a whore. Then I am going to move onto step two."

Sombra once again walked in a circle around Thorax, this time stopping in front of his head. "Now changeling, I am not completely ruthless."

Sombra sat down, his long member taking up most of Thorax's vision, the tendril still rubbing up and down it.

"No matter what happens, this is going into your rear. But I am giving you a choice. You can either lubricate it right now to make it hurt less, or you can choose not you." Sombra stated slowly.

Thorax looked in between him and his stallionhood several times. It was large, definately larger than the tendril that was currently embedded in his rear. He whimpered a little before he opened his mouth and took it in.

"Bite and you die." Sombra stated with immense satisfaction. Once again he locked eyes with Spike as Thorax slowly sucked on the tip. Tears flowed down Spike's face as he watched, unable to do anything but watch.

Thorax once again screwed his eyes shut in great shame, as he started running his forked tongue up and down the tyrants shaft.

Sombra grunted a little before placing a hoof on the back Thorax's head, pushing him down further inbetween his legs.

Thorax's eyes tightened as he felt Sombra's flare poke the back of his throat, causing him to gag a little.

"There's a good boy. You are the first creature I have ever done this to who accepted my charity. I don't lnow if that makes you weak, or smart." Sombra whispered as he rubbed Thorax's head fin.

The tendril which had been rubbing Sombra's shaft had since retreated, and instead slid along the ground underneath Thorax, going inbetween his back legs.

It raised itself up and started to slowly rub against the inside of Thorax's thighs causing his hips to buck alittle.

"Ah ah ah. Don't shirk away from me. That is a no-no." Sombra stated as more tendrils shot out of the shadows and bound him more, holding him in place.

The tendril in between his legs spilt in two as it rubbed his inner thigh, slowly making it's way towards the changelings slowly hardening cock.

One of them arrvied well before the other, and began to rub up and down the bottom part of his shaft, while the slightly slower one arrived after it, expertly fondling the weaklings balls, causing him to moan.

Sombra laughed at the moan, Thorax was clearly breaking, albeit slowly. Sombra pushed Thorax off his dick and stood up, he winked at Spike, who he noticed had somehow managed to keep himself flaccid. 'How sad, I guess I will just have to try harder.'

"So then bug are you ready for my gift?" Sombra inquired. Thorax didn't reply, he merely moaned again as the one of the shadowy appendages wrapped around his member, and started stroking up and down.

"I will take that as a yes." Sombra laughed as he mounted the Changeling. The first shadow tentacle, which had not stopped thrusting in and out of thr changeling retracted, giving Sombra full access to Thorax's hole.

Sombra rubbed the bottom of his stallion hood against Thorax's ponut for a second before he reared back and thrusted in without mercy.

Thorax screamed, much louder than before. His scream echoed throughout to cavern. Thorax thrashed in his bindings and let loose another scream.

Tears streamed out of his eyes. "S-SPIKE!" he shouted in pain. "H-H-HELP ME!!!" His useless begging only serves to arrouse Sombra even more who smiled as he slowly pulled out, then shoved in again.

Spike sobbed as he jerked on his chains as hard as he could. "Stop it! Please! I'm sorry!"

Rage flared in Sombra's face as he thrusted again. "Sorry doesn't cut it!" Thorax's s turned into sobs as Sombra got a slow rythmn going.

Thorax's hips tried to buck and get away from Sombra, but his bindings kept him still as he was ravaged. Thorax closed his eyes and bit down, gritting his teeth. His back legs felt weak as the thrusting continued and the tendrils molesting his stallionhood increased in speed and intensity, practically milking him.

Sombra smirked at the trembling changeling he had at his mercy. He chuckled darkly as he slowly went deeper, and thrusted harder.

Thorax cried out once more as Sombra brushed against his prostate. It was like a censory overload as he almost collapsed. He opened his mouth into a half lidded gaze as he started to slowly drool. He moaned loudly as Sombra brushed against his most sensitive area again.

Spike watched in pure horror as the look of pain on Thorax's face slowly lessoned going from screaming and crying to drooling and moaning.

"Oh ho ho? You like that don't you?" Sombra purred as Thorax moaned again. Thorax didn't respond. 'Step two of the breaking process complete. Now only two more.' Sombra thought to himself.

Sombra tightened his grip on Thorax's hips before he picked up the pace, going faster, deeper and harder.

Thorax's moans soon became more feminine, like a mare being dominated. His mouth opened and his tongue lulled out. It was clear he couldn't take it.

With one large hump, Thorax threw his head back and gave a loud mare like cry of ecstasy. Milky white strands shot out of the changeling's stallionhood, and onto the snow below him. Thorax shook with pleasure and pain. He couldn't take it.

No matter how much Thorax hated Sombra, no natter how much he didn't want this, Sombra was too much for him to handle.

Sombra threw his head back and laughed. With a malicious grin he turned to Spike once more, who looked traumatized, his face completely white.

"Tell me Thorax, are you enjoying yourself." Sombra asked wothout breaking eye contact.

Thorax wanted say no. Every fiber in his body demandes that he say no, but he just couldn't. "N-n-n" he stuttered.

"What?"

"Yes..." he quietly said with his eyes closed.

Sombra suddenly smacked him on the in response. "Speak up, so your 'friend' can hear you!" Sombra demanded.

Thorax threw his head back. "YES!" He screamed, fresh tears flowing down his face in a torrent.

New tears flowed down Spike's face as well. He was crushed.

"Now tell me Changeling. What do you want me to do?" Sombra asked.

Thorax sobbed loudly. "P-p-please gove me more!" Thorax cried, unable to do anything else. He laid his head down in the snow and started whimpering.

Sombra smirked viciously. "If you insist, you slut."

Sombra continued his thrusting as the tendrils once again continued stroking and fondling his member. Thorax was ashamed of himself, more so then ever before.

"You," Sombra started as his cock throbbed inside of Thorax.

"are nothing," he continued as he thrusted again.

"but my," Sombra was clearly nearing his orgasm as he pulled out one last time.

"COCK SLEAVE!" The dark king shouted with a final thrust, which went deeper than any before. The king's stallionhood spasmed before it coated the insides of Thorax with his hot sticky seed.

Once again Thorax cried out, and once again he came onto the snow below him, weaker than ever before.

Sombra pulled himself out with a wet pop, and stepped back. He disipated the tendrils wrapped around Thorax's body. The Changeling's legs immediately gave out and he collapsed into a puddle of his own cum.

Sombra pressed a hoof to his chin in thought. "You know," he started. "after I had sufficiently broken you and traumatized Spike, I was just going to kill both of you, but I think I miggt have changed my plans."

Sombra placed a hoof on Thorax's rear and slowly rubbed it across his side, causing the changeling to flinch.

"I think I am going to keep you as a pet." Sombra whispered into his ear.

Then he stood up and turned to Spike, who was white as a ghost, yet another fresh set of tears streaming down his face. "You on the other hand."

Sombra walked forwards and lit his horn. "Did you have fun?"

Spike didn't answer, he inly stared blankly at Thorax, who had slowly curled up.

"I thought so." Sombra said.

He was about to deliver a killing blow, but then the wall of the Cave explided in on itself. When the dust and snow settled standing in the breatch, with looks of pure rage on their faces, were Twilight Sparkle, Shining Armor and Princess Cadance.

Sombra hissed before turning into a shadow and fleeing. The trio fired spell after spell after him, but he escaped into the darkness.

Twilight growled at the shadow, before she turned to the horrifying scene before her. Her face turned green, as did the others at what she saw.

Thorax was curled up in a ball, crying, while Spike hadn't even noticed them, he was merely sobbing uncontrollably.

Twilight rushed forwards to Spike, while Cadance and Shining Arnor focused on Thorax.

With a quick spell, she broke his chains, and he rushed forwards past her to Thorax.

He embraced the Changeling in a hug, who simply wailed as Spike held him close.

Cadance slowly sat down next to them and placed a consoling hoof on each of their shoulders.

"Its ok, your both safe now." She said before she too dragged them into a hug.

Little did they notice that Sombra still watched them from the shadows, a dark smile on his face.

Author's Note

I apologize for writing this.

Send your hate mail to 123 non-con clop avenue.

And yes , the ending was possible sequel bait.