Rewrite the Stars

by CrimsonRose97

Chapter 67

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Three days had gone by since the reveal and things have been quiet. Though it did feel better now that Rachel had told Spike about her past, she’s still a bit shaken after revealing what she had done. She sat at the table with her sketchbook, her graphite and was trying out headphones that were meant for ponies.

They were big and a bit clunky but it was comfortable on her head so she was listening to some music.

As she sketches out what looked like the home she used to live in her human world, a mixture of smells hits her nose which causes her to stop drawing. She waited for a moment, contemplating on what to do before going back to her sketching.

During her drawing, she felt a strong pair of arms wrapped around her and held her close. “Hi.” It sounded like Spike when he pulled the headphones off and proceeded to give her neck a kiss.

Rachel silently turned her head and gave the dragon the most deadpan look she could muster and had a scowl.

“Gemcity, you have two seconds to turn back now.” She grunted.

It looks like the dragon, sounds like him, but he did not smell like the dragon.

“What are you talking about?” The Not Spike smiled, giving her a shit-eatting grin.

Her scowl deepened. “I know it’s you, I can always tell who is who even before my senses were cranked up to 11.”

The Not Spike stared at her for the longest before frowning. “Oh you’re no fun.” They said in Gemcity’s voice.

The front door opened and another Spike stepped in. Not even a second went by when Rachel hissed. “Ruby! Not you too!”

“Oh that’s not fair.” Ruby spoke in Spike’s form, crossing their arms across her chest.

Rachel hissed and like a cat, swatted Gemcity away. “How many times have I told you two to NOT change into my boyfriend! We’re NEVER gonna have sex with each other again!”

“We’re just having a bit of fun.” The twins giggled. It sounded weird the two having their girly voices in her boyfriend’s bodies.

Then the bathroom door swung open, the real Spike stepped out with a towel and was drying himself off.

“Hon, you say some~” Spike froze in place when he saw two more versions of himself surrounded his girlfriend. He looked between the three, trying to come up with words for what he’s seeing.

“Uh…am I having this sex dream again?” He asked, mostly to himself because it was not the first time he had a sex dream about three versions of himself and Rachel.

Ruby and Gemcity burst out laughing.

Rachel sputtered. “You too?!”

She too had the same dream which made the twins doubled over and cackled, phasing back to their sexlings forms.

The couple stared at the laughing twins before the two sighed in unison.

“Hey, girls.” Spike responded. “But… you two should’ve called.”

“Right! But they won’t.” Rachel grunted, looking at them.

The two collected themselves after their laughter died down.

“Do we need to call in to check in on our sister?” Gemcity said before walking over to Rachel and hugged her. Ruby followed suit and hugged her too.

“Just so you know, it was Gemcity’s idea.” Ruby said.

Gemcity flipped her sister off in response.

“I missed you guys too.” Rachel said, hugging them both.

Spike smiled softly to them before tossing the towel in the laundry bin before going over to the coffee machine and began brewing a pot.

“You’re looking good so far,” Ruby said, pulling away and taking a look over Rachel. “How are you feeling?”

Rachel nodded. “Feeling pretty rough.” she nodded, rubbing the back of her head. “But much better than I normally have been feeling.” She turned to look at Spike and smiled.

Gemcity felt the fur on Rachel’s arms and face and smiled big. “Wow! You feel so soft, Rachie! Do you condition it?”

Rachel rolled her eyes. “Never thought I’d be going through tubs of conditioner each time I take a shower.” Forcing her to regulate how long she goes without taking a shower to save the amount of products it takes.

“How about clothes?” Ruby asked. “Since you’re growing into your new body, you need clothes.” She looked at what Rachel’s wearing and frowned. “Are you wearing Spike’s clothes?” she pointed.

“What’s wrong with my clothes?” Spike asked as he made their mugs.

“Nothing, babe,” Rachel told him before looking at Ruby. “Look, until my transformation is complete, which is taking a super long fucking time, approperate clothes are not on the agenda.” She said, adjusting to the hoodie she’s wearing. Normally when she wears Spike’s clothes, they basically turn into gowns with how baggy they fit her. Now they hung just below her knees.

“Well, you're thinking what I’m thinking, sis?” Ruby asked, looking at Gemcity.

“Get whatever conditioner Rachel’s been using?” Gemcity continued to pet her arms which resulted in her having her hand getting slapped.

“Stop petting me.” Rachel grunted.

Ruby rubbed her face before giving her twin a knowing look.

It took Gemcity a moment to register before letting out a gasp. “OOH! Oh I know!”

All of the sudden, the twins used their magic and picked Rachel up. “H-hey!”

Spike turns to hand them their drinks when he sees the twins taking Rachel out to the door by their combined magics!

“Whoa whoa whoa!” Spike set the mugs down and jumped across the threshold of the cabin and stood in front of the three. “Girls, no, you can NOT take her out. Did the two of you forget that BlueBlood is after Rachel?”

“Guys with how I’m acting with my change, taking me out of the barrier is not a good idea!” Rachel snapped at them as she struggled within the magic barrier she’s in. There was a faint blue light glowing from her mouth as she was about to breathe fire.

“Oh we’ll protect you. But girly, you need new clothes.” Ruby responded.

“Ooh no, you two are not~” BEfore Spike could grab his mate, the twins poofed with Rachel out of the cabin, went outside of it and the two sprinted off with Rachel in their magic.

“HELP! SPIKE HELP!” Rachel shouted, spewing fire in the barrier, only to just make the barrier feel warm but the clothes she wore started to burn holes.

Spike went out the door to go after the girls. After a few minutes however he slowed his stride to a stop. His phone started to buzz in his pocket. He pulled it out and it was from the twins with a text message.

We’ll bring her back. 💍👰🤵

Spike was hesitant but he felt like Rachel was in good hands. He smiled before he turned around and made his way back to the cabin to get everything prepared with a pip in his step.


Blueblood was digging his nails into his arm as this itch was unbearable. His arms and neck were either deeply red or streaked in a charcoal gray color laying underneath his skin. Feeling like his mind was slipping as the time was close.

If he had timed it right, he would have until midnight tonight before Celestia’s memory wipe spell takes effect. Time for him was truly running out.

Along the desk in his office were maps, trying to pinpoint where the human woman was at. Her raw magic might be enough to break it after he had failed to remove the spell himself.

“Where could that dumb bitch go off to??” He snarled as he was pressed in time.

As he continued to scan the map, clawing himself to the point he broke skin and began to bleed, the door knocked several times and Frankie the Bat pony came in.

“Boss, I found her.” He announced, waving documents in his hands.

“Come in Come in!” Blueblood quickly motioned the bat in. He flew in and put the docs on top of the maps. “Where did you find her?” he asked with a pant.

“Well, it’s a major clue, I think.” Frankie responded, opening the docs.

It was Rachel’s old place of residences. From the snazzy apartment complex to the apartment above the stripjoint the twins lived and where Rachel had worked.

“Even though she was living at the friendship council, I had eyewitness accounts that they spotted a large purple dragon wandering through town.” Frankie said. “That means, she’s around Fillydelphia.”

Blueblood grunted, shaking his head. “It’ll have to do.” He said, grabbing the docs. “Frankie, hold the fort down, I’m taking a trip.”

Frankie stuttered. “B-but sire, that dragon of hers killed a lot of our men, he butchered Garble like he was nothing! It’s a bad idea to go out there alone.”

“If you want something done right, you do it yourself. Besides, I have no time.” Blueblood snarled before teleporting to Fillydelphia.

What he didn’t know is that once he gets there, he doesn’t have to worry about Spike…

He has to worry about Rachel.


“You two sluts are so lucky I love you both.” Rachel grunted as she was out in town for the first time in a while. Feeling very uncomfortable as she had the hood of the hoodie over her head attempting to hide her appearance.

The three of them were walking towards the dragon districts due to the fact that they had some clothes that would fit Rachel instead of looking for pony size clothes.

“Aw, we love you too sissy.” the twins giggled as they dragged her further.

Now due to certain laws, dragons have to wear some sort of clothes in public since they typically wore little to no clothing. Since Rachel was getting taller than typical ponies, she would have to see what they have to offer.

“Rachel come on, you really don’t look that bad,” Ruby said, watching her as they walked down the cobblestone sidewalk. Dragontown had tall arch-like structures that reminded Rachel of Chinatown from her world with red clay buildings.

Her nose flared as the smell of dragons hit her nose. Though the smell isn’t as strong as the smells she smelt from the Dragonlands, it was strong enough to ignite the fire inside her and her draconic instincts wanting to come out.

“Guys, this might be a bad idea.” Rachel whispered, trying to hold back a growl.

A large male green and yellow dragon wearing headphones dressed in shorts and a tank top wasn’t paying attention and bumps into Rachel, not meaning to.

Rachel snaps her jaws and snarls, getting the male’s attention and growling, “Watch it bub!”

“You watch it, freak.” the dragon responded with a growl, seeing the mishmash appearance of her face from underneath the hood..

The twins had to grab Rachel by both of her arms as she made an attempt to attack the dragon.

“We’re so sorry about that.” Ruby said before the twins dragged Rachel further down the sidewalk.

When they got a little ways out, they let go of their aggravated friend.

“Okay, try not to throw hands at every single dragon that comes our way, okay?” Gemcity suggested, trying to calm Rachel down.

“Kinda hard not to.” Rachel growled, staring down at Gemcity.

“Hey, let's just get you clothes and try to have a good day.” Ruby offered, gesturing her hand as a nearby clothing store for dragon clothes. “Look, we're nearly there. It’ll be interesting to see what kind of aesthetics dragon fashion has.”

“Did you guys forget I used to serve dragon drinks at the Lunar Providence?” Rachel asked with an arch brow. “I got a pretty good idea what dragons from Dragontown wear.”

She then sniffed the air and her belly started to growl as the smell of fried chicken wafts her nose.

Oooooh it’s been ages since she had indulged herself with fried crispy chicken, especially in Dragontown.

Maybe she could stop by and grab a bucket on her way~

She froze midstep as another scent, a rather familiar scent came to her senses. Her pupils shrunk paper thin and her tongue flickered.

He was here….

“Let’s get the shopping done and over with.” Rachel said, walking into the dragon boutiques, silently plotting her way to ditch the twins for just ten minutes to take care of a certain Prince.


Author's Note

And with everything Rachel has been through, she can do a lot in ten minutes.

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