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The Fallen

by Goldenarbiter
The story of a fallen angel as he finds his place amongst Equestria.

An angel who wants nothing more than Gods favour is struck from the heavens for an act of great betrayal. frozen in the cold void of space, he eventually crash lands on a small planet with a small continent known to you and me. This is the story of how this angel helped found Equestria.
(Please note, this story takes place before the nightmare moon incident, as well as before the infighting that brought on the windigoes.)

Please note, if you are fervently religious (Any Abrahamic religion), this story may not be for you. It involves heavy modification of some aspects of the bible that could be considered offensive to your faith. This is your fair warning. If you find this story to be offensive because of religious reasons, please do not down vote because of that.
If you just genuinely don't like the story however...

Please enjoy the read, and please give constructive criticism. This is the first time I have attempted 1st person, so I need the criticism to improve. Also note, I really have no idea what categories this story will fit in at the moment, so more categories will be added as time goes on.

Teen
On Hiatus
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
Human
Adventure
 
ONPOP

4076 words: Estimated 20 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2012-08-16 00:40:37 UTC
    1486
  2. Chapter 1 2012-08-16 00:42:55 UTC
    1794
  3. In memorium fuga 2012-08-20 01:08:07 UTC
    789
  4. Indefinite Hiatus 2013-05-22 02:18:04 UTC
    7