Irredeemably rejected

by tan575

Rating: everyone
Tags: Shining Armor, Princess Celestia, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Sad, Main 6
Length: 2504

Twilight has fallen from grace and now everyone is against her

Twilight is banished from Equestria by Princess Celestia. How will Twilight convince her mentor and friends not to banish her?

Story by PLCTheCd, commissioned by Tan575 and artwork by CSImadmax

Published 2012-08-04 07:14:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-04 07:14:01 UTC

Irredeemably Rejected

Irredeemably Rejected

Story by PLCTheCd, commissioned by Tan575 and artwork by CSImadmax.

"They need you right now, but when they don't…they'll cast you out like a leper…"
-The Joker, in The Dark Knight

Deception (An Outrage)…

Disgrace (For Shame!)…

She asked for trouble the moment she came…

Somewhere at the edge of the Everfree Forest, Twilight Sparkle coughed and sputtered as she gets up after being thrown into a mud puddle. With mud and filth covering her face and body, Twilight turned to look at the princess, her brother, and her friends. Their eyes filled with anger and hatred towards her.

Gathering up the courage to face their icy glares, she manages to speak, "Everyone please, I know what I did was wrong but isn't this getting way out of hoof? If you would just let me explain that I didn't mean to do it!"

"No more excuses!" Shining Armor yelled at his sister before the ruler of Equestria quiets him down.

"Consider yourself lucky that I am your brother," said Shining Armor.

"But I am sincerely sorry, I really am!" The guilty mare pled to the unmoving crowd. "I didn't mean for all of this to happen."

"Do you truly believe saying that alone will justify your actions?" Her mentor said coldly, "Nothing that you will say or act will undo the damage that you have caused."

"But there must be some other way!" The purple unicorn urged. "What must I do?"

"Just be grateful that I didn't sentence you to be executed," Princess Celestia snapped at her former pupil. "Your crime against Equestria is high treason and that alone is punishable by death. But since you were my former pupil and taking into account of your past contributions to Equestria, I have decided to commute the death penalty to a much lighter sentence. You will instead be banished from Equestria forever and you will be spared from the humiliation of public shaming and execution."

"But, isn't there anypony who would speak for me?" Twilight panicked. "What about Spike, Princess Luna, or your niece, Princess Cadence?"

"How dare you bring Cadence into this?" Her brother snarled with fury, slamming his hooves on the grass. "Everypony is either afraid of you or wants you dead."

Princess Celestia raised her hoof to quiet the Captain of the Royal Guard down. Shining Armor immediately went silent but retained his hatred toward his once beloved baby sister. This was the first time Twilight had seen Shining Armor this angry towards her and the fury in his eyes alone was enough to chill her bones. In the past when she was just a filly, her Big Brother Best Friend Forever was the first person to defend her whenever she gets into trouble. This time, however, her own big brother has become her enemy.

"Seeing that you asked for a fair trial, we will give you one," said Princess Celestia.

The Alicorn was silent for awhile until she finally said, "You can speak to all seven of us, if you can convince any one of us, then I shall pardon you of your horrific crime but I cannot guarantee that any of us will forgive you."

Twilight Sparkle winced when Princess Celestia said "horrific" and not being able to forgive; but she is slightly relieved when she gets a chance to defend herself. Deciding to pick whom to speak to, she goes for the first mare she met in Ponyville. Pinkie Pie.

"Pinkie, you can't be serious about forgetting the fun times we had," Twilight begged the party maker. "Remember when we solved the mystery of the Dessert Competition in Canterlot together! Remember when we arranged a surprise birthday party just for you!"

"You're not going to fool me anymore with your smart talk!" Pinkie Pie snapped at her, "None of us will fall for your tricks ever again, you big dumb meanie!"

Shot down, Twilight was about to cry from the words Pinkie Pie (from all mares no less!) had said. But she fights back her tears. Surely, if she can't convince the party maker for forgiveness, then the hardworking Applejack might be able to see her truth.

"Applejack, you saved me when we reached the Elements of Harmony. I helped you during the applebuck season, I was the one who-"

Twilight was interrupted when a rotten apple was thrown at her face; pieces of the rotten fruit and the sour juices ran down her face and into her mouth.

"That will shut yer lying trap up, yah no good snake…" The cowgirl hissed.

Desperate, Twilight goes to Rainbow Dash. The cyan Pegasus herself might know what it is like to be punished and may believe that this is going too far.

"Please tell me that this is some kind of a sick joke," the unicorn pleaded to the hovering pegasus, "Just ask them to stop and think back when we were at Cloudsdale to support you in the Best Young Flyer competition and when I introduced you to Daring Do!"

"This is no joke you dirty traitor!" Rainbow Dash growled, "At least I didn't do the things that you did!"

Before Twilight can reason with Rainbow Dash, the pegasus placed a rain cloud above Twilight's head and kicks it. Twilight gets drenched in even more rainwater similar to what happened to the Cutie Mark Crusaders, courtesy from the pegasus. More mud began to form on her already filthy coat.

Coughing out the excess rainwater and doing her best not to trip over the slippery mud, she turns to the Element of Kindness. Perhaps, she will know when enough is enough.

"This isn't like you at all Fluttershy," the desperate mare beseeched, "Don't you think this punishment is harsh? Just think back when I helped you gather water for Cloudsdale. Remember when you freed me from the Cockatrice?"

Alas, the animal caretaker's response was anything but what Twilight wanted to hear.

"If I knew about the cruel things that you would do in the future, I would've let you stayed in stone you monster!" Fluttershy spat.

Twilight was stunned that she of all ponies would say such a thing to her. This is the first time Twilight had seen the kind and softspoken Fluttershy showing cruelty towards anypony. Twilight was doing her best to hold back her tears but recalls that there are three chances left. She turns toward Rarity. Maybe the proprietor of Carousel Boutique can be convinced.

"I was the one who rescued you from the Diamond Dogs Rarity," Twilight said, "Have you forgotten that?"

"That is an exaggeration, Twilight Sparkle. I saved myself through my own quick-thinking and well-placed words. Don't think that you'll rip us off this time!" She lashed out with a scoff. "You're not going to steal our trust anymore, you thief!"

Just my brother and the princess left. Twilight thought. If I can't convince my friends, I must try my best to convince them.

"Big brother please, I didn't mean for this to happen," the younger sibling implored. "Recognize your own sister, remember when you taught me to fly a kite, please think of the good things I did and the good times we had as siblings."

"You are no longer my sister…" Shining Armor replied as coldly as his stare. "And before you bring my parents into this issue, let me tell you that both Mom and Dad are disappointed at what you've done. Mom is so upset that she regrets ever giving birth to you and Dad wants me to tell you that he has already disowned you. I will make sure that Mom and Dad will soon forget that you ever existed. I have already burnt every single photograph they have of you."

"This is your last chance to convince us," Princess Celestia warned, "Speak now or leave and never return."

Twilight panicked frantically and tries to think of someway to talk them out of banishing her. Then an idea appeared, a bright beacon of hope in this grim and dark situation.

"Princess, there's still me as the Wielder of Magic for the Elements of Harmony," Twilight declared with all her heart and soul. "Even if all of you cannot forgive me, you cannot remove the Element of Magic within me."

Everyone looked mildly astounded on what the unicorn has said and Twilight hoped that maybe this was the right sentence to get them to think clearly. The Elements of Harmony, the most powerful magic in Equestria, have been used many times in the past to save Equestria from the brink of disaster. The Elements of Harmony stopped Nightmare Moon and Discord and Twilight hoped with all her heart that perhaps the elements will light her darkest moment.

"True, what you have said is correct," Princess Celestia answered with a slight nod but her mood (Along with everyone else) automatically changed back to her previous one. "But we have already picked a new Wielder of Magic beforehand. Her name is Trixie, and she is a quick learner too. I have already taken her as my new protege and soon she will be my best student of all time, surpassing even what you could ever have been. In fact, Spike has willingly pledged himself as her assistant from this day onwards. He will do his best to help her be better than you."

Twilight's hopes were dashed once she had heard those words. Trixie? As in The Great and Powerful Trixie? Overwhelmed with deep despair, she can't believe that she was replaced as well. The Wielder of Magic and the coveted position as Princess Celestia's personal protege were stripped away from her as well.

"Trixie is my new little sister for now on," Shining Armor added, "Mom and Dad are planning to adopt her after you're out of the picture. Her being their new daugther will help them to forget their shame of ever having you."

And now Trixie has taken over her place as daugther to her parents and sister to her brother.

"T-t-those are not any of your w-ways everypony, Tr-tr-trixie must've tricked you like Discord did to all of you." Twilight breaks down into stammers; in a final desperate move, she cries out at the top of her lungs. "PLEASE RECOGNIZE ALL THE GOOD TIMES WE HAD! PLEASE REMEMBER ME!"

Without warning, a speeding rock barely missed her ear by an inch. She turned her back to see the rock lodged into a nearby tree. The said projectile was imbedded deep in the trunk, the impact would have seriously hurt or even killed her. It was obvious that the rock was aimed for her, and her mouth opened wide in disbelief once she saw who the thrower was.

"This is your last chance to leave unharmed Twilight," Shining Armor said with disgust as if her very name was foul. "This time, I won't miss!!"

"Enough of your pathetic excuses," Princess Celestia warned the unicorn. "If you must know, I was the one who decided that she will be the new Wielder of Magic."

"But none of you ever liked Trixie," Twilight protested to her friends. "She is a show-off and a liar. Remember the time when she humiliated Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity in front of everypony on stage? And I had to stop an Ursa Minor when her boasting made Snips and Snails bring it to Ponyville?"

"You forgot the fact that you could have stood up for us at any time when she was showing off on stage," said Rainbow Dash. "Instead, you turn tail and ran when she openly challenged you. I say that's cowardice and disloyalty. Besides, what she had done to us in the past is nothing compared to the crimes you have commited."

"I agree," said Rarity. "We can forgive what she did to us in the past; but we shall never forgive you for your crimes, Twilight Sparkle."

"And Trixie never tricked us like you did with us," Twilight's former brother added. "And now back to the Everfree Forest where you belong. And never come back!"

"She would soon be a better student, friend, and sister than you ever were, Twilight Sparkle," the ruler of the sun said coldheartedly. "You are now forbidden to even step a foot in Equestria. If you dare to return then you will wish that you had been executed."

With her head sunk low, her eyes filled with tears, and her spirit absolutely crushed, Twilight Sparkle quietly walked into the woods. Behind her, Twilight's former friends yelled at her, as Applejack thrown one last rotten apple at her. But Twilight didn't care anymore. She was stripped of everything she had ever been proud of. The Wielder of Magic, protege to Princess Celestia, her friends, her brother were all torn away from her; and even her own parents had disowned her. She no longer had anything.

As she walks away into the woods, Twilight could hear the princess saying, "I, Princess Celestia of Equestria, decree that from this day onward that Twilight Sparkle is no longer a citizen of Equestria. Let the name of Twilight Sparkle be erased from every book and records in Equestria. All her achievements are to be forgotten but her crimes shall always be remembered as a lesson to us all. Let the name of Twilight Sparkle be unheard and unspoken, to be erased from the memory of everypony, for all time."

For hours,Twilight Sparkle wandered in the Everfree Forest which is now both her home and prison. The only other inhabitant that she knows living in the forest is Zecora. Perhaps, she would be kind enough to let her stay in her hut? No. She has caused enough trouble to everypony and she didn't want to trouble Zecora either. Besides, all Twilight wants right now is to be alone so that she can wallow in despair.

"Go on and git yah no-good Liar!"

"Go back where you came from you Cruel Monster!"

"You're never going to make anypony grouchy again, you Angry Meanie!"

"Good riddance, the place is better without ponies like you, you Thief!"

"Don't you ever come back to Equestria ever again, Traitor!"

Those words still echoed Twilight's mind even as she walked deeper and deeper into the dark Everfree Forest. Twilight cries harder than she ever had before, tears blinding her as well as the forest's shadows and she thought to herself:

"They called this mercy?"

Let her run…

Let her live…

But do not forget what we cannot forgive…

...

By the time she opened her eyes, Twilight Sparkle was in her bed…in her home…in Ponyville! It was all but a horrible nightmare, a nightmare that was all too real. She gasped for air and wiped the cold sweat off her head. Twilight slowed and quiet down her breathing as not to wake the sleeping Spike. In her bed, she begins thinking…

"It was all just a bad dream," She quietly reassured herself, "But just what did I do that was so unforgivable?"