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An Ancient Debt (Rewrite)

by Omegathelegnd
In Equestria’s time of need, an ancient debt is repayed.

The Zebras have been ruthless and efficient in their campaign of conquest against the Equestrians, on their last legs the princesses call upon an ancient ally. One that may not even exist anymore.



Note: Seeing as I originally just wrote this to get the idea out of my head I didn’t exactly give it my all and as many of you noticed it had a lot of flaws, plotholes and faults in the way medieval warfare was conducted. Once I saw that so many people were interested in my idea I decided that I would take what I had and rewrite it all.

So here’s the new and hopefully more improved version, now just so you know my grammar mistakes might not be all gone so point any out if you find some and I will rectify them as soon as I can.

Incomplete
Anthro
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Thriller
Profanity
Adventure
Violence
Death
Alternate Universe
Human
 
POSFP

4514 words: Estimated 23 minutes to read

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