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Torrentous Tears

by UmbraEquinae
When so much corruption becomes evident, the corrupted are noticed. When the corrupt become victim to their own deeds, there is no mercy.

from the parchment left by the creature, as described by the single patron left unharmed, dressed in a white garment and black pants for Ol' Shamrock; aftermath of the attack on the residents of Ol' Shamrock's Pub, Hollow Shades, Equestria:

Listen colts and fillies, now you shall hear
of a story that will make you shake in fear

Who is the shadow crawling on the walls;
whose hoofsteps induce horror-filled calls?
Oh, why is the atmosphere so thick with dismal?!

Flowing streams of torrential tears
streak down a muzzle curled in a forever sneer.
Standing alone in the rain, he reeks of foreboding drear.

Sour, bitter, and screeching with pain.
Watching with eyes hidden behind charred-black mane,
they are narrowed fiery mirrors regarding all with disdain.
Running from this phantismal entity is an act done in vain,
for nopony escapes the UmbraEquinae's bane.

"It matters not who I am," the spoke the phantasm, a blade flashing before it. "What you should be concerned is this: How are the corrupt regarded, and what they deserve?"


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Teen
On Hiatus
Sad
Horror
Violence
Crossover
Death
Human
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
OSTM

4776 words: Estimated 24 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Observations and Reflections 2018-11-23 21:18:39 UTC
    1183
  2. Past Known 2018-11-23 23:42:38 UTC
    1258
  3. Salvation for Her 2018-11-26 23:35:27 UTC
    1134
  4. Surgery from Them 2018-11-29 00:48:34 UTC
    1201