Rewrite:Ocellus... we need to tell you about something...

by damiranc1

I WANT TO KNOW THE TRUTH!

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"I-I'm l-listening" Ocellus jumped on her bed to listen to what her king and headmare have to say about her past. But on the other hoof, she was very scared of what they want to say to her.

"It did not happen so long ago … One year ... In my castle … I invited Thorax for a conversation with tea" Twilight was shaking when she talked about what happened this time.


"Would you ask for one more cup of tea your highness?" Twilight asked the king of changelings with a warm smile on her muzzle.

"Everything for you Mis- … I mean PRINCESS Sparkle" he gave back his smile, raising teacup so that Twilight can pour it from the kettle.

Twilight, using her magic, picked up the kettle and slowly poured into his cup. This was the second time Twilight invited him to his castle. Although she did not show it, she felt better when she was sitting next to him. She also knew from her dragon Spike that his friend Thorax liked tea, and did not like being lonely. She also did not know that Thorax also felt better when he was sitting in front of a purple mare.

It was dark enough outside. Thorax, after seeing what the weather is like, he said.

"I think I should return to my kingdom … It's so dark now … Pharynx will be angry if he will need to replace me for night " he stepped closer to the window, seeing the moon on the sky.

"You can stay whole night in my castle … " Twilight suggested "If you really want of course" she tried to hide a smile on her purple muzzle .

"I don't see any problems to NOT stay overnight" he looked at his Purple alicorn friend

"So follow me my king" she jumped up the stairs and looked back to make sure that Thorax would follow her, and that he would not get lost.

After going through several long corridors, Twilight finally found her room.

"Ladies first" he stepped back a little, just to hear a giggle from his marefriend.

"You forgot who this castle belongs to"

After entering her room. Twilight took a pillow and a quilt from the cabinet. She inflated the mattress in the size of her guest and put it on the floor.

"You will sleep here, the mattress should be warm and comfortable enough for tall and kind changeling king like you" she looked down at her "work".

"Thank you for that you let me stay the night in your castle … It is very rare for me to spend a night in somepony's house"

"It's no problem my friend … " she smiled to him. "I rarely have guests"


"W-What d-does this story have to do with m-me?" Ocellus asked with dissapointment in her voice. "In your story, there is no mention of my n-name!"

"Ocellus … please … just give Twilight the chance to finish this story" Thorax looked at the female drone with annoyed tone.

"H-how???? She just changes the subject with this story" Ocellus made her headmare sad because of these words.

Twilight was frightened of her behavior, but was more afraid of her reaction after learning the truth.

"OCELLUS! Please … " The changeling king tried to sound calm,

"F-fine … " Ocellus with lidded eyes looked at Twilight to continue.

"As I said … " Twilight continued


"It's no problem my friend … " she smiled to him. "I rarely have guests"

"Do you want to eat something?" she asked taking out a few daisy sandwiches from the cupboard. "I prepared them for the night in case I did not want to go to the fridge for food"

"Y-yes … p-please ... I'm very hungry after this tea" Thorax took one of them with his magic, and slowly began to eat.

For Twilight, Thorax looked very, very sweet, when he ate his sandwich. Twilight, looking around, also began to eat her sandwich, after a while, seeing that her guest had dirty his face.

She giggled.

The King of the changelings, not knowing what happened, looked around the room.

"S-something w-wrong Princess?" he looked around.

"I did not know you have a beard Thorax" she smirked unable to stop her laughing.

"v-very ... funny" he laughed "Where are the tissues to wash it off?" he looked around the cabinets

"Don't worry i'll help you" Twilight came closer to tall changeling, and began to lick his muzzle, where there were places after sandwiches.

After feeling the saliva on his exoskeleton face, he felt like in heaven. Thorax, unable to stand the moment, began to kiss Twilight all over her head until he reached her mouth. Their tongues met and fight together for domination, but it was Twilight's tongue who won this tournament.

Thorax pushed Twilight onto the bed, as he started kissing her neck, and mouth again.

"Be my queen for now Miss Sparkle" he whispered into her ear.

"N-no … Be my prince Thorax …" she bited his ear, making him gasp.

"I like your acting P-PRINCESS …" he covered himself and Twilight with a quilt.

Next Day

Thorax yawned and opened his eyes. The high shock for him was that he did NOT sleep on the mattress … He SLEEPED with Princess Twilight Sparkle. However, the biggest shock for him was when he saw that SHE was looking at him too. They both gasped. It was at this time when Ocellus was begotten.

"I SHOULDN'T BE HERE!" They both shouted in shock.


"We did not know what got into us ... It happened so suddenly" The changeling king said with shame in his voice.

"I had to hide my pregnancy for 11 months so that my family would not know about it" she sighed "There were spells for changing the shape of the stomach. I, as Alicorn, had access to such spells like this one"

Ocellus was shocked and looked at her king

"Is … Is … " she cannot finish her sentence.

Thorax nodded with sad expression.

"That's true … " he said.

"I gave birth to you on my bed … Without family, friends, or Thorax … without nopony" she began to cry "I still have blanket stained in our blood after your birth." she sighed "It would be terrible to wash away the symbol of giving life"

"You're lying … " Ocellus tried to not think about it

"I would not be able to do it alone with the child ... that's why I gave you away for Thorax" she looked at Ocellus "You're also was born as changeling with powerful alicorn powers… you are growing faste-"

"YOU'RE LYING" Ocellus cried into her pillow

"Ocellus p-please listen to-" Thorax tried to say something.

"LEAVE ME ALONE!"

"D-DAUGHT-" Twilight came closer to weeping drone.

"P-PLEASE N-NO MORE L-LIES!" Ocellus hid her head under pillow which made her look adorable.

"Thorax is still loving you!" Twilight tried to say something positive.

"No one loves me ... I am an unwanted foal!"

"I LOVE YOU TOO. LISTEN TO US FOR ONCE!" Twilight cried making Ocellus look at her.

Ocellus had never seen her mother so upset.

"You are my only daughter. If I never slept with Thorax, I would never give birth to you!"

"W-what d-do y-you m-mean?" The cyan drone asked, sounding incomprehensible.

Twilight swallowed her saliva.

"That means I would never establish The School of Friendship … "

For Ocellus, everything was clear now.

Twilight created The School of Friendship for HER.

Ocellus slowly got up and walked over to Twilight, unexpectedly hugging her.

"M-mommy … Forgive me for ruining y-your l-life … I d-don't deserve t-to be called y-your d-daughter" she was ashamed to look into her mother's eyes

"S-sshhh … It's o-okay s-sweetie … It's n-not y-your f-fault" Tears were running down the purple mare's cheeks

Thorax as a father joined the hug.

"T-that m-means w-we are … a f-family?" Ocellus asked with a smile.

The cyan drone always looked beautiful with a smile.

"Yes … my daughter ..."


Author's Note

I hope this version of my story is good enough :P.

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