Fragile Rainbow

by Synli
An abrupt awakening from a nightmare causes Rainbow Dash to bolt from her house. With a friend’s troubled expression vivid in her memories and a deep sense of loss in her gut, where will she go?

Hello everyone! This is actually the first My Little Pony story I've ever written. I've wanted to get into stories with the characters that I've loved for so long, and NaPoWriMo gave me the perfect chance. I hope that you enjoy the story as much as I enjoyed writing it, and I'd be thankful for any comments that you could leave.

I originally came up with the idea for this story after having listened to CreepsMcPasta reading "The Cough"
It killed me that Rainbow would have to do something so horrible to her marefriend so in my own way I wanted to give the two of them some means of happiness. I suppose it could be counted as my own unofficial continuation of the story.

Here's a link to what I consider to be an awesomely done version of the original creepypasta:
The Cough.

Teen
Complete
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sad
 
RF

2814 words: Estimated 14 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Just A Nightmare? 2018-12-02 04:57:19 UTC
    1149
  2. Sudden Awakening 2018-12-02 04:56:14 UTC
    681
  3. A Friend's Comfort 2018-12-02 04:57:34 UTC
    984