The Golden Ring
An old box
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this is my first story because i'm a beginner of making stories and the problem is i don't have a proofreader and its going to have bad grammars and don't make sense of whats happening so yeah. tell me at the comments to what do you think of my first chapter
An old box
It's a Friday afternoon and the School is over and The Young 6 were having a normal day at the library. Gallus and Smolder are playing chess , Sandbar sits on the table watching Gallus and Smolder playing , Silverstream is reading books about equestria and always goes to Gallus , Sandbar and Smolder to obvious facts which annoys them. yona and Ocellus are at Twilight Sparkle's office fixing The Headmare's window because they got into trouble for doing a dangerous stunt of Ocellus calculations of Yona wanted to fly but instead Ocellus uses a catapult to Yona but suddenly Ocellus didn't notice that it's the worst spot that it's in front of the Headmare's window when the catapult launch Yona smashes it and the window has a big spot and the headmare is not happy and Ocellus and Yona had to go to the closet to find supplies for window fixing and the headmare hired the baby dragon called spike to watch for not making any funny business.
"Found anything yet" Ocellus Asked.
"Yona have not found it yet" The yak answered trying going deeper on the top shelf. then ocellus found it and tells yona to go but Yona found something at the top shelf on the side. "Wait yona found something".
Yona was just about to get out of the top shelf but she founds out that she's stuck on the top shelf "Yona need a little help please!" she started to struggle and Ocellus and Spike went to the top shelf to try to get her out as harder as they could but when they finally got Yona out Ocellus and Spike on the ground being squished by Yona.
"YAY YONA GOT OUT!!" Yona cheered when she sees that Spike and Ocellus are on the ground.
"Yeah you got out but can you please get us out first" spike asked. Yona stand up and she has the box on his hoof and when she tries to find a name that's on the box she founds the name called the Mane 6 which is their professor's and the headmare.
"Spike did you know about this" Ocellus asked when spike saw it.
"it's my friends box did you see the name on the box" Spike answered.
"yeah i know that but what's in the box" Ocellus asked again.
"What's in the box is my friends old stuff that they don't need anymore" Spike answered.
Ocellus and Yona are amazed that its their own professor's old box. "Can we see what's inside".
"I mean i guess it can be ok i mean i haven't seen that in the box yet i mean i still can't get over the fact that Rarity told me not to open the box even Twilight" spike said thinking about.
"And you agreed on that?". Yona Asked. "yes i mean you i have a crush on Rarity you know" Spike anwsered.
"Yes thanks spike i have to show this to the others and also for you Yona" Ocellus said.
Yona said "YAY".
and they're just about to get out but when spike said "AHEM" the two of them realized they got work to do.
Ocellus said "After we fix the Headmare's Window first".
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" Oh come on Gallus that's totally a checkmate" Smolder argued with Gallus because of the queen can go everywhere they want and the king side of Gallus got it.
"Come on at the very least that the queen can go anywhere is that it can't go backwards" Gallus replied back to smolder.
"Dude the queen can go anywhere you just said because your a sore loser" Sandbar added to Gallus. "No i'm not it's just the queen can't go anywhere right" Gallus asked.
"If Cozy Glow was there she would say that the queen can go anywhere" Smolder said.
Suddenly Sliverstream dashed in "Hey Guys!!" and the 3 of her friends groaned.
"we don't want to hear another obvious fact about equestria you annoying hippogriff" Gallus replied.
"Aw come on" silverstream replied "you know me i haven't been out in the equestria world ever since the storm king is here but now he's defeated and now i need to see facts about equestria which is the library".
"We know that and we do not wanna hear it" Smolder replied.
"TOO LATE!!" Silverstream said while her friends groaned once again.
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after 10 minutes of silverstream being annoying as usual about equestria Ocellus and Yona arrived with the old box form the mane 6 and Gallus reliefed saying "FINALLY!!".
"What's inside there" Silverstream asked.
"Oh well this is our professor's old stuff" Ocellus answered.
"And our professor's are okay with it" Sandbar replied.
"Actually i asked spike and he asked headmare and she's okay with it" Ocellus said. "
"I wanna see what's inside" Silverstream can't wait to open but her friends tried to tell her not to excite too much when they started to open it but silverstream jumped in anyway and the box was fulled with old stuff from their adventure's.
"Woah look at all this stuff!!" Silverstream said and got the stuff one by one.
"WAIT" Ocellus stopped Silverstream. "You can't just get out the stuff that we didn't see yet".
"But there all awesome and i've never seen all of these before" Silverstream replied.
Ocellus just had the idea "We will just pick out of the stuff one by one each turn".
Everyone agreed but Silverstream just sigh "Fiiiiinnnnneeee".
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Gallus goes first and when something got out he saw a plushie that looks like one of the professor named Pinkie's pet Gummy. "Why would that be in the box" Gallus asked.
"i don't know but it looks so cuuutttteee" Silverstream squeaked when she gets the plushie out on Gallus's hands
"HEY". Before Gallus could speak Silverstream got the plushie and hugged it in her chest. Gallus had nothing to say but sighed "nevermind".
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Yona saw something on the box and it has a 2nd place trophy from the Wonderbolts. "What is this?" Yona asked.
and then Ocellus knows what this is. "its a Trophy of the Wonderbolts" Ocellus has been a fan of the Wonderbolts ever since she's at Rainbow Dash's classroom and Rainbow Dash told the students about the Wonderbolts and about being awesome (she is still a fan of the Wonderbolts when The Washouts came and plus The Washouts got cancelled).
"Can it be at least be Golden" Gallus said.
"Well there's a Golden one which is 1st place and i guess they lost" Ocellus wondered. "i guess that's why its in a box.
("Why did they go on second place" Ocellus thought).
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Ocellus got something out on the box and its a Fire Ruby Necklace. "Its some kind of crystal necklace" Ocellus said thinking what this is.
"Wait a second" Smolder pointed it out "did Rarity mention of that Fire Ruby necklace where Spike gave Rarity as a gift". everyone looked at it and everyone agreed.
"Now that explains why Rarity told Spike to not open the box" Gallus replied.
"Should we tell spike" Silverstream asked.
"i think Spike would just kill himself" Smolder said it in a joke way.
"Yeah maybe a great idea not to tell spike" Silverstream said and everyone nodded.
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Sandbar got something out of the box and its an old dirty pony toy. "WHAT THE HECK IS THIS!?!?" Sandbar said horrified by how ugly and scary looking that is. everyone looked at it being horrified.
"It's a toy" said Yona "An Ugly toy".
"THAT TOY SHOULD BE BURNED ON FIRE!!!!" Silverstream said while she uses Smolder as a defender.
"Hey am not burning this thing it would be best that we should throw it on the trash" Smolder said and everyone nodded while Ocellus used her horn to teleport that horrifying toy on the trash.
"Well yona found it disturbing" Yona said.
"Yeah lets just forget what happended and its Silverstreams turn now" Sandbar said and everyone nodded once again.
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Silverstream got something out of the box and she saw a Nightmare night costume which looks like a bat. "oooooohhhhh a Costume" Silverstream looked at it what it looks like and she found out that its a bat costume. "AAH A BAT COSTUME!!!" Silverstream gasped when she holds it in to Gallus.
"Relax its just a costume" Gallus said trying to get silverstream of from his body.
"And its a pretty good costume as a bat" Sandbar said "one time at Nightmare Night i dressed as a spider and it gone pretty well everypony is afraid of me and i have the best costume ever".
"But who the heck throw this best costume from nightmare night" Ocellus asked.
"Maybe its for the best not to talk about it" Smolder said.
everyone said "Yeah".
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Its Smolder's turn now and then when something got out of the box he saw something very shiny and looks like a ring and when he saw it and it looks very familiar from Rainbow Dash's classroom. "Huh this looks familiar" Smolder showed the others.
"Huh your right" Gallus replied.
"Wait a second is this what Rainbow Dash is talking about the time where she helped A.K Yearling from the lost ring" Ocellus asked suprised.
"That would be sooooooo cool!!!" Silverstream said.
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When they looked at the ring to see what this is they wondered that this is the Lost ring from the Daring Do Book or its just a ring from a shop.
"I can't stop think about what this thing is" Gallus said.
"We all do!!" Sandbar replied.
Then Ocellus got an idea "How about i show this to Professor Rainbow Dash and she would look at it if its really the Daring Do's Lost ring" Everycreature nodded and Ocellus uses her horn to get it and rushes to go to Professor Dash's.
"I wonder what Professor egghead is gonna say" Gallus said
"We don't know" Silverstream said "But i hope she says its the lost ring"
And Everyone waited for 10 minutes later and Ocellus come back
(To Be Continued)
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