The Luna Eclipse

             It was 9:00am on a Friday I was starting to get tired from the long comedy show at a club. If you think being a comedian easy you have another thing coming. I was starting to get tired guess that's what happens at a hard day at work. So I went straight to bed (skipping dinner just to add) I toke off my cloths only leaving my boxers on of course. Before I could fall in to my deep slumber I toke note of a bright light illuminating from my hallway didn't I turn off the lights.[fuck their goes the electric bill]. I got out of my bed,and started to walk down the hallway.

            The closer I got the light got brighter. When I reached the end of the hallway I looked down the stairs to see the the light was coming from my kitchen. I slowly started to go down stairs,when I reached my kitchen the light had faded away. I enter the kitchen and I could not believe my eyes.

             It was a pony of some sort, it was blueish blackish. It also had a set off wings, a horn, and sort of aprell like a sparkling crown the Color back. The creature was wearing a collar that was black and had a crescent moon on it. Also had these sky blue shoes on each of its four legs. First thought that went through my mind was get the phone and call 911 in this bitch,then I said to my self lets help the pony might be friendly. So I started to walk toward the mystical creature (slowly lets no get carried away I was scared shitless) . All of sodden it rose to is feet erm hoofs and horn started to glow a midnight Color and screamed at me.

"STAY BACK THOU DON'T WANT TO HURT YOU". I started to move back.The creatures voice was so loud I had to cover my ears. Lets just say that it was so loud I saw a crack in a nearby glass cup.

"I wont hurt you just please lower the volume ". Its horn stopped glowing

"My apology I am still working on that". My fear disapated

"Its ok,well were are my manners my name is Eclipse what's yours". I estended my arm

"I am Princess Luna, nice to meet thou Eclipse". Raising her hoof for a hand I mean hoof shake. We shaked hands...hoofs what ever. Then I thought why in the hell is there a pony princess in my kitchen.

"I hope you are not offended when I ask you your highness. Were did you come from"? She sat down like a dog. After, two seconds of akword silence. I could see a frown form on her face,her blue eyes were starting to get teary. I got down on one

nee and put my hand on her shoulder,she looked up at me tears flowing down her cheeks. I brought her into a huge she cried freely into my shirt. It broke my heart to see anyone I mean anypony[calm your shit I fixed myself ok] like this.

"We don't have to talk about ok". I said stroking her mane. I thought to myself were the fuck is she going to stay.

"Princess you can stay with me for as long as you need to". She did something I thought she would never do,she gave me the tightest embrace in my entier life.(not joking ok)

"Thank you thank you thank you". She started to make the embrace tighter.

" Your welcome your Highness, but can you release your cutting off my blood circulation". She released me blushing profusely.

"Can you please call me Luna instead of my royal status". I nodded

"Come on Luna let me show you were you will be staying until you can go back". We got up "Now let me give you the grand tour". She followed right behind me with a smile on her face like nothing happened. I show the first floor,it was pretty funny when I showed her my television and my Xbox 360 but I guest in her world there technology must not be that to advance like

ours.Then we went up stairs,I showed her my office where I do all my work and come up with jokes, my bathroom she told me that their not to different from hers in her world.[good now I don't have to worry about that].We reached my room I opened the door.

"This is where you will be sleeping here Luna".She had a confused look on her face.

"Whats wrong Luna". Did I offend her, I didn't mean to.

"Is this not your room Eclipse".I shrugged

"But were will you sleep".Luna said looking at me with a concerned face

"The couch why " I replied

"I can't just magically come in your home and take you sleeping chambers ". I shrugged

"Ya,so a princess deserves the best of the best". Her face was as red as apple.

       I walked in to my room sat on my bed turning the lamp on the small table next to it. "Its ok, come on Luna you have had a long day and you need to sleep". Luna started to walk forward. When she reached my bed I could see that Luna need her sleep. I got up, picked up Luna put her in the bed. I tucked her in, I made sure that she was comfortable. I started to walk out but all of the sudden I heard my name be called out,I turned around.

"Thank you for letting me stay at your house until I can get home. I hope I can repay in anyway possible Eclipse". I smiled.

"Your welcome Luna but I bet anyone on your world would do the same for you". I replied.

"No they wouldn't, my subject hate me if they'd do they would only do it because I am the co-ruler of Equestria. You do it not caring of my statues". I walked back to Luna.

"Now why would say that I bet your subject love you". She shaked her head. Luna then told me about this while Nightmare Moon incident how she was banished to the Moon for one-thousand years.

"Luna you have to stop remorseing about the past and start living the present and start dreaming about the feature" Luna started to smile again.

"I wish I could always be that positive".  I gave Luna a hug ,then I  got up from the bed heading toward the door I stopped at

the door and said my good nights to Luna. When I reached my couch I laded down on thinking about how tommrow will go.

/A.N I hope you have enjoyed it so far and plz give me ideas what to do for chapters.

Also tell what I need to improve on in my story.