The Luna Eclipse

by GamingPoptart

Rating: mature
Tags: Princess Celestia, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Human, Sad, Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Comedy
Length: 13112

Friday night a pony will come visit me.

On a Friday night after coming back from a show of comedy. Somepony will be visiting me,will this new visitor hate me or will we
become friends maybe even more.Please leave me constructive criticism. This is my first story I have ever wrote so be a little nice if you don't like the fiction.

Published 2012-09-21 03:04:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-02 00:24:04 UTC

Chapter 1

             It was 9:00am on a Friday I was starting to get tired from the long comedy show at a club. If you think being a comedian easy you have another thing coming. I was starting to get tired guess that's what happens at a hard day at work. So I went straight to bed (skipping dinner just to add) I toke off my cloths only leaving my boxers on of course. Before I could fall in to my deep slumber I toke note of a bright light illuminating from my hallway didn't I turn off the lights.[fuck their goes the electric bill]. I got out of my bed,and started to walk down the hallway.

            The closer I got the light got brighter. When I reached the end of the hallway I looked down the stairs to see the the light was coming from my kitchen. I slowly started to go down stairs,when I reached my kitchen the light had faded away. I enter the kitchen and I could not believe my eyes.

             It was a pony of some sort, it was blueish blackish. It also had a set off wings, a horn, and sort of aprell like a sparkling crown the Color back. The creature was wearing a collar that was black and had a crescent moon on it. Also had these sky blue shoes on each of its four legs. First thought that went through my mind was get the phone and call 911 in this bitch,then I said to my self lets help the pony might be friendly. So I started to walk toward the mystical creature (slowly lets no get carried away I was scared shitless) . All of sodden it rose to is feet erm hoofs and horn started to glow a midnight Color and screamed at me.

"STAY BACK THOU DON'T WANT TO HURT YOU". I started to move back.The creatures voice was so loud I had to cover my ears. Lets just say that it was so loud I saw a crack in a nearby glass cup.

"I wont hurt you just please lower the volume ". Its horn stopped glowing

"My apology I am still working on that". My fear disapated

"Its ok,well were are my manners my name is Eclipse what's yours". I estended my arm

"I am Princess Luna, nice to meet thou Eclipse". Raising her hoof for a hand I mean hoof shake. We shaked hands...hoofs what ever. Then I thought why in the hell is there a pony princess in my kitchen.

"I hope you are not offended when I ask you your highness. Were did you come from"? She sat down like a dog. After, two seconds of akword silence. I could see a frown form on her face,her blue eyes were starting to get teary. I got down on one

nee and put my hand on her shoulder,she looked up at me tears flowing down her cheeks. I brought her into a huge she cried freely into my shirt. It broke my heart to see anyone I mean anypony[calm your shit I fixed myself ok] like this.

"We don't have to talk about ok". I said stroking her mane. I thought to myself were the fuck is she going to stay.

"Princess you can stay with me for as long as you need to". She did something I thought she would never do,she gave me the tightest embrace in my entier life.(not joking ok)

"Thank you thank you thank you". She started to make the embrace tighter.

" Your welcome your Highness, but can you release your cutting off my blood circulation". She released me blushing profusely.

"Can you please call me Luna instead of my royal status". I nodded

"Come on Luna let me show you were you will be staying until you can go back". We got up "Now let me give you the grand tour". She followed right behind me with a smile on her face like nothing happened. I show the first floor,it was pretty funny when I showed her my television and my Xbox 360 but I guest in her world there technology must not be that to advance like

ours.Then we went up stairs,I showed her my office where I do all my work and come up with jokes, my bathroom she told me that their not to different from hers in her world.[good now I don't have to worry about that].We reached my room I opened the door.

"This is where you will be sleeping here Luna".She had a confused look on her face.

"Whats wrong Luna". Did I offend her, I didn't mean to.

"Is this not your room Eclipse".I shrugged

"But were will you sleep".Luna said looking at me with a concerned face

"The couch why " I replied

"I can't just magically come in your home and take you sleeping chambers ". I shrugged

"Ya,so a princess deserves the best of the best". Her face was as red as apple.

       I walked in to my room sat on my bed turning the lamp on the small table next to it. "Its ok, come on Luna you have had a long day and you need to sleep". Luna started to walk forward. When she reached my bed I could see that Luna need her sleep. I got up, picked up Luna put her in the bed. I tucked her in, I made sure that she was comfortable. I started to walk out but all of the sudden I heard my name be called out,I turned around.

"Thank you for letting me stay at your house until I can get home. I hope I can repay in anyway possible Eclipse". I smiled.

"Your welcome Luna but I bet anyone on your world would do the same for you". I replied.

"No they wouldn't, my subject hate me if they'd do they would only do it because I am the co-ruler of Equestria. You do it not caring of my statues". I walked back to Luna.

"Now why would say that I bet your subject love you". She shaked her head. Luna then told me about this while Nightmare Moon incident how she was banished to the Moon for one-thousand years.

"Luna you have to stop remorseing about the past and start living the present and start dreaming about the feature" Luna started to smile again.

"I wish I could always be that positive".  I gave Luna a hug ,then I  got up from the bed heading toward the door I stopped at

the door and said my good nights to Luna. When I reached my couch I laded down on thinking about how tommrow will go.

/A.N I hope you have enjoyed it so far and plz give me ideas what to do for chapters.

Also tell what I need to improve on in my story.

Chapter 2

The next morning when I woke from my sleep,I hearing a Scream. I immeadity sat up wondering what could that be. (Was last night really real). Then I heard noises coming from the kitchen like pieces of shattering glass being moved. I headed to my kitchen only to see the same pony Princess,what's her name her name dammit that's it Luna ya Luna.(At least I remembered the name). I started to walk toward her I nelt down onto one nee to eye level.

"Are you ok Luna"? She had the look of fear on her face as I checked Luna for any cuts or scratches."H-E-L-LO anypony there". It toke her a few seconds to snap back to realty.

"We..I am very sorry please don't hurt". Her eyes were closed and her horn started to glow. I was surprised at the comment I mean why would I hurt her for this small indecent,I mean its just a broken plate it not like she tried to kill me.

"I would never hurt you for this,its just a plat. Are you ok Luna". She nodded,her horn started to glow all of the sudden every shard of glass was picked up and flouting mid surrounded by a blue aura."Where is your trash Eclipse".

"Right behind you Luna". I said. After she threw that way I wondered what pony's eat I mean I know they eat grass and flowers.but shes royalty she can't possible eat grass.Why don't I just ask her Jesus Christ. Luna was siting on the couch in the Living room she was staring at it for a long time. I was a little creeped out, I walked up to her asking if she even knew how T.V work she told me that in her world that the did not have my type of technology. That figures I should know, in the mid evil times with kings and queens,they didn't have T.V I went back into my kitchen peeked out and asked. So I picked up the remote pressing the power button.

"What channel would you like Luna".Then I i thought how stop of a question is that for me to ask someone about something they never used.

"Eclipse is there a channel about the news that happens on these plant,I would like that one then". I nodding. I pressed five and put up the volume so she could here it.

"Luna would you like anything for breakfast". She nodded

"Well can you tell me what you want then". I chuckled, I bet shes going to say grass and then I going to say I dont have any then a bunch of shit is going to happen.[just to add I hope that doesn't happen]

"do you have any eggs". I nodded (that was close). I went back into the kitchen to grab some eggs.

"Hey Luna what would like for a refreshment". I heard her ask for some orange juice. I got two glasses out of the cabinet  and went to the refrigerator looking for the carten of O.J.[ha OJ like OJ simion to personal sorry ok sorry]. Suddenly I felt

vibration in my pants.[For all perverts who thought it was a boner your sick]. It was my phone, reaching into my pocket pulling

out my phone. I saw that one of my best friends named Gareth Wiseing was trying to call me,I picked up.

"Hey man whats up". I said with a smile.

"Nothing just wondering if I can come over today Bro".

"Sur...". I stopped right when I remembered that I had a living mystical pony In my living room watching T.V [ channel 5 news to be exacted].

"Sorry Bro but no I have a very important project that I am working on,hope you understand man". Before he could she could go on I hung up and start to cook Luna's eggs for her. As I notice that the eggs wouldn't be ready for a while,I went back into

the living room and sat next to Luna.

"Luna if where going to be living with each other until you go back to your home I think we should know more about each other you know what I mean". She smiled at me and nodded

"So I guest that I will go first. As you already know my name is Eclipse Serrone I am 21 years old,I live in

Sacramento,California. I am a comic who is kinda of famous for what I do. I have a weird name by this I mean is that lets just say Eclipse is not really a human name but it doesn't bother. I am part of the human race or humanity as some people call it. The plant that my kind lives on is called Earth and we are omnivores ". She had the look of disgust at the end of what I told her.

"You eat meat"? She started to back away from me in horror.

"Luna don't worry we don't eat pones we just eat fish"[I know I lie but come on you know you would do it to]. She had stared to get back next to me.

"Sorry for over reacting Eclipse". I gave a warming smile.

"Your turn Luna". I started to get comfortable because this is going to interesting. I was right it was as interesting as hell man serious. Luna told that she lived in an amazing land called Equestria. Which is inhabit by three types of pones Earth pony,Unicorn, Pegasus and then there was the rarest of the kind Alicorn, which Luna was.[And if you don't know what an Alicorn is it's a mixer of all three". Then she ruled Equestria with her sister Princess Celestia who brings out the sun and Luna rises the moon. She finally told me how she got here she said that she was testing a Teleportation spell and she ended up here. That's right bitches I got the princess of the night in my house you jello,just kidding.

"I think your eggs are ready". I went back into the Kitchen preparing Luna's and I dish I came out with to plates of eggs

"Thank you Eclipse''. Luna said with a smile

"Your welcome Luna almost forgot about the drinks". I grabbed the drinks and came back to enjoy a good breakfast with a princess.

     After two hours of talk and enjoying each other company. Then owner conversation reached this point,she asked me what humans do in there internment?

"Well Luna we Humans do many things to past for example we watch T.V, read books go outside,talk to friends and the most popular of all or at least in my opinion is play video games". Her face looked the same as when I introduced her to T.V I mean I can't blame her.

"Whats a video game''?. I started to think of what I would tell her I mean do I go technical or be as vague as possible. So because shes not a human I just tell normally.(I did this in a British history channel voice)

"Well Luna a video game is a digital software that we use on our T.V. The way we us this is by the use of these systems

called Xbox,Xbox 360, PlayStation, PlayStation 2,(I am not going to say all the names ok)". The look on her face,she looked  so surprise about all of this but I understood why.

" Eclipse can we play one of this games of yours". I nodded with a smile.

"Luna can I chose what game we play because I was thinking we play a favorite of mine called Minecraft". I said

"Sure but can you teach me how to play this thing called Minecraft". I started to chuckle.

"Well du silly pony I'm going to teach you I mean why not". I reached out to my coffee table and got my chrome crimson controller.(I know right I cant believe I have one). what time is it 3:16 good I'll call Gareth later tell him what really is going on or should not I don't know but when the time comes I'll have to make a decision hope its the right one.

(4 hours later of fun gaming later)

"Wow Eclipse once you get the hoof of things these things called video games are kinda of fun". I have to say she was good once she got the as she said hoof of it she was building stuff and mining stuff like a boss. I have to say the hardest part of teaching Luna how to play is getting her use to using the controller,we decide for her to use magic to play other than that she was easy to teach.

"Damn what time is it Luna". She closed her eyes and her horn started to glow.

"I can feel the moon in the sky it most be night time". My mouth hung open for two reasons one for the time. Th second thing

what she just did.

"Cool Luna I never would have thought you would have a connection to our moon". She shrugged after that we had dinner(now the reason I didn't tell you what we had is because you don't need to know but if you must we had salad ok). Next Luna toke her shower then I did.(Now if you wanted me to talk about me taking a shower then your sick or gay)

"Come on Luna time for you to go to bed". We arrived to my room I tucked in Luna said our good nights. When I got to the reached the couch I laid down thinking how the day went.

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Chapter 3

"Eclipse wake up". I felt a nudge against my cheek."Wake up''. I opened my eyes for a short period of time and saw Luna with a slight angered expression.

"Go away mom it's my weekend". I turned over closing my eyes this made Luna even more aggravated with me

"You leave me with no other chose".(Is she gonna kill me no wake up wake up!). She got close to the sleeping human, lowering her head close to his ear and coughed.

"PLEASE GET UP NOW". My eye's shot open, I crawled into a ball covering my ears with my hands.

'' I am up damn what in gods name do you want that you had to wake me up like that". My voice raised in volume,Luna started to back away in fear. I realized that I was just now yelling at her and this was only the 2nd day she has been here. I got out from my couch,went down to on one an brought the blue pony in a embrace.

"I'm sorry Luna I didn't mean to yell at you". I felt her head do a nodding motion in my chest I released her. After few minutes

of (hugy time LOL) I asked her what she wanted she want the same thing as yesterday (eggs just in chase you did not know). After some conversational break fast eating.

"Hey Eclipse I would like to play this game". POOF My copy of Modern Warfare 3 or commonly known as MW3 was floating. Then I had a quick thought Luna Playing MW3 I got a small chuckle out of it. (really think about I can picture it now) ha-ha.

"How did you find that". She got a little embarrassed.

"I ran into it trying to find something to eat".

"Luna why not". She gave me a hug and said thank you. I picked out the floating MW3 copy I toke it out of its case and inserted it into the xbox. I sat back down next to Luna handing her my controller.

"Luna I wont be able to play for to long". She frowned.

"Why not is boring playing with me". She hung her head .

''Luna you don't know how much fun it is playing games with you its just I have to schedule shows so I can make money and use that money to the bills, I hope you understand but after that I am all yours ok". Her smile started to return. She left her head.

"I understand Eclipse lets began this". I nodded looked at the clock on the wall.

"Its 12:45 at 2:30 a go do my scheduling so if my maths right we have 1:15". She nodded. At least we have an hour. We watch the opening to it, then arrived at the main menu.

"Which one do I pick". I thought lets start off with campaign. We don't need a raging Luna cause of some asshole on multiplier killing her repeatedly.

"Do campaign Luna theirs a tutorial to help you". She clicked on to campaign. .She past the tutorial swimmingly ha I am  some uptight rich guy. After some time playing MW3 it was time for me to do my work.

''Ok Luna I got to go do my scheduling ok now feel free to come get me when you need me ok''. She smiled

''OK thank you for spending time with me". I gave her a huge and went to my office. I started to go up stairs but I was stopped when I heard Luna call my name, I looked back.

"Eclipse what is this multiplier". I chuckled

"Its when people around the world play against each other for fun". She had mischeveis grin. I started my way up again to my office. When I reach it I heard Luna say the funnies thing to say to some one when you kill them"You have been banished to the moon". I turned on my computer and started my work. I picked up my phone and punched in my mangers number.

"Hey Parker I am going to do a special at this club called The Wild Tiger for December 12 is that ok with you". I was waiting for an answer from my manger.

"Ok but after that I have 3 more shows, one at NYC, the second is in LA, then the third is at the fox theater". I was quite ecstatic with the first one I'm usually just in California but this is in New York City wow.

"Thanks so were good"? I said

"yup I'll call you when I get more info ok". Then I heard I loud pitch scream coming from my living room.

"What was that E"? (I know its a weird nick name)

"Don't worry about it. Before he could go on I hung up. I rushed out the door and almost rushed only to see exactly what I didn't want to happen a raging Luna.

"Eclipse how do humans find this amusing this is is terrible all that happens is I get a few kills then I die by some bucking idiot  how comes from behind me and kills me over and over again is getting annoying"! Wow she sounds a lot like me when I get mad. Walked up to her I toke the controller out of her hand and sited it on the nearby table.

"Luna its ok everyone has their fighting style and don't worry your not the only one who thinks this sucks". I winked. Her anger started to fade away.

"Hey Luna I'm also done with what I need to do so you what that means". She went from little anger to the happiest pony I have ever seen but shes the only pony I have seen. Luna and I played MW3 survival mode. We made it to round 47 and probably would have gone to wave 48, but I noticed that it was 5:30.

"Hey Luna what it time for dinner want anything". She was lost in thought.

"Take your time Luna take your time". She gave a embarrassed smile. After her time of thinking what she would eat she asked for a sandwich. I asked her that's all she wanted I mean that really is not dinner but if that's what she want that's what she wants. It was quick and easy to make Luna's dinner ,but what am I going to have? I guest I'll have a salad, After thinking me and Luna went to the kitchen to go make our dinner. Later after dinner Luna went up stairs to take her shower.We eat dinner 7:30 Luna finished her shower at 8:11 who takes that long. (shit no warm water) I heard Luna come down stairs

"Done Eclipse sorry I toke so long". I smiled

"Its ok". With that I went upstairs to take my shower

29 minutes later

I saw Luna sleeping in my room. I enter the premises and tucked her in. Next I went to the Laundry room to put my clothes in a bin sorted by colors, dark's and whites. I went back to the Living room and laded down on the couch closed my eyes entering my sleep for the night.

Chapter 4

                   Its been a few days, well four days to be exact but whose counting. Have Luna here has been phenomenally fantastic. Ever senses the encounter with me and Luna have had a great time. I have been growing closer to Luna with ever conversation we have, shes like a friend I never had. I mean this by lets just say I think I might have transformed Luna from Princess of the night to Luna Princess of Video Game. Don't think that Luna didn't give me a name because she did she calls me E I know really cool.

  I was awakened by hearing some whimpering/crying coming from my room up stairs. My vision was blurry so I rubbed my eyes and started to walk in the direction of my room. Every time I got closer and closer I could her Luna's crying amplified louder. When I finely reached my room I saw Luna was crying in one of the pillows. I tip toed in trying not to get Luna's attention. I got down on my nee's and put my hand Luna's head, stroking her mane. She turned her head, when she looked at me her big blue eyes were now red like roses.

"Are you ok Luna"? All of sudden Luna sat up and I was surrounded in Luna's magic. Then I was flung into a Lunar embrace or at least that's what I called it. Ever second that past Luna squeezed me harder and harder. With all of my strength I pulled away.

"Whats wrong Luna why are you crying"? I said with her hooves still raped around my waist. She went back to crying into my chest. I grabbed Luna's head and pushed ever so lightly up so that she was looking at me. I looked deep into her blue eyes.

"Whats wrong Luna you can tell me, is it something I did"? She shaked her head.

" I miss my home, I miss Equestria, and I miss Celestia so much. I just want to go home". She went back to crying.

"Shh...Luna its ok your going to see your sister one day and bring you back with her to Equestria so stop crying". I stroked her mane as she continued to release tears after tears into my shirt.(lets just say I was soke in wet from Luna's crying). You remember when I told you we were close, will I found out that when Luna lies to me she does this weird thing with her face, kinda hard to explain.

"Luna we both know that's not the reason now tell me why you are like this". After sometime of Luna repressing the truth she finally told me.

"The real reason is because when I go home I won't get to bring you with me". I was completely astonished by what she said. I mean why would she want to bring back with her,to Equestria.

"Why would you want me to come back with you I am just another normal guy".

"Your the only pony that are friends with me for me. Your not like the other pony back in Equestria".

"What do you mean"? I was confused.

    "What I mean is that my supposed friends just like me because of my royal statues or they think if they there not friends with me that i will send them to the moon. But your the only pony that cares for me for me''. I toke notice that Luna was getting closer and closer,soon I felt Luna's breath hit my face. I started to feel it get hotter in the room. Instantly something crazy happened I felt Luna's lips connect with mine. Part of me was preaching for me to stop right now, but part of me said keep going. Her lips tasted like a cool night. I felt Luna's hooves move from my waist up my back. When she reached my head she pushed me deep into the kiss. It felt like an eternity but after a while Luna broke the kiss.

"Thanks Eclipse for helping me through that moment". She gave me another kiss this time shorter than the last.

"So that kiss was just a reward or did it mean more"? Luna grinned.

"Its what ever you think it was". She started to walk out the door, when she arrived at the door she turn her head and winked.

I soon followed out and head to the kitchen for some refreshment. As I was walking I thought to myself is Luna in love with me. I just laugh at the though of a beautiful,captivating princess loving me, wait what did I just say. Am I growing feelings for Luna I mean shes not bad looking its just shes a pony and I'm a human. I thought to myself but should that really matter?

I entered my kitchen to get can of monster zero,because I feel today I going to need all the energy I can get. I sat next to Luna in the living room, there was complete silence until this happened. Luna got up and sat on my lap, now before you think to yourself that's not really anything she just wants to sit on my lap you wrong. She did the type of seductive sit in my lap thing if you know what I mean.

"Are you comfortable"? She looked back at me and in replied to that question Luna started to snuggle and rested her head on my chest, then if that wasn't enough she use her magic to rap my arms around her.

"Now I am". Its going to be a long day.

//A.N Sorry guys for not putting up a chapter for so long, I have been having writers block and have had test from school for the last week. I would like to give props to my friend Pony Lover for helping me wit this and go check him out. Hope you enjoyed and have a good day.//

Chapter 5

   It has been a few weeks and ever seen that kiss I have notice that strange behavior in Luna. She has eyed me from time to time. By this I mean that when I am making food for she stars at me like I was her lover or boyfriend if you know what I mean. Luna has allowed me all of the sudden to sleep with her in my bed.(Now if you need to know yes I toke the offer because the couch was to damn uncomfortable). The thing with that is sometimes I know you wont be leave this, I could feel Luna running her hooves around my body. She always stops at my waist, but I know she really wants to go on.

   For some reason I allow her do it, like I never say "STOP" or anything along the lines. Every time I close to her I feel warm feeling inside, the kind of feeling I use to get with my x-girlfriend Jennifer "Love".

   It was a good day the mourning was great Luna and I had pancakes, We talked little about human and equestrian technology  It's safe to say Luna hasn't tried any of her moves on me.It was in the afternoon Luna and I were playing minecraft Xbox edition because the 1.2.8 update came out. We where having a fun time playing creative on a super flat generated world. But after some time I noticed in the corner of my eye I could see Luna staring right at me.

"Uh Luna can tell me why your staring right at me, your kinda of starting to scare me Luna"? She blushed.

"I was just admiring at your human from". Oh no here we go.

"What do you mean admiring"? She grinned. Luna placed her controller to the side and turned to face me.

"Eclipse have you ever"? She paused like the words were to hard for her to formulate.

"What Luna"? Luna drew may my curiosity.

"Been in a relationship".  I was kind of confused.

"What do you mean relationship". Luna's face went red.

"You know like mare-friend and colt-friend". What in gods name is a mare-friend. oh now I get it shes talking about a girlfriend and boyfriend I get it, wait that means Luna's trying to ask me out. But I'm not ready to answer yet why now, why! Ok calm down lets just play this out and see what happens next.

"Ya I did her name was Jennifer, but we broke up a month ago because she said that I was to romantic for her. I knew that wasn't the real reason she left me". A frown had been plastered on Luna's face.

"If you don't mind me asking you, what was the real reason"? This is going way different then I thought it was gonna be like.

"She left me because she was cheating on me, so she left me to be with him". Luna had the look of sorrow for me. Luna got up close to me looking directly in my eyes placing her hoof on my chest.

"I am sorry to here that Eclipse she didn't deserve you. Eclipse want me to tell you something". I starting to sweat from the suspense in the room.

"What"?

"I like the romantic type". With that Luna grad the back of my head and pushed me into a passionate kiss. The surprising part was I didn't even try to stop her, I actually started to kiss her back. I placed my hands on each side of her flank making and in return I got a little moan from Luna. Luna broke the kiss, we both started panting from the lack of air. Before Luna could do or say anything I picked her up and placed her on my lap, and began to kiss her again. I couldn't control myself I wanted more. I could here Luna moan as we made out.(And just to add Luna was much lighter than I expicked).

Luna slid her tongue into my mouth. I could feel her tongue scanning ever part of my mouth like a ravaging alien looking for a lost relic. After a while Luna allowed me to do the same, but with Luna everything was bigger. For example her teeth weren't normal size, but what can I say I'm the one making-out with a pony princess. Luna rapped her hooves around my neck to pushing me deeper in the passionate kiss. Our tongues wrestled as our lips were pushed together like two army's going to war. I broke the kiss this time gasping from the lack of air, Luna and I locked eyes.

"Eclipse I love you". When I heard that I knew my answer.

"I love you Luna, will you be my mare-friend"? I didn't get answer but what I did get was a loving kiss from Luna.

"So I take that as a yes"?

"Yes colt-friend". With that Luna jumped off of me and head up stairs, she turned back.

"Well are you coming Eclipse"? What does she mean am I going to come? I walked up to my new mare-friend with confusion and followed her up stairs.

"What do you mean, were are we going"? She was quite until we reached the door to my room. Luna used her magic to open the door. She went in but soon turned around and gestured her hoof for me to come in, I walked in slowly. She moved forward up to me, then she stood on her two hind legs resting the other two on each one of my shoulder's. All of the sudden Luna touched me with her horn.

"You won't need these anymore". With that my cloths disappeared and Luna went back on all fours. Luna picked me up with her magic and plunked me on the bed. Luna's wings sprouted out and started to flap. She flew up above and landed directly on me.

"That girl who use to date should have never left shes missing out". Is Luna trying to seduce me, am I about to have sex with a beautiful moon goddess. The only thing I can say is "Thank you God".

"Luna are you trying to seduce me"? She started to blush.

"What gives you that idea"? Her eye said it all "Lust".

"All I am saying is". I got on top of Luna in one swift move.

"You should be a little more aggressive". I started to kiss Luna. As we kissed I could feel Luna's hoofs run down my. Her fur coat against my bare skin felt amazing. After a while I started my journey down to Luna's nether region. Every inch I went down I could here Luna moan louder and louder. When I finally reached my detestation, I looked at her wet slit then back at her, she was panting ready for me to ravage her pussy like a hungry dog. Without wasting anymore time I penetrated her with my tongue trying to find her most sensitive spot. Luna let out a loud scream of pleasure as I ate her out. I fond Luna's G- spot I licked it rapidly making Luna scream. I felt her inner walls collapse on my tongue, Luna let out a loud moan as her juices hit my tongue before going into my mouth. She tasted I know this gonna sound weird, but she tasted like the cream they put in Oreo.

I stopped because I was getting tired of  of the rapid movement and I had a mouth full of her Oreo flavored cum. I got in position ready to penetrate Luna with my fully erected penis. I placed my hands on each side of her flank as began to press my member inside her. She started to moan with ever inch that went inside her. She was so tight but suddenly I felt blockage this surprised me was I Luna's first? So for a thousand years Luna saved herself for me, I'm honored. I felt like I had to warn her that this was gonna hurt.

"Luna this going to hurt a little ok". She nodded with her eyes closed ready for the pain. I continued my way forward, I then penetrated her which caused Luna to gasp and moan as I made my way deeper. Once I reached my limit I pulled out, Luna looked at me with confusion.

"Why did y.."? She didn't get to finish her sentence as I thrusted into her with gusto. I Plowed Luna again and again until the only thing you could here was the moans and screams of pure ecstasy from Luna. Her horn started to glow but I ignored it. After a while of me and Luna fucking I felt myself getting close.

"Luna...I-I I'm gonna cum". I said through clenched teeth as her inner walls griped my cock.

"J-just hold it a little b-b-bit longer". Luna replied. I did my best to hold it, but once I felt her orgasmic juices I thrusted I as deep as I could came into her hungry womb. My cum flooded her pussy I could see some of my cum run down Luna's hind leg. Her pussy clasped down on my cock making me come even more. After I was down releasing myself I pulled out and laded down beside her panting. Luna snuggled up to me curling herself into a ball.

"I love you Eclipse".

"I love you Luna". I closed my eyes and went into a deep sleep.

Chapter 6

              I opened my eyes only to see myself in a dark foggy forest. I walked a little forward but I tripped over something, I think it was a rock. I looked at my feet only to see a flashlight. I leaned forward and and clasped the grip flipping the switch on the bottom of it, turning the light on. I flashed the light in front just to see three dirt paths going left, forward, right. Before I went my direction I had chosen I noticed a note on the floor saying.

Collect all 8 pages.

"Wait what how did I get here? How did I end up in a forest?" The last thing I remember was making love with Luna. Then telling her I love her, but how in the hell did I get in a forest. I live no were near a damn forest? What ever is happening I guest I am going to have to play along if I want any answers.

"So all I have to do is find 8 notes this shouldn't be hard, so which way do I go." From all the movies and books I have seen I know you should never go forward, so I'll go left because I write with my left hand. I started to walk down the dirt path, the only noises I could here was the chirmping of crickets, the owls hooting and the sound of my foot steps against the dirt. After a while of me walking for what felt like an our I found a tree, before you say "well no shit Sherlock your in a forest there's millions of trees." but this one was much larger than the rest and it had no leaves. I rushed over to it because I thought there might be 1 of the 8 notes would be their. Guest what I was right, it was just hanging their with nothing to support it staying up. The weirdest part was what it said.

Don't Look... Or It Takes You

I didn't know what it went but I grabbed it and looked at my other note the number changed it went from 0 to 1. So I have 1/8 that means only seven more to go. Suddenly I started to here loud foot steps like a giant from Skyrim. As much as I wanted to know what was cause that noise I don't think that its gonna be nice. I started to walk through the woods trying to find the other seven pages. The next thing I saw was something I couldn't be leave it was a truck. I don't know who is looking down on me but I get to fuck a goddess and then I find a full functional truck to get me out of this forest my luck is fantastic.

I ran over to it like there was no tommrow. I tried to open the door but it wouldn't open, and I was not gonna stay because I could here the stomps get louder. I looked on the other side only to find another note this time it said.

CAN'T RUN.

That freaked me out. I looked at the other note and this time the counter said 2 out of 8. I turned around only to see a tall man with no face. I tried to run but he grabbed me I screamed for help, but no one came.

Back to the land of reality

  My eyes shot open, I looked around making sure that I was safe from the tall slender faceless man. it some time but I finally realized I was in my room on my bed and not in the pitch black forest. I really need a good cup of coffee, but when I tried to get out of bed I felt a strong force push me back down. I looked to the right of me, Luna was hugging my arm with a smile plastered on her face. She looked so peaceful, like no-pony in the world could put her down. If I ever want to get off my bed I'm going to need to buy Luna a plush, maybe a moon one.

With all the strength I had I pulled my arm out of Luna's tight squeezed. When I was out of the bear hug Luna was giving me I saw Luna start to move her hooves around trying to find me. The smile she had was gone now it was one of those annoyed looks you get when some is talking on the airplane.(Don't you judge me, we all know you have been that person who gets annoyed of that shit). Before I could do anything Luna's eyes opened. She sat up stretching. When her eyes landed on me she draped her hooves on my shoulder.

"Last night was heavenly, I did not know that humans were such excellent mater's". I turned crimson red as I tried to figured out what to say.

"Ermmm...I didn't know I was good at mating you were my first...". It was true I never had lets just say "fun" with another girl especially Luna. When my vision came back to its 100% capability, I saw how Luna really looked. Her mane was all ruffled up I saw some white spots on Luna's fur, I toke guest it was my cum.

"I am glad to be your first...The pleasure of you pounding my royal plot was unbelievable, and like they say in Equestria your a big stallion". She winked at me, only causing me to get even more red, by the end of this my face is going to be so red you wont even be able tell the difference between me and a tomato.

"Ok Luna, I get the picture. Your technically saying it was a great fuck".

"Well to put it bluntly, yes. You were".

Great. Now I had lost my virginity with a immortal moon goddess. I knew this couldn't be real, but it was. It's been nearly 3 weeks now and from my understanding you don't last in a dream for 3 weeks straight.

"I....actually feel better then I ever did....strange....". She put her hoofs around my neck to hug me I presumed.

"That will be the after effect of the magic from when you....how do you put it...."

"Fucked you?"

"Yeah. That's it."

"Thanks Luna. I do regret it though as I didn't think I would have....ermmm...satisfied you as much as you wanted."

She pulled me into a deep kiss. Afterwards, she looked me in the eyes.

"It was better then I could ever imagine. Your so...strong....". I blushed again. Now she was just either trying to complement me or chat me up again.

"Your not so weak your self Luna". She giggled and winked at me.

"And you still managed to pick me up and pin me down."

"Well I did more then that but.....whatever...you ok Luna?". She placed her hoofs around my waist and held onto me.

"Oh nothing. I'm just still a bit...excited..."

I could feel something wet going up and down the side of my neck. I knew it was Luna licking my neck. I was reluctant at first.

"Luna...please we just did....last night....ohhh...that feels...good...."

"I know it does." Before I could get really into it Luna backed away and released me. She laid back down laying her head against one of  the pillows.

"Come closer.... closer... please..." I had obeyed her wish and lean forward towards her face, feeling her warm breath against my lips before interlocking my mouth with hers. Luna groans into my mouth in ecstasy, wrapping her hooves around my neck and pulling me in closer.

I cleverly reach my hand down in between her legs as we kissed, using two of my fingers I rub her clit gently. Responding to the pleasure, she breathes much more heavily and moans more passionately, sliding her large moist tongue deeply into my mouth. I lick at it a little before sucking on it like a Popsicle. Her taste is nothing short of unbelievable, with her sweet saliva oozing down my throat. I begin to thrust my hips just a little out of impulse, taking my hand and covering her moist marehood with it. My open palm rubs and grinds against her warm slit, feeling her warm heat radiating on it. Another coo comes from Luna as I do this, and I decide to use two of my fingers to spread her lips open, stroking the inner walls of her. Her back arches in response and she lays her head back on the large pillow, letting My gentle fingers explore her. My index and middle finger slip inside her wet opening; I twirl them around a little inside her like a screwdriver.

My fingers push deeper and faster inside her increasingly wet pussy as we play with each other's tongues. Luna suddenly feels a shudder of pleasure through her entire body as she cries out loudly, "I-I'm... CUMMING! Ahh!" I ram my fingers into her hole. Only making her scream amplify in sound. Now feeling a warm sticky fluid coat my hand entirely, Luna's juices squirt all the way up to my wrist (I never know you could cum that much). "Mhhh... thank you... I am so happy..." She licks her lips and bites it softly, looking up at me with those gorgeous eyes of hers as she breathes heavily resting her head on the pillow once more. I slowly take my fingers out of her and awe at what I have accomplished; as I look at my cum-soaked hand, I notice that even Luna's juices have a shimmering tint to them, glimmering in a similar manner that her mane does. Curious, I bring my hand up to my mouth and try to lick it clean, I remember the sweet taste "Oreo's". Luna looks up at me, blushing.

"Come over here big boy". She said in a seductive manner, I leaned over her. Without warning Luna got on top of me, pinning me down. She lowered her head until our lips were only inches apart. Luna's wing were spread out across the bed. She started to breath heavy moving up and down, she was getting horny.

"I've been a naughty princess,who deserves a punishment...What are you going to do to me"? I replied by slamming my cock directly into her pussy. Luna moans in delight, wrapping her hooves around my back and bring me into a kiss. Her wet walls felt amazing on my member as they tightened themselves around it. I went deeper, groaning deeply into her mouth as I  move my hips from side to side as I thrust. Luna bites my bottom lip erotically, her wings fully extending out onto the bed and moaning as I try to find her most sensitive spot. After a few minutes of wriggling my member inside of her tunnel, I finally hit it. Luna screeches in a high-pitch wail of pleasure as I pound at it repeatedly, clenching her teeth and tightening her grip on me; she wraps her legs around me groaning wildly.

MMMMHHHHH!!!" She practically screams into my mouth, squirting her cum all over my lap with her pussy contracting down on my dick. The increased pressure on it brings me on the brink of climax; my hips slap hard against her plot-cheeks and I pin her front hooves down on the bed. The base of my cock smacks against her lips as my entire shaft is buried inside of her marehood. We moan into each others mouth's and swirl our tongues around each other until my cock finally explodes, firing my cum deep into her womb. I slowly break the kiss, smiling down at her; she smiles up at me also, fluttering her eyelashes at me. As I kiss her again, she turns over and lays on top of me, grinding my stiff cum-soaked cock between her legs once more.

However, she catches me off guard by shimmying down my body and nuzzling my penis with her nose, giving the head a frisky lick as she smirks up at me. Luna then gulps my shaft down, gargling a little as she bobs her head up and down. I hold her head, moaning, " Ohhh, Luna.... you're absolutely amazing..." She smiles at the compliment as she sucks me off, dragging her tongue across my shaft and looking up at me with her beautiful sapphire eyes. She groans loudly as she blows me, vibrating my cock with her throat. Luna's lips hit the base of my dick as she deep-throats me, gagging loudly and shaking her head from side to side. The pleasure is to much for me to take anymore; I hold her head down on my lap, firing my hot gooey load down her throat. She lifts her head up and takes a deep breath, licking her lips. The Luna gulps my white cum down and opens her mouth for me, showing that she swallowed it all. She giggles and moves up my body again, kissing me passionately.

I grab her flank and roll over on top of her, grabbing her horn in my hand and stroking it gently up and down as I rub her chest. Feeling frisky, Luna brings my hand from her chest to her throat, giving me a naughty look. Understanding what she wants, I lightly grasp her throat and pin her neck down on the bed, adjusting my cock so that the head is lightly prodding at her plot-hole. She gazes at me seductively, rocking her hips back and forth and nudging it into my member. As I slowly push my way into her tight hole, I grip on her neck and horn unintentionally get stronger, but Luna doesn't mind. In fact, she seems to like it even more. I shove my stiff cock into her plot deeply, immediately feeling much more pressure than usual due to its tightness.

Luna lets out another sharp yelp, her face turning a little red. Part of it was from blushing, the other half was from being moderately choked. I clop her horn off faster and tighten my grip on her neck even more as I kiss her deeply and thrust into her tight, moist plot. Luna suddenly lets out one of her usual "I'm close" moans. My clopping of her horn becomes rapid, eager to get her to... whatever Alicorns do when they release pleasure through their horn.  I feel myself getting close as well. I let go of her neck and use both hands to vigorously stroke her horn, thrusting my hips into her little plot-hole several more times before filling her up with the last of my hot, sticky sperm. Luna lets out a light shriek as her horn glows brightly immediately after I cum, filling the room with a blinding sky blue light. I can't see anything, but whatever it is I'm feeling, it is the most phenomenal sensation I have ever felt. It feels as if 10 simultaneous orgasms are coursing through my entire body. It feels like it will last forever, and I am more than just fine with that.

Once the light finally recedes, I find myself collapsed on top of Luna, breathing extremely heavily; she is doing the same, whimpering softly in pleasure. My hard dick is still inside of her tight plot, so I pull out of her slowly to not cause her any discomfort. She gives me a seductive look, hugging me tightly and wriggling her plot underneath me, positioning her waist so that I could enter her marehood again. I push myself forward a little and fit snugly inside, with her tunnel wrapping itself around my member like a warm blanket. It feels just as amazing as before, but we both know that were're both done for now. She is obviously just as exhausted as I am. We both smile tiredly at each other, hugging each other tightly and kissing passionately. I look into her eyes, she looks into mine, and we both smile. "I..." I stammer, tired from the crazy sex. "I... love you, Luna."

"And I love you as well, Eclipse." She replies softly, stroking my back. I looked at the clock. It said it was 3.00pm. My mouth dropped in shock.

"Wait....we've been "having fun" since this morning. Oh well...least it felt good."

I saw Luna still sweating from the....lets just say...."sexual fun" we just had. She sat up and put her hoofs around my waist from behind yet again.

"That was just......as brilliant as last night ."

"I know. I'm glad it happened with you Luna and no one else." She smiled up at me.We hugged and kissed for about 10 minutes and then she broke the silence.

"Shall we get some breakfast?"

"Yeah...that sounds good". I got out of bed forgetting my pant were still off. I blushed as I saw Luna looking at me with that stupid....but....seductive smile what said "I've tapped that shit."

"I don't know why your so bothered about being naked anymore my dear as I mated....had sex with you yesterday while we were both naked. You did enjoy it didn't you Eclipse?"

"Enjoy it? No....I fucking loved it.". She giggled and got up out of bed. She went to look in a mirror and she started laughing at what I presumed was her now messy mane.

"Oh look at the state of my mane. That's because of you doing me so hard and rough. But....it was worth the price.". She gave me another wink as I giggled.

"It was defiantly worth the price for me..hehe....". She licked her lips at me at which I also gave a wink. I started going downstairs when I heard moaning from upstairs.

"Oh god...she's not....". Then, about 30 seconds later, I heard a loud moan/scream coming from my room...

"OH MY GODDESS!!!".I was laughing my ass off.

"She is masturbating in my bathroom". I sat down, turned on the TV and a random thought popped into my head. "These next days, weeks or months with Luna are going to be fucking brilliant."

Chapter 7

Don't look in to in it eyes

I woke up with sweat coming from my for head. I thought to myself "damn I had the dream again". Maybe Luna could do something about it?

Looked to my my left to find Luna with her mane in complete disarray, now before I get to far me and Luna's relationship has been great. We have been dating for a month, I have loved it so far. I have noticed something in Luna in the past few weeks she been more how do I put it. I got it, like this everytime she sees me she wants me to put the blueberry's in the muffin. If you still don't get it's ok here is another analogy she want me to put the hot dog in the bun that's as far as I am going to go. As soon as she started to wake up, I forgot about the thought and put my arms around her waist.

"Good morning Luna". She smiled still half way asleep.

"Good morning my dear. Did you sleep well?". I wasn't going to tell her I had that same dream what I hadn't had since a month ago. She would go into "ask 20 questions mode" which I seriously do not want.

"Ermm...yes I did. How about you??"

"Yes I slept well thank you. Shall we stay in bed for a while as it is still quite early."

"Sure Luna." As I said that, we cuddled up together. She was still so warm from last night. It was a heatwave so don't get any ideas of what I meant! Anyway, we laid in bed for about another hour until I heard a strange booming thunder sound coming from downstairs. Luna woke up and looked at me confused.

"Eclipse...what was that?". I shrugged and looked at her. "I don't know Luna. I'll go have a look. You stay here." She nodded as I went downstairs.

"I swear to god if this is a robber..." I thought to myself while opening the door cautiously. I tip toed my way down stairs not hereing nothing still. Until I heard a loud crash come from the kitchen. I rushed over to the kitchen, But when I saw what made that sound, it amazed me.

"WHERE IS MY SISTER FOUL BEAST!". Oh my god...it was...

"Princess Celestia." I said as I backed off putting my back up against the wall. The only reason why I knew that was when Luna told me about her. She was actually taller then Luna. When I saw how irritated she was getting, she here voice raise in volume.

"I SAID, WHERE IS MY SISTER!"

"She's upstairs in bed....we were just sleeping..." Her horn had stopped glowing now and she had the most confused face I'd ever seen. Her face was giving off the expression what was like "the fuck you talking about?"

"Excuse me creature...did you just say...my dear sister....is in bed with you?"

I nodded. "Yes, that's what I said."

She got closer up to me. "WELL, CAN YOU EXPLAIN TO ME WHY MY SISTER IS HERE. ALSO, WHAT IS THIS WORLD AND WHAT ARE YOU?". She was starting to get angered

"Well for one, I am not a creature. I am a human being...well in scientific terms, homo sapien. My species rules this planet and we are quite like you ponies in our minds, personality's and way of living. Except here, we have quite advance technology. And your sister...Luna..is here because of some spell what went wrong..."

"Yes I know how about this spell. That is why I have come to collect her so I can take my dear sister home."

My heart sank after hearing them words. I was filling up with rage. I know she doesn't belong here, but I loved her.

YOU FUCKING WHAT?!"

Celestia looked at me shocked at my random outburst. "Calm down creature. I...." I cut her off.

"I TOLD YOU NOT TO CALL ME A FUCKING CREATURE!"

"I...are...sorry. Just please, calm down as I don't want any violence here. You seem to be an intelligent life form.". I thought I better calm down before I end up hurting her which I wouldn't want to do. I took a few deep breaths and looked back at her.

"Luna is upstairs. I don't know how to say this so I'll just come straight out with it. We have been living together since about 2 months ago or something now. She's been my mare-friend ever since she mated with me what was about a month ago.". She looked at me shocked. Even more then when she first appeared a few minutes ago.

"Your telling...us...that my dear sister....mated with you...a hue-man being was it?"

"Human being." She was still shocked after I corrected her mistake.

"Can you lead me to where she is fair human?"I nodded.

"Sure, shes upstairs. She'll probably still be in bed knowing Luna."She looked at me confused once again as I realized what I had just called her. "Fair human...did you just call her Luna?"

"I've called her that for since she came her. She wanted to be called that. She talked about you a few times and what I heard from her, you sounded just as amazing as she is. After hearing this, she blushed and looked down at the floor. "Oh...well thank you." I put a thumbs up at her. "No problem. Luna will explain the rest to you as it'd take me forever."

"Alright human. I can understand why you think like that. What I've seen of this world so far is..very confusing." I looked back at her. "It confuses me sometimes Celestia.". When we finally got to the bedroom, Celestia walked in. Soon as she did, Luna's jaw dropped.

"Tia? Oh dear sister, I've missed you!". I saw Luna trot Celestia over to and both of them shared a hug. "This is quite cute." I thought to myself while I was watching them holding each other while tears were flowing from their eyes.

"I've missed you to little sister." After Celestia said that, Luna backed away from the embrace.

"I'm guessing you've already met Eclipse, my...well...Colt-friend."

"I didn't know his name but yes, I have already spoken to him. And he also told me that...and that you mated with him.". Luna blushed a crimson red and looked at me with a scowl. She clearly didn't like that I told her that. But her smile soon came back.

"Oh...I see."

"But anyway dear sister, could we speak?". Luna walked over to the bed and sat down.

"Of course. I would like nothing better. Eclipse dear, do you mind if we speak in private."

"Not at all. See you later." I said as I walked to the door. "Wow....2 pony Goddess princesses in my house. I must be damn special." After I got into the living room, I turned on the Xbox and one thought popped into my mind.

"This is going to be a good gaming session."

I woke up on the chair. I had obviously dosed off while playing Xbox. I looked around and heard screaming coming from upstairs. "Oh no....." I ran upstairs and found Luna and Celestia shouting at each other. This wasn't going to end good.

"DEAR SISTER, HE IS A DIFFERENT SPECIES! HOW CAN YOU LOVE HIM?!"

"BECAUSE HE HAS BEEN NICER TO ME THEN ANY PONY IN EQUESTRIA! HE LOVES ME AS WELL!

This is not going to end well at all.....

Chapter 8

           I stood out the door watching both Luna and Celestia fight. The thought finally came to mind, I opened the door getting ready to get yelled at from Celestia about her privacy.(Girls are obsessed about that stuff, I don't know why). When the two of them saw me enter Luna jumped of the bed and started to walk towards me.

"Tia you don't beleave that we love each, so let me show you". Luna got on her hind leg to be at eye level with me. She placed her hooves around my head interlocking her lips with mine. I ran my hands down Luna's back causing her to moan ever so slightly. Our lips soon split Luna gave a quick peek on my cheek before get back on all fours.

"See Tia". Celestia face hoofed out of frustration.

"Luna you don't understand what I mean I am not questioning the love between you to, like you said you two have had intercourse 92 times, but what I am saying is he can't come with us". Luna's mouth dropped. Mine did to, but not about the last thing she said but from Luna and I having sex 92 times, I mean really how many times can someone have sex.(No wander my dick hearted last Friday)

"Eclipse is coming with us, you cant boss me around I'm a thousand years old. Besides I am your sister not some little overzealous bookworm protégé to order around." Luna said

"Luna he is not coming and what your gonna do about it, stay here with him"? Celestia retorted

"That's exactly what I am going to do". She headed in my direction. "Come on E we have some fun to attend to today". I stood there not moving, not showing any facial expression. With all of my heart I told Luna this.

"Luna you cant stay... you have to go with your sister". Luna turned around giving me a look saying "What the fuck you just say motherfucker". She walked back over to me.

"Did you just say I cant stay". I got down and hugged Luna. I never though it would be this hard to say good bye to a loved one. I toke a deep breathe ready to say it again.

"Luna you cant stay here...as much as I would want you to stay. You just cant be here Luna you should be with your sister happily ruling Equestria, not being here locked up in a house with me. Luna started to sob in my chest as I held her.

"But.....But...........I don't want to go". It shattered my heart to see her like this.

"Shhh shhh its ok Luna don't worry we will never be separated Luna you want to know why I say that"? She looked at me tears streaming down her face like two water falls flowing from two lakes. "Why"? She replied

"Because you will always be in my heart". Poked her chest were her heart was located. I know that was a little corny but I meant every word of it. Luna smile started to come back, her tears started fade away. Then she started to giggle from what I just said.

"I don't mean to intrude on this little moment but we need to leave, we don't have much time". Celestia was standing in my room, I guest ready to us the teleportation spell to bring Luna back home.

"I guest this our last goodbye". I gave Luna a last kiss I would ever probably get from her.

"You never know I mite see you again Eclipse, but for now goodbye dear I love you".

"I love you to". We walked toward Celestia who had looked ready to go.

"Thank you Eclipse for all you have done to keep my sister safe". She extended her hoof out for me to shake.

"Its been an honor being with your sister and meeting you Princess". Grabbing her hoof shaking it with a force smile on my face. I never wanted Luna to leave but I knew deep down inside it was right. Celestia's horn started to glow. The light started to get brighter and bright, until it was a bright blinding light. With all the light blocking my vision I toke notice that I was glowing in a dark blue aura that match Luna's coat, that mean oh god. Suddenly I felt a force push me forward towards the light.(I guest this is how it is when you die)

I tried to revolt against the magical force dragging me forward. I did everything I could do, I was trying to grip at the closes thing to me but I couldn't. I looked back to see half my body already in the light, I just gave up if I was that far in their is really no reason to restrain anymore. After I had lets just say "Forced give-up" automatically was sucked in. I was soon slammed into something. I started to feel two arm like things move up and sown my back, that's when I knew this was all Luna. But out of no were I started to feel a growing pain in my back. The pain that I felt in my back was no I'll live type of pain, it was the kind were you say ever curse word in the book.

I felt a weird drop like the type of drop you get when you go down a roller coaster. The felling of falling and the immense pain in my spinal area was to much for me, I past out.

/A.N/ Sorry if this was not the best of the 7 chapters I wrote. Its just I really did not no what to do and I have been having lots of writers block promise the next chapter will be better. Plz give me ideas in private message's I would greatly appreciate it and I want to ask you all something you don't have to answer to it but would just like to know how did you become brony's other than that have a good day.

Chapter 9

// Lets switch it up a little and do this from Luna point of view \

    When the light from my sisters magic started to fade away. I saw that we were teleported into my sister's room the bright light from the sun engraving's on the were so bright I shad my eyes for the beams with my arm.

"LUNA WHAT DID YOU DO". I turned around seeing a my handsome Eclipse laded out on the floor. The thing that surprised me is that he was a Alicorn. curiosity over came me and I started to walk towards him, ignoring Celestia.

"Wow it worked". All I was trying was to turn him into one of the three kinds of pones. But he was turned into a hot handsome, muscular, Alicorn with the same color coat as mine and his mane was a mixture of the colors cyan and white, It was absolutely a beautiful sight. I picked him up resting his head in my hooves, he wasn't moving. I started get worried moving his body around rapidly trying to wake him. I brought my ear to his chest trying to listen for a heart beat, but heard nothing. A tear escaped my eye but finally found the beat of my lovers heart. I sighed from out of relaxation, the thought of Eclipse dieing had finally past. I suddenly felt my sisters hoof land on my shoulder, I turned around to see my sister have the look of angry and disappointment.

"Luna why? Why did you do this?". Celestia us the tone of voice that always got under my fur.

"Because I love him ok you don't what it feels like to love Somepony and be taken away from them". Then It finally hit me, I toke Eclipse from his family from his friends just because I loved him.

"Luna I understand how it is to lose some pony close, remember I lost you". When Tia said that it broke me to tears. We hugged each other for a little bit soon going back to the magor problem Eclipse.

"So I guest Tia you want me to send him back to Earth". As much as I wanted him to stay, I also had to consider his family.

"No Luna you don't have to send him back". When I heard that I had those moments called WTF moments, that Eclipse told me about.

"Really Tia Really". I was going to jump up and give her a hug, but I looked down and saw Eclipse sleeping peacefully on my lap.

"Yes he can stay only on two conditions". I knew there was gonna be a catch, because that's Tia for you.

"What"? Ready for the outrageous limits my sister comes up with.

"One when you and your beloved Eclipse have your...mating sessions please try to keep your screaming to an all time low please. I would love to get my sleep". I blushed crimson red, thinking to myself if I really moan that loud were I am screaming. I mean I don't mean to be loud it just, Eclipse is so good at mating for goddess sake.

"What else, oh and just to set the record straight I don't scream, I just moan really loudly ok"?

"Sure LU-LU" She retorted,I hatted it when Tia called me that.

"Hey I bet you Tia if you had Eclipse plow you wouldn't be saying anything right now ok". Celestia licked her lips looking down at my colt-friend.

"I should put that on my to do list or as I should say tap list". She started to giggle.

"If you touch him I swear in all of that is magical you will have the fight of your life''. Her giggles upgraded to snickers.

"I was just kidding for goddess sake. Now Two If I found out the he has hurt anypony, anypony at all I will send him back to earth and make you do both Night and Day court for 785 years ok. That was ridiculous my Eclipse wouldn't hurt anypony unless it was for the right thing.

"Ok Tia I understand". We shoke hooves locking the agreement.

"But where are we going to house Eclipse". I said

"Will in your room silly were else the hospitable"?

"I just thought...". Tia cut me off and started walking to the door of her chambers

"Luna come lets just put Eclipse in your bed, we can talk later ok". I tried picking up Eclipse but he was more heaver than I had plan.

"Tia". She looked back at me see me struggling to pick him up. She walked up to me pick up Eclipse like he was a piece of paper.

"Buck this Stallion is heavy Luna what have you been feeding him".

"Nothing, that's just what happens when you have a colt as strong as my Eclipse". I couldn't wait to show my colt-friend off. Ever seen's Cadence's wedding she always bragged about her husband Shining Armor, but now I have Eclipse to show off. When we opened the door the two guards looked surprised to see me, but when they saw Eclipse on Tia's back their mouths looked as if they were going to get dislocated from any more surprises. We continued our way, walking down the hallway, every royal guard more surprised than the last. Some would greet me by saying "Greeting your Highness" of some other greeting that I respectively nodded signalling that I heard them. We finally reached my room, I open door to find cadence cleaning and rearranging something. Her I went wide when she noticed Me.

"YOUR BACK, YOUR BACK". Cadence ran up to me bring me into a tight embrace.

"Its nice to see you to Cadence, but I really to do something". She looked at me with wide eyed confusion.

"What do you mean you just came back what work would possibly need to do"? Cadence said in a questioning manner. When she saw Eclipse on my sisters back her mouth dropped like the other Guards. She moved up to him slowly, but I soon stopped her.

"Cadence don't worry he wont hurt anybody". Cadence nodded.

"So whats his name"?

"I tell you all about him when he wakes up ok, but right now he is going to need his sleep". She nodded again understanding what I mean't. Tia walked in further laying my prized Poisson on my bed, and tucking him in. Both Tia and Cadence left the room leaving me and my sleeping lover alone.

The End?

Sequel Anouncement

Sequel Anouncement

/A.N/I will be Making a sequel to this Fic called Day in Equestria. I am also making another Fic called Me in Equestria. I will be working on that one for a little bit than I will go back to the sequel then transition from the two of them hope I don't sound mean to sound demanding but this time when you favorite the Fic can you also like it

BRO HOOF

Update

Update

Hello every pony I would just like to say that I have change the title of the sequel to New Life. I am sorry to say but the Fic wont be out in a little because I would like to do at least four chapters when I submit it, other than that have a good day.