An (ele)mental experience

by idreas199

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Human, Romance
Length: 1375

Jones and Hannah two regular teenagers meets a strange man and get's sent on a journey...

Jones and Hannah are two regular students on their way home from school but when they walk trough the park a peculier character starts talking to them. Peculiar as he may be they still answerd his questions as seriously as possible. The next thing they know they pass out…

Yes this is a chess game of the gods story. No i havent found any story involving two persons sent at the same time. Yes you shoud read rust's and blackwing's stories. Yes i suck at descriptions (and english in some cases so constructive critizism is welcomed)

Why are you still reading the description? Go read the chapters nao

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-04 20:58:42 UTC

Don't take public surveys

(3:30 pm. School)

"Well then, shall we go?" I asked her in my slight russian accent.

"Sure, just let me get my bag and we'll be off" she said in her calm tone.

Okay let me introduce us. My name is Jones V. Scratch, yes i know what you're thinking but no that V stands for Victor and i only became a brony a week ago when i lost a bet with Hannah and she made me watch the entire first season of it.

I was hooked after the fifth episode...

And her name is Hannah Rooks. She's a calm and collected girl i've seen her freak out once these last ten years. She is like a sister to me and our lives are perfect...well, too perfect. Nothing exiting ever happens.

"hello? Jones?" she said while waving her hand in front of my face

"huh? Wha? Oh... I must have spaced out a bit" I said with a weak laugh "come on lets go"

"Yeah lets"

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(3:54 pm. Park)

"okay Jones you've been a brony for about a week now soooo. Who is best pony?"

"mane 6 or background?"

"background"

"That's a tough coockie.. I think DJ-PON3"

"okay why is that?"

"I think it's because of the resembelance I mean come on the only differences are the skin color and the gender"

"yeah that is true and i find it kinda funny that you started dyeing your hair blue before you became a brony"

"excuse me youngsters are you able to spare a few minutes to fill in this survey?" a man in his late 30's asked us.

"sure why not it's not like we don't have time to spare" Hannah said and took two sheets of paper.

We went to a bench to fill in the survey and it was like any old survey. What's your gender, are you happy, what do you do in your free-time and stuff like that until the last part. About equestria.

But one question in particular: If you were sent to equestria what would you want to be?

"Hey Hannah what do you want to be if you were sent there?"

"I think i would want to be something that could control water... So wonderful that would be. As long as I'm not some ugly creature. So what about you Jones?"

"I think a druid or an elemental of the earth. Yeah an earth elemental that would  be awesome..."

"that seems to be the last question as well so lets turn these in now"

(4:23 pm. Still the park)

"Ah so you finished the survey" the man said

"We sure did" I said with a smile

"say what was that survey for?" Hannah asked

"I wanted to see who I would send to equestria"

"wai... Wha?" Hannah and I said in complete sync

"ah this will be perfect. Two players, splendid. Well then bye"

"bye?" we said again in sync

Then there was nothing, just darkness.

A/N: so this was the first of (hopefully depending on what you think) many chapters. And remember to rate and comment. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism please. I also have chapter 2 and 3 planned out so thanks again for reading.The chapters will be longer I just wanted to get the intro out of the way. K thnx bai

Idreas out!

Srry im l8 but here it is

A/N: these chapters will become longer, but for now they will range between 500 and 1000(ish) words. Also I am sorry for the long wait my computer went haywire and died -_-* but now it's here.

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10-ish. PM

"Okay, I'm creating flames by snapping my fingers... Useful." I said whilst creating small flames "Hey i can make different colored ones, Cool."

"If you're finished making a rainbow of flames, can you help me find out what I can do, because I don't want to be useless."

"Hmm... Huh, Did you hear that?"

"hear what? You're going crazy you big rock."

"No it sounds like rumbling, kinda like when you're hungry. I hope there aren't any volcanoes in these mountains."

*pfip*

"what was that? *yawn* I'm feeling tired..." she said before literally falling asleep.

"Hannah? Okay so we'll sleep here? Let me just set up a campfire"

I'm lucky I'm so strong now, so i can carry a lot more stuff, but i wish i had some help.

"Argh... Why can't i hold all these branches?" I said while stumbling about.

"okay, branches? check. Fire? Check. Hannah? Check. Time to get the fire started."

When the fire started I felt renewed, like pure joy coursing through your veins. I checked on Hannah and felt that she was cold as ice, so I snuggled (how a fire rock orc troll thing snuggles that's anyone's guess) up close embracing her in a hug and fell asleep...

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next day

Somewhere... Again...

"oh dear where are we now? Hey Jones, wake up."

"What is it Hannah?"

"We're not in the forest anymore."

"what?" I opened my eyes and saw that her statement was true. "Where are we? Well I know we are underground but still whe..."

"HEY PRISONERS AWAKE NOW!" yelled a raspy voice.

"Put them with other prisoners to dig gems." another smoother voice said.

"gems?" we said in unison.

The cell door opened and in came two bulky shadowy creatures...

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Aaaand cliffhanger. Sorry for being rushed but well the computer fucked itself sideways so yeah....

K thnx bai

Idreas out

Getting to know myself

(?:?? ?? Somewhere)

Jones p.o.v.

"Urrrgh what the fuck happened? And why is my voice deeper? Why does my body feel all weird? And big?"

I sat up to scan my surroundings

"okay? Field? check. Pond? Check. Ice blue creature near the pond? Check? What? What is that?"

As i stood up i saw that the creature looked familiar kinda like...

"HANNAH"

As i tried to run towards Hannah the only thing I accomplished was falling flat on my face

"Ow, what the fuck?"

As i looked to my feet I saw that they were buried in the earth, kinda like when you bury your feet in the sand at the beach. I also noticed that there were fire coming from my hands like a lighter only that the fire doesn't seem to hurt me.

"I can worry about that later right now i must help Hannah"

I tried digging away the dirt covering but more dirt just kept coming. I got frustrated and just tried ripping my feet out of the ground. It worked to say the least but i will have to wash myself later. When i got to Hannah i saw what she was.

"she's a zora with wings? And actually pretty beautiful. But if she's a zora then what am i?"

I sat down next to Hannah by the pond. Then in the reflection i saw IT. That thing which i should call my face.  I looked like an orc but less ugly and more... How should i say it? More hot? No more like half melting?

"quick, water, i dont wanna die"

The water quickly evaporating from my body

"WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON?!"

With that Hannah woke up.

"W..wat..water...please"

I took hold of her and brought her closer to the pond so she could drink from it.

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5 minutes later...

"Th..thank you for bringing me to the pond, who are you?"

She asked as she turned around to thank her savior.

"I'm hurt that you don't remember me Hannah"

I said as I stood there just waiting

3...2...1...

*hugs*

"huh? I...I thought that you would freak out when you saw me... Not hug me. Not that im complaining. But we have to find out where we are"

She let go of me then said

"why wouldn't i recognise my best friend even though he's a rock-fire-orc thing... Er.. What exactly are you?"

"if i could answer that i would tell you. Now where are we and where shall we go?"

"erm... I know let's go that way"

"okay then.... Let's go?"

A/N okay that was fun right? Sorry that it may seem kinda rushed. Anyway next chapter is being written atm so rate an comment

Idreas out