Magic Wars

by Foal Star

chapter two: A tour of the Castle

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Later that afternoon Princess Trixie strode out of her own school with all her foals running home. She waved a hoof and cooed “remember! I want a full project on why Princess Trixie is better than the other princesses amd its due tomorrow!”

Some students shouted back. “We will!”

Princess Trixie gave a sigh as she looked around the town she created with her own magic and scoffed. “My goodness aren't I the best? Even Celestia couldn't design a more perfect world.”

Just then a sparkling blue chariot rolled up near where she was standing outside the school with four of her guards hitched to the chariot. They were blue in color with dark blue eyes and a flowing white mane and a purple armor covered in stars which had the same look from her old wizard's cloak and hat. The princess gave her sexy muscle bound guards a smirk as the chariot opened and another stallion came out to greet her. A stallion came out of the chariot with a violet coat, with a slick green mane and a nicely groomed tail wearing a snazzy light blue tuxedo. There were golden buttons lined down his midriff, with the coattails trailing behind flapping in the wind. He performed a bow and proclaimed, “Good morning princess Trixie I'm glad you have arrived.”

The princess waved a hoof. “yes it is good to see you as well my trusted advisor. Now Spike, may we enter the carriage.”

The stallion gave a nod and followed his princess into the carriage. After the two took their seats across from each other, the stallion then pulled out a long scroll that trailed down to his hooves as he chirped, “well I'm happy to inform you that today there was a lot of ground covered in making sure that your party tonight will be a success.”

Princess Trixie gave a slight nod and sighed, “that's good to hear that, I'm sure that you have taken care of everything as I requested.”

As the chariot pushed off and began to move across the town at a relatively decent speed. The butler adjusted his suit before turning to Rarity and asking, “so, is there anything else you want to discuss the party?”

The princess pondered the question and asked, “Did Rarity finish the dress I ordered?”

The stallion gave a nod and explained, “yes, actually Rarity just finished it a few hours ago. I swear you will be impressed with her work but of course you should try it on yourself when we reach the palace.”

Princess Trixie gave a nod of approval and exclaimed, “good, I can’t wait! Her work is always amazing!”

The butler gave a deep sigh of relief and replied back with a smile. “I’m happy you say that it really does make her day every time you give her praise.”

As the chariot traveled through the streets Trixie asked, “so are you and Rarity going to get married?”

Spike gave a deep blush and whispered, “h...how did you learn about that?”

Trixie gave a snicker and cooed, ”Oh well on our last spa date last week we got into talking about stallions and she kept on talking about you. I think it's obvious you were dating.

The squire sighed and shook his head. “I mean, it was supposed to be a secret, I’m not sure of any of the details for the wedding yet either. I just proposed to her last week.”

Trixie sat up with wide eyes and exclaimed, “you proposed oh how adorable! It’s about you two tied the knot, in any case, where having the wedding at my palace!”

Spike’s eyes lit up as he exclaimed with excitement, “seriously!”

The stallion composed himself before he continued in his stoic manner. “ I mean, thank you, princess Trixie, that will mean a lot to us.”

Trixie blushed as she placed her forehooves over the dress and cooed, “oh don’t mention it, sweetheart. Now, before we can continue. I do believe that it will take a lot of planning how about tomorrow?”

Spike looked down his long scroll and shook his head. “There are no plans for tomorrow, we can definitely fit in a meeting in the afternoon around one P.M between my...um fiance.”

The stallion’s face flushed with a deep red just saying the word was kind of hard to hear. Trixie just cooed, “oh your so cute, in any case, yes we shall make this the grandest wedding of all time. I will declare that every noble will attend or face my wrath.”


Spike and Trixie continued to ride through the city and they eventually came upon a magnificent palace. It looked like a copy of the palace in Canterlot with is crystal blue towers jutting up into the air. The front of the palace had a had a beautiful white arch with a tapestry of “all the amazing deeds” that Trixie has done. With the added touch of another golden statue of Trixie just outside the palace’s steps leading to two massive doors. The gardens surrounding the palace were quite beautiful as well with blue and purple tulips covered the perfectly mowed lawns. As the mare climbed out of her carriage and down onto the cobblestones of the palace and blushed as she saw an orange coated stallion mowing the lawns. He was a hunk of a stallion who took a break as he wiped the sweat from his brow, wearing his big brown hat and a red plaid bandana around his neck with his rump showing a dumbell with two apples on either end instead of weights. Trixie starred for some time with a coy smile. “just look at what I did to Applejack I can't wait to have some of that rump later.”

The princess was so engrossed in watching Applejack work she barely even noticed the clops of a white-coated maid with a bun of pink for her mane and tail wearing a cute white and black striped maid’s outfit complete with a white apron strapped around her waist and a cute black bow tied in her mane. The mare also had a feather duster in her mouth bounding over as she squeaked, ”oh hello your majesty! I got your dress designed just in time for the party!”

Trixie smirked as she held a hood, “that’s great to hear Rarity, and is the rest of the castle cleaned?”

The maid gave a nod, “yes it is spotless, and everything is read it for the party later tonight. But I’m having the rest of the staff do a thorough check of the place.”

Princess Trixie gave a nod of approval. “Good, now we must have Twilight taken care of while the party is in full swing. We have many things to discuss before hoof.”

As Trixie walked up her steps Rarity bounced by in excitement as she chirped,”I also took care of your sons Snips and Snails, diapers changed and both are taking a nap, Rainbow Dash needed her cage cleaned and I gave her lunch, and Pinkie Pie has already prepared you a special lunch of a delicate dandelion sandwich, with a spiced salad with a cup of your favorite red wine.”

Trixie gave another nod of approval and commended her maiden “I can always count on you to keep things in check well done.” Rarity squeaked loving the praise she received from Trixie. Spike strolled by nervously seeing his fiance he wanted to discuss things about their wedding plans but that will have to wait. As they through the front doors of her palace. It was magnificent with the special armor she crafted for her guard standing silently across the hall. The place was well lit with glowing balls of light overhead. The ground was covered in a beautiful purple carpet adorned in the stars and moons like her cape was. Princess Trixie gave her grand hall a good look around seeing maids and butlers, going about their duties dusting and cleaning despite the palace already looking immaculate. Princess Trixie studded through the halls with her head held up high. She came through to the grand dining room that was designed just as well with the rest of the palace with a huge golden chandelier overhead and the long table designed with a long slender picture of her burnt into the wood. As Trixie sat down at the long dinner table where a cow burst into the dining room carrying a tray wearing a long white apron covering the cow’s massive udders bulging outward, with a cute white bonnet strapped around her head. The energetic cow held out a platter with the sandwich and wine and salad on top as she wobbled over with the massive udders swinging from side to side as she set down the platter in front of Trixie and mooed, “here you go, princess Trixie.”

Trixie couldn't help but laugh a little and nodded, ”thank you Pinkie pie, how are my sons doing?”

Pinkie Pie just gave a sweet smile and sighed, ”They are fine your highness both are very well behaved for their age and are taking a nap right now.”

Trixie gave another nod and sweetly cooed, “good, glad to hear now go please make sure they have fresh bottles of milk.” Pinkie Pie gave a bow before waddling off Trixie couldn’t help but chuckle seeing the udders swinging from side to side. Then as if on cue a young brown coated filly meekly entered into the dining room. She was now a little filly with a pink bow in her mane and tail with a cute dress. She started to play a lovely tune and Trixie chuckled as the filly performed, it was beautiful but she can hear a few squeaks and mess ups in the tune. Trixie clapped her hooves together. “Well done, such a talented little filly.”

Octavia just gave a curtsey and asked, ”so how did I do momma is that better?”

Trixie gave a nod, “it's almost perfect, but I would practice the second portion again, I heard a few missed notes”

The little filly gave a nod and whispered meekly, “thanks mama, I’ll keep that in mind.”

Octavia quickly turned away as Applejack came in he was the biggest and strongest looking stallion she laid eyes upon. Applejack’s face flushed red as the princess gazed him over like a piece of meat. The stallion feeling quite uncomfortable shrugged and explained, “I did, all the gardening and fixed the leaky toilet upstairs, if there’s anything else just holler, I’ll be outside mowing the front yard.”

The princess couldn’t help but giggle and responded with a sly smile. “Of course, but...I have to say don’t work too hard I would love to have you in my chambers later tonight.”

Applejack gave a deep blush and laughed nervously before adding, “Alright, ill um...be sure to take a shower when I'm done.”

He then studded out as Trixie looked at his massive rump swaying side to side and laughed, “oh what a hunk! I mean I turned almost every stallion in Ponyville into studs but Applejack destroys them all!”

Rarity couldn't help but ask in a teasing manner,” oh Trixie, maybe you and Applejack should stop messing around and get married too?”

Trixie gave a snicker and coy smile as she waved a hoof,” oh stop teasing Rarity he and I just started dating…besides, it would make every stallion in Equestria jealous.”

She snickered and finished her lunch then she got up. “Alright how about I see that dress.”


The two went up the steps where they came upon the nursery and Trixie peeked inside. She saw her two little foals Snips and Snails both sleeping soundly in cribs suckling on glass foal bottles filled with Pinkie Pie’s milk. The whole place was decorated in a baby blue with stars shining sparkling all around giving the room a nice and gentle night sky look. She gave and nod of approval and cooed,”good, she then went across a room with notes it on it hearing Octavia practicing, she then peeked in and saw the filly was practicing her violin and a little filly Vinyl practicing on the other side of the room playing on a foal’s version of the turntables but sounding quite good. The two fillies eventually both looked up with cheery smiles and ran over to Trixie who cuddled them both with her hooves. “oh you two are doing so well.”

They both nodded and started bouncing up down in excitement as Vinyl chirped, ”yeah we learned all about how we can practice together and play during your party tonight.”

Octavia shouted in agreement, “yeah! I can’t wait to show you it’s going to be so cool!”

Trixie ruffled her “daughters” manes and cooed, ”of course, that’s why I'm so happy to hear you practice, now I don’t want you two tiring yourselves out, If you need a break go to Pinkie Pie and ask for any sweets you want?”

They both cheered and shouted,” thanks, mommy!”

As the two ran off as they went past a room with Twilight's new cutie mark printed on the door and the princess whispered, “I need to get her from mother goose later.”

She then came across A specific room where she heard singing and opened it to find a teenage Sweetie Belle with a room covered in posters of studs from her own fashion magazine, and a carpet which was a lush pink. With the Teenager Sweetie Belle wearing a nice pink dress over her body, she was standing over a microphone singing a beautiful pop song. Trixie stood by and watched for a little before the mare blushed noticing her “Mother” and squeaked, “Oh mom, I didn’t see you there.”

Trixie chuckled a little and cooed, ”oh don’t mind me it was beautiful,”

Sweetie Belle blushed, ”sure, I’ll be ready for the party tonight mother.”

Trixie gave a nod as she closed the door and continued on her way to the next room which had two giant wings spread out with a thunderbolt going through the middle printed on the door. The princess entered a large room with had of it being an edgy teenager’s room with rock and roll posters, and a bookshelf filled with every one of the novels from the “the adventures of The great and powerful Trixie” the other half of the room was a dome sized flying area with magical hoops and clouds, designed for Scootaloo to maneuver around. Trixie watched as Scootaloo was now wearing her own version of a wonderbolt uniform which was now purple with golden lightning bolts printed all over it flying around doing impressive stunts flying through the hoops and zipping around the clouds with ease. Scootaloo suddenly stopped and turned around and squeaked, ”hey Trixie just practicing my moves for the party.”

Trixie chuckled “I see that and they are quite good to keep it up! I expect nothing but the best from you!”

Scootaloo laughed, ”you got it!” she continued to fly around as Trixie left and turned to the last room which had a door with a flask with a green potion bubbling from it printed on the door. Trixie sighed and shook her head as she entered and saw a room with books upon books on potions stacked atop of each other and a huge black cauldron in the middle of the room. It was empty with nothing inside and Trixie shook her head and sighed, “I hope we can get her back. Darn that Zecora I had my best guards search day and night and they still can't find her!”

She then stomped out of the room with an angry look and enter her chamber and saw A blue-feathered griffin with rainbow feathers poking out of her wings. She came to full attention as Trixie entered and asked, “hello Rainbow Dash how are you doing?”

She squawked, “I’m fine, I had a good lunch of fish smoothie and then resumed my post guarding your room. How about you?”

Princess Trixie waved a hoof “it’s fine, I just came by to make sure things are all ready for the party.” She then saw the dress dressed over a ponyquin in the center of her room. It was a beautiful purple dress with gold stitching and lovely frills near the end with two bubble sleeves for her shoulders which were made an of a light violet color. Trixie’s eyes went wide as she squeaked, ”it’s amazing! I can't wait to put this on!”

She then lifted the dress with her magic as she fitted it over her body. After fitting it she twirled about in it and squealed, “it’s wonderful Rarity! Well done! Now I think we should discuss your wedding.”

Rarity blushed as Trixie turned around and cooed. “We’ll have it here in the palace’s grand hall next Friday!”

Rarity was stunned ”Thank you that sounds like a wonderful idea!”

She laughed when they cooed, “okay, now we need to pick up Twilight”

She then shifted her gaze over Rainbow Dash, “The party will start soon, can you get escort Twilight back home so she can get ready.”

Rainbow Dash gave a salute and exclaimed, “don’t you worry I'll bring Twilight here safe and sound.” The Griffin then flew off out the huge window and towards Mother Goose’s nursery as she sighed and whispered, “finally I have a chance to talk to Bon Bon and Twilight alone hopefully we can make our move soon.”