Spider-7786

by The Gilded fox

Attention!!!

Previous Chapter

Greetings, fox here, I have come to you to express my beloved gratitude torwards those that seemed to enjoy the story thus far. As well as thank those who gave criticisms. However in a short turn of events, I got real busy, important things needed to be taken care of and I couldnt put love to this story anymore. Lets recap on some mistakes.

  1. The point of arrival:
    The everfree was an.. Odd choice.. While it is used many times in other displaced fics, it didn't sit right with the superhero gig, and the timberwolves part only added more problems.

  2. Development of character:
    Or should i say lack thereof, Sam felt.. Bland.. And I couldn't as an author put emotion into him for some reason, he couldnt resonate within me therefore I couldn't make him resonate with others.
    And as for the mane six, I felt like I could've done better? Maybe should have made flutters a tad more timid and less opting to approach sam.

I plan on using some elements for recycling and I apologize that it had to come to this. This wont be the last you see of me, as I have something planned in the future that might have a better chance at working out. Anywho, I bid you adieu.