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To Keep Light in Eternal Darkness

by scifipony
Blue Moon is a blue orphan earth pony foal with a crescent moon cutie mark. Her talent for moving the moon interferes with day and night. Her life is about to change; when it means meeting a scary fire unicorn, she worries it's not for the better.

Feature boxed on Feb 28, 2024.

Blue Moon is a deep blue orphan earth pony foal with a crescent moon cutie mark in a splotch of blank paint. Her talent for moving the moon interferes with day and night—favoring the night, of course. Ponies in power have begun to notice. Her life working as a ward of a workhouse/orphanage is about to change. When it means meeting a scary white fire unicorn, she worries it's not for the better.

The story takes place during the Princesses Platinum area, months after the original story. It is decades before the battle between the sisters, and years before the founding of Equestria. It is marked [Teen] because of an orphanage out of Oliver Twist. I am publishing as three chapters. They will all be published within this week.

Whilst this story is a continuation of To Bring Light to Eternal Darkness, it can be read standalone. It was supposed to be the first chapter in a sequel to the original story, but that didn't happen. It's been modified to be a short novelette. It may seem like it ends on a cliffhanger, but think of it as sparking your imagination to think about a much more interesting history for the royal sisters and Equestria.

If the story gets sufficient likes and comments, I'll consider extending it.

Teen
Complete
Adventure
Slice of Life
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
PCPS

7413 words: Estimated 37 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. 1 — Blue Moon 2024-02-27 04:29:35 UTC
    2324
  2. 2 — Fire Sun 2024-02-29 00:38:16 UTC
    2717
  3. 3 — Valuable 2024-03-02 22:40:06 UTC
    2372