Barley's Deleted Scenes
Benefits Chapter 2:: Original Intro
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Rarity leaned over her desk, staring down at her rough sketch of an outfit and feeling nothing but disappointment, tearing the page out and tossing it aside. She took a deep breath and brought her pencil back to paper, quickly sketching out a human figure to begin her next try. Rarity had made a habit of drawing anything that was on her mind and then simply cutting out what didn’t work; she found it to be the quickest process to accessing her inspiration. But as she drew the rough model, she was having far more trouble than usual focusing, suddenly lifting her pencil away as she realised what she’d drawn without thinking. Under the initial model knelt a second between her legs and Rarity sighed, tearing out another page and tossing it aside.
“Twilight, this isn’t working.”
“Hmm?”
Rarity leaned back in her chair and looked beneath her desk, staring languidly at her lover who was perched between her thighs and casually licking her lower lips.
“I just can’t get into it.”
Twilight parted form Rarity’s sex, leaning her cheek against the girl’s thigh and glancing up at her with a gentle smirk.
“Do you want me to lick faster?”
“No, dear, I mean my designs. I can’t get into the flow of it.”
“You haven’t cum yet, either.”
“Yes, well. My attention is divided!” Rarity closed her eyes and took a deep slow breath, glancing back down and rubbing her hand through Twilight’s hair. “Otherwise, I’m sure you would have had me cumming in no time, dear. You never disappoint.”
“I thought you said you make yourself cum while working all the time?”
“Dear.” Rarity trailed a finger over Twilight’s cheek with a small grin. “It’s a bit different when you’re the one doing it.”
Twilight placed a little peck on Rarity’s clit and patted her thigh, crawling out from her cozy little alcove between the girl’s legs.
“I suppose I’ll let you focus then and give your pussy a chance to miss me.”
“You’re sweet, dear. Hmm…” Rarity stared back down at her sketchbook again but only for a moment, not even lifting her pencil, shaking her head and standing from her seat. “Ugh… my mind’s just ruined right now. What I need is a little rejuvenation.”
“Does rejuvenation involve me?”
“Hmmm…” Rarity shot Twilight a sideways glance, gently tugging on her collar, pausing and pulling her blouse off. “Twilight, I feel like I’ve been doing nothing but thinking and sweating for the last hour and a half. I just need a shower to perk me up.”
“A shower sounds fun.”
“Well… I suppose if you made it fun,” Rarity grinned toward Twilight, brushing her fingers over her shoulder as she passed to leave the room. “I wouldn’t mind it.”
Twilight followed quickly behind as Rarity sashayed somewhat tiredly to the bathroom, stretching her arms up as she entered the door. Rarity didn’t hesitate to start undressing herself and Twilight followed suit, both girls finding themselves nude in a matter of moments. Twilight smiled at the sight of Rarity’s rear as she bent over to turn on the shower, watching a moment as she fumbled with the temperature.
Twilight looked to her side at the large vanity mirror, slightly blushing at the sight of herself and straightening her posture, looking discerningly over her figure. Twilight cupped her hands under her breasts and pushed them up a little, walking closer to the mirror as she examined her image, glancing idly down at the sink and popping a grin.
"Twilight, dear, are you coming in?"
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Author's Note
This was originally the intro for Chapter 2 of Benefits. I ended up completely changing this one to make Rarity feel less tired and for Twilight's cunnilingus to be more welcomed, that way it'd contrast more with the intro for Chapter 3.
There isn't much here, but it's different enough that I thought it was worth preserving. I do still rather like it.