Secrets and Surprises

by Midday Shine
While trying to find a birthday gift for Celestia, Luna spots Sweetie Belle, talking to a suspicious-looking stranger. This triggers a whole chain of events.

The mall. A huge area filled with shops of all kinds. Finding the perfect birthday gift for your own sister, whom you've known your whole life, should be easy in such a place… right?

Yeah, sure. As long as your sister's name isn't Celestia.

Luckily, the mall is also a great place to have fun, even if your big sister has gone to a shop you don't like. Who knows, maybe you'll get to make a star out of her thanks to a guy you met by accident and who claims to be a part of a rock band? They all wear ripped clothes anyway, so there's nothing to worry about, right?

Yeah… sure. As long as your vice principal, feared by pretty much the entire school, doesn't suddenly materialize next to you and yell at you.

But wait. Why does she seem different than at school? Kind of… nicer? What's going on?


This was supposed to be a quick, short comedy (Pinkie Promise!), but ended up as a two-part, somewhat humorous, more than 30 pages long (in Word, at least) slice of life I've written for over a year.

Was created simultaneously with the Polish version (PM me if you're interested), so if you catch any mistakes I've missed, tell me.

A huge thank you to Lyokoheros for the preread.

Enjoy!

Everyone
Complete
Comedy
Equestria Girls
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
 
VPS

15600 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Auntie Detention 2019-02-23 17:17:45 UTC
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  2. The B-Day 2019-02-23 17:18:04 UTC
    9027
  3. Bonus: The Birthday Banner 2019-05-29 18:57:18 UTC
    553