The savior

by coolcatnate

Chapter 1 the arrival and the sacrifice

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In this so called world of Equus things used to be a fun, peaceful world, when the Alicorns used to rule the land of Equestria no one lived in fear. Life for all was happy no dragon, Griffin, pony or changeling was sad or unhappy. Or that was until the Caribou attacked for you see the Caribou thought that men are Superior to all females so they started a war, a war where they made artifact that weakened females and brainwashed the males. But soon Equestria fell, and then the entire world. But maybe someone could change is?

Out in what is known as the everfree forest a tower taller than canterlot castle this did not go unnoticed by the caribou king so in hopes he could befriend who ever live in the tower he sent four females he doesn't care about. So he had the four females he chose healed and fixed up before he had them chained to the inside of a crate.

So a alone royal guard Caribou pulled the four crates along the village of what used to be named ponyville but is now named stallionville. They were known for their Apple cider, ale and slave market.

Soon the royal guard Caribou made his way into everfree. He couldn't help to feel as if someone was watching him, but little did he know something was watching him but did not move. So after a hour or so of walking he finally arrived at the tower. He couldn't help but feel terrified as the blue eye the tower move to look at him as he approached the tower. (This is what the tower looks like.)

Slowly the Caribou knocked on the door and waited for something to happen. Eventually after ten minutes the door open to reveal a being covered in armor from head to toe and glowed with a soft blue hue. The armored being felt like he was being judged by every little thing that he has done.

“Who are you? And why are you here?” The armored being spoke with a dole monotone voice that filled the Caribou with soull crushing guilt and fear.

The Caribou swallowed a lump in his throat before speaking “I am Sir bucking horn, and my king has been kind enough to send you a gift four to be exact.”

“Oh and what did this king of yours send exactly?” The armor being spoke with slight amusement

“He sent four of his finessed slaves for… to… have…” the Caribou turned around only to be greeted by a huge zombie that was wearing armor.

“So you support slavery, guard please take him to the dungeon for interrogation.” he spoke as the zombie grabbed him and started to dragged the caribou into dungeon kicking and screaming. “You help me bring them inside.” He said pointing at another zombie and it nodded. (This is what the man and the two zombies look like)

‘Crack!’ 'thump!’

The door of the crate was pulled off to reveal a white alicorn, her hair was Sea green, light blue and pink. wearing nothing but her underwear a metal collar with chains attached and three rings, one on her horn and the other two are on wings. She also had clear mask that was pumping pink gas into her lungs.

“Can you please grab four medical beds from the med lab?” The zombie nodded before leaving and coming back with the beds and put them in row. The man broke the collar and removed the mask and picked up the Alicorn and put her into the bed. He looked back at her crate and noticed that the collar had spikes on the inside of the collar.

He then stood up and walked over to the next crate and ripped the door off to reveal another Alicorn. Her furr was a dark blue and her hair looks like the night sky. And like the other one she had a collar and three rings and a gas mask. He ripped off the collar and mask. Then pick her up and put her in the bed next to the white Alicorn.

He moved on to next crate and opened it to reveal a pink Alicorn and her hair was purple, hot pink and yellow. And again more collars rings and masks and again he broke the collar and took the mask off and placed her in the bed.

He then opened the last crate and reveal a unicorn but her horn is different it was curved and red. Her fur was grey and her hair is black. But what was different is the fact that she has metal burnt into her skin.

“*Sigh* I should probably see if anything's wrong with them. Guard can you please get me the tech scanner and my surgery bags?” One of them nodded and then left to get it. “*Sigh* looks like I found my next adventure.”

“Ok so that's eight trackers disabled, ten metal rings removed, and seven strips metal removed, and removed there scars.” He said as clean his hands of blood. “Mmm they should be waking up soon maybe I should make them something to eat? They are a bit underweight… screw it I know I'm a bad at cooking but they need something to eat. So based on their teeth their herbivores. Cool I can do that I mean how hard could it be?” He said as he walked out of the room and as the door closed the two undead guard moved in front of the door blocking off the only exit.

“Ugh sister are you ok?” Asked the white Alicorn as sat up. She looked around the room and noticed that it wasn't the same room she fell asleep in. She then saw sister and was shocked at what she saw. Her sister no longer had her collar or the ring on horn and lying down on a hospital bed she looks a little further up and saw her niece and her former enemy. She then moved a hand up to her neck and doesn't feel her collar. She then feels her horn and then her wings again not finding the rings. Suddenly a loud creaking noise snapped her out of her thoughts. She quickly looked at the door and saw a hooded male and her fears started to rise. She then saw that he was curing a tray with 3 bowls on it.

“Oh you're awake, I was starting worry.” He said in the most concerning tone she has ever heard from a male. And it confused her. “Oh you must be hungry! Here please eat I know I'm not best cook but it's still food.” He said as he handed her what looked like vegetable soup. She didn't say anything as she slowly started before she starts to the devourer the food. “Um excuse me but do you mind if I ask you a question or two?” she shakes her ‘no’. “Um what's your name?”

“Oh om my name is Celestia master.” She said quietly

“Please you don't have to call me that if you don't want to. And just to make this clear your not a slave under my roof, ok?” For some reason this brought a small smile to her face as she nodded. “Second question umm do you know what this is?” He asked as he held up the clear mask that she recognized.

“Ohm that mask forces the female to become incapacitated while it pumps aphrodisiac into their lungs so that when they wake up they will… be… ready for...” she slowly looked at him as her eyes had a growing with lust. Before she jumped at him and knocked him to the ground and quickly started to undo the long black coat. But suddenly something broke her out her haz, and what was it that broke her hazz. It was the fact that he was whimpering, not a happy one but fearful one. She stopped what she was doing and looked at his now revealed face. He didn't furr like a normal stallion but his skin was pale white and his hair is a dark brown and now his deep blue eyes now had tears streaming down his face. Then she him whisper two words that would haunt she forever. “Please don't” he repeat it over and over again. It broke her heart to see her savior like this. so she got off of him but as soon as he was able he crawled into the nearest corner of the room and a dome of magic formed around him.

She tries to reach out for him but a voice stop's her. “Sister stop you'll make it woset!” Celestia stopped her approach and turned around to see the dark blue Alicorn sitting up in her bed. Slowly she gets out of her bed and walks over to her sister. “What happened sister? Why is he crying?” Celestia goes on to tell how the aphrodisiac made her go into a state drunken lust. “*Sigh* I understand sister, he kinda reminds me of…….” She stopped talking as came to the realization of what might of happened to him. She looked at the crying, as tears of her own as she started to look him over. He looks no older than sixteen years of age. He's body is the most prominent was three large jagged scars that ran his back.

The two Alicorn were brought out of there thoughts as the door on the other side of the opened to reveal three small creatures.

When they saw the child they flew over to him and tried to calm him down. The black one narrowed her at the two of them before looking at the coat that lied on floor. She then ran over to the coat and picked it up with her mouth and then walk over to the bubble and quickly walked through it and then laid it over top of him. The boy whispered thanks before putting it on. The blue one pulled him to his feet and the pale one landed on his shoulder and rubbed her head into his cheek. Soon they lead him out the door before the black one slammed the door.

“Sister I think we just made our savior afraid of us.” Said the dark blue one

“What do you mean ‘we’ I was the one who jumped him! I made a child who gave us our freedom from those chains, afraid of me, I-I don't want him to be afraid of me Lulu! What do I do?!” Said Celestia as she cried.

“Auntie Celestia, Luna what are you two arguing about? Asked the pink Alicorn as she sat up

“Yes what happened I don't think I've ever seen you crying Celestia?” Asked the unicorn

“I take it you noticed that you no longer have the collar on?” Asked Luna as she received nods she continues “well you know how Tia gets when she drugged? Well the boy who gave us our freedom has been probably as been rapped or worst and Tia almost rapped him.” the other two gasped at this turn of events

“Celestia I expect this to come from me but not you!” Said the unicorn

“For once I agree with Umbrum.” said the pink Alicorn

“Hey!”

“But we need to fix this, but how?” Asked Luna

“Hmm we could become his personal maid's.” suggested the pink Alicorn

“How would becoming his maid help us get him not to be scared of us, cadence?” Asked Luna

“Think about it, if he sees us try to help him maybe he'll start to open up to us.”

“True and if the magic signature he was surprising was correct he's probably stronger than the four of us and faust's magic combined.” Said Umbrum

“What do you mean?” Asked Celestia “I didn't feel anything like that.”

“You forget that I have magic site.”

“Oh yeah doesn't that let you know how strong a pony is and where there going to attack?” Asked Cadence

“yep” said Umbrum

“So wear are we going outfit from, we didn't exactly being any clothes with us.” Said Luna

“Uhm you remember how you would always see me wearing different clothes without me ever going back to my room?” Asked Cadence

“Yeah and now that I think about it, it was a little weird that you'd come back a couple minutes later even though you're room was like ten minutes away.” Said Luna

“Well I might have made a dress spell but it’s a bit random.” said Cadence

“Well it'll do for now.” Said Celestia, Cadence nodded before casting the spell. There body's glowed for a few seconds before the spell ended. Once they opened their eyes they saw, they were wearing a sexy maid or bunny outfit.

“um cadence why is it me and Luna are bunny outfits and you two have sexy maid outfits.” Asked Umbrum

“That was the random part I was talking about.” Sighed Cadence

“Well we don't have much so we can deal with this later.” Said Celestia they nodded in agreement soon they started to walk towards the door.

Once outside of the room they find themselves in a hallway and to there right they see more doors and to there left they saw a couple of door and a female creature washing a window. They looked at each other before walking towards the creature.

“Before you even try to ask where Jack is, I want to ask you a couple of questions.” Said the creature as she put her wash cloth down.

“Ok” answered cadence

“Why, why'd you do it? He was finally opening to me and then you go and jump him! I was going to finally tell him how I feel and now he won't leave his own room! So why did you do it?!” She asked with anger and sadness as tears fell from her face

They were quiet for a few minutes before Umbrum answered “we're sorry for what we did but we were under the influence of a lust drug. But the only thing we did was removed him coat. So maybe if you could please tell us what happened to him so we can help him?”

“*Sigh* okay, by the way my name is Lily and I'm a deathclaw.” She said as walked through a door and the others followed suit.


Soon they were in a huge room with a floating door that looked like was made crystal. Lily pick up a piece of paper and quill and wrote something before she held up the paper to the door. Suddenly the paper floated up to the door before it flew through the door.

“Where do I start? *Sigh* two years ago when his friends Sora Donald and Goofy were visiting and Jack left to get some to drink for him and his friends but he kidnapped by a group of females. It took three months to find him but by that time it was to late. They rapped him wiped, chained him up and cut into him and then he broke and he unlocked a powerful 'from what Sora said’ keyblade named world's end.” She said as she looked up at the fireplace where said keyblade was hanging.

“He went insane and killed them all. All four hundred of them took turns on him. He went from the fun loving child I used to know. And now he's too scared to even go outside without his god armor.” Suddenly the crystal door started to glow before three came running out as the door closed.

“Lily! We came as soon as we could!” Said the duck

“Yeah do you if he's going to be okay! Said the boy

“Sora we should check his keyblade. If his emotions are to bad will have to do what King Mickey said.” Said Goofy

“Okay” said Sora as he walked towards the keyblade, but suddenly a dark pulse sent Sora flying.

“Sora I don't think we have a choice any more.” Said the duck

“But we can't we don't know what'll do to him! We have to find something!” Yelled Sora as he stood up

“Do you really think King Mickey would of said it if there was.” Said Goofy

“I'm sorry but what are three talking about?” Asked Luna

“I'll have to agree what did King Mickey say about Jack?” Asked Lily

“He said if it was to bad we'd haft to lock and delete his of those months. But this has never been done before so there's a chance that it could mess up.” said Sora

“But Sora you know Merlin never do anything to hurt another person.” Said Goofy

“Yeah you're right. Mis Lily would it be possible to see Jack?” Asked Sora

“Yes I think that would be best. And just so you know I don't like it but if helps him so be it.” and with that she led us to his room.

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