The Incredibly Lucky Solar Force
Prologue: A Wish is Granted
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Hi Solar Force here. It’s been a while since I posted anything, but I am still working on my other stories and there is more on the way. Me and Mad Page are currently working on the next chapter of SAO: Friendship Online and I hope to get that posted soon. This new story is my first attempt at writing something erotic, so feel free to tell me what you think, and maybe tell me which mare you’d like to see next. I hope you all enjoy it. Bye for now.
Prologue: A Wish is Granted
It was a lovely early evening in Ponyville. Everyone was out and enjoying the warm spring weather.
Well, almost everyone.
Solar Force, a 20 year old earth pony stallion, was sitting inside his house, looking out at all the Ponies with a look of sadness and longing. What drew his attention most, were all the couples. Young Mares and Stallions, walking, chatting, holding hands, and occasionally cuddling or giving each other quick loving kisses. The sight of all this, made Solar feel even more sad and lonely. The fact was, Solar had never had any luck with mares. Not that he hadn’t tried. It was just that whenever he did, he was always overcome by terrible shyness. He didn’t like going out in public very much, not that he was completely anti- socilal, he just didn’t like being in big crowds or lots of noise. He always had trouble meeting new people, especially mares. And the mares he did actually talk to, only saw him as either just a friend at best, or annoyance at worst.
What made Solar’s situation all the more depressing, was that today was Hearts and Hooves day. It was easily his most disliked holiday. When he was young, he would be forced to sit and watch as every other Colt and Filly passed out gifts and cards to each other, while he would get nothing at all. This trend carried on right through his teen years and beyond, and when ever he tried to give a gift to a filly or mare that he liked, he would either be too shy to give it to her, or be flat out rejected, and eventually it felt too hopeless to keep trying.
Outside the window, the whole street was decorated with red paper hearts and streamers of Pony- Cupids. Solar couldn’t stand the sight of them, they just seemed to mock him by being a constant reminder of what he didn’t have.
Watching all the happy couples passing by, Solar let out a sigh. “Why don’t mares like me?” He said. “With so many gorgeous mares in this town, you’d think at least one would give me a chance. I know that a lot of them are out of my league, but all of them?”
After watching yet another couple, this one sitting on a bench and making out quite heatedly, Solar Force had had enough. He got up and closed the curtains, before walking into his kitchen for a bite to eat. Once that was done, he decided he might as well go to bed early. It’s not like he had anything better to do.
Solar made his way upstairs, where he went into his bedroom, got undressed, made his way to his bathroom, had a shower, dried himself off, went back to his bedroom, put on his pajamas, and climbed into bed.
Once he was comfortable, he looked out his bedroom window, and saw that the sun had set and the moon was beginning to rise. Just as he was about to fall asleep, he let out another sigh.
“I wish that mares liked me.” He whispered, as he closed his eyes and drifted off to dreamland.
Outside Solar’s window, the moon shone brightly in the night sky, as the silhouette of a mare with a long horn, flowing mane, and glowing white eyes appeared on its surface. “I have heard your wish, Solar Force. I know how it is to feel alone and unloved. Fear not. For I shall in part grant your wish, until such a time as you find the one or those who you truly love and who truly love you.” With those words, the silhouette vanished, and a tiny ball of light flew down from the sky, through Solar’s window, across the bed and disappeared into his chest, causing his body to glow for a brief moment. Solar did not stir, as he continued to sleep soundly, little knowing how his life was about to change when he awoke.
The next morning, the sun's rays shone through Solar Force’s window, stirring him from sleep. He sat up with a yawn and a stretch, noticing that he felt happier somehow. He wasn’t sure why, but after his misery the day before, he was in a much better mood now. He got out of bed, went downstairs to his kitchen and proceeded to make himself breakfast. As he enjoyed his breakfast of toast, eggs and fresh squeezed apple juice, he realised he would have to go and do some shopping for groceries as he was running short.
Normally, going out in public would make him anxious, but today he didn’t feel his usual nerves. Maybe this was a sign that things were starting to look up for him? He finished his breakfast and made his way upstairs to his bathroom. After a quick shower, he dried himself off, he went back to his bedroom, got dressed, and went downstairs to his front door. Normally he’d be reluctant to go outside, but not today. He was in too good of a mood to be nervous. He unlocked the door and stepped out.
Outside, it was another sunny day. Everyone was going about their business, and all the Hearts and Hooves day decorations were being taken down. Good riddance as far as Solar was concerned. Everything seemed normal, and Solar was still in a good mood, so he began making his way toward the towns marketplace.
As he walked, Solar noticed some of the ponies looking at him as he passed. Some just gave him a friendly wave, and he waved back. This was nothing unusual. Ponyville was a friendly town. But what was unusual was the looks he got from some of the mares. Some waved and smiled. Some looked at him with narrowed eyes and almost flirty smiles. One mare even winked at him. Solar couldn’t help but blush a little at that one. He had never received a look like that from a mare in his life, and now he seemed to grab the attention of every mare he passed.
The looks kept on coming all the way to the market. Solar couldn’t understand it. Ponyville was friendly but not this friendly. And mares were never that friendly towards him. But as he reached the market and started looking for groceries, he quickly forgot about the mornings unusualness.
That was until, after he had just bought a box of eggs, he suddenly bumped into someone. He fell back on to his ass, and the eggs went flying. He looked up just in time to see the eggs come flying down right on top of him. Splat! Solar was covered from head to hoof in yolk and broken egg shells.
“Oh, My!” Cried a feminine voice. “Are you alright, Darling?”
Solar looked up, and threw his yolk covered eyes he could make out someone kneeling down next to him. “Uh, yeah, I think so?” He said, reaching up to wipe the yolk out of his eyes. As soon he could see properly again, and saw who was kneeling next to him, Solar’s heart began to race, and a heavy blush crossed his face. For there, with a concerned look on her face, was one of the most beautiful mares in Ponyville, if not all Equestria. Fasionista extraordinaire, and hero of all Equestria, the one and only Rarity. For a moment, Solar was mesmerised by Rarity’s sheer beauty. Until he realised the state he was in and looked away, covering his face. He felt humiliated. He was sure Rarity was going to laugh at him, or tell him how gross he was. That’s what always happened when he somehow made a fool of himself in front of a pretty mare.
“Oh, you poor dear.” Said Rarity. “Your an absolute mess!” She reached into a small purse she wore on her shoulder and pulled out a white silk handkerchief. “Look this way please darling?” She asked. Solar refused to look at her. Rarity could plainly see how embarrassed he was. “It’s alright dear.” She said soothingly. “I promise I’m not going to laugh at or ridicule you. It was only a silly little accident. These things happen.” She wrapped her hand in the handkerchief and placed it gently under Solar’s chin. “Now please, look at me darling?”
Solar reluctantly lowered his hands and turned his head toward the lovely mare. Rarity smiled. “There, that’s better.” She said as she began wiping away some of the yolk from his face. “Now what’s your name dear? I don’t think I recall seeing you around Ponyville.”
“My n-names Solar Force.” Solar said shyly “I-I don’t get out very much.”
“Really?” Said Rarity. “Well that’s too bad. You seem like a pleasant young Stallion. I’m sure some nice mare would be happy to give you some company.” She smiled and winked, causing Solar to blush even more. What was going on? Mares were never this nice to him. “Well come on Solar Force. Why don’t you come with me back to my Shop? You can have a shower and i’ll give your clothes a wash.” Rarity offered as she stood up. “Ohh, why don’t I design you a new outfit while i’m at it?”
Solar quickly got back to his hooves shaking his head. “Uh, no, no, no! You really don’t have to do that!” He tried to protest.
“Nonsense, darling!” Said Rarity. “I insist! Now come along!” She turned and made her way out of the marketplace.
Figuring it would be rude to decline her offer now, Solar quickly fell into step beside her. As they walked, he couldn’t help taking quick glances at the gorgeous seamstress. She was wearing a light blue blouse with a deep v neck which showed off a good amount of cleavage, a short dark purple skirt that showed off a lot of her long legs and hugged her curvy hips and shapely butt. Her large breasts bounced gently with every step, and her hips swayed from side to side. He quickly turned away as he felt himself grow hard in his trousers. What was he doing? Ogling a classie mare like Rarity like a horny teen?
Unbeknownst to him, Rarity had noticed the way he was looking at her and his reaction to it. She didn’t mind, in fact she thought it was cute how he was trying to be a gentleman about it. “He is young and quite shy, and going by what he said he must have little or no experience with mares.” She thought. Then, her lips turned up in a tiny smirk. “Maybe I could give him some ‘assistance’ with that?” A plan began to form in her mind as they reached the front door of Carousel Boutique.
To Be Continued...
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