Two Worlds, One Planet
Chapter 1 (edited)
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Hey, dino fans, and readers. Yep, it's me, tyrannosaurianrex9. So after I deleted Dino Saurian Rex because of bad writing, and I deleted Jack Patrick: The Secret World of Mesozoica (If you haven't read Dino Saurian Rex and/or Jack Patrick: The Secret World of Mesozoica even when it was deleted, that's okay) because my former editor said it's too cliched for an MLP fanfic, I decided to make another remake with the same storyline (mostly), but this time without focusing on the human characters, only just ponies and dinosaurs.
This one is a fixfic that took place after season 1, and some future characters didn't exist, including Discord, but it had new characters I made up.
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Enjoy!
Edit: In the second part of the chapter, it was originally gonna feature Fluttershy understanding the language of a dinosaur, but the storyline was changed due to the fact that viewers think this dinosaur is physically talking. Here's the alternate scene.
Chapter 1 (edited)
Twilight Sparkle sat on a chair inside the first floor of the Golden Oak Library while reading a history book about Equestria. She had been up all night, searching through every history book and magic manual she could find. It was seven in the morning, and she had gotten up three hours early as she was having a rough time sleeping, due to her curiosity about the Elements.
She had a dream about during the final battle against Nightmare Moon, but there's something Twilight might've forgotten: after she and her friends' Elements created a rainbow-colored double helix that consumed Nightmare Moon, Twilight had a vision of silhouettes of six creatures of different shapes and sizes, each having six other elements in their chests--green, teal, brown, vermillion, yellow, and dark blue. On that day, questions had been haunting her after she woke up from her dream. She noticed there are more Elements out there, just like her vision, and she felt she had to find the truth about the new and old Elements of Harmony by looking through any history book, as per her usual habit, but there was no clue as to the Elements' origin, even the new ones from her vision.
Spike appeared from the doorway behind Twilight, and said out loud, "Mornin' Twilight."
This made Twilight yelped and jumped halfway up to the ceiling while dropping the book. Twilight turned to Spike with her eyes narrowed and her ears folded back on her head.
"Spike, you’re supposed to lower your voice when greeting somepony who’s minding their own business.”
Spike giggled then noticed Twilight's red-rimmed eyes.
"Hey, Twilight? How long were you up that night?" He glanced at the dozen of books around her. "And what's with all the reading? Were you just too busy studying Friendship problems early in the morning, again?" He picked one of them up, and glanced at the cover page. "History Books?" He dropped it on the floor. "Why are you reading them? Were you looking through the history of friendship?"
Twilight rubbed her tired eyes.
"I-It's just... I-I've might've forgotten to mention about the vision I had about the new Elements, and now that I had a dream about it, I'm very concerned about it." Twilight said. "I was trying to figure out where the old and new Elements of Harmony came from. That's why I had to look through all the history books."
Spike rubbed his chin.
"That's funny. I thought Princess Celestia and Luna made them... or was it Starswirl the Bearded?”
"I thought so too," Twilight added. "Even though I've asked Princess Celestia where they came from after Nightmare Moon's defeat, but she doesn't want to talk about it."
"Gee, I wonder why Princess Celestia wouldn't tell you about it."
Twilight shrugged. "Heck if I know."
"Did you tell her about the new Elements from your vision?"
Twilight shook her head, and said, "No."
"O-kay..."
Spike then walked towards the kitchen.
“I'll go make breakfast. You want pancakes or french toast?"
“Make me pancakes, Spike.” Twilight said.
“Okay.” Spike disappeared into the kitchen.
Twilight turned her head towards a brown book with a golden unicorn icon, standing on a bookshelf. Using her magic, she levitated the book to face level, and then opened it to reveal six artifacts that hid inside: the first one looked like a golden necklace with an orange apple-shaped gem, the second one was another golden necklace, this time with a pink butterfly-shaped gem; three other golden necklaces could be found, each with her other three friends’ cutie mark represented. The sixth and final one was a golden tiara, studded with sapphires and a six-pointed star-shaped gem reminiscent of her own cutie mark. These artifacts in the book were the Elements of Harmony, the artifacts that Twilight and five of her friends used to defeat Nightmare Moon.
Twilight knew they were made from the power of friendship, but didn't know where the elements came from and who had made them, not even the new elements from her forgotten vision, and her dream.
So, since the Princesses 'created' harmony for all the land, could this mean they… created the elements? No, wait, the events of Hearth’s Warming restored harmony before the Royal Sisters were born. Maybe Starswirl the Bearded created the Elements of Harmony, that might be the answer... But why would Celestia say she doesn’t want to talk about it after I asked her who made them? If I had my theory about Starswirl making the elements, why wouldn’t she want to talk about his disappearance? I mean, she didn’t have a huge relationship with him… or did she? And why did he make the Elements of Harmony then? I know they were used because of Nightmare Moon, but what were these elements for originally? And what about the new elements? None of the history books mentioned them. I hope I'll get some answers.
“Twilight, breakfast is ready!” Spike called from the kitchen.
“Coming, Spike."
Twilight closed the book, and trotted to the kitchen to have breakfast, while carrying it with her.
Outside a cottage, a yellow female pegasus pony, Fluttershy, was watering the carrot field at a backyard near the Everfree Forest, a thick, dark, foggy forest full of dangers.
After she’d finished watering the carrots, she put down the watering can, and headed out to check her small animals, including the chickens inside their chicken coop, enjoying themselves in their natural habitats or enclosures.
"Are you boys and girls having fun?" Fluttershy putted her hoof to her left ear to listen to the sounds of the animals. She could understand any language from non-sapient animals thanks to her talents.
"Okay, good."
A white rabbit named Angel tapped Fluttershy's shoulder, and she turned to attention towards him.
"What is it, Angel?"
The panicked bunny pointed towards the forest, then made growling noises while hunching horizontally and held up his paws as he described what he saw.
"There's a monster in the Everfree Forest?"
Angel quickly shook his head yes.
"Let me go and take a look."
Fluttershy started trotting towards the forest, but Angel grabbed her left hind leg as if he were warning her not to investigate. But Fluttershy didn’t think it necessary to stay put, since she had been able, during Nightmare Moon’s awakening, to help a Manticore of all things.
"Angel, it's okay. I can handle this." Fluttershy said as she shook her hind leg until Angel released her. "Now stay here while I'll go investigate, okay?"
Fluttershy continued to trot towards the edge of the forest, leaving Angel to watch her in horror.
Yards away from the cottage, Fluttershy stopped in front of the forest, searching for signs of movement. The darkness made Fluttershy a little nervous, but ever since she’d threatened that Cockatrice after it turned her friend, Twilight, into stone, and helped that Manticore remove a thorn from its paw during, she tried to become braver.
Fluttershy glanced at the mud right next to her: imprinted on it were large three-toed footprints, each almost a foot long. Fluttershy had seen large birds in her life, but these footprints belonged to something bigger than an ostrich, and whatever it was, it led from the forest to the wide-open area. What Angel encountered had gone out of the forest (or so she thought).
Fluttershy looked back toward her cottage to see Angel still watching. She knew what he said was a 'monster', but what kind? Was it a Cockatrice? Or something else? The Everfree Forest was presented as a mysterious place that was home to a variety of creatures and animals, and it possessed a quality that allowed plants and animals to thrive without pony intervention, which many considered 'unnatural'.
But before Fluttershy could turn back, a chirping noise followed by a rustling in the shrubs startled her causing her to crouch and cover her eyes, shivering in fear.
What was that? I hope it's some kind of bird. Please let it be a bird!
After a short pause, the same chirping noise occurred, but this time, it was closer to her face. As Fluttershy startled, she jumped and landed on her back, but kept her eyes closed.
"Please don't hurt me! I'm too cute to be eaten!" She cried.
Fluttershy slowly opened one eye, but soon opened her second when she saw something very unexpected... and very much brand new to Equestria.
It looked like a small flightless bird, about the size of a house cat, covered in red feathers, except that it had a long lizard-like snout and mouth instead of a beak, a long thick tail that balanced its body, covered in orange tail feathers, a single claw on each hand facing inwards, and each very tiny toe attached to its ankles. The animal bobbed its head as it stared at her with its yellow eyes.
Fluttershy had no idea what that creature was. She had found a Parasprite, which her friend, Pinkie Pie, had known about somehow, some time ago, but this bird-like creature was nothing like any animal she ever knew. This might be a brand new species.
Fluttershy flipped over, stood on both hooves, and tried to talk to it.
"Um... hello there?"
The animal tilted its head sideways, but then chirped in response.
She paused. "My name is Fluttershy. What’s yours?"
The animal chirped again.
“Oh, it’s nice to meet you.” Fluttershy then asked. "Can you tell me what you are, and where you come from?"
The animal responded with long-term chirping.
“You were just minding my own business in the forest, but then saw a light above you, and then woke up in the dark forest filled with dangerous predators?”
The animal chirped.
“What does the wild look like?"
The animal performed a long-term chirp.
“Hmm... plains, rivers, lakes, hills, forests, a lone smoking mountain over the horizon, a sheer cliff that leads to the lagoon, and a thick forest on the other side… interesting. Well, it’s nice meeting ya’.”
The creature ran out of the forest, and disappeared out in the open as Fluttershy waved goodbye. Fluttershy felt excited to see a brand new species of animal.
"I've gotta tell Twilight about this!" Fluttershy trotted back to Angel where she’ll tell him everything she saw. Gee, I wonder why he saw that little critter as a monster. It looked and acted harmless to me. What’s so scary about that?
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I watched the yellow female pegasus trotting away towards her natural habitat while the other tiny animal ran off, but I only focused on that pony. That pony looked familiar, but I couldn’t fully describe her. All I could see were her bright yellow coat, and her pink mane and tail.
As I watched the pegasus talk to the animal, it seemed to me that she could communicate and understand multiple species. I was about to meet with her so she could understand my past; however, I wouldn’t yet because not only the sun really bugging my eyes, but I knew those ponies were afraid of me, and I couldn’t let that happen again.
So I headed back into the Everfree Forest to sleep until dusk even though some white rabbit disturbed my beauty sleep.
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