This is my first story as a new writer, so if people could take a minute or two to comment on what they feel needs to improve that would be greatly appreciated.

When Diamond Tiara managed to finally stand up to her mother, and help Pipsqueak fund the new playground equipment. This would only lead to the start of her reformation. Diamond has wounded many others including a certain bad seed from Manehatten. She, also, has to deal with settling things at her household not only with her mother but another pony as well.

A self-journey like this will test her new mentality to its limits as old cracks start to spring up out of habit. Even with support from her best friend Silver Spoon, will this filly be able to face her inner turmoil?

Now being Proofread and edited by my new Editor, IReadYouWrite