The sounds of students bustling, talking, eating, and leaving can be heard all throughout the Mess hall. Anyone who is trying to concentrate enough can hear everything that is going on. Someone such as I, Big Brilliance is currently doing. Being ambitious is hard when you are 280 pounds and people only see you as a tub of lard and pick on you. Lunchtime just seems to be the best time to eat and work. Unfortunately, the library is currently receiving much-needed maintenance so I am in the Mess Hall working on some music I am composing for my game.

Yup. No current problems with my E minor chord progression for my bass clef. Now to work on the guitar so- I was thinking as a familiar voice cuts my thoughts. A sweet and womanly voice as her hands grabs my notebook from below me.

“Working on another part of your content creation darling? Your diligence truly is admirable.” A woman wearing white and purple says to me with my notebook in her hands.

“Why thank you beautiful. Hard work is all I ever do, especially since its what I want my future to be.” I said as I laid back in the chair, twirling my pencil between my pinkie and my ring finger. I see the girl’s eyes light up as she talks to me again.

“Shame you have not shared an ounce of that diligence with your lady Brilliant. She needs some dedication applied to her too you know?” The girl said with a pout on her face as I sighed with understanding.

“Alright, Rarity. I know why your here and I am sorry for… being busy these past 4 months. I was just working hard and...” I was gonna continue until a finger silenced my lips and making me look forward. I hear Rarity sigh a labored one as she looks at me with eyes of understanding.

“I know you have been, Brilliance. I know you have gone to everyone game developers conference, extra studying hours, and lost days of sleep for your ambitions. In fact, its quite the turn on to see a man work himself to the bone” Rarity smile diminished as she began to continue. “But when you have a partner, you have to split that time with her too you know. Unless you want to...” I understand what Rarity means as I sighed myself.

It is not like I am avoiding her or anything, I truly love Rarity. We met Sophomore year when I saved Twilight Sparkle from insanity because of a calculation error that she and Sunset Shimmer could not solve. I saw the commotion when I was reading about Planck and luckily that was the answer. After that I was invited to a thank you party by their friend Pinkie Pie, I met Rarity and politely introduced myself to her, walked her home since we go the same way and after about 3 months…

She asked me out.

We go on a few dates for the first year and in our junior year, we had sex for the first time. I want to become a success game designer and I made a promise to her I would so I started learning more and mastering more of my craft.

That was 1 year ago…

Now Rarity is putting her boot down and for good reason, I know, but…

“No, I do not want to break up Rarity... Why would you put such a rancid thought in your mind?!” I said that a bit too loudly. Rarity looks down and slowly looks to me.

“Well I am sorry if I have these thoughts, but come on! Ever since-” She stops and looks around for anyone watching in on us. When she felt secure she continued.

“Ever since we made love that night, you have been in your room and in the school studying and studying.” She said in a calm tone as I relaxed my tongue before I rebuttal with her.

“You think I do not appreciate how hard you are working? I do! I really do but…" I sighed, "I thought that I was not good enough in bed and that you were avoiding me Big Brilliance. I thought I was ugly for you” Rarity said as she went back to looking down. I was shocked by her, Rarity, the most beautiful woman here say that to me. Now I feel like a bad boyfriend.

“You are not ugly to me,” I lift Rarity’s head up with my pointer finger to her chin.

“I was just blinded by my ambition was all… How about this Rarity? Let’s go on a date of your choosing after school today.” I said to Rarity.

Rarity looks at me with her eyes. She wipes her eyes and smiles as she nods to me.

“Alright. Meet me at Red Hopster on Wolving street downtown after school today.” Rarity said as I nodded. As Rarity begins to get up I grab her arm to prevent her to leave. She looks at me confused as I pulled her closer to me and I laid my hand on her face. I myself got up and kissed her on her lips. Rarity sighed as she leaned into the kiss, not caring who or what sees us as we got deeper. I feel her trying to open my mouth with her tongue and I allow her passa-

“Ahem.” We hear an authoritative voice next to us. We slowly turned our heads to see Principle Luna tapping her finger on her crossed arm as she eyes us. Rarity nervously giggles as I had a raging blush on my face. I look to Rarity and kissed her forehead mouthing ‘See you beautiful’ to her as I let go and sit down. Rarity rubbed the place I kissed and began to walk towards her friend’s table. Rarity pauses for a moment and turns around. Kissing her hand and blows the kiss to me with a sexy wink and hip sway.

Boy I can’t wait for school to be out.

I now stand outside of the restaurant Rarity mentioned, downtown Canterlot where the air is gray today. The area (besides the Red Hopster) was dull for businessmen and the patron public alike. For tourists, the tall buildings and shining lights and whistles are a spectacle, but for the people living here it was nothing more than ‘meh.’ It only becomes interesting when the holidays come and the parades that are hosted in the main street. A couple of looks from the “fortunate” that can afford the cost of living here comfortably. I jeer at the condescending gesture. The people that live in this area are snubs that think they are better than anyone else in the city, people thinking they have money only to go bankrupt biting more than they could chew, or those aforementioned tourists that think they deserve the red carpet treatment for visiting the money country.

I stand in front of the restaurant in a cleaner button-down shirt with a clad design, dress pants instead of my jeans from earlier, and my bag with a jacket. I check my watch to see the time.

3:55. Damn Rarity is 10 minutes late. Is this satire? I thought as I was about to start heading walking only for a voice to ring out to me.

“WAIT! SORRY FOR BEING LATE!” Rarity’s voice strains out from her labored running.

I turned around to see her in her school clothes throughout the day. She skids to a stop as she catches her breath. I offer her a hand as she gratefully takes it.

“Sorry for being so late darling. I was... ahem ...making some arrangements,” Rarity said as I gave her a kind smile.

“No need to worry, beautiful. Shall we go on to the event of the afternoon?” I have a bit of a hungry voice as Rarity picked up on it and smiled seductively.

“With pleasure darling~” She practically singed out.

I open the door to the restaurant and allowed her to walk inside first. Rarity smiles at the gentleman gesture and walks inside the bright and red establishment. I hear music from last year screeching from the old abused speakers, bright lights sending needles into my eyes instead of the feeling of convenient illumination they were designed for. Loud and obnoxious hostesses and waitresses, talking behind customer’s backs about the negatives of their low paying jobs and having to deal with public hassling. I nervously scratch at my neck as the atmosphere was triggering my inner discomfort, its so bright and and and...

“Brilliance?” I hear Rarity’s voice call out to me. I look towards her as she gave me a look of concern. I quickly composed myself as I coughed into my hand and went to the Hosting stand with Rarity following closely behind me. The aforementioned hostess was talking on her phone while on her shift. I wave in front of her face a few times to grab her attention but to no avail.

I bet some satire can help this situation I thought as I looked to Rarity and gave her my devious smile. Rarity immediately tensed as she knew what I was going to do. “Now Brilliance do not be hasty now!” She reached for my arm to stop me.

Try to stop me more like.

I grabbed the microphone and directed it towards her mouth and the phone’s mouthpiece as I say the stereo system and press the “on” switch.

*BRZZZZ* “..so he asked me *BZZ* If I knew anal and I said ‘yeah!’ obviously I am a butt slut. *BREEEEEE!!!!* Hold on some virgin is using the micro...phone..” The hostess yells away from the phone. “Who is on the microphone?!?!” She yells as I snicker at her antics. Rarity is visibly blushing but also giggling at what the hostess just said unknowingly to everyone.

One by one. Waiters, customers, and even a few people outside are laughing at the hostess’ ignorance. Looking around the room to see everyone laughing till their rib cages break, the confused worker immediately asked the million dollar question:

“What’s so funny?”

We are currently sitting at a table in the middle of the restaurant. Talking about the time that we both have been busy erm… I have been busy. I was telling Rarity about my advancements in my Game designing, my programming in C#, the knowledge of music theory I have acquired and me losing 4 pounds! Through it, all Rarity’s beautiful azure eyes gazed me up and down looking for something that has been lost in time. I see her looking and I gave her a smile when I think about how much I have grown as a man of knowledge. Rarity looks at my smile and gives me a face of surprise. A surprise similar to seeing a love one comeback from a war.

“What is on my face, Rarity? You have been staring me down to the atoms from how intense your stare has gotten the past dozen minutes.” I said as I pick up my glass of Sierra Mist and take a few greedy gulps. Rarity gasps as she realized what she had been doing unintentionally and blushes as she replies with haste.

“S-Sorry Brilliance! I was just admired by you is all.” She said with pink on her cheeks. I give her an eyebrow of confusion.

“How have I changed? I have lost 4 pounds sure but I think I am the same.” I replied. I look to my left to see patrons pass and come inside the restaurant to dine for a brief moment in thought.

“No its… the fact you have grown so much, Brilliance” Rarity said grabbing my attention as I look to her. Her eyes shining with tears of joy and respect….

..but I sense a small stream of sadness and regret.

“Hearing you talk about how you kept your promises to yourself, to better yourself has been truly wonderful. Seeing the proof in the pudding sort to speak, I have watched you strongly this past year when have been working hard and through the thickest rivers to your goal darling. To see that, despite the bullying and people putting you down, you never gave up on becoming a wonderful wonderful man and I am proud to be considered your girlfriend no matter what people have said to me about you…”
This moment Rarity took a pause as a sad gasp escaped her lips along with her shoulders trembling.

“But however I cannot lie to you no longer. Brilliance I… *Inhale* I wish, oh so I wish I was there to help you.” Rarity says when the tears come from her eyes. I quickly grabbed the tissue on my left tableside and offered it to her eyes. She looks at me as I clean her face. Rarity smiles as she continues to talk through the weeps; gaining some public attention with her.

“Even when now you are still the kind soul Brilliance. Willing to pick friend or enemy alike when they are in their desperate time of need… Truly a wonderful man…”
Rarity looks down as I tried to pick up her head with my hand. She holds up her hand to me as she continued. “I am sorry for being emotional Big Brilliance… it's just… I know you did not mean to push me away to better yourself. I know you worked hard to make something great of your skin but….” Rarity looks at me with tears raining down her face and ruining her mascara as she continued. “...I have longed for you again. To see you again. To be near you again. To hold your hand. To.. to…” Rarity takes the napkin in my hand blows into it. “...to be one with you again Big Brilliance”

I take pause at the morose scene but I know this was of my own design; I neglected this beautiful creature for far too long.

It is time I make things right.

“Rarity look at me,” I said as I stood up and take out my wallet to pay the tab. “I want this date to be the best one in a long time. Rarity..” I said as I opened my hand to her, flashing her a slightly lustful yet mostly sincere smile. “... Would you like to accompany me to my private chamber~” Saying chamber with Rarity’s trademarked speech. It sounded completely out of place as Rarity snorted and begin to giggle at my lame attempt. She takes my hand mid-laugh as she gave me her answer.

“Only if you promise not to try that again Brilliance pfft hahaa! My Celestia that is hilarious!” I giggle at Rarity’s laughing fit. I begin to take her out of the restaurant and begin the journey to my house.

We reach my house as I went for my pocket to get my keys. Rarity is looking around my family’s front yard in the mesmerizing sense; the yard has new hedges that were trimmed to perfection, grass so clean and covered in manufactured dew that the ground reflects the ground, the new coat of oil paint on the house…

The much-needed coat if you ask me.

Point is, Rarity has not seen my family’s house in a while. So Rarity is catching up with the newer imagery being presented. I look at her while she explores the yard further, bending the delicious ass of hers to look at how refined my lawn was. I continue to look at her butt as I noticed the details in it: Taut and fit from exercise yet remain some fertility in its shape. Has a slight jiggle as she wiggles her ass a bit. Intentional or not. I cannot help but think about getting the chance to ram inside that tight pussy again…

I opened the locked door and called to Rarity to come over. She gets up and walks to me as I allowed her to go in first. Rarity smiles as she moves past me into the house. Upon entering I locked behind myself. I look up to see Rarity going up the stairs, possibly to my room. I put down my bag and school necessities as I followed her trail up the stairs myself. As soon as I got in front of my door it slammed in my face with Rarity’s voice behind it.

“Give me a moment to see the changes in your room Brilliance. Wait by the door like a good boy and I’ll call for you” I hear a muffled Rarity say to me.

I sit outside my door and did miscellaneous tasks on my phone. It felt like 10 minutes until I swore I heard a muted “come in” from behind the door. I grinned a cheeky bastard’s grin, feeling like royalty as I put my hand on the door handle and slowly turned it. I take a deep breath as I moved forward towards the unsettled unknown.

As I opened my eyes… I see Rarity in her bra and panties laying on my bed. Her hands were busy rubbing her crotch and her chest. Rarity, face contorted in pleasure that looks beyond humanly, looks at me with ‘come hither’ look as a moaned escaped her sublime lips. Not even a full second passed as I feel blood go down south and awaken my friendly neighborhood Boner man. I walked towards Rarity like a hypnotized snake to a flute. Each step I take Rarity makes a moan to answer the thuds of my feet. The air smells of need and want, further-No… extremely adding to the desire my mind has for my woman.

For what felt like an eternity I make it to the bed. I begin to strip down to my underwear. Rarity stops momentarily and looks at me like a steak to a starved man. She licks her lips as article after article zips off my body. As soon as I am down to my underwear, Rarity stops masturbating and opens her arms; inviting me in for a closer look of her work. I went in on top of her, bed squeaking at the added weight of mine. I pay no attention as kissed Rarity hungrily. She moaned into my mouth as we rolled around on the bed. Fighting for dominance as our tongues danced a true dance of lovers. Over each other, under each other, swirling mixing our saliva into a cocktail of share bodily love. I ended up on the bottom as Rarity pulls back a bit. Enough for our tongues to dance on the outside for a second in the airs.

After a minute of kissing in our now stationary position, Rarity pulls off of me and sits on my erect. She cooed as felt my physical love poke her entrance wanting access. She teased me by rubbing herself on me and pulled off my body. I look down to see Rarity smile as she bites the hem of my fruit of the looms and pulls down. My erection springs free after a moment of her actions, ‘bopping’ her on the nose in the process. The thick scent of Old Spicy soap and my natural man musk must have driven Rarity insane. Her face was flush as she looked at my cock like it was discovered gold. Her lips quivered as she wanted to have a taste of my nature. I look at her and give her a nod to do what she wishes. Rarity beamed at this as she licked my head three times, four times she swirled her tongue around my head glands. I moaned a little bit femininity at the feeling since it has been over 8 months since I received oral. Rarity must have read this because she gave my head a lover’s kiss and took me into her mouth. I groaned as my thick cock-not even halfway-hit the roof in her mouth. After a moment, Rarity begins to bob her head. I groan as she continued to pleasure my man meat to the fullest degree; swirling her tongue inside her mouth, slurping and sucking me for my white gold, and swallowing me inside her throat which massaged the underside of my cock. Rarity is moaning loudly at the event. Her eyes looked at me the entire time with a predatory glint in them as she pleasured me so.

“I… I want more!” I shouted out as I grabbed Rarity’s head and slammed her down on my cock. Rarity’s eyes were the size of pin needles for a full second but then went down to the same predatory size only with her eyes tilted upward. I am groaning and panting as made Rarity’s head hump into my crotch. The room was filled with the “slick and slack” sounds of cock in her mouth as well as the “Gaghk and gah!”sounds she made when my cock hit her throat. Luckily Rarity has a gag reflex of a champion, mostly because wanna be model days and her wanting to lose weight.

Take that as you will.

“Guahhh!! I’m gonna nut!” I cursed out of my lips as Rarity immediately got off my crotch and swallowed the build-up of spit and pre in her mouth. My erection throbbing painfully at the deny but grateful she knows I can go only once. Rarity then blushed as she gets back on the bed next to me and opens her legs. Catching the hint, I go to the edge of the bed and see her blushing while both legs dangle in the air. I look at her pure white panties and smiled as I knead before her and look at her clothed crotch.

Rarity screamed as her most sensitive part was being licked. She bit her lips so hard that it leaves blood underneath. Rarity gave me the look that told me everything as I pulled her panties down. I look at them and noticed something I can’t help but poke at.

“My, my, Lil Miss Rarity… Didn’t your mother teach you to wipe?” I said as I showed Rarity the small brown streaks in her underwear. Rarity looks horrified and angry as she tried to kick you while she said to me.

“F-FUCK YOU!!! YOU PERVERT!!! AS IF YOU DON’T HAVE TO SHIT SOMETIMES AFTER CLASS!!! PLUS IT'S NOT LIKE I’M COMPLAINING KNOWING YOU PISS OUT OF YOUR… Your…” Rarity slows down as drool leaves her lips. “... thick sexy cock…”

“Calm down, Rarity. I was just jesting. Allow me to make it up to you~” I said as I stick my tongue out and lick her tight asshole. Rarity gasped at the sensation of her ass being licked but did not complain as her legs clamped on my head. I licked around the area finding it quite clean. Save a few hairs here and there but who wants to shave their ass anyway? Not me that’s for sure! I circled her anus with my tongue as I pucker my lips and sucked at it. Rarity bends her head back as I moan earth shaking left her. Above I feel Rarity squirting as her juices flow slowly down to my face. I grinned as I lick off the lone drop on my cheek as I stood up with my erection in hand. Rarity looks at me with shyness in her eyes. I look down to see her legs still clamped from the earlier orgasm and I grin at her. I gave her my cutest eyes I can muster and she eventually opens her legs.

I stick my penis inside her, going in at one thrust as Rarity cries out for the umpteenth time. Tongue out in a display only present in hentai for a second as I go at a steady rhythm. In and out as my cock goes. The muscles in Rare Rare’s pussy clamping down with a grip that would put the tradition vice grip to shame. Tight and cumbersome, I pressed on. Groaning as the muscles try to hold me back. I look to Rarity to see she is in awe at the feeling. I see… she orgasmed immediately as soon as I put it in.

What a woman.

I move at the pace no less. Going back and forth trying not to cum from the sensation of her Aphoristic of a pussy. I move her bra up as I clamp my mouth on her right boob so I don’t moan and focus so much on the sensation down in horny south.
Rarity is in a different dimension right now. Her mind supercharged by the endorphins and adrenaline running her veins. All of her nerves are so sensitive that her body feels like the inside of her pussy. Every touch Big Brilliance makes on her body, every bite, every lick, every breath on her skin can cause Rarity to cum buckets. Never in her time dating him has she achieved this level of biological nirvana. Rarity cries out as he thrust into her and bites her areola in unison. Rarity looks at Big Brilliance as he humps into her body to his heart’s content. Giving Rarity what she needed to reassure herself for those months he was working hard on himself.

Brilliance is sweating profusely at the effort. He grabs her legs and flips her on her stomach. Slapping her ass as he humped into her. Rarity moaned as another orgasm came again. She looked at Brilliance as she pleaded.

“S... Slap my slutty ass again, master! Master, oh I have been a b-bad b.. AHH... tc... CHHHH!!” Rarity moans out as Brilliance humps into her.

Big Brilliance slaps her ass after a hump was made and each slap caused an orgasm out of Rarity. Hump, Slap, orgasm, repeat. Hump, Slap, Orgasm, Repeat. Each more powerful than the last as Rarity topples her head on her own weight. Brilliance groans as the end begin to come near.

“Rarity... I’m… guhh huh...” Brilliance groans as Rarity meekly said for him to “Do it,”

With one last grunt and hump. He emptied himself into Rarity’s needy pussy. Filling up her womb to max capacity. Brilliance pulled out as his and Rare’s juices splash out of her like a waterfall. Brilliance himself topples onto the bed as he felt the fatigue of his actions for the past three hours hit him at once. He gave Rarity one last look as he smiles at her and closes his eyes. Ready to meet with her again in the morning.

Author's Note

Criticism as always is welcomed.