Author's Note

THERE WILL BE CLOP IN THIS CHAPTER. YOU’VE BEEN WARNED.

This was just a little thing I cooked up while working on my other story, It was originally going to be a one-shot, but tbh I forgot to click the complete button.

Sorta glad I didn't.

4 - The Deal [Rewritten]

Twilight’s eyes wanted to open, but she felt so comfortable. Whatever she was laying on, it was soft, warm and cozy. ‘So nice.’ She kept thinking, ‘but the thumping is a bit of a downer.’ Her mind had backtracked, ‘thumping?’ She popped open one eye to see she was not in her own room, rather, she recognized it as King Sombra’s room. ‘What am I doing in here?’ She thought. Twilight then became aware of a… thing moving up and down her back, ‘A comb?’ No, they were too big to be spokes on a comb, ‘Fingers maybe?’ She closed her eye, she was too tired to keep it opened.

Twilight tried not to think about it, she just wanted to keep her comfortable… thing. ‘What am I laying on?’ She thought. ‘It’s squishy but firm.’ She searched her vast knowledge to see if there was anything it could be, ‘maybe it’s a very weird mattress.’ She tried to reassure herself as to not ruin a good thing. That wasn’t enough for her, ‘One eye, then back to sleep.’ She thought, ‘Wait I don’t remember going to sleep, the last thing I remember was… Sombra?’

Twilight opened her eye back up. She looked down to see what it was she was laying on. All she saw was a dark gray and black. ‘Am I… laying on…’ Her eye moved upward to see the Dark King sitting idly running his fingers through her mane. She immediately shot up. She turned her head to see the stoic expression of Sombra. Her face went a deep purple. Sombra was sitting upright on the bedrest. “I- ah… um…” She struggled to find words, “We… didn’t… did we?”

Sombra shook his head “No” was all he said. Twilight gave a sigh of relief. “So…” She said, embarrassed. She kept looking at him, “How did I… get here?” Twilight asked timidly trying to change the subject. Twilight kept looking at Sombra, not realizing his hand was slowly creeping toward her. “I brought you here.” He said expressionlessly. “How else?”

“Yes, I know, but why?” Twilight said. She sat down near him, facing away. Her body began heating up again. ‘I’m so close to him now.’She thought, ‘Maybe I should lea-’ Sombra’s hand pounced on her and with a yelp, she was pulled back onto Sombra’s chest. She tried to get back up, but his strong hand held her in place. She only now realized he was stroking her mane like you would a dog. When she recovered from the shock of being pulled down she thought. ‘Does he think of me as a pet?’ Twilight’s thought’s paused. ‘A slave?’ She timidly asked, “What are you doing?” She wanted to leave, but she also didn’t want to enrage the stallion that’s keeping her alive.

“What I want.” The king said. “Do you disapprove?” Twilight had to admit, ‘It does feel nice.’ She shook her head either out of fear or out of genuine pleasure from it. She didn’t know which. She closed her eyes and wrapped her arms around his midsection. After a few minutes of this, Sombra began to speak, “Twilight,” She replied with an “Mhm.” He continued, “I have the bearers in custody.” Her eyes shot open. ‘Why would you?!’ Twilight would’ve gotten off the bed, but Sombra held her in place with is magic and strong hand.

“Twilight, I want you to relax.” He said. Twilight took several deep breaths. After a few minutes, she had calmed down. “None of the townsponies were or will be harmed, but the bearers… they’re still open to debate.” She began squirming again, “Twilight, stop!” She stopped instantly, fearing repercussions. ‘It’s okay, They’ll be okay.’ Her eyes closed, ‘They have to be. He wouldn’t have told me if was going to kill them.’

“So...” Sombra began, but Twilight interrupted him ‘He lied!’, “You said that you wouldn’t hurt them if I told you their names.” ‘Cute.’ Sombra thought as he looked down at the mare still on his chest. He internally laughed. “If you remember, I said that ‘they’ll’ be unharmed, I meant the townsponies.” Twilight went silent, ‘I should’ve…’ Her mind couldn’t operate, the only things she saw when she blinked was her friends, being tortured and raped by some soldier. She began to sob into the stallion holding her, “So,” He began again, “As I was saying before I was rudely interrupted...I want to make another deal with you, Twilight, a deal in which we both get what we want. The Elements will be safe, and I… well… get you.”

Her ears perked up. ‘What…. does he mean... by that?’ Sombra finally allowed her to sit up by moving his hand and magic away from her, but she chose not to, she was to busy crying into him. “Unless… you want to wait a few days… until you’re more… stable.” She quickly replied, “No.” She said, ‘I can’t risk any of what happened to me happening to them, I’d do anything.’ “I-i can t-talk now.” Sombra seemed satisfied by the answer. His hand came back to stroke her mane. “Are you ready to hear my proposition?” She nodded from his chest, “Yes King Sombra.” She said, it was evident there was still some sadness in her, but it was repressed.

“You, princess, will be my queen.”He paused, “For all eternity.” He paused, “Your friends will be allowed to stay in Ponyville and the surrounding area, but if they leave, they will be reprimanded.” He paused again, “ And do not confuse your title, you may be the queen of the Empire... but you... will be mine.”

Twilight nodded. She only had one question, “Do you live forever?”

“Well my dear, I’ve not aged in 1,000 years.” He replied. He frowned, “Were you hoping to get off easy?”

“No… I just… wanted to know.” She replied. The tears began returning. He took his finger to her eye and flicked them away. ‘Please don’t hurt them.’ “Good,” was his reply.

He reached his hand down her shirt and down her back, she tensed up, but didn’t protest. “I hope you know your word isn’t going to be enough here. I expect you.” He said. Twilight nodded. “Just be gentle… please. I’ve never...” The words died in her mouth. Twilight closed her eyes. She was forced back down onto him when he reached his hand down to unbutton her shirt, she had no time to prepare. She tensed up more with each button that came off.

*Thwck* ‘Please, I am doing everything you say,’ She thought, ‘Don’t hurt them… They are the last,’ *Thwck* ,ponies I care about.’ *Thwck* Twilight began breathing heavily. The hand on her back was rubbing it in a sensual way. *Thwck* She shuddered when his hand reached her lower back and moaned when he pushed the shirt off her shoulders, letting Sombra’s rough hand go into her skirt. *Thwck*

When the last one came off he didn’t immediately take the shirt off, instead, he brushed her hair out of her face. She opened her eyes and looked into his deep red eyes. She opened her mouth and immediately brought her hands to cover it, she moaned deeply as his hand reached her tail and began playing with it. He grabbed her chin, causing her hands to fall, with a strong but gentle touch and brought her up to him. She slowly moved forward, guided by his had on her chin. Twilight was laying over Sombra now, her open shirt, barely holding onto her form, let Sombra see the sides her 34B breasts. He looked back up to Twilights face, now their lips were mere inches apart. She was breathing quite heavily in contrast to Sombra, who seems like he has never breathed in a day in his life.

Sombra looked into her purple eyes, the eyes of his new queen, waiting for them to close in acceptance. She did just that and waited. Her breathing sped up rapidly as he closed the distance between their lips. Then they met.

Sombra hadn’t stopped playing with her ample backside, so when they kissed she moaned into it. ‘How does he know what to do?’ She thought, ‘He must be experienced.’ Her eyes were still closed, but she could see everything he’s doing with her body.

Twilight was forced to breathe in through her nose, the kiss was amazing for her, but one thought kept going through her mind, ‘He just took my first kiss, my worst enemy, the one who ruined my life and killed my peers. How can I feel pleasure from this?’ She moaned again his mouth. ‘His hand is-’ Sombra moved his thumb and circled the outline of her asshole repeatedly. She opened her eyes and they went straight into the top of her head.

He opened his eyes to see his progress. ‘She must be getting into it… that’s good.’ Sombra thought. He retracted his hand from her back which prompted a shudder from his queen. While his eyes are still closed and their lips still connected he reached one of his hands to the bottom of Twilight’s head, merely holding it in place as they kissed. His other hand finally did away with her shirt, revealing her breasts to him. ‘No bra, huh.’ Sombra thought. He smiled at his queen through the kiss. He closed his eyes again, trying to keep his composure. ‘If I see her like this, I might just lose it.

A smell wafted into his nose, a smell he knew quite well, ‘Well, she’s mine now.’ He thought. ‘She must be soaking wet down there.’

He could feel the heat radiating off of her face from embarrassment. ‘Her face must be a deep purple right now.’ Sombra thought. One quick peek confirmed his suspicion. Her face had gone to a very dark purple which covered much of her cheeks. He moved into the kiss, opening her mouth and invading it with his tongue. He wrapped around Twilight’s tongue and licked it numerous times.

His other hand had not been idle, slowly working his way down to her skirt and forcing it down and off her legs. His fingers quickly dived in and reached her drenched marehood. He rubbed the outside of it, reveling in his victory. ‘She is wet.’ Sombra then inserted two of his fingers into her. She yelped at the sudden intrusion but soon gave way to a drawn out moan. Her Back arched, nearly breaking her first kiss, but she refused, ‘This is perfect!’ She thought. They squirmed around and eventually a third, his ring finger, entered the confines of her pussy.

Twilight had felt sparks all over her body, eventually, ‘Sombra’s fingers are inside of me!’ She thought, ‘And his tongue.’ Sombra broke the kiss, bringing her thoughts to a close and her eyes open. Twilight was breathing heavily, ‘What’s…?’ Her mind had been stopped by her realizing she was naked in front of Sombra. ‘How did I…get naked.’ She then felt a heat coming from her nethers. She looked down and saw Sombra’s hand rubbing her pussy. She shuddered ‘Why does…*Mhm* It feels… *hmm*... So good! *hah*’ Her moans from his rubbing her music to Sombra’s ears.

Twilight’s train of thought ended when Sombra sprang up and pushed her back to the bed. Their positions had been switched, now she was on the bottom. ‘This position only means he wants to… really go… at it.’ She internally cringed at her censorship, ‘Why am I doing this?!’ She thought, regaining some consciousness, ‘He’s my enemy.’ But her mind disregarded the fact as her pleasure was overloading her brain.

While she was busy arguing with herself. Sombra had undressed and had prepared. He lined up with Twilight’s wet pussy. Twilight looked down her body only to see the tip of his dick, ‘It’s way too big.’ She thought, ‘It'll break me.’ She internally screamed, but outwardly, she spread her legs to him, waiting.

Sombra said, “Are you ready Twilight?” She opened her mouth, but Sombra was not going to give her a chance to respond, he kissed her at the same time he entered her, breaking something inside her. ‘As I suspected, a virgin.’ She opened her mouth and his tongue went in. Twilight released a muffled moan out of her. ‘Her pussy is extremely tight.’ Sombra thought, but not one to let down on a challenge, he slowly inched his way forward into her. Eventually, he hit a wall deep inside her just as he bottomed out at his medial ring. She seemed to wake up at this and when he began to withdraw, she had a long drawn moaned until it had reached all the way back to the tip. Then, in one swift motion, he was back inside; filling her in less than two seconds. When he looked down, he could see the outline of his dick moving in and out of her. 'I hope I'm not hurting her.' He thought. The distentions were barely visible, but they were still there. He looked to Twilight, who seemed to be lost in the bliss.

‘She truly is magical.’ He released her mouth and opted for one of her nipples. He lightly bit and prodded the left one with his mouth while he fondled the other one with his hand, his other hand barely holding him up. All the while thrusting into Twilight’s tight cunt repeatedly, stretching it to fit his girth. She was panting out moans like she was a dog. ‘Very fitting for my pet.’ Sombra thought as he was listening to her moans. Sombra then moved off her breast and kissed her again.

Twilight felt like she was being torn apart; the pain from the initial thrust had gone away. It was replaced by an insatiable desire for pleasure. ‘More!’ Her mind kept ringing. She could feel every single vein on his shaft, every nook, and cranny on his rough hands and his warm saliva that was still on her breasts. Sombra’s kiss was muffling her. ‘The guards must be getting an earful.’ She thought. Her tongue was outside of her mouth, ‘I must have looked like a panting dog.’ She thought, ‘A pet.’ Her mind railed against what Sombra was doing, but was slowly beaten back by her desires. Sombra moved back to her breasts, sucking and prodding them. Twilight immediately gave out more moans, and, in an attempt to save the Guards’ ears’, she moved one of her hands to her mouth.

Twilight, was in nirvana, cloud nine, heaven. A state she never even knew existed. Her brain couldn’t process all the pleasure and instead released it in quick breaths and lengthy moans. Sombra began to speed up and pushed and stretched her further than she ever thought possible. The only thoughts that went through her head at this point were incoherent babble in attempts to process what is being done to her.

Twilight kept her mouth opened and attempted to stretch her wings as far as they could, but the restraints stopped them. Her magic, despite being blocked, began to spark from her horn. This only concerned Sombra for a moment before he looked and saw her face. Her eyes had rolled up into her head and her brain felt like mush. But that didn’t stop Twilight and certainly not Sombra.

He had sped up considerably, he felt his limit quickly approaching. He stopped sucking on the nipple and moved back to her mouth. He kissed her right as she came, clamping down on Sombra’s penis so much it brought on his orgasm. He thrust one last time and broke the barrier in her, spreading his seed and quickly overflowing the princesses womb. He came for nearly two minutes, Twilight saw slight inflation from the amount of seed inside of her. She paid it no mind.

After a few moments, Sombra went to remove himself from Twilight but was stopped by the very same mare. “No,” she said, grabbing onto him, “Not yet.” Sombra was more than happy to oblige her. After a few minutes of the afterglow, Sombra again went to pull out. This time Sombra was not blocked by the mare. After he pulled out Twilight moved her hands to ‘inspect the damage’ as she thought. None had leaked out despite the amount she felt inside of her.

Sombra tossed the disregarded clothes, that were still on the bed, onto the floor and pulled up the covers around both him and Twilight. She nestled herself right next to his chest. He wrapped his left arm around her neck and then said, “Goodnight, my queen.”

“Goodnight, my king.” She replied. Sombra reached down and gave Twilight a kiss on her lips and went off to sleep. Twilight looked up to the strong stallion that had his armed wrapped around her and smiled. ‘Maybe it'll be okay.’ Twilight thought, She then nodded off to her dreams.