metal madness

by bigbang

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Other, Profanity, Adventure, Violence, Main 6, Transformers, Drama
Length: 1912

my first story, a group of autobots( my ocs) crash near ponyville the mane six try to help but they don't care

a group of autobot solders crash near ponyville and the mane six try to help but they dont care thinking that the primitive planet is nothing byt have to help when the decepticons find them with the autobot code in them the protect the ponies and the mane six try to break the shells to be friends with them who knows?

Published 2019-04-26 01:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2019-04-26 01:00:01 UTC

with metal and colored surprise

It all started on an Autobot ship in space heading towards an Autobot outpost when it happened. I was a room, an orange, and red Autobot, his name is Tailburst, recharging with his other two teammates, one was mixed shades of golds with wings named Goldburst and the other was black and grey with a visor covering half his face his name is Code Night waiting for there next mission when an explosion caused to him to jerk up. Looking around he looked at his two teammates

" What is that," goldburst said with both a curious and worried tone looking at the other hope one would have an answer.

another explosion and they knew exactly what it was, a Decepticon attack they opened the door to see other Autobot soldiers running in different directions in a panic. With the station shaking from the attack they knew they had to abandon the station, so they all ran to the hanger with other soldiers around them getting the same idea. they reach the hanger with many soldiers getting in ships. We head towards there ship, a miniature ark colored yellowish gold with blue on the sides.

As they got closer they heard loud screams, as they look at the hanger there was a swarm of ships firing multiple energy blasts in the hanger, the blasters hit the hangar floor and some ships making them explode as Autobots screamed in them, they start to run but a shot hit near them and that there was a fuel line under the spot exploding it next to goldsburst and code night making them be thrown in a small explosion in the air with sparks and pieces of metal coming off them and landing near the ship, seeing that, trailburst ran faster getting to them and grabbing them and dragging them on the ship, and placing them down on the floor for now and got in the control seat and activating the engines and blasting out the hanger at full speed, as more Decepticon flyers came again and fire missiles missing the ship but flew in the hanger making a giant blue and purple explosion in the opening with parts of Autobots floating out the now destroyed hanger. As the ship rocked from the explosion, when it seemed the ship had gotten out of the Decepticon attack he activated the space drive, a special engine that can make a portal and transport the ship to any place in the galaxy in time depending on power and how far the location is, as trailburst is waiting for the drive to charge and activated his autopilot, he grabbed his two teammates who were very extensive damaged and in stasis lock and dragged them with a small trail of energon behind them, he entered the med bay of the ship and he placed them in the CR chamber to heal, as he finished putting them in the chambers and activating the healing energon he hears the beep that told him that the space drive was fully charged where Ihe headed toward the control seat when an explosion rocked the ship. He ran towards the control panel and looked at the screens showing that Decepticon fighters were firing at him and that the explosion was from one of the engines getting hit. and looking up when several loud thuds came, looking back at the screen there were giant armored Decepticons on top of the ship, struggling to stay on, he knew that if he stays here any longer in the area, he and his team would die and see the end of the war. So as fast as he could and activated the space drive hitting it before the calculations were done but luckily the automotive computer made sure that the ship wouldn't crash in an asteroid field. he pushed the button and a small portal appeared around and suck the ship throw.

Trailburst watched as the sight of the vortex inside showing a glowing blue swirl for a few clicks before an opening appeared and shot out the ship out watching as the Decepticons on the ship flew out the opening, smiling knowing that they won't last long, looking out the window he could see in the inky void of space a planet. But before he could see much an explosion came from the back of the ship and with then after the emergency sirens blared out through the ship he remembered about the damaged engine and that the jump strained the engines to its limit with them shoot fire out the damaged and opened engines and seeing that he was getting closer to the planet from the engines shooting him toured the planet with blazing fire coming around the front indicating that the ship was entering the atmosphere. Getting closer to the planet Trailburst took the controls of the ship, as he was leaving the cloud line he tried lifting the ship and trying to at least get a controlled crash. Seeing a large forest area getting closer, using most of the energon to stabilize so he didn't crash, then a small explosion that came from the console, knocking him off and landing on the floor and sending him down the long hall till hitting the back of the ship and hitting his head and as the ship descended and from his eye, the last thing he saw was the forest, then the ship crashing in the trees sliding down to set when his eyes started to glitched then everything went dark with a loud crash!

--------------------------------------------------5 minutes before the crash, Ponyville midday --------------------------------------------------------------

It was a nice day, the sun was high in the sky everypony in Ponyville was smiling happily, in the center of Ponyville was a giant crystal castle. As the door of the castle, opening to reveal a purple alicorn princess named Twilight Sparkle the princess of friendship. Looking around

"ah, what a nice day," She said happily.

walking down the street to the market to get food. Walking to one of the shops she was bombarded with colorful confetti, first startled but soon realized who could do it

"Pinkie Pie!!" She screamed in frustration. as she said that a pink pony jumped out of nowhere and said " Sorry Twi, but me pinkie sense tells me there is a big surprise coming and I'm hoping that I'm the one to do it, but sorry for startling you." She said nicely.

with Pinkie Pie's apology down they both now together looking around for their respectful stuff. after getting their stuff, they spotted one of there friends, an orange pony wearing a cowboy hat, selling the apple to people passing by. As they got closer to their friend

Twilight yelled: " Hi, Applejack, how are you." After saying that the orange pony turned her head to the pony that said her name and yelled back " Oh, hi Twilight I'll be with you in a bit." After saying that a loud boom came from the sky.

everyone looked up at what the loud boom came from, seeing a falling object with small pieces coming down from the sky, heading towards the Everfree forest and as the object came closer to the forest as the loud crash came from the forest with smoke coming from the crash, then the smaller objects came coming near Poniville, as everypony looked at the object coming screams started to appear with most is shock at seeing what has happened but most were running in panic as the object came closer and closer in a giant fireball and CRASH!

the ground shook as the impact happened and a thick dust cloud arose from the crater. Lots of curious ponies came near the crater staying back out of fear. as the dust began to disperse there was in the middle of the crater, it looks like a giant bolder but had lumps on it like a candle burning the wax and melting then hardening. as everypony gathered around the crater, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack arrive and enter the crowd of ponies to what happened. looking down at the still smoking object as a rainbow blur came rasing to the scene, as the blur came to a stop, the cyan colored Pegasus, it was Rainbow Dash the one that says she is the fastest flyer alive coming to the three and said "What the HAY happened!"

"Wellitstartedwithmesuprisingtwilightthenheadedtoapplejackbutthenaloudboomcamefromtheskyandthenagiantobjectfellfromtheskyandthenanotherobjectfellandcrashandthencreatedthisgiantcraterandthenyoushowedup, so that is what happened." Pinkie answered

Rainbow Dash looked more confused now than just a few seconds ago. Just then the object started to glow lines of purple and light violet colors and started to shake. All the ponies around started to step back with worried faces

Then the object rumbled as cracks appeared over it, as pieces fell off the object. as the object broke arms that resembled a monkey with hands and putting them on the ground as the back part broke to reveal legs. Putting them on the ground to stand revealing a giant bipedal creature with hands and cracking its head to reveal a face with cracks on the face and the violet light purple lines coming all around its body. It stood at least 5 meters tall towering over everypony, as it gave a loud scream and started to move stiffly out of the crater, as ponies screamed and ran away from the giant beast. now standing on the street turning its head slowly.

"What the hay is that?!" Rainbow Dash yelled.
Twilight responded with " I don't know it looks like a golem from my books but never this big?"

As she said that the creature screamed again as it started to move slowly with each step shaking the ground. Everypony starts to screams in fear with each step. As the four ponies start to run, Twilight starts to cast a spell her horn glowing and turns around staring directly at the creature its body glowing both eyes connecting as a powerful blast of energy shoots from Twilight's horn striking its chest. It takes two steps back from the force but seconds after the blast, the creature shakes its head then looks back at Twilight its body intact with smoke coming off where the blast hit.

Twilight's face in both fear and confusion " What! How is that possible, that was my most powerful magic blast!?" taking a few steps back before it starts to run forward towards Twilight.

As Twilight screamed too stunned with fear to move as it ran towards her ready to trample her eyes closed shut waiting for it to end but then CLANG. She opens her eyes to see another one of those creatures it was orange and silver looking more slender punching the other creature, the force knocking it over and falling t the ground.

Twilight's eyes were wide open seeing another one of those creatures, it turns around and stares at me with big glowing cyan blue eyes, As I look at it with gleaming eyes it spoke: " Hey, your an idiot."

Author's Note

hope you like this
it's my first story so I hope you like it
the next chapter will come soon hopefully
if you have any advice let me know, please
I imagine it in my head I'm just not good at writing it, I hope you understand.
I used Grammarly the free one so that is the only editor