
A Shooting Star
Gold Star was talented, but Loyalty was something he never wanted to know after the incident.
Gold Star is a really talented pegasus, able to move as fast as a shooting star. (Though some say he only did that once) A tragic event forces Gold out into the world, forcing him to move from town to town and steal to survive. When he gets too close to Ponyville, however, a mare with a rainbow mane and her friends capture him and he is forced to stick around.
First Fan fiction please tell me if it was bad or not. I would love to continue but I would need help to improve content. Also tell me where I need to improve so that can get fixed as well. Thank you and please enjoy the story.
Also I give full credit to UP1TER for the Cover art, so go check him out and stuff he is on DeviantART.



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- Just another escape 2012-12-08 01:08:40 UTC1092