Spike versus Malachor Twilight

by Flameboy

Rating: teen
Tags: Other, Original Character, Mystery, Spike, Horror, Violence, Twilight Sparkle, Drama, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Spyro the Dragon, Alternate Universe
Length: 3130

Spike and friends face off against Malachor.

In the beginning of this story, Malachor, an evil being who can possess and corrupt innocent souls has taken over Equestria. Luckily, the CMC, Applejack, Starlight Glimmer, Celestia and Luna, even trixie, torch, tempest, and most of all Spike are ready to save the day. Then, they work together to try and defeat Malachor without Twilight's help, wherever she is.

But, Malachor still has one innocent soul that was infected and now possessed by Malachor's blood and corrupted by his dark magic. And he pits Spike to fight the one he corrupted.

Credit goes to the creator. Even though I can't believe I created this story, I love how I made the ending better when you see part 2. Read from top to bottom to see what happens. Based on The Legend Of Spyro: Dawn of the Dragon.

So, to start it off, this is the beginning.
Story: Malachor was on his back as he was beaten by the dragon he possessed and corrupted. -> go into chapter.

Published 2019-05-27 04:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2019-05-27 04:10:01 UTC

Spike versus Malachor Twilight Chapter 2

"No!" Spike said softly. "This can't be!" He said. Then he moved with no restraint coming from the twins. He stood back up. Then, placed his right paw on his chest. "Twilight! It's me!.. Spike!" He pleaded to save his sister from Malachor's control.

"DON'T YOU DARE SAY THAT NAME OR EVEN CALL YOURSELF THAT, YOU HEARTLESS DEMON!" Possessed Twilight (who stood in front of Malachor) screamed as she raised and pointed her right hoof towards the demon. "After what you did to him with help from your friends, you have the galls to call yourself the name of which you murdered!" She said as she stamped her right hoof hard into the ground which actually caused pebbles to fly up.

Everyone stood still after what they just heard Twilight say in disbelief.

"What are you talking about, Twilight?!" Spike said with his eyebrows down.

"And don't call me "Twilight!" Only my friends and family would call me that!" She yelled at him while she squinted her red eyes that had black smoke coming from her eyes.

"What do you mean by that?" Spike questioned her with his right eyebrow up.

Malachor, who stood back, started to speak when he pointed his right finger up at the ceiling. "Well, young dragon, let me tell you this: she won't be able to hear what I'm going to say."

"Huh?" Spike said as he still held his right eyebrow up.

"You see, you wanted to know where Twilight was, right? Well, maybe this will help. Remember when you saw me using my magic to corrupt you?"

"Yeah? So?"

"You see when I had you, Fizzlepop, Storm, Celestia, Luna, Chrysalis, Storm King and Trixie under my control, I had a little task for you," he said as he started grinning wildly to the left and sat back on his throne.

"What kind of "task?" Storm asked.

"Well, I needed someone powerful, powerful just like Celestia and Luna. In fact, it's all thanks to you and my other puppets for getting me that princess."

"Wait, you mean-"

"Yes, Celestia. I sent you, Spike, Luna, Storm, Trixie, Chrysalis, and Torch, while under the leadership of Sombra Tempest, to capture your precious Twilight Sparkle."

"Gasp!" Everyone said.

Malachor Twilight started walking down the thousand steps after he said that.

Luna: Y-Y-You monster!

"Don't you DARE call my savior a "monster!" Corrupted Twilight shouted with her head perked up and then lowered like a predator stalking its prey.

Spike, all scared now, shrank back to his original side. "Twilight! Don't you see?! He used us to capture you! He's playing games with your mind!" Spike said as he placed his left finger up on the side of his head.

"Like I said, she can't hear this part of our conversation. It's like flies buzzing to her ears."

"How did we even capture her? Twilight knows teleportation and is very good at it," Celestia said to Malachor.

"Oh, you didn't capture her. But I can show you who did," Malachor said as lifted his right hand up in the air with a red aura surrounding it.

The reader sees a white light.

The ponies and other creatures see a huge mirror.

Meanwhile, back when Twilight was looking for everyone. She looked to see if she could find Spike in the dragon lands, but he wasn't the only dragon that was missing. She sees Ember and flies over to her.

Back at Malachor's lair...

"Hey, that's when Twilight came to ask where you were, Spike," Ember pointed to the mirror as she stood on Storm King's left.

Then, they saw the corrupted versions of Tempest, Spike, Celestia, Luna, Storm King, and Trixie riding on Torch's back. Then, everyone saw Twilight talking to Ember.

"Ember, take all the dragons to Ponyville. I'll buy you time. Go."

"But Twilight?"
"Go!" Twilight shouted at Ember the same way she did with Spike to bring the Crystal Heart to the fair.

Next, everyone, including the ones that were no longer under Malachor's control watched as they saw Twilight staring at their past corrupted selves. Then, Torch let a huge stream of fire at Twilight. But Twilight shielded herself in a pink force field. Luckily, Torch, like all dragons have a certain time limit when breathing fire. Twilight then grabbed three huge boulders from behind him and dropped them on top of him.

Torch looked surprise as he saw his past self almost toast the purple princess. Luckily, he was stopped before she would've gotten burnt alive.

"I hope you find it in your heart to forgive me, Torch," Twilight said as she bowed with her left hoof farther away from her right one.

Despite the fact he was once trapped under a huge pile of rocks, Torch decided to nod his head once. "Even though I was under that pile of rocks she still has respect for me," he said as he kept his eyes closed. "Just like I have for her," Torch said as he reopened his eyes.

After Torch was stuck under a pile of rocks, Trixie tried to break her shield with her explosive magic. But, Twilight countered it with a force field reflect, which knocked Trixie onto the ground, onto her back, knocked out cold.

Twilight held her left hoof up. "Sorry Trixie! I'll make it up to you as soon this is over! And I hope you find it in your heart to forgive me for that when you're not under Malachor's control!" Twilight shouted while saying sorry to one of her friends.

Despite the fact that she knocked her out, Trixie knows that she had good intentions. "Trixie- I mean, "I" know you had good intentions, Twilight. But, I should be the one who should make it up to you.

Twilight then looks at the remaining three attackers that surrounded her in the form of a triangle. Spike was behind Twilight on her right side while Storm King was behind her on her left side. Tempest stood in front of her.

"*looks at Spike without moving her head* Don't make me *looks at Storm King* do this guys; *looks at Tempest* I don't want to hurt you," Twilight pleaded with mercy.

But the three started to jump at the same time at Twilight.

The reader sees a full view of Twilight's eyes. They were closed in confidence and remorse. Then, she opened them up and growled like a tiger as her eyes from the bottom to the top turned into a shade of green.

Twilight quickly grunted in pain as she quickly turned into the Incredible Spark. She raised her tail up, and spins clockwise, thus knocking out three of her friends. "Spark sorry and hope you have in heart to forgive Spark," Spark said with her left finger pointing at the sky.

Everyone was dumbfounded to see Twilight in full control of Spark.

Celestia and Luna came running on two sides of Spark. Celestia on Spark's right, and Luna on Spark's left. She pushed her arms straight out and caught both of them by their necks within her clutches.
"Sorry," she said and then she hit both Celestia and Luna's heads on the sides. Then, she let go them and let them drop to the ground. "Spark hope you have it in heart to forgive Spar- ah!" She yelled as a pink syringe plucked her left arm as she tried to point up at the sky with her right finger once again. But, then she grabbed it out of her arm and looked at it. She started to snort like a gorilla as she started to feel a little sleepy. She saw that Tempest had her right hoof up, indicating that she threw the syringe at her. Then, before she was about to walk towards her she felt what seemed to feel like 10 bee stings to the back. She looked behind to her left and saw Spike with his left paw up behind his back, meaning he threw the 10 syringes that equal 11 in total. Then, Spark fell down with a little feint gasp as she fell onto her chin. Then, a brown cloud of dust from the dirt washed over on the green behemoth, and when it disappeared, Twilight was on the ground. Tempest used her magic and levitated the princess of friendship onto her back where her head was on the left side of Tempest's body. Then, all the corrupted ones recovered for a little and decided to take flight once more and head back to Malachor's lair.

Malachor's lair...

Malachor placed his hands above Twilight as he used his dark magic to twist Twilight's mind and body. "When you awake, child, you will remember that an army of demons attack your friends and family and killed them all. And you remember that those vile creatures stopped when they killed your little brother, Spike," Malachor said as Twilight's tail turns fully black like paint being washed down. While that happens, Twilight sees a memory.

Outside of the mirror that those were watching like a movie. Especially when Discord was eating popcorn and stopped when everycreature was looking at him. Then, they go back to watching the horrible event that was conspiring. As all of Twilight's friends and families were shedding tears of sadness.

Inside the mirror...

Images of Spike, Ember, and Thorax, and those who were corrupted by Malachor appeared in Twilight's mind, and their colors along their eyes, turned black and red.

"They tortured each one of your friends and laughed while did it," Malachor said as an unconscious Twilight made a frowny face as well as grinning with the right side of her mouth, where a flat tooth cracked and was separated from the others and started to sharpen into a fang. Her back hooves, and her flank, along with her cutie mark were covered in black skin with purple smoke making the black skin and red lightning hardening the skin as it struck like a needle.

"With this power I give to you, you will soon have your revenge as well as avenge your friends," he said as Twilight's upper body along with her wings and forearms began to turn charcoal. Then, finally, Twilight's mane, horn, and then to the center between her eyes, were now black. Twilight opens her eyes with a jaguar roar, but there was no white cornea, no purple irises, and no pupils. Just RED, EVIL-LOOKING EYES. She stands up with help from her hooves, then she lowers her body on to the floor. "Thank you for giving me this power, Master," she said as she bows her head.

Spike versus Malachor Twilight Chapter 3

After showing them what he did to Twilight, Malachor started to speak to Twilight. "Twilight?" he started grinning as she looked over to her master as he began to tell her what to do. "Avenge your friends and family," he told Twilight.

Malachor Twilight looks back at the dragon whom she sees is a demon and stares at him while grinning wildly with her new fangs. "With pleasure, master! Eeyaaah!" Twilight screamed as she jumped like a predator and hit Spike with her right shoulder. Then, they started to roll in the form of the yin yang. Spike was the yang, the force of good while Possessed Twilight was the yin, the force of evil. They landed on the ground with Twilight on top. Applejack and Rainbow Dash raced over to stop Twilight, but was stopped as she casted a shield around her and the demon she was fighting.

Malachor Twilight looked down at the demon she was on top of, then she shifted her mouth into a nasty one with a hole poking outside her mouth as fangs formed from her mouth. "Prepare to die, demon!" Malachor Twilight said until she saw the demon do nothing. "What are you doing? Fight back!" She said as she slapped him on the face with her right hoof. But, the demonic dragon did not retaliate with any use of fighting. "Fight back!" She said as she slapped him again, yet he still didn't do anything. "Why won't you fight fight back?!" She says for the final time and raises her hoof once more.

"Because you've left me nothing to fight for," Spike said sincerely. Everyone else stared at what Spike just said, even Jonathan, who was currently in his green werewolf form. The demonic alicorn that stood on him lowered her hoof, and looked down. Spike, waiting for a response, looked at the demonic version of her sister bow her head. He saw something blue come Twilight's left cheek.

"I... "I left you nothing to fight for?" Twilight looked up at the demonic dragon with fury and her red eyes emitting a purple wisp of dark magic. " Likely story! That's the most stupidest thing I have ever heard! Here's the thing, demon: YOU killed Spike and left ME nothing to fight for!" She shouted as she pointed her right hoof at his face and then stamps it onto his chest. "MY FRIENDS! MY FAMILY! MY HUSBAND! AND EVERYONE ELSE I KNEW! *Sniff* SPIKE! *Sniff twice* TORTURED! MURDERED! DEAD! BECAUSE OF YOU AND EVERY SINGLE DEMON! YOU HANGED APPLEJACK AND HER FAMILY, ALONG WITH OTHER RELATIVES OF THE APPLE FAMILY! YOU TORTURED FLUTTERSHY BY KILLING EACH OF HER ANIMALS! THEN YOU TORTURED FLUTTERSHY TO DEATH! You clipped every single pegasus of their wings and broke the horns of every single unicorn, especially Celestia, Luna, and Cadence! Even Flurry Heart, who was STILL A BABY! You smashed every werewolf, including my husband and his mother and his little brother and even their friends and their families inside Peacetopia, WITH AN ASTEROID! But you didn't stop with them. Oh, no! You had to hunt down Thorax and the changelings, the yaks, the hippogriffs of Mt. Aris and the seaponies of Seaquestria! Next, the griffons of Griffonstone! And finally, you hunted down every single dragon until Ember, Smolder, Garble and his lackeys, Torch and... Spike.. were the last ones left!" She shouted as she explained every detail that everyone besides Twilight know that was the truth.

The Young6 walked forward a little from the crowd and close to Twilight and Spike. But, a distance, though. Smolder started to speak.

"Twilight, that isn't true," Smolder said with truth as she pointed her left finger to the corrupted pony.

"Quiet," Malachor Twilight said defiantly. "What you're saying is not true!" She pointed out with her right hoof. Gallus walked up on Smolder's right.

"Smolder's right, though, Twilight. Malachor must've messed with your mind!" Gallus said while swirling his talons around the sides of his head. Sandbar walked on Gallus's right side.

"Whatever Malachor put inside your head, those memories are false, Headmare Twilight," Sandbar pointed out with his right hoof.
Ocellus walked next to Sandbar.

"They aren't true! We're still alive, Headmare Twilight!" Ocellus said as she sat.

"Shut Up! And stop calling me THAT!" The black alicorn said.

"But, you're our teacher! Our friend. If you just listen to us, then everything will be okay," Silverstream said as she lends a claw of friendship to the alicorn.

"No! Why I should listen to you?! To demons, nonetheless! And everything will never be okay as long as you demons still live!" Malachor Twilight said as she covered the top of her head with her hooves.

"But Yona not like when you sad. Yona not like when one of Yona's friends sad," Yona said as she placed a hoof on her heart.

"I am NOT! YOUR! FRIEND! My friends are all DEAD because of you vile creatures!" Twilight said as she pointed out her right hoof to the yak and shed a tear from her left eye. She places her right hoof down and raises the other one to wipe her eye. "You know what, our little game ends here. For I will avenge my friends until I take my last breath!" Twilight said and then blasted the ceiling with a purple energy. Then, she jumps into the air and uses her magic to lift Spike's tail and fly up and out through the hole in the ceiling. The others followed, but some stayed. The ones that stayed were Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Flurry Heart, Torch, Grampa Gruff, Prince Rutherford, General Skybeak, Steven Magnet, and Night Light.

To Be Continued in Spike versus Malachor Twilight Part 2...

Author's Note

I hope you all enjoyed this short of my second story of Twilight being turned evil by another evil creature. See you later! Ciao!

Spike versus Malachor Twilight Chapter 4

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Spike versus Malachor Twilight Chapter 1

Spike raises his right fist up in the air to strike the final blow on the monster that turned him and the others into his monsters. But, Spike didn't, for he just stared at the evil being's red eyes. "Now. Where. Is. Twilight?" He said in anger. "I swear if you had anything to do with her disappearance, I swear I will punch you until your last breath!" Spike shouted.

"Fine. But let me ask you this: you remember how you had fallen?" Malachor asked sinisterly.

Spike opened his mouth. "Where are you going with this, Malachor?" He said in defiance.

"You remember when Tempest captured Trixie, you, Torch, Storm King and his guards, and others?"

"Yeah. You deceived her into giving her back her horn."

"Well, you see, I didn't give her any horn. I gave her Sombra's horn."

Spike was surprised. "That's not possible! Sombra was disentegrated by the magic of friendship!"

"Well, anything can be possible."

Spike shook his head to regain his courage. "I won't ask you again! WHERE IS SHE?! WHERE'S TWILIGHT?! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER?!" He screamed as he unfurled his claws.

"*chuckles* Why don't you ask her yourself?" Malachor chuckled. Enough of his madness, Spike pulled his arm back and then lunged forward to go for the kill. But, he was then hit right into the chest by a red blast. He fell down the thousand stairs and landed on his back. Discord ran to his right side while Storm King ran to his left. Together, the chaotic twins started to lift Spike, but not fully off the ground. For they saw a gray hooded figure standing behind Malachor's chair/throne. The gray cloaked figure pull their horn back, but when they did, all those who were at the bottom stood with open mouths as they were shocked to see who the hooded figure was. Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor and Flurry Heart were shocked, even Night Light and even his wife Twilight Velvet were shocked. But Velvet started shedding tears. Spike, Discord, and Storm were in disbelief.

"Twilight?" Spike said.