Determination's Fury
Chapter 1: Megalomaniac
Load Full StoryNext ChapterTwilight growled weight pressing down upon her whole body, her friends chained together by magic as hundreds of changelings escorted them through the gilded halls of Canterlot Castle. Twilight was angry, no furious her ‘friends’ had decided that she was in the wrong because of some mare they hadn’t met. Everything they had was now coming to an end because a stupid trick, everypony who she new was so easily fooled. Twilight had come into this world, she thought she had a second chance. A family who loved her, she had found her place but it was not to be.
Now her world was going to brought down the stupid bug bitch, no she was done with the foolishness and hiding. She was so sick of hiding the killer within, she looked at her so-called friends as they were all put before the mastermind behind the whole plan, the Changeling Queen Chrysalis descended with a grin “None of you listened to little miss bookworm and thus you are all here.”
Twilight was furious, this wedding a moment that she thought was meant to be full of tremendous joy was now a horrifying disaster that threatened to bring a nation to it’s kneed. Twilight however wasn’t willing to let this end the same way it did last time, The Queen raised an eyebrow as Twilight had gripped the her right foreleg firmly “That was foolish of you.”
She was going to wipe out these parasites if they didn’t leave, Twilight in singsong voice “A friend of mine always told me to give my enemies a warning, so leave now before you all die.” A pitch black rectangle began to materialise behind her as she closed her eyes “The choice is yours, choose wisely.”
Queen Chrysalis scoffed “As if you could, I took out your precious Princess Celestia. What could you possibly have that would even give you the idea you could win.” She was too caught up in her own ego, she didn’t notice the faint red glow around Twilight as she continued “We’ll destroy you, you arrogant mare!”
Twilight grinned, all the changelings holding her ‘friends’ instantly were crushed into paste while every pony in the room was pinned to the walls. She tapped the Queen sending her barrelling into the wall, she reared up onto her hind legs her fur retracting her skin turning a yellow colour.
Her tricoloured mane shrunk back into a light brown mop of hair, her hind legs elongated forming feet at the bottom while her front legs got slightly longer developing into hands at the end. A blue and purple striped shirt materialised on her upper body, a pair of brown shorts and boots formed on her lower body.
Her grin grew malicious “You see, I am powered by Determination and a lot of LOVE but not the Love that you know of. It stands for Level of Violence, and Queen Chrysalis” her face turned dark as she scowled as her eyelids lifted revealing red slitted eyes “I will kill you!”

Chrysalis felt the air grow heavy with power, she felt a dark feeling in the air. Not to mention what the strange creature that was once a pony said, it was not something to reassure her friends. Ponies were soft creature but there was something dark within this one, she screamed as before she could even move a red power fueled slash destroyed one of her wings.
Twilight frowned “I hope my old friend doesn't mind if I am using some of their techniques” she shrugged “It’s not like I’ll ever see him again.” Chrysalis’s eyes widened as she saw the red glowing knife in Twilight’s hands.
The Queen screamed a she tried to get away “How did you get so much power? It should be impossible!” Twilight shrugged not feeling like explaining herself again, especially to a stupid and soon to be dead bug as her knife glowed before sending an explosive wave of energy at the downed Queen.
Twilight then runs toward the bleeding Queen and lifts her up into the air her red eyes glowing fiercely “Now I have one simple easy question to ask, do you want to have a bad time?!”
Chrysalis spits on the former mare’s face “You are a pathetic weak species trying to be greater than us mighty Changelings, why can’t you just submit to us like prey should.”
Twilight shrugged “Well it’s not the first time I’ve chosen Genocide, I guess I have to it again.” A powerful red blade formed in her hand, the same hand that held the Queen’s throat. She casually tossed the Queen’s corpse onto the ground, she pulled the sword out of the Queen’s body as her LV increased to 20, Twilight turned back to see her former friends, her former foal-sitter, her former mentor and her brother watching her in absolute horror “You all better have a good reason for turning on me, especially you Princess” her eyes narrowed at Celestia “If you don’t, I may not stop when I get back.”
Twilight then turned to the horde of Changelings who were ready to get vengeance for their monarch. She growled “COME ON THEN BUGS, TRY TO KILL ME I DARE YOU! YOU SHOULD KNOW I HAVEN’T HAD TO USE A LOAD IN A WHILE, MAYBE YOU CAN ENTERTAIN ME!” The crowds watching Twilight were stunned as changelings dropped out of the sky in bloody heaps.
Fluttershy whimpered as he hid behind Applejack “I’m scared.”
Cadence growled as she turned back to the group “I require some answers, what caused Twilight to go crazy like this?!”
Applejack raised an eyebrow “From what she said, it appear as she was always like this?”
Cadence’s voice boomed “How dare you swear that sweet filly, that I knew was capable of this without a push explain yourselves!” Twilight’s ‘five’ friends were unsure who was going to give it to them worst, Cadence or Twilight.
Before any of them could answer Twilight had already returned, her eyes looking between the ponies in the room “I am waiting for an apology!” They had all gulped as they clearly knew who was worse.
Author's Note
So tell me what you think of this story, I am not sure how this is going to be received.
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