Rewrite The Stars

by Artistkun

Prince Shinning Star

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Twilight Sparkle was playing with her daughter Sunshine Sparkle. She was having the time of her life and her daughter makes her day even brighter than the others. She would sometimes cancel her meetings when Sunshine would tell her to come play with her which Twilight couldn't deny her daughter's request. Her door opened to reveal Rarity with her daughter Applejewel who rushes to Sunshine and both of the fillies started to play The Knight and The Princess.

"It's lovely to see you Queen Twilight". Rarity said as she bows to Twilight which made the alicorn feel uncomfortable because her best friend is doing this to her. "Ra-Rarity, you don't need to be so formal with me, we're best friends". Twilight said.

"I know darling but the title fits you". Rarity smiled and both of them watched as their daughters were playing with each other that it never fails to put smiles on their faces.

"It just feels weird when you girls call me that. Are they coming here as well Rarity?"

"Yes Twilight. My Jackie is taking care something on the farm and told me that she will catch up with the others, Sunshine really does look like her".

"Yeah..... I really miss her but it's for the best". Twilight sighed and looks down remembering the human she had fell in love with.

"I'm sure she will come back for you someday, you'll never know".

"But the portal was shattered by the princess herself.... There's no way Sunset would come back to save me". Sunshine's ears perk up when she heard her mom had said that name again.

"Mom I know I keep asking this but who's Sunset? You would sometimes mention that name but you never told me who the pony is". Sunshine said.

"Oh sweetie.... I will tell you when you're old enough to understand". Twilight said as she embraces her daughter.

"I just don't want to see you sad mom". Sunshine replied and left her mother's arms to play with Applejewel again.

Then, the door opened wide to see Twilight Sparkle's friends happily greeted her with a hug and their kids went towards Sunshine to play with her. They all left the kids to Sunshine's room and went to the throne room to talk, they were all having a lively and awesome conversation until the door opened to reveal Twilight's personal guard and was in love with her.... Flash Sentry. He smugly smiled and went to Twilight bravely which annoyed them.

"Your highness, since their are no other suitors that can take your hoof in marriage how about you and me get married. I'll be the suitor you wish to have". Flash said.

"Listen here buster, Twilight will never in a million moons would marry the likes of you!!" Pinkie shouted.

"Besides Flash, She already got a special somepony in her mind". Applejack said glaring at the guard.

"You're just jealous that I didn't choose you ladies I mean Rainbow there is married to Fluttershy, Rarity is married to Applejack, don't get me started on Pinkie Pie who married Princess Skystar". Pinkie growled and Applejack bites her tail to stop her.

"YOU TAKE THAT BACK!"

"Um darlings".

"You leave Dashie out of this!"

"I don't know why Princess Celestia entrusted you to Twilight!"

"DARLINGS!"

"WHAT RARITY?!"

They all stop when they heard and feel the ground was shaking. They heard the kids were screaming which made Twilight teleport herself and the others except for Flash to the balcony and the kids were frighten when they saw a bunch of maidens, guards, animals, and a marching band. Twilight looks at her friends in confusion and looks back at the event that was happening. She saw the ponies were looking happy and the kids were happy because of the music. Twilight saw a stallion wearing a butler outfit, his coat was white, black maned, and a pegasus.

"I thought there were no suitors left to become my husband?" Twilight asked.

"Never listen to Flash, Twilight". Applejack said.

Just play this as you read. I chose this because its really catchy and funny

"Make way for Prince Shining!"

"Say hey! It's Prince Shining!"

"Hey! Clear the way in the old bazaar Hey you! Let us through! It's a brand new star! Oh come, be the first on your block to meet his eye!" The stallion sang and the crowd cheered, Sunshine Sparkle watch in awe on how colorful the parade was. Twilight Sparkle levitates her daughter and puts Sunshine above her head for a better view.

"Make way! Here he comes! Ring bells! Bang the drums! You're gonna love this guy!" Then they all look where the stallion was pointing at. It was a stallion with gray coat, black mane, and a pegasus just like the butler. Twilight Sparkle couldn't take her eyes off the pegasus who can tell that he is her suitor.

"Prince Shining! Fabulous he! Prince Shinning Star".

The girls couldn't help but dance to the song that was being played by the stallion. Twilight Sparkle noticed that her daughter was laughing with joy as she was watching Prince Shinning doing some flying tricks which look like it was more awesome than Dash's Wonderbolt performance. Then they stop in front of the castle and it seems like the song hasn't ended since they were waiting for the Queen's approval.

"Prince A- we're waiting for you! We're not going 'til you go" The stallion said as he was hoping Twilight would open the gate. The queen looks at her friends which they nod in approval.

"You can do it!" Then, Twilight taps her hoof on the railing of her balcony with a smile on her face.

"There it is!"


"Where is the princess?" Shining asked as he feels so nervous while his brother who was the butler from earlier name Starry Night who looked calm.

"She will be here soon, you don't rush a queen brother"

"SHE'S A WHAT NOW?!"

"Shush! You're going to embarrass both of us so shut your mouth and just be yourself!".

"I didn't even know she's a queen! Aw ponyfeathers I'm such a mess!"

"I said zip it Star she's coming". Starry said and the doors opened to reveal Twilight and Rarity coming towards them and Flash by their side. Shining gulps nervously and bows awkwardly which made Starry facehoof.

"Pleasure to meet you Prince Shinning Star and I welcome you to Canterlot". Twilight said.

"It-It's just as much.... a pleasure for me... your highness ma'am!" Shining yelled because of his nervousness and covers his mouth and looks away in embarrassment. He heard a giggle and looks up to see a little filly giggling, Twilight levitated the filly and puts her down.

"Mom he looks like a dork" Sunshine laughed.

"Sweetie, be nice to the prince". Twilight cooed and Sunshine shuts her mouth.

"I apologize for my brother's behavior Queen Twilight. I am Starry Night and he is just nervous to see you, he has been since we left". Starry said which took Twilight by surprise because her previous suitors were forward with her but Shining is different.

"I don't want to interrupt but what kingdom are you from?" Rarity asked.

"We're from a far away kingdom my lady". Starry replied.

"I need the name not location". Rarity said.

"Well my lady I came from Rainy Skies!" Shining said and Starry facehoof again.

"I am not familiar with that kingdom". Flash said and Sunshine was looking at Shining because there's something about the prince that... she felt that she had a connection with him.

"Wel-Well if you um look at the map, you can see it there!" Shining nervously smiles and suddenly frowned when Twilight began to laugh. The prince got a little upset because he made a fun of himself again.

"I am really sorry your highness".

"N-No! You look really cute when your embarrass". Twilight covered her mouth and both of them blushed.

"Th-Thank you". Shining said and Starry Night cleared his throat.

"It's lovely to meet you really but I'm going to have to say no".

"What do you mean?" Shining and Starry asked in confusion why Queen Twilight had said.

"I don't accept you as my suitor". Then a roar of laughter was heard and Sunshine joined in the laugh because she thought it was fun. Twilight raised a brow in confusion to why the brothers were laughing. They stopped and look at the queen again.

"We're here to be friends with you".

"Say what now?"

"Do all of your suitors make a grand entrance or am I the first?" Shining asked.

"We-Well no and yes you are". Twilight said.

"Well I just thought if I can be friends with you". Shining said.

He is different..... Oh no! I can't! Sunset Shimmer is the only one for me!

"I already found a place to spend the night your highness, You don't need to worry about me staying in this huge castle. We good? Okay bye!" Shining immediately flew away from the halls and Starry bowed before he followed his brother.

Queen Twilight Sparkle looks down at the ground blushing furiously. This was the first time that she had feelings for a suitor but Prince Shining only wanted to be friends with her, she felt a hoof touching her shoes and she looks to see her daughter smiling.

Come to think of it.... Sunshine didn't prank him

"I like him! Can you and Shining be together?" Sunshine asked.

"Ho-Honey you see..... I'm still waiting for your father to come". Twilight said as she nuzzle her daughter.

"Bu-But he never came!" Sunshine said.

"It takes time sweetie now go play with the others". Twilight kissed her daughter's cheek and Sunshine ran off to look for her friends.

"That turned out different". Rarity said.

"Tell me about it". Rainbow replied


"That was really embarrassing!"

"Well Starry it worked didn't it?"

They both were unpacking their stuff at their room and cleaning before they could call it a day.

"I'm starting to regret leaving home". Starry said.

"You said we're in this together and we really need to thank Discord and Pinkie for the wonderful parade we did". Shining happily said.

"Yeah remind me". Starry said as he cleans the floor.

"I can't believe she became queen. That means I don't have to worry about Princess Celestia".

"I didn't know she had a kid as well".

"The little fill sure is cute, I think she likes me!" Shining said.

"Don't keep your hopes up brother".

"You know we're just turned into stallions right?" Shining asked.

"I know and I just got use to calling you this.... How long are we going to lie to Twilight?" Starry asked.

"We will tell her when the time is right. It will take a while". Shining said.


Author's Note

Song: Prince Ali

Original: Robin Williams

Revamp: Will Smith

Movie: Aladdin (1992)

Live Action: Aladdin (2019)

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