Journey of the Quiet Mare

by Polaris Solarmoon

Rating: everyone
Tags: Alternate Universe, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Adventure, Slice of Life
Length: 1515

A story starring Mena Pie from the Final View universe.

Mena Pie is a rather shy pony, so shy in fact that she hardly ever goes outside, some say her shy nature came about when she was a little filly others blame the Sonic Flowerboom for scaring her. Either way she won't tell a soul as she is mute and cannot speak.

Published 2019-05-19 03:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2019-05-19 03:20:01 UTC

The Smart Mare

Mena found that it would be wise to watch as to when she meet Whisper Wing in the future for now she goes to find her friend Diamond at the library.

As she went on her way a few ponies would pass by and wave at her and she would go and return the favor then countinue over to the library which was open,so she walked in.

Diamond was quick to greet Mena when she stepped inside and told her to sit down and enjoy herself in which Mena does so.

"Mena? Would you like anything?" Diamond asked the mute mare as she was just about to read a book.

Mena takes out her notepad and quill then writes,"Some tea would be nice, thank you Diamond.", she then shows Diamond what she wrote.

"Ah alright then,i'll go get you some tea" Diamond said. "I'll be right back." Diamond then heads to her kitchen and makes the tea. As Diamond was busy making tea, Mena goes to read the book she was just about to read earlier. The book itself was on birds, which was one of Mena's favorite books to read.

After a little while Diamond would return with some tea for herself and Mena, the latter smiling as Diamond sets the tea down with her magic.

"Enjoy." Diamond said.

Mena happily does the hoofsign for thank you then drinks her tea afterwards she waves goodbye then heads off to the boutique to see Crystal Apple.

Author's Note

Another short chapter, what meaning do they serve?

The Generous Mare

Mena left the library with a small spring in her step, it felt very good to be out of her shell now a days and now she is going to see her friend Crystal Apple who lives and works at the Crystal Boutique.

On her way there she met with the C.M.C. or Cutie Mark Crusaders if you want the long name, the two little fillies (and one Mare ) all waved at Mena when she passed by them. Mena being the kind pony she is happily waves back, she wasn't surprised at all to see her twin sister there.

"Where are ya headed Sis?" Her twin would say.

Mena smiles then draws a pretty detailed picture of the Crystal Boutique in the dirt with a stick she found.

"Okay, we'll see you later Mena!" her twin says before she left, the other two members waving goodbye.

Mena eventually finds the Crystal Boutique in all of it glory and goes to head inside but is stopped by a rather familiar pony, Spitfire.

"Well now, your that mare from before right?" Spitfire said.

Mena nods and trys to go past her but Spitfire blocks the way.

"Whoa hold it kiddo, I'm not letting you go nowhere till you tell me how I can get Whisper Wing into the Wonderbolts, your so quiet you have to know something!" Spitfire says but recives nothing more then a tilt of the head from Mena who simply grabs Spitfire's front leg and starts to twist it backwards.

"Ow! Ow! I give! I give! I'll leave her alone okay!" Spitfire said.

Mena smiles then lets her go, Spitfie then flys off. Mena satisfied with herself walks into the boutique with hardly a scratch on her.

"Oh welcome Mena, is there anything I can do for you darling?" Crystal Apple says once Mena got inside.

Mena shakes her head No then gets out her notepad and Quill and writes," I was only wondering how you were doing Crystal.", she then shows it to her.

"Oh I see, I'm doing quite well my friend and you?" Crystal Apple said.

Mena simply smiles which ment that she was doing just as well.

"Oh thats good, I heard Spitfire outside. Did she give you any trouble?" Crystal Apple said.

Mena shakes her head.

"How wonderful! Well it was rather nice of you to visit but I guess your rather tired and want to go home. I'll see you tomorrow dear." Crystal Apple said.

Mena waves goodbye then happily heads back home.

Author's Note

The last of the short chapters... This is also the final chapter as well I hope you all like this story.

The Quiet Mare.

This is not an ordinary story, as this isn't an ordinary beginning and Mena Pie isn't an ordinary mare.

Mena is a shy introvert that keeps to herself and is a mute, that means she never speaks to make things more simple. She is the Element of Kindness. excerpt from Diamond's Bio's of the Final View Six circa 201X.

It was a rather nice morning toaday, the birds were singing their songs and not a cloud was in the sky, Mena Pie was happily enjoiying the day and was watering some flowers. When she finished she looked at her to-do list and saw that she needed to go and see her friends and so she put her watering can away, locked her door then went to go see her friends.

She made her way over to the nearby farm and saw that Sparks Twilight was there, so she went to wave hello.

"Oh Howdy Mena, How y'all doin' ?" The kind farm mare said.

Mena smiled and brought out a blank notebook then wrote down, "I'm doing well you?" in it then showed Sparks the page.

"That's good to see err hear, sorry parter ah keep forgettin' your mute." Sparks says.

Mena hugs Sparks to show her that she hardly needed to apologize for such a small little mistake, Sparks smiled and then let Mena go on her way.

Author's Note

This will be a rather short chapter but I have an idea of what to do with it so stay tuned.

The Hyper Mare.

Mena seemed happy after meeting with Sparks as she continued on her way to town, She would sometimes stop in place and watch the birds as they fly around and sing their songs.

Mena then mentally decided to leave and look for her friend Whisper Wing. It wouldn't even be hard to find her, She and Windy are never far apart. Mena smiles then heads over to the bakery.

Once she eventually makes it to bakery, she was greeted by Windy Prism who had then gave her a chocolate cupcake on the house.

"Hiya Mena! How are you?" Windy said.

Mena smiled then get her note pad and quill and then writes down," I'm fine Windy, you do remember I'm mute correct?", She then shows Windy the message.

"Oh right, sorry Mena. Well I'm happy your doing okay. Oh if your looking for Whisper Wing,she's not here right now." Windy said.

Mena does the hoofsign for thank you then puts three bits on the counter for the muffin Windy originally gave her on the house.

"Whoa, no need to pay for the muffin Mena, it wouldn't be very fair." Windy says right as Mena gets out her notepad and Quill.

Mena simply writes,"It's okay Windy I must pay for these every once in awhile or ponies will get jealous.", she then shows this to Windy.

"Okay I get it,well I'll be seeing you!" Windy said

Mena waves goodbye then leaves.

Author's Note

These small chapters have a purpose...

The Fastest Mare.

Mena smiles to herself as she walked around town, she was so happy that she felt like bouncing around town but she mentally decided that it would be too much and ponies would stare.

It did not take her very long to find Whisper Wing as she was currently being interviewed by the Wonderbolts Captain who appered to be trying to recruit her and is failing to do so.

"Look your the fastest mare ever! Your records are unchallenged and your the only mare we know that can pefrom the Sonic Flowerboom! You would be a great asset to the team!" The Wonderbolts Captain says as Whisper Wing looked at her in an uninterested way.

"I know Spitfire, you've told me that many times before and I've told you guys and girls no the same number of times as that would mean I'd have to leave my friends behind and you should know that I'll never do that." Whisper Wing says as Mena approached them.

"And I keep telling you that you won't have to! We've seen what you can do!" Spitfire said, she clearly was desperate from what Mena could tell.

Whisper Wing would sigh then say, "Sorry Spitfire but the answer is no."

"Argh! Fine! " Spitfire says before flying off in a huff.

Whisper Wing then sees Mena walk up to her and wave hello

"Oh hey Mena, sorry you had to see that." Whisper Wing said.

Mena smiles then pats Whisper Wing on the back.

"Thanks Mena, I'll see you later." Whisper Wing would say before flying off at her impressive speed.

Mena smiles to herself then walks away.

Author's Note

But what is the purpose of these short chapters?