
Redemption of a Broken Mare
Twilight lost everything on that day, her friends, her teacher, and her family. Her entire world was ripped away from her and distorted into a disgusting perversion of what she held to be true. Now after twenty years she has returned, but not for personal revenge. No, she has come to avenge the world for the destruction brought onto it by the Alicorn Zlamana. Will she be able to bring back harmony to the world?
My first mature story, don't get used to it. The only reason I've rated it mature is because of the gore and violence. The ending, however, is a lot happier than many would initially expect. I wrote this as a bit of practice on writing fight scenes, so the story in this is kind of lacking and the passing is rather fast, it's meant to be judged by the fight scene more than anything else. Also while writing this, I figured out how to get "In Zone" while writing and it made the last few paragraphs a lot easier to write, so I plan to use this in the future in Imperfect to shorten the hiatus, so yah for that!
Anyway, I hope you all enjoy!
Another amazing cover art by Julunis14! Please go give her some love she really does deserve it.


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- Redemption of a Broken Mare 2019-05-13 06:48:03 UTC4072