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FlutterYou

by Capulus
My first Second Person Story. Enjoy! Romance between Fluttershy and 'You'.

--Second Person Story featuring You and Fluttershy--

--Alright, this is the first time I have ever written a second-person story, so make sure to tear me apart in the comments. Seriously. I don’t want sugarcoated stuff. If it is bad, let me know and tell me how bad it is. If it’s good, make sure to let me know, as I have plans for a few more stories like this, with each of the mane six, and perhaps one or two background ponies. Maybe even Celestia or Luna. But I’m getting ahead of myself. Now, on to the extremely vague and cliched description as I am never good at writing these!--

You are a pegasus, and love flying through dangerous spots. But what if one of those spots is too dangerous? One night while flying, you crash and are seriously injured. You could’ve died, if a gentle yellow pegasus hadn’t of been nearby at the time. She offers to take you in. While living with her, you need to adjust to all the nature that is suddenly all around you; You have lived in apartment buildings all your life. And now you are feeling something weird about her. What is it?

Everyone
Complete
Romance
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
FO

20128 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

9 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 - Ouch. (New) 2012-08-10 23:20:49 UTC
    2072
  2. Chapter 2 - Finally Out. (New) 2012-08-16 01:30:58 UTC
    2564
  3. Chapter 3 - New Homecoming 2012-08-14 05:28:45 UTC
    3643
  4. Chapter 4 - Meeting Some New Ponies 2012-08-14 05:40:21 UTC
    2135
  5. Chapter 5 - PART-AY! 2012-08-15 21:12:47 UTC
    1972
  6. Chapter 6 - Eeyup. 2012-08-14 22:56:46 UTC
    2138
  7. Chapter 7 - Not Now, Not Ever. 2012-08-16 21:01:27 UTC
    2288
  8. Chapter 8 - Forever, For Always. 2012-08-16 21:01:03 UTC
    2468
  9. Epilogue - A Perfect Moment 2012-08-17 01:02:16 UTC
    848