The Moon's Retribution

by Grey Vicar

First published

In a land fractured by strife and and discord, two brave unicorn mares stood for the hope of a new era. Luna, a careful diplomat, and Celestia, a fearsome warrior, sisters united by the wish of seeing the world at peace.

But what's a mare to do when her sister, the greatest warrior in the land, is taken away by mysterious forces and dragged to a cursed land from which no one ever came back from?

Take up a sword she can barely use, and give them chase, that's what.


This story was written for the May 2019 class of the School For New Writers.

Huge thanks to ChudoJogurt for helping me with this story.