Wrongfully Imprisoned

by SarpZ

Rating: teen
Tags: Princess Celestia, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Human, Sad, Princess Luna, Drama, Fluttershy, Twilight Sparkle
Length: 1729

A person who finds himself in Equestria has imprisoned in the worst way.

Vincent Carlton, a normal person finds himself in land full of talking colorful horses. While he wants to return to his home, he meets his horrible destiny. But... what happened when he freed?

Published 2019-06-06 23:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2019-06-23 18:12:15 UTC

Chapter 2: What Do You Call A Hairless Ape Like Thing?

Chapter 2

Storyteller POV
As Vincent came to the village, he started to search for someone to learn where he was. Vincent realized something about this place: The rooves of the houses made out of hay and the walls were made out of stone which is coated with clay. The doors and windows were wooden and there was no street lights around to light up the night. This winced Vincent a little. Vincent was about to reach the center of the village while he heard people talking. And he heard hoofsteps aswell. "Clip clop clip clop".

Vincent inhaled deeply with joy. "Finally someone to talk!" As he walked towards the center, he had a great shock because of the scene he saw. Colorful, cartoonish horses everywhere! And the weirdest fact was, he was sure some people were talking but there was no sign of humanity to be seen. It did't take so long for Vincent to figure out that the ones who were speaking are these horses...

Vincent POV
I couldn't believe it... Horses... Speaking horses who lives just like humans. I just stared at this scene, I tried to pull myself together. I quickly dashed back to street I jumped out before. "What did I just see there?" I sneaked my head out to double check. "I am not dreaming, there are talking, colorful horses out there." I encouraged myself to get there and face this reality. With a final sigh, I got out the corner I was hiding. Walking slowly, and have no idea what am I going to do. In a short while, everybo-pony noticed me of course. They were whispering to eachother as I walk past them. Some fillies were hiding behind their parents, normally: They see an ape-like creature which stands on two legs and with a weird clothing.

Chapter 3: Fluttershy

Chapter 3

Vincent POV

"Oh my... what is that thing?" "Some sort of monkey maybe?" "Ew, who brought thşs hairless ape here?" "Look at that body shape of its, so weird." "I wonder if it talks..."

I was just about to shout with the whole air in my lungs because of the comments has made towards me before a feminine voice cut me off "Oh you poor thing." I turned to see the owner of the voice.

Another horse with yellow coat, pink mane and blue eyes was in front of me. "You must be lost aren't you?"

I opened my mouth to answer but she cut me off. "But don't worry, you are lucky that I found you. I love taking care of animals like you no matter what."

Did she just call me an animal? Theorically yes, humans are animals but I felt offended for this. I was about to correct her but suddenly she took my hand and pulled me over. I wonder how did she do that even she doesn't have any fingers though.

Storyteller POV

After a few minutes, Vincent and Fluttershy arrived at her house. Or at least that's what Vincent heard they call her.

"Now first things first." said Fluttershy. "You seemed to be hanging out for a while, you must be hungry. Fluttershy opened the fridge and took put a few carrots, cucumbers and a glass of milk.

"I-I" Vincent wanted to talk but he was cut off by Fluttershy again.

"Alright now little one..." Little one? Vincent was sure he was way taller than her! Fluttershy picked up the cucumber and stretched towards his mouth. "Open wide to choo choo train in!" Okay this was enough...

Vincent couldn't hold himself and shouted "Excuse me but will you please let me talk?!" After this he felt relaxed: As if he was freed from chains which were holding him.

Fluttershy was shocked. "C-Can you talk?"

Vincent smiled widely after this. "Thank god! Yes I can talk, see? I-Can-Talk!" He spelled.

Fluttershy was still staring at him. "Sweet Celestia... Apes shouldn't be able to talk should they?"

Vincent's face dropped again. "First of all, I am not an ape okay? Stop calling me an ape!" he protested her.

"I-I'm sorry, but I don't know what you are. You seemed like an ape." said Fluttershy. "W-What are you then?"

"I am a Homo-Sapien: Human in other words. Humans are intelligent, thinking, civilized life forms." explained Vincent.

"Hu-Humans? I've never heard of them before." Said Fluttershy as she put a hoof on her chin. "Should I just call you Human?"

"No no. I-I have a name: My name is Vincent Carlton." Vincent introduced himself. "But you can call me V for short. And if I'm correct, other horses call you, Fluttershy."

Fluttershy giggled quietly. "Yes, my name is Fluttershy. And we are ponies"

"Ponies... right."

Author's Note

Welp here it is. Dude At least 1000 words to post? That's annoying. Anyway I still need an editor.

Chapter 1: Beginning

Chapter 1

It was a sunny day, birds singing, little fillies out to play, everypony minds their own business. Everyone seems to enjoy their lives, some of them hanging out with firends and stuff like that. Except me: The only human in Equestria. My name is Vincent Carlton and this is my story of how I experienced to be imprisoned in the worst way.

Flashback - Seven Years Ago

Well to be honest, I can't actually remember how I got here but I just did. When I woke up and looked around to see where am I; I won't lie, I was impressed. The weather is so clean, no sign of vehicles that I must have used to hear their noises all day, no great buildings and skyscrapers: Only the beautiful sun -which is I don't rather call it beautiful now- white clouds and blue sky: It was fascinating. "I must be in heaven!" I thought. But even after all this, there must be civilisation right? So I got up and started to wonder around with a hope to find someone who lives nearby.

Storyteller POV

After minutes of wandering, Vincent finally found what he wanted. It was a village that he found. "Finally!" whispered Vincent as he walked through the entrance. But soon, he was about to find out a really weird fact in there.

Author's Note

So yeah it was a short chapter for a plot like this. But no problemo because I have already written 4 chapters and all I have to do is, writing in here. It will be more then five chapters though. I may have grammar mistakes (which I definetely have) and I need an editor to help me. So if anyone who can help me with this, leave a comment about it.

Chapter 3: Part 2

Chapter 2 Part 3

Vincent POV

"Ponies... right." I suddenly realized I still had no idea where I was. "And can you tell me where am I right now?"

"You are in the land of Equestria!" said Fluttershy proudly. "The place where everypony lives in harmony."

Equestria? Everypony? They were using the word "pony" instead of "body". In this condition, it was fair enough. "Well is this place some sort of country?" Yeah this was a foolish question to ask but what can I say?

"Kind of." replied Fluttershy.

"Are there any countries then?" I asked.

"Well to be honest, I don't know much but there are a few I do know: Olenia, Aquestria, Crystal Empire and Stalliongrad." She counted. "And there are lands which creatures called changelings live in."

I had no idea what was she talking about. Only that Stalliongrad cought my attention: Reminded me Stalingrad of USSR back in World War II years. Wait, what if I'm in a lost continent or something? To find out, I decided to count the ones I know. "What about United States of America? United Kingdom? Russia? China? France? Turkey, maybe?"

Fluttershy just glanced at my face blankly. "I-I beg your pardon?"

Yep. I wasn't in Earth anymore that's for sure...

Author's Note

Heyo, second part of third chapter here. So I reached around 130 views, good I guess? Anyways, I wanted to say if you find any mistakes, feel free to make criticism and write your thoughts on comments. And I know nothing important happened until now but be patient, I am not gonna cancel or rush with this story: I'll do my best.

Chapter 3: Part 3

Chapter 3 Part 3

Storyteller POV

Vincent was pacing up and down. "This can't be... I am not on Earth... How did I even got here? What have I been doing before I got here?" he was whispering to himself anxiously.

"Uhm... Mr V, are you alright?" asked Fluttershy

Vincent turned to Fluttershy as if he forgot she was here with him. The yellow pony was watching him with a confused expression on her face. "Listen uh... F-Flutershy, it might sound weird but it seems like I came here from another world o-or another universe or another planet... or something like that." Vincent loved watching sci-fi films back on Earth, that's how he came up with this idea.

"How come? You're saying you are not from Equestria?" Fluttershy was shocked.

"Y-Yes' Excatly! I-I'm-"

"Where are you from then?" Fluttershy cut off.

Vincent was about to have a mindblow but then, he calmed himself with a sigh. "I'm from planet Earth. A world which is similar to here."

Fluttershy put her hoof on her chin. "I see. And how did you get here?"

Vincent's jumped out again. "That's the problem! I have no idea." yelled nervously by opening hid arms to each sides. "B-But I have to go back! I have a life there! My friends, my family, my home, my everything!" he almost had an heart attack but he slowed down again. "You don't suppose you can help me with this... Do you?" Fluttershy was staring at her, trying to figure out the whole situation. Vincent covered his eyes with his hands. "Oh... Now I am doomed."

After finally pulling herself together, an idea came to Flutterhy's mind. "M-Mr V? I think... my friend Twilight can help you... She is really good at magic, maybe she can help you." said Fluttershy as she shrugged.

Vincent just stared blankly at Fluttershy after what she said about magic.