Fluffy Raptor Cyborgs From Space

by Undertotem

Rating: teen
Tags: Princess Celestia, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Main 6, Princess Luna, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Other, Adventure
Length: 3148

The Protogen, a race of superior beings created to explore the outer unknown reaches of space. Once certain Protogen who was traveling the universe to better medicine, gets hit by a stray meteor, then proceeds to land in a planet filled with ponies.

M-10, nickname Mio, is a Combat Medic Protogen, his personal task is to travel the unknown universe in search for various materials, herbs, healing agents, antidotes, etc. in order to expand the knowledge in medicine and in medical ways. Part of his personal task is to travel even the most dangerous planets, areas, and biomes, and even try to fight even the most terrifying of abominations just to discover, retrieve, make, and mass produce medicine and healing practices for the benefit of both the Primagen and the Protogen, as well as help peaceful species who need it.

During his travels, his field scanner was left occupied, and was unluckily hit by a stray passing meteor, unluckily hitting the engines, and unluckily falling into orbit in an unidentified planet.

I honestly just thought about this and decided to make one, Protogens are cool. Either way this is just something to make for fun.

Drawings bad, don't tell me.

Published 2020-01-20 03:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2020-01-20 03:50:01 UTC

Crash Landing

"The Protogen, created by the DSBR, also known as Deep Space Bio-tech Research, were the first ever series before the created Primagen. They were made to explore the deep reaches space and record everything that comes to their interest. There are different types of Protogens roaming the expanded universe, all acquiring information at their own pace. The Protogens are about 40% artificial and have a fully functioning digestive tract. As well as either biological or artificial limbs, that is modular. Meaning the artificial limbs are sort of a plug and play system. Eating for their part, is not a hassle. They can eat almost anything, as long as it gives their bodies the proper nutrients to survive. 'How are they able to do this?' You ask, well the simple answer is due to their particle visor. When eating, their visors break down all organic and some in-organic materials to their base structure to give their bodies the necessary nutrients it needs. Just remember, the Protogens are made to seek knowledge and peace to all equally peaceful living organisms across the vast universe. And always remember, "Knowledge is Everything". -This advertisement is brought to you by, DSBR, the production of perfect lifeforms is always on the go." The advertisement showed in one of the orange holo-panels of the ships terminal. As soon as the advertisement ended, all following ads were removed on command, and the orange holo-panel reverted back to showing the ships status.

The sound of claws hitting metal was being heard through the ship, as the being from whom the claws belong to move towards the ships piloting console. The Protogen had blue fur for his primary colors, and turquoise green as his secondary colors. His white alloy plating across his chest, on his shoulders, as well as his wide hips are all clean and spotless of dirt. An orange glow comes from his shoulders and the side of his hips, showing a thin orange cross, across the nanite field. An orange glow also emits from the particle visor of the Protogen, showing a orange jagged pattern on where the mouth should be, and orange curves and circles for the nose and eyes respectively. The Protogen was designated as M-10 (Medic Series No. 10), or as he would like to be preferred as, Mio.

Mio was listening to music as he approached the ships pilot console, to start moving the ship forward through the endless space. He then sat down on the pilots chair and opened the consoles holo-panels and held the consoles yoke, basically the ships steering wheel. He then fiddled with a few holo-panels, then held a lever near the side of the yoke, and pushed forward, to increase the photon engines power. The then flipped a few switches and pressed a few buttons, and finally placed his hand on a horizontal lever. He then counted from 5 to 1, then pushed the lever forwards, activating the ships FTL drive.

"Hmmmm..... for beings who just started multi world exploration, humans sure do make good music." Mio said while listening on the ongoing music, humming along with the rhythm of the song as his ship flies though space in light speed. The ship that he currently owned was a Nexus class Avali Frigate Ship, that can hold about 8 more crew members, excluding drones and service bots. While the hull of the ship could only take so much hull damage, the ship boasts in large amounts energy shield power, even in its small frame.

Mio got the Nexsus Ship from an Avali colony planet, unfortunately his previous ship had a malfunctioning photon engine, so he had to do an emergency landing on an unregistered planet, but fortunately he did manage to find some friendly colonists in the planet. In the end, he had to sell his previous ship, but saved a few essential ship components and modules that he installed as soon as he bought a new ship that came from one of the ship merchants in the hanger of the colony.

The Nexus was flying through the endless space, traveling faster than the eye could see. Soon the Nexus stopped traveling, and was now floating near another unknown solar system. Weirdly enough, the solar system only had one planet, a sun and a moon around the planet. This may be unusual or even impossible to others, but for Mio, this was just uncommon, and would not even consider the phenomenon a rare sight. Mio was surveying the rather small system, safely scanning the planet from a safe distance. But what he did not manage to survey and scan was a stray space rock approaching his ship at high velocity. Unfortunately, this went unnoticed by the Protogen, due to the ships field scanner being occupied, due to it being used to survey the planet below the ship.

The space rock soon hit the Nexus ship, but not the hull of the ship. The meteor hit one of the most important things the ship needs, in order to function properly. The Photon Engines. As the space rock hit the ships engines, the whole ship shook, due to the explosion that occured, and the Protogen fell forward, face first, into a control terminal. Mio then stood up and rubbed the back of his head to relieve some pain. Just then the ships lights turned red giving out a warning signal, and Mio's ears went down, with a deadpan expression on his visor. He then looked at the main console, and saw the warning the ship was projecting, it was projecting damaged engines. Mio sighed as he hanged his head down, then stood back up to move towards the main console. Everything was fine, until the ship suddenly jerked forward, making the Protogen loose his sense of balance, and his face meeting another friend named console.

It was near the end of the night and Princess Luna was making last minute changes to the night sky before she forgets about it the next night. She was moving some stars to their designated positions, as well as setting up the annual Star Fall (Meteor shower) of the year, for ponies and other creatures to see tomorrow night. She was moving some of the rocks in space to their designated positions, she slightly wondered why one of the rocks that she was moving slightly stopped, but then it continued forward when she gave it a bit more pull with her magic. She was then content at what she did, now that the rocks were in place, and now knowing that it was time to pull down the moon, she did exactly that and used her magic to hold the moon and bring it down, so that Princess Celestia could bring up the sun. The sun then rose and Princess Luna retreated to her chambers to rest, unknown to both of them, something from the sky fell down into their world.

Mio recovered from his fall by raising his claw up to grab the top of his command console. He then pulled himself up, although he did not stand, instead rested the top of his body on the command console of the ship. He then sighed while his 'eyes' were closed as he rested his head to the side. He then suddenly felt a shift of his weight, as if something was pulling him forward. He opened his 'eyes' and looked forward, towards the large windshield of the ship, only to see the surface of the planet he was surveying, rapidly approaching. He then had a face, a face that would indicate that this has happened in more than a few times in his entire life.

ಠ_ಠ "Crap, not again." He said as the ship plummets towards the planets surface.

Author's Note

Things to take note of, Avali are kind of like bird raptors, with extremely high technology.

Here's an example of how they look like.

One thing to say is that they are very coot.

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Falling From The Stars

The sun of Celestia was beginning to rise up in the sky, giving light to the world bellow. The sun was shining, the birds are singing, and ponies were beginning to rise from their beds to start their day. Twilight rose from her bed, and and fixed herself up, fixing her bed head, brushing her teeth, and doing her morning ritual to start the day. She headed down to her castles kitchen, only to see Spike preparing both of their breakfast.

"Good morning Spike." Twilight said greeting the baby dragon.

"Morning Twilight. I made mixed fruits and pancakes today and we still have one carton of apple juice so I used up all of it for today's breakfast. It's all on the table." Spike said as he placed the last few pancakes on a plate. He then placed the plate on the dining table along with the other different types of food.

"Thanks for the food Spike, these all look great, I always liked how you cooked your pancakes. So how's your day been doing as of now?" Twilight asked as she took a piece of pancake filled with whipped cream, syrup, and fruits to her mouth.

"Nothing much today, but we are starting to lose some ingredients and some drinks and some snacks. So I'm gonna go to town and do some shopping." Spike said as he then chewed a clawfull of pancakes and fruits.

"Well then, I should join you, there's still a few hours before the school does start. So we still have time to go around town and buy the supplies that we need." Twilight said as she finished her food and then started drinking the the last of the apple juice in her cup.

"You go on ahead and fix up, while I clean the dishes. Make sure that you make a list of things that we need to buy just so we don't forget about some things that we don't have." Twilight said as she carried the plates and utensils towards the sink and started cleaning them.

"Sure thing Twilight." Spike said, "I'll be back in a few minutes." Spike then left the room to fix himself up, as well as make a small list of the things that he needed to buy. After a few moments, Spike was finished with what he was doing, and Twilight has finished cleaning the dishes. Carrying a bag of bits in his claws, Spike waited for Twilight at the front of the castle. Spike's wait time only lasted for a few minutes before he saw Twilight at the end of the corridor.

"Are you ready Spike?" Twilight asked the young dragon.

"Sure am!" Spike said to the purple alicorn enthusiastically.

A few hours later, Twilight and Spike were walking out of the market street, carrying the items that they have bought with them as they were heading back to the castle. There was still about one hour before Twilight heads towards the school. Twilight then addressed Spike to run down the list of all the items that they bought.

"-milk, bread, butter, a variety of sauce, and flour! We're all complete!" Spike said as he rolled the small list and stuffed it into the paper bag.

Twilight then smiled, "That's good, now we just need to drop these in the castles kitchen and head to the school. Hopefully Starlight was able to fix things up in the school before we arrive. Oooohh~, I'm so exited for the annual star fall later tonight, aren't you excited Spike?" She said and Spike 'mhhmed' as they walked the streets of Ponyville. But as they walked on forward, they started to notice that ponies were stopping on their tracks, and looking up. They were about to ignore this but their attention was quickly taken by the amount of murmurs and whispers around them.

Spike and Twilight looked around them, only to see the ponies doing their work stop their work and take a look up the where the other ponies were looking. Twilight was about to look up but her attention was grabbed by a voice behind her.

"Twilight!!! There you are, I've been looking all over for you, you weren't at the castle so I thought that you went out!!! This is really important, I think that Ponyville might be in danger!!! We have do do something abo-" A pony with lilac coat with purple and teal mane and tail said, only to be silenced by Twilight as she speaks to the pony.

"Hey, hey, calm down Starlight, Speak slowly. What do you mean Ponyville might be in danger? What do you mean-" Twilight said, only for Spike to take her attention.

"Uuuhhhh, T-Twilight, I-I think you need to see this." Spike said as he looked up to where the ponies around them were looking and pointed up so that Twilight would be able to see what he was referring to.

Twilight on the other hoof looked up, only for her eyes to focus on a rather bright light at the distance. "It's just a bright light, what could make that light become some danger to Ponyville, well granted its rather bright in the middle of the day but-" Twilight said, only for Starlight to grab hold of her head and directed it towards the light.

"NO!!! LOOK!!!" Starlight said.

Twilight then squinted at the bright light, only to see the light get abit more brighter for about a second. Then she saw a black outline around the light, that soon became larger. At this point, Twilight eyes widened as she takes note of three things, one, something was falling, two, the falling thing was burning, and three, it was headed straight at them. So Twilight did the sane thing to do........

"EVERYPONY EVACUATE!!!!!!" Twilight yelled, and soon everypony was running around like headless chickens, gathering their belongings and essentials as they prepare to evacuate Ponyville. Meanwhile, Twilight's other friends saw the mayhem happening in the town, so they decided to meet up with the purple alicorn themselves, just so they would get answers.

"Twilight! What the HAY is going on!!!" Rainbow dash said as she was flying over the running ponies.

"Hoo~ nelly. I haven't seen Ponyville in a state of panic since, well, Tirek." Applejack said as she looked around the running mob of panicking ponies.

"Look girls, I'm going to try and explain it later, but for now we need to evacuate every pony. If I'm right, and that thing falls, there's a big chance that it would hit majority of Ponyville. We need to hurry and evacuate the students as well." Twilight said as she continued to run along with her friends, with Spike on her back.

"But Twilight, couldn't you just hold it with your magic?" Rarity asked, knowing full well that Twilight's magic is the strongest out of all of them.

"Well, when going at that speed, I don't think I could stop it. If it does manage to slow down by some miracle, then maybe I can, along with the help of Starlight." Twilight said as she looked worriedly at her student.

Twilight and her friends were evacuating everycreature out of the school to keep them safe. She then looked up at the sky, only to see the object relatively getting closer to their location. She hurried the students, but still kept herself in check as to not panic the students. But the falling burning object was getting too close for comfort, so when the object got close to her castle and the school, the did what she thought wouldn't work. Grasping the object with her magic.

"Starlight!!! I need your help!!!" Twilight said as her horn glowed. Fortunately she managed to take hold of the falling object, and managed to slow down its fall. But it still wasn't enough. Starlight Glimmer then teleported behind Twilight, only for her eyes to widen as she sees her mentor trying to stop the gigantic falling object. Without hesitation, Starlight used her magic to help her teacher carry the weight of the falling object, adding power to the already strong hold.

The large object roared loudly overhead has the sound of straining metal and propulsion reaches everycreatures ears. The object soon slowed down enough that Twilight and Starlight was able to take hold of the object, nearly hitting the side of the school building. Although straining their magic due to the sheer weight, they managed to float the large object to a safe open area a ways away from the school and the castle. With fatigue straining their bodies, mostly Starlight, the alicorn and unicorn looked behind them as they heard cheers from everycreature. All cheering for the success on saving Ponyville and the School of Friendship once again.

"That. Was. Flipping COOL!!! Did you see how Headmare Twilight and Starlight handle that big thing!?!?" Twilight and Starlight heard Smolder say, as she continues to talk to her friends about what happened. Both ponies sighed with relief, knowing that they managed to keep everycreature safe. Both of them then looked at the large burning object. From what they could observe, colors of white and gold were noticeable from the object even if they are slightly scorched, angular shapes that looked like steel covered the entirety of the object, and heat was being emitted all over the object.

"What do you think it is Twilight?" Starlight asked, curious as well as wary of what the white and gold object is.

"I don't know Starlight. But what ever it is, it's no doubt that it was crashing or something." Twilight replied.

"Heh, from the looks of it, it looks like one of those things from the comics that Spike read." Starlight said, trying to lighten the mood.

"What, like Aliens??? Pleeeaaasssee, those things don't exist. End even if they do, they would-" Twilight was saying, only for her words to be cut off as a loud hiss sounded from the white and gold object, taking their attention. After the loud hiss, something fell infront of them, and when they turned their head to look at what landed, they saw what looked like a tail and claws, sprouting out of the ground.

"Wha-" They both said.

Author's Note

Second chapter of the story. Feels like I rushed this. This is probably the second Protogen story made. IDK. The first one, from what I know is made by Connorcooper, his story being The Protogen of Equis. Shout out to this guy.

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