Venganza

by RainbowShades

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark
Length: 648

Revenge...

It is highly recommended to read my first story "Alone" before reading this one.

A tale of revenge from three different points of view.
Derpy's dad,(Robert) a stallion with a thirst for revenge. He has nothing to lose, and everything to gain.
Kozac, a tormented unicorn colt who just can't take it anymore.
Derpy, a mare happy with her current life, until an old foe comes back seeking revenge.

And if you're wondering about the title it's revenge in Spanish.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-20 23:39:09 UTC

Chapter 1

Canterlot Prison:Robert: Nighttime

"THE PRISONER ESCAPED!" yells several guards.

I smile to myself. "I'm finally free and ready to get revenge on my stupid daughter Derpy Hooves," I think to myself

I crawl out of the bushes the hole I dug was behind. And come face to face with another pony.

It's a young unicorn who was probably still in school.

"Hello, young colt. Run along now, you didn't see anything," i whispered nervously.

He stand firm in his ground, "You're an escapee aren't you," he said narrowing his eyes at me.

He grabbed me with his magic which were surprisingly powerful for his age.

"Hey let me GO!" I mutter.

"No," he replied darkly.

By that time I've seen his eyes. They were glowing red. Full of anger and a hint of sadness. then I smiled I knew exactly what to do.

"C'mon kid, I know you want revenge. That I can help you with."

He paused. I smiled. I knew I had him. When I'm not drunk I can be very clever.

"What do you have in mind," he asked nervously with a hint of a smile.

I knew I had him. Revenge was going to be good. I'm not lying. We can get revenge on Equestria. Starting with Derpy.

Yes. Robert is mentally insane.

Chapter 2

Canterlot Prison: Early morning: Kozac

I found out the pegasus' name was Robert. He wanted to get revenge on Derpy Hooves, his daughter. I don't know why I trusted him but I got a feeling he could have helped me. I can tell by his eyes and voice he had a lust for revenge. I did too.

We spent all night discussing revenge and our reasons for it. By the morning we weren't quite friends, but partners. I don't trust anybody anymore after I got betrayed once too many times so no friends. But I can work with Robert, we had a common interest. REVENGE.

Canterlot Statue Garden:Two weeks later: Early Morning: Kozac

I've been training for the last two weeks for this moment. Training my magic until it was as powerful as most adults'. It was time to do one of the hardest spell in existence. It was extremely hard to get for it was labeled as dark magic, but i got it. I was ready. It was the spell to merge two bodies together permanently. It would enhance my magical power immensely.

We stood close to each while my horn was charging was power. Finally I let it all loose and the blast of magic coming out of my horn engulfed me and Robert. I felt a hot searing pain. And then I blacked out.

Prolouge

Somewhere in the Canterlot Prisons:Robert

A gray stallion leaned in a corner scraping away at his prison. Nopony was guarding him. It was only a matter of time before he would be free.

His mind surged with anger as he thought about how he got here."

"That stupid Derpy. Life was perfect just the way it was. Then she had to call the police on me. And she got the entire fortune. Oh I'll get her soon...very soon. She'll be sorry she crossed me, Robert," he hissed in the silence.

Somewhere near:Kozac

A young unicorn colt ran through a dark alleyway, his eyes brimming with tears.

"Those kids were so cruel beating up on me. If only Celestia hadn't banned me from using magic until I was "ready" I could show them all. I'll be ready when I get out of Celestia's school of magic. But I have an idea for revenge that I can do sooner...much sooner. Kozac will finally get revenge." he whispered to the darkness.

Ponyville:Derpy

Derpy was just going to Sugarcube Corner to meet up with her new friends when she felt a chill on her spine. Something was going to happen...