A Colt In A Mares World -RGREby HeWhoConquersChaptersWelcome to PonyvilleThe 2nd ChapterChapter Number 3The chapter where Rarity Sex's Raven FeatherWelcome to PonyvillePonyville was just as Raven Feather had imagined. It was a beautifully rustic little town full of friendly ponies wearing friendly smiles. Of course, he found, like most places in Equestria, the majority of the towns inhabitants were mares. And said mares kept staring at him like he was either some lost lamb, or their next meal. Raven didn't like that. He hated the big sympathetic eyes they gave him for being alone, or the lecherous grins some wore when they saw he was without a chaperone. He wasn't like all the other stallions that needed their hoof's held just to walk down the street, he wasn't some helpless foal. He was his own Pegasus and could handle himself... Well, most of the time. Walking down the street, without a direction, he decided it would be best to ask a near by pony for directions. So approaching a light brown, earth-pony mare, he asked politely, "Excuse me miss, could you please point me to the local boutique?" The mare turned to him and seemed surprised to see him. But he was used to that by this point. "Well hello sweetheart, what are you doing out here all alone?" She asked, looking about and completely ignoring his question. "I was wondering, if you could point me to the local boutique?" He asked again, hoping to actually get an answer this time. "Now where's your herd sweetie?" She asked him, clearly looking around for a mare. "A cute little colt like yourself should have a somepony with them." She told him, getting ever so closer. Raven stepped back, uncomfortable with the mare entering his personal space. "Well what's wrong sweetie, you look so tense." She told him getting even closer, "How about a blowjob to calm you down?" "Miss please!" He snapped, trying his best to ceep his cool. "I just want to know were the boutique is." The mare had clearly not expected such a reaction from such a 'dainty' stallion, and simply pointed down the street. Giving a brief thanks, he made his way down the street, following the mares vague direction. Walking the street he could help but scowl, an unsightly act for such delicate features as his own, but he'd been put in such a foul mood by the mares antics, he couldn't help it. He kept walking along the street, getting the odd look from the town mares as he went. He still didn't like that. It was maybe 10 minutes before he found the impressive looking building that just had to belong to an element of harmony. Walking up to the door he stopped to compose himself. Behind this door was his Hero. The element of Generosity, And... His last chance. Knocking twice, he waited for a moment before he heard a feminine voice beckon him in. And so, with a finale deep breath, he entered the boutique. Upon entering the boutique he was met with perhaps the most beautiful mare hed ever laid eyes upon. Her firm slender form. Her beautiful snow white fur and her mesmerizing sapphire eyes. All the confidence he was pretending to have, completely evaporated. And unfortunately for him, that was the moment the unicorn noticed his presence. "Oh my, what can I do for you darling?" She asked. Not in that condescending voice so many other mares had given him. It was a genuine wonder, she genuinely wanted to know how she could help. He froze, as all the things he'd rehearsed flew from his head. Rarity stood before him eyebrow raised, patiently awaiting a response. He instantly shrunk under her gaze, trying to hide behind his mane. Reaching into his satchel, he pulled out a newspaper clip and held it out to her, almost hiding behind it. Rarity gave him a warm smile, the kind that just made him more embarrassed, before taking the article from his grip, giving it a once over she seemed shocked at the its contents. "Y-you want a job?" She asked incredulously, looking up from the newspaper clipping. He nodded firmly, finally mustering up the confidence to talk. He said. "I-I-I'm not just some stallion. I can do this, I-I, please, just give me a chance." He was nearly yelling by the end as he yanked the notebook from his satchel, he held it out to her, head bowed as he was practically shaking in fear. The longer his words hung in the air,the more hopeless he became. He ropped his sketch book, covering his face with his wings, he desperately tried to stop the tears but no matter how hard he wiped, they just kept coming. "Darling, darling there's no need to cry." Rarity walked up moving his wings away, pulling out a handkerchief and wiping his tears away. Holding it to his nose she said "blow" and taking a deep breath, he blew out his nose. "Sweet heart, theirs no need to cry, I'd be happy to look over your sketches. Its just, I never expected a stallion to come to me looking for for job." She told him calmly, gently rubbing his back, "I was just so surprised your request that I got caught up in my own head is all." Rarity gave him a gentle smile before leading him over to a nearby sofa. She climbed onto the sofa, gently patting the spot besides her, silently telling him to curl up besides her. Getting onto the sofa Raven curled up, ending up with his head on her thigh. Once situated, she began stroking his mane, the simple act calming him down almost instantly. "Now let me take a look at this sketchbook." Using her magic, she brought his sketch book before her, holding it open so he could see what she was looking at. Rarity seemed genuinely shocked at the contents, the mare asking him. "Did you do all of these?" he nodded. Sitting up he did his best to puff out his chest before he gave a proud nod. Raven was very proud of his artistic talent. Hed spent many long nights studying the countless styles of dressmaking. He'd worked for years to get so good, studying the needle & thread maticulously. The young stallion oh so desperately wanted to be a seamstress. "I've wanted to be a seamstress for so long... b-but no mare would take me serious." He gave a little snifle, "And whenever I was hired, they treated me little better then a call-Colt... Id lost all hope... B-But then i heard about you." he could barely contain himself at this point, tears flowed freely as he spoke to her. "I-I-I heard a-about you being the element of generosity, A-and about how you cared about everypony equally. I-I knew you were my only chance, and when i finally saw you, how incredible and beautiful you were. I though for sure you'd never take s-s-some c-colt like m-me serious." He utterly broke down, unable to hold it in. Rarity just held him close, gently cooing and stroking his mane. After hearing his story she could hardly blame him, who knew how much strife and mistreatment he'd been through chasing his dream. Rarity knew stallions were fragile creatures. They needed constant assurance and affection. And to hear how he'd been treated as some joke by other mares merely for being a colt -er, stallion, made her sick. This poor young stallion had come to her desperately wanting acceptance, and from what she'd seen, he did possess some real potential and she'd be damned to Tartarus before she'd let it go to waste. "Sssshhh, its alright darling, I'm not going treat you like some joke." She assured him, "You've got some real potential. I want you to know that." She said cupping his cheeks, getting him to look her in the eyes. "You really think so?" Raven asked almost desperately. Rarity only nodded, the simple act seemed nearly instantly perk him up, new tears forming in his eyes. "Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Miss Rarity." He leaps onto her, planting kisses all over her face. "I promise not to let you down." Rarity just laid back, quite happy to receive such appreciation. Having such a young and attractive colt giving her so much attention, the mare couldn't help but get a little worked up. The colt ended up holding her close, his fuzzy wings wrapped around the mare in what could only be considered a loving embrace. She was about to ask if he'd be up for some relief when she heard the colt release a gentle snore, turning his head, Rarity found the colt had drifted of to sleep. "ohhh poor thing, got so worked up he tuckered himself out.." She cooed, brushing some of his hair from his face. Rarity didn't have the heart to wake him up, especially when he felt so good pressed against her. So grabbing a nearby blanket she carefully drapes it across the both of them. "goodnight darling." Author's Note BOOM. my first chapter done. this was my first story so i hope you enjoyed it im going to keep making chapters. in fact im about to write another right now. The 2nd ChapterSugarcube corner was always calm this time of day, especially with it being a school day, it meant there would be no little foals to run about. Rarity and the other elements were seated at one of the outside tables, each mare sipping their respective drink as they talked about the only thing mares seemed to talk about. Colts. Rainbow Dash, as was her nature, sat there bragging about her many supposed sexual escapades. Rarity, caught in her own head only caught the tail end of Rainbow Dash bragging. "I got two colts to do me at the same time, ya know?" Rainbow Dash puffed her chest proudly, as the mare bragged. "Yeah darlin' we know, you tell us ever'time we get talkin' about colts." applejack replies, rolling her eyes, she turns to Rarity next. "Ya'seem a lil out of it today Rarity, Somethin on your mind?" She asked the fashionista. Rarity snapped out of her though, playfully batting a hoof, "Oh don't worry about me darling. Just caught up in my work is all." She assured them. "That so?" Applejack asked, raising an brow. "Talkin about 'work', Whats this I been hear'in about you hire'in a stallion ta' work in your shop, aye Rare?" She asked her playfully, jabbing her elbow into the mares side. Rarity froze, looking up from her tea, she saw all eyes on her. Rainbow Dash spoke first. "Is that true Rarity?" Rarity couldn't help the nervous little chuckle escaping her, the mare rubbing her neck "W-well I uh... you know what, no." She said firmly, shaking her head. "I know what your thinking and NO! I did not hire some stallion to be my personal colt-toy." She gave each of them a glare, "Raven Feather is a kind, independent stallion, for whom i have the utmost respect for." "You wanna buck his brains out, don't 'cha?" asked Rainbow leaning over the table with a big smirk. "Yyeeessssss." Rarity whined. "You have no idea how hard it is to live with such a Colt." Rarity drops her head on the table, releasing a whine. "Hes so cute and sweet. And he wears socks! Aaaaall the time. I Cant. Handle. It...." She whined even louder. Each mare had a little chuckle at there friends whining. "Well tell us about him, I wanna know what makes him so alluring." asked Twilight with that nerdy little smile she always wore when talking about colts. Rarity, after composing herself addressed her friends. "Well if theirs one thing you're to know about Raven, its that he's not like your average stallion." "While he does cooks and cleans, hes assured me it's out of gratitude, and not some sort of courting. He gets along with Sweetie Bell like you wouldn't believe, it's beautiful. And above all he simply refuses any sort of relief. And I mean anything. Magic, blowjobs, anything at all" The other elements were absolutely shocked to hear this. A stallion. Independent. This was unheard of. Stallions were cute fluffy little things, to fragile to care for themselves and constantly required relief and attention. "Well, whats he look like?" asked Pinkie Pie, slurping on her oversized milkshake. Rarity sighed. "Oohh my Celestia.If I've ever seen a more beautiful Stallion, I don't know when~" She purred, "He has the most beautiful Raven black coat and the the cutest white freckles across his face." She swooned. "And his wings have all of these beautiful white spots. When he flares them up its like a field of stars that would make even Luna blush. AND his hair!" She practically gawked. "His hair is smoother then silk and whiter than fresh snow." Rarity seemed entranced. The elements all sat there, imagining the stallion "Ya' know, I' been think'in about gettin' myself a Coltfriend." Applejack mussed thoughtfully, hoove gently trailing around his glass. "Don't even think about it sister." Snapped Rarity, slamming her hoof on the table. "And that goes for the rest of you as well. None of you are to lay a hoof on him." "Aawwwww, but he sounds so sexxyyy." whined Pinkie Pie. "Too bad." replied Rarity. "Raven Feather is mine and none of you are gonna get him into bed before I do." "Gee, what happened to "someone I have the utmost respect for"?" Asked Rainbow Dash smugly. "Well how about a compromise?" asked twilight, the elements all turned to look at her. "What sort of compromise?" Rarity asked wary of the other elements. "Its simple. It seems like each of us are looking for a Coltfriend, right?' That got nod from each of them. "Well then the answers simple. We all herd him." She spoke like it was the most logical thing in the world. "No." deadpanned Rarity. "Oh come on Rarity at least listen to what i have to say." Twilight frowned, each element now staring at her. "Fiiiiiiine." Rarity conceded, propping herself on her elbow. "Alright its simple, each one of us are looking for a Coltfriend to herd, right?" all of the elements nod, Rarity giving a dull one herself. "And we know we can all get along right?" Again, the elements each gave a nod. "So its simple, we'll all try to herd with this Raven Feather." The other 5 elements mused over the idea. "Wait, hold on, wait'ta minute." Applejack but in. "Rarity you said he was 'independent stallion' right?" Rarity simply nodded. "And hes turned down any advance you've made to Buck, right?" Rarity nodded a second time. "So what makes you think he'll just, up and herd with six ponies, when he wont even let the mare who cares for him buck him?" the question stumped them all, 'how would they get him?' ran through each of there heads. "Rarity?" Twilight asked. "What?" rarity replied, expecting something she wouldn't like. "Do you honestly think you could get Raven feather to herd with you?" All eyes were on rarity, clearing her throat she replied. "Yes. No... Maybe." She sighed, rubbing her face, "I believe I could court him quite easily. As for the rest of you, that's an entirely different matter." she finished, looking over each of them. "How so?" asked Rainbow Dash, the rest of the elements seemed to agree. "Well you see..." She began, "When Raven Feather came to me, he was in a very fragile state. He'd trained for years to work as a seamstress, but every time he tried he was treated like either a wounded pup or some... call-colt." She finished with a scowl. "He tried so hard to prove himself. But every time he was belittled or taken advantage of by those mares." Her throat suddenly dry Rarity took a sip of tea trying to stay composed. "And when he finally came to me... He was so scared of being rejected again, he cried when he thought I might reject him." "I don't know what Raven Feathers early life was like, but he seems so cautious of mares he even seems wary of me on occasion. But I've been doing my best to prove I was worth trusting and I believe it's been working." Rarity was struggling to stay composed. "I don't think he has anypony else and he absolutely refuses to talk about his mother. I don't want to risk losing him by forcing a relationship..." She took a steady breath, "But I feel confident, that If done carefully, he may be willing to herd with us." "So were really gonna do this?" asked Applejack, looking at each mare at the table. "I guess so." replied twilight, the princess too looking about the table. "Well I guess I should get back to work then." She told them all. "ill be going first of course. Afterwards, ill introduce the rest of you. Good day ladies." With that Rarity stood and began walking sown the street, a sense of determination in her steps. Author's Note I hope you enjoy I'll try and get the second chapter out as soon as possible, but between school and another story I'm currently working it may take some time, if theirs grammar problems point them out and ill fix them. THX Chapter Number 3"Alright Rarity, you got this." She shook her head and puffed out her chest, making sure her chest fluff was nice and presentable. It wasn't the largest, being a unicorn and all, but it was still nice and fluffy. "All you need to do is get an incredibly independent with seemingly little trust in mares to sleep with you and agree to herd with you and your 5 mare friends." She froze, realizing the idiocy of what she'd just said. With a sigh, she walked up to her front door. "Well, when you put it like that." she deadpanned. Shaking her head she tried to re-orientate herself. 'Stay focused Rarity, you have a job to do.' she scolded herself. Taking one last deep breath she opened the door and upon entering her home, she was hit with the sweet smell of something cooking. Seeing as she wasnt coughing her lungs out, she instantly knew it couldnt be Sweetie Bells cooking, she followed her nose to the kitchen finding quite the sight. Raven Feather was bent over checking the oven, but what he was wearing almost caused Rarity to have a nosebleed. Raven Feather, dressed in a full Prench maids outfit, garter belts and all. Turning around he seemed surprise to see Rarity. "Oh! Hello miss rarity, I didn't hear you enter." "How was brunch?" he asked giving her thet innocent little smile that made her knees weak. "It was lovely, darling, and the girls are going fantastic." She told him walking around Raven to see what he was cooking. She found a series of roasted vegetables and salad ingredients. "This looks delectable darling, Whats the occasion." "Um, so I uh, I got Sweetie bell to stay at Applebloom's so you and i could have a night alone." He told her rubbing his front forelegs together. "I wanted to thank you for being... for taking a chance on a lone Colt looking for a job." He told her timidly, hiding behind his mane. Rarity just smiled at his behaviour, her eyes scanning over his outfit. Looking down at his outfit seemingly forgetting he had it on. "Oh, uh, I hope you don't mind. I found this among your stallion wardrobe and I thought it would be nice to get all dressed up for tonight." "No, No its fine. I don't mind at all, if anything I think you actually look amazing." she said truthfully. Raven Blushed hard, hiding behind his mane. "Well, uh, thank you. Dinner will be ready soon So go upstairs and pick out something for the occasion." He told her, gently shooing her. "Well alright then, sounds wonderful." She spoke through a smile. With that Raven Feather returned to his dinner preparation, Rarity giving Ravens rear one last peek before she went up stairs. 'what should i wear... hmm. Perhaps my spring gown...? No, I need something simple. Something i can put on. . . and take off, quickly~' she thought through a lecherous grin. Making her way to her wardrobe, she quickly went through her collection until she finally came across the perfect gown. It was a simple black lace gown she'd made for just such an occasion. Easy to put on and take off. Slipping it on and after checking herself in the mirror she hurried downstairs. Just before reaching the finale step, she stopped, composing herself and began walking with the elegance befitting a lady. making her way to the dining room she was confronted with a candle lit dinner, complete with and white tablecloth and roses. Raven Feather still in full maids outfit, stood beside the table. Rarity was shocked, never in her life had she expected Raven to be so... Forward. She expected a nice meal that would maybe lead to intimacy. Not something from one of her more lecherous romance novels. Raven gave a shy smile, holding out a wing, he took a step back and said. "Tad-DA!" Rarity stood in silence for much longer then she should have, as Raven dropped his wing, slumped to the floor. The stallion mumbled to himself, "I knew it wasn't good enough." And before she knew it Raven began weeping gently. Rarity, seeing raven in tears, quickly ran too his side. "No, no, sweet heart, theres othings wrong. I was just so taken aback by the scene I merely froze." She tried to assure him. Rarity was brought out of her thoughts by Raven shaking his head. "No you don't get it. I wanted so desperately for tonight to be special, to be special with you. I wanted to tell you everything, but I've already messed it up." "No, darling you didn't ruin anything. All of this is magnificent." She told him, bringing him to her chest, "I... i just wasn't expecting you to be so forward after being so... abstinent the entire time I've known you, I guess I was just shocked. I mean your so-" "You don't think i want that, you don't think I want to do that kinda stuff with you, huh? You don't think i'd like to Share a bed, or have showers together. Or... the other things Colts do with mares. I DO, Celestia I do. I just... After everything I've been through... I didn't know if I could trust you." He told her somberly. Rarity sighed, gently nuzzling his cheek, "Sweet heart, whatever it is, you can trust me. I know I'm a mare and I know it might be hard, but I want to be there for you." Rarity told him warmly, pulling the colt close. Raven let out weak chuckle. "Rarity *snort* you already earned it, I just, I didn't know if I was ready to admit that to myself." He told her, and without warning, lent in and kissed her. Not the normal peck the stallion would give her in thanks of a humble task. No, this was a full on mare kiss. He even used tongue. Of course Rarity was taken aback by such a move, especially with Raven's track record of hesitance towards mares. But that didn't stop her from enjoying it. They sat their for a while, just kissing for Celestia know's how long before they finally separated for air. Rarity sat there for a moment, in her own little daze before letting out a "wow." The colt just giving a nod. Rarity's little daze was broken when Raven leaned against her, releasing a somber little chuckle. Looking down at the stallion, she found Raven seemed to wear a sad smile. Rarity couldnt really see a reason to be sad at a moment like this, so like a mare she asked "Whats wrong darling?" Raven let out a somber laugh, before replying "Oh nothing, i was just thinking about how my life would have been if I had found you years ago." Rarity, wasn't sure how to take that. Raven, had always been so guarded about his past. Looking up at her and seeing her concern, Raven let out a long chuckle. "Yeah, I guess you out of anypony deserves an explanation." He told her, nuzzling into her neck. Raven stood up and walked to the kitchen, Rarity stood up and took a moment to compose herself. This wasn't how she saw tonight going. Walting to the, kitchen she found the familiar sight of Raven was bent over as he searched a lower cabinet, his tail was swinging back and forth lazoly, showing a good bit of his ball cleavage, the colt even wore a matching lacy ball bra. Before this development could really effect her, her gazing was cut short as Raven suddenly jumped up with a not so hearty "hurrah." Raven had pulled out a bottle of hard cider, the bottle even resembling an apple. So, reaching into the above head cabinet and pulled out two glasses before moving over to the kitchen table. "I was gonna save this for after dinner, but... plans change." He deadpanned. So after the colt took a minute to open the bottle, he poured them each a glass, Rarity sat down. Taking a sip of cider, Raven began his story. "My mother, like so many mares, was apart of a herd." He began, taking an even bigger sip of cider. "And when I was born, naturally my mother and her herd-mates were ecstatic. Or at least that's what they told me." He finished bitterly. "But?" Rarity spoke up gently, with a nod raven continued. "But, my father? Not so much." Raven took a sip of his cider before continuing. "You see my father was a spoiled and jealous stallion. And my mother just happened to be his favorite." He finished with another sip of cider. She wouldn't like it, but if he kept this up, Rarity may need to cut him off. "For the first 11 years of my life, my father never had a kind word to me." He finished with a scowl. "And it seemed like the blink of an eye until my eleventh birthday. When he'd finally get what he wanted." At this point tears were streaking down Ravens face, but he did nothing about them. He took another swig of cider, taking a good long stare at his barely impacted drink. "Lets go to the park' my mother said, 'we'll have a lovely day before your birthday.' she told me. But of course it was a lie. She took me into town. she took me to the orphanage. She pinned a note to my jumper, 'stay right here sweetie, I'll be right back.' she said, tears in her eyes." A sad chuckled filled his chest, "And even as she was abandoning me... All I wanted to do was help. . . then she left." Raven just sat their, tear stained eyes as he just stared at his drink. Rarity was on the brink of tears herself, only holding back to let Raven finish. Raven finally wiped his eyes, taking another drink of cider. "'I'm sorry but I can't care for this colt anymore' is what the note said." Ravens upper lip turned into a scowl, "She couldn't care for me?" He asked incredulously, shaking his head. "Of course, being a colt, it was barely a day before I was adopted." He stopped to take a drink. "She was a noble in Canterlot. I thought maybe I could begin again, maybe have a mother who loved me." Raven was already shaking his head, "It became very clear what her real intentions were when she started sending me on 'Play dates' with her friends." The stallion grit his teeth as he told her, "More or less she would send me to her friends so they could fuck me." He was practically spat each word by the end. Rarity was honestly caught between crying and screaming in rage. The idea that someone would exploit a stallion like that, let alone a colt, filled her with a type of anger she'd never felt before. Raven was swaying slightly, obviously buzzed but he went for another drink only to find his glass was empty. "And that went on for nearly... 2 years... I was just a thing to her. Sure she got me fancy clothes and toys and more socks then you could point a stick at. But she didn't care. She couldn't even be bothered to remember my name." He told her, "She always just called me 'feathers'. I hated that name..." Rarity wasn't sure how drunk about Ravens alcohol tolerance, but if he was anything like most stallions two inched of cider in a margarita glass likely meant he was drunk. As such she stopped Raven from refilling his glass. Using her magic to slide the bottle away from him. Of course that was followed by him giving her perhaps the cutest pouty face she'd ever seen. But he shrugged and with a sigh, he went back to talking. "That went on for nearly 2 years. Until one day, we went to the park, the mare likely wanting to show me off... or something. Anyway, we were walking down the pavement and then... I saw them... I saw my mother and her herd. i walked up to her and asked..." Ravens lower lip quivered, "Why?" Raven covered his face with his hooves. Rarity bolted around the table wrapping him in the biggest hug she could. They sat together for what felt like hours until Raven pulled his hooves away from his face. "you know what she said to me? You know what she said to her son she abandoned?..." Rarity was scared to hear the answer, but asked none the less, her throat was suddenly dry as she asked him "What did she say?" lowering his hooves he said. "She told me... she told me it was worth it to see her stallion happy." He finished, eyes seeming to glaze over. "And I that moment I couldn't.. I couldnt take it anymore. So I ran. I ran for hours and hours. I ran till my hooves hurt and i eventually ended up in some alleyway, in outer Canterlot." "I sat there and cried for, hours? I don't know how long. Bur eventually I was found by one of the royal guards." "Looking back i can see she was just acting like a guard should, like any good pony would. She said she'd take me back to my mother... but at the time I was so angry and hurt and betrayed, I just... POPPED." "I screamed and cursed and yelled at her. I told her I hated her and I wished every mare in Equestria would go to Tartarus. And even after id said all of those awful things, I told her all that awful stuff... she just walked forwards and held me like... a mother would." Raven nuzzled into the crook of Rarity's neck. "Her name was Platinum Shield. She was a respected member of the guard so she managed to get me away from that noble and eventually, she adopt me." He finished with a warm smile gracing his lips. "She was the only mare I trusted since my mother abandoned me... I found it so hard to find a Mare that I could trust. Until i got a job in this little town called Ponyville." He finished with a little eye roll. Rarity whipped her head down to see Raven smiling up at her. "You... uh, you mean yo-." she was stopped by ravens hoof. "When my mother abandoned me and i left that dreadful noble mare, i promised myself I'd never be like all the other stallion. I'd never be a spoiled brat that demanded something from everyone." He told her, seemingly proud of himself. "I promised I wouldn't be influenced or controlled by Mares." He told her firmly. "But you've treated me with respect and self restraint." she could feel his breath in her ear as he leaned in and said. "I think you've earned a reword." leaning back Raven licked his lips. The sight seemed to awaken something in Rarity she'd been trying so very hard to keep suppressed for the last few weeks. "So tonight. is. all. about. you." He purred Author's Note BOOM CLIFF HANGER That was my third chapter and i hope you all enjoyed it. As always please let me know if i messed up somewhere and i always appreciate constructive criticism. The next chapter will be purely lemon as a continuation of this chapter. ill be putting it out soon. The chapter where Rarity Sex's Raven FeatherSomething has gone wrong. We don't seem to have an archived copy of that chapter.
Welcome to PonyvillePonyville was just as Raven Feather had imagined. It was a beautifully rustic little town full of friendly ponies wearing friendly smiles. Of course, he found, like most places in Equestria, the majority of the towns inhabitants were mares. And said mares kept staring at him like he was either some lost lamb, or their next meal. Raven didn't like that. He hated the big sympathetic eyes they gave him for being alone, or the lecherous grins some wore when they saw he was without a chaperone. He wasn't like all the other stallions that needed their hoof's held just to walk down the street, he wasn't some helpless foal. He was his own Pegasus and could handle himself... Well, most of the time. Walking down the street, without a direction, he decided it would be best to ask a near by pony for directions. So approaching a light brown, earth-pony mare, he asked politely, "Excuse me miss, could you please point me to the local boutique?" The mare turned to him and seemed surprised to see him. But he was used to that by this point. "Well hello sweetheart, what are you doing out here all alone?" She asked, looking about and completely ignoring his question. "I was wondering, if you could point me to the local boutique?" He asked again, hoping to actually get an answer this time. "Now where's your herd sweetie?" She asked him, clearly looking around for a mare. "A cute little colt like yourself should have a somepony with them." She told him, getting ever so closer. Raven stepped back, uncomfortable with the mare entering his personal space. "Well what's wrong sweetie, you look so tense." She told him getting even closer, "How about a blowjob to calm you down?" "Miss please!" He snapped, trying his best to ceep his cool. "I just want to know were the boutique is." The mare had clearly not expected such a reaction from such a 'dainty' stallion, and simply pointed down the street. Giving a brief thanks, he made his way down the street, following the mares vague direction. Walking the street he could help but scowl, an unsightly act for such delicate features as his own, but he'd been put in such a foul mood by the mares antics, he couldn't help it. He kept walking along the street, getting the odd look from the town mares as he went. He still didn't like that. It was maybe 10 minutes before he found the impressive looking building that just had to belong to an element of harmony. Walking up to the door he stopped to compose himself. Behind this door was his Hero. The element of Generosity, And... His last chance. Knocking twice, he waited for a moment before he heard a feminine voice beckon him in. And so, with a finale deep breath, he entered the boutique. Upon entering the boutique he was met with perhaps the most beautiful mare hed ever laid eyes upon. Her firm slender form. Her beautiful snow white fur and her mesmerizing sapphire eyes. All the confidence he was pretending to have, completely evaporated. And unfortunately for him, that was the moment the unicorn noticed his presence. "Oh my, what can I do for you darling?" She asked. Not in that condescending voice so many other mares had given him. It was a genuine wonder, she genuinely wanted to know how she could help. He froze, as all the things he'd rehearsed flew from his head. Rarity stood before him eyebrow raised, patiently awaiting a response. He instantly shrunk under her gaze, trying to hide behind his mane. Reaching into his satchel, he pulled out a newspaper clip and held it out to her, almost hiding behind it. Rarity gave him a warm smile, the kind that just made him more embarrassed, before taking the article from his grip, giving it a once over she seemed shocked at the its contents. "Y-you want a job?" She asked incredulously, looking up from the newspaper clipping. He nodded firmly, finally mustering up the confidence to talk. He said. "I-I-I'm not just some stallion. I can do this, I-I, please, just give me a chance." He was nearly yelling by the end as he yanked the notebook from his satchel, he held it out to her, head bowed as he was practically shaking in fear. The longer his words hung in the air,the more hopeless he became. He ropped his sketch book, covering his face with his wings, he desperately tried to stop the tears but no matter how hard he wiped, they just kept coming. "Darling, darling there's no need to cry." Rarity walked up moving his wings away, pulling out a handkerchief and wiping his tears away. Holding it to his nose she said "blow" and taking a deep breath, he blew out his nose. "Sweet heart, theirs no need to cry, I'd be happy to look over your sketches. Its just, I never expected a stallion to come to me looking for for job." She told him calmly, gently rubbing his back, "I was just so surprised your request that I got caught up in my own head is all." Rarity gave him a gentle smile before leading him over to a nearby sofa. She climbed onto the sofa, gently patting the spot besides her, silently telling him to curl up besides her. Getting onto the sofa Raven curled up, ending up with his head on her thigh. Once situated, she began stroking his mane, the simple act calming him down almost instantly. "Now let me take a look at this sketchbook." Using her magic, she brought his sketch book before her, holding it open so he could see what she was looking at. Rarity seemed genuinely shocked at the contents, the mare asking him. "Did you do all of these?" he nodded. Sitting up he did his best to puff out his chest before he gave a proud nod. Raven was very proud of his artistic talent. Hed spent many long nights studying the countless styles of dressmaking. He'd worked for years to get so good, studying the needle & thread maticulously. The young stallion oh so desperately wanted to be a seamstress. "I've wanted to be a seamstress for so long... b-but no mare would take me serious." He gave a little snifle, "And whenever I was hired, they treated me little better then a call-Colt... Id lost all hope... B-But then i heard about you." he could barely contain himself at this point, tears flowed freely as he spoke to her. "I-I-I heard a-about you being the element of generosity, A-and about how you cared about everypony equally. I-I knew you were my only chance, and when i finally saw you, how incredible and beautiful you were. I though for sure you'd never take s-s-some c-colt like m-me serious." He utterly broke down, unable to hold it in. Rarity just held him close, gently cooing and stroking his mane. After hearing his story she could hardly blame him, who knew how much strife and mistreatment he'd been through chasing his dream. Rarity knew stallions were fragile creatures. They needed constant assurance and affection. And to hear how he'd been treated as some joke by other mares merely for being a colt -er, stallion, made her sick. This poor young stallion had come to her desperately wanting acceptance, and from what she'd seen, he did possess some real potential and she'd be damned to Tartarus before she'd let it go to waste. "Sssshhh, its alright darling, I'm not going treat you like some joke." She assured him, "You've got some real potential. I want you to know that." She said cupping his cheeks, getting him to look her in the eyes. "You really think so?" Raven asked almost desperately. Rarity only nodded, the simple act seemed nearly instantly perk him up, new tears forming in his eyes. "Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Miss Rarity." He leaps onto her, planting kisses all over her face. "I promise not to let you down." Rarity just laid back, quite happy to receive such appreciation. Having such a young and attractive colt giving her so much attention, the mare couldn't help but get a little worked up. The colt ended up holding her close, his fuzzy wings wrapped around the mare in what could only be considered a loving embrace. She was about to ask if he'd be up for some relief when she heard the colt release a gentle snore, turning his head, Rarity found the colt had drifted of to sleep. "ohhh poor thing, got so worked up he tuckered himself out.." She cooed, brushing some of his hair from his face. Rarity didn't have the heart to wake him up, especially when he felt so good pressed against her. So grabbing a nearby blanket she carefully drapes it across the both of them. "goodnight darling." Author's Note BOOM. my first chapter done. this was my first story so i hope you enjoyed it im going to keep making chapters. in fact im about to write another right now.
The 2nd ChapterSugarcube corner was always calm this time of day, especially with it being a school day, it meant there would be no little foals to run about. Rarity and the other elements were seated at one of the outside tables, each mare sipping their respective drink as they talked about the only thing mares seemed to talk about. Colts. Rainbow Dash, as was her nature, sat there bragging about her many supposed sexual escapades. Rarity, caught in her own head only caught the tail end of Rainbow Dash bragging. "I got two colts to do me at the same time, ya know?" Rainbow Dash puffed her chest proudly, as the mare bragged. "Yeah darlin' we know, you tell us ever'time we get talkin' about colts." applejack replies, rolling her eyes, she turns to Rarity next. "Ya'seem a lil out of it today Rarity, Somethin on your mind?" She asked the fashionista. Rarity snapped out of her though, playfully batting a hoof, "Oh don't worry about me darling. Just caught up in my work is all." She assured them. "That so?" Applejack asked, raising an brow. "Talkin about 'work', Whats this I been hear'in about you hire'in a stallion ta' work in your shop, aye Rare?" She asked her playfully, jabbing her elbow into the mares side. Rarity froze, looking up from her tea, she saw all eyes on her. Rainbow Dash spoke first. "Is that true Rarity?" Rarity couldn't help the nervous little chuckle escaping her, the mare rubbing her neck "W-well I uh... you know what, no." She said firmly, shaking her head. "I know what your thinking and NO! I did not hire some stallion to be my personal colt-toy." She gave each of them a glare, "Raven Feather is a kind, independent stallion, for whom i have the utmost respect for." "You wanna buck his brains out, don't 'cha?" asked Rainbow leaning over the table with a big smirk. "Yyeeessssss." Rarity whined. "You have no idea how hard it is to live with such a Colt." Rarity drops her head on the table, releasing a whine. "Hes so cute and sweet. And he wears socks! Aaaaall the time. I Cant. Handle. It...." She whined even louder. Each mare had a little chuckle at there friends whining. "Well tell us about him, I wanna know what makes him so alluring." asked Twilight with that nerdy little smile she always wore when talking about colts. Rarity, after composing herself addressed her friends. "Well if theirs one thing you're to know about Raven, its that he's not like your average stallion." "While he does cooks and cleans, hes assured me it's out of gratitude, and not some sort of courting. He gets along with Sweetie Bell like you wouldn't believe, it's beautiful. And above all he simply refuses any sort of relief. And I mean anything. Magic, blowjobs, anything at all" The other elements were absolutely shocked to hear this. A stallion. Independent. This was unheard of. Stallions were cute fluffy little things, to fragile to care for themselves and constantly required relief and attention. "Well, whats he look like?" asked Pinkie Pie, slurping on her oversized milkshake. Rarity sighed. "Oohh my Celestia.If I've ever seen a more beautiful Stallion, I don't know when~" She purred, "He has the most beautiful Raven black coat and the the cutest white freckles across his face." She swooned. "And his wings have all of these beautiful white spots. When he flares them up its like a field of stars that would make even Luna blush. AND his hair!" She practically gawked. "His hair is smoother then silk and whiter than fresh snow." Rarity seemed entranced. The elements all sat there, imagining the stallion "Ya' know, I' been think'in about gettin' myself a Coltfriend." Applejack mussed thoughtfully, hoove gently trailing around his glass. "Don't even think about it sister." Snapped Rarity, slamming her hoof on the table. "And that goes for the rest of you as well. None of you are to lay a hoof on him." "Aawwwww, but he sounds so sexxyyy." whined Pinkie Pie. "Too bad." replied Rarity. "Raven Feather is mine and none of you are gonna get him into bed before I do." "Gee, what happened to "someone I have the utmost respect for"?" Asked Rainbow Dash smugly. "Well how about a compromise?" asked twilight, the elements all turned to look at her. "What sort of compromise?" Rarity asked wary of the other elements. "Its simple. It seems like each of us are looking for a Coltfriend, right?' That got nod from each of them. "Well then the answers simple. We all herd him." She spoke like it was the most logical thing in the world. "No." deadpanned Rarity. "Oh come on Rarity at least listen to what i have to say." Twilight frowned, each element now staring at her. "Fiiiiiiine." Rarity conceded, propping herself on her elbow. "Alright its simple, each one of us are looking for a Coltfriend to herd, right?" all of the elements nod, Rarity giving a dull one herself. "And we know we can all get along right?" Again, the elements each gave a nod. "So its simple, we'll all try to herd with this Raven Feather." The other 5 elements mused over the idea. "Wait, hold on, wait'ta minute." Applejack but in. "Rarity you said he was 'independent stallion' right?" Rarity simply nodded. "And hes turned down any advance you've made to Buck, right?" Rarity nodded a second time. "So what makes you think he'll just, up and herd with six ponies, when he wont even let the mare who cares for him buck him?" the question stumped them all, 'how would they get him?' ran through each of there heads. "Rarity?" Twilight asked. "What?" rarity replied, expecting something she wouldn't like. "Do you honestly think you could get Raven feather to herd with you?" All eyes were on rarity, clearing her throat she replied. "Yes. No... Maybe." She sighed, rubbing her face, "I believe I could court him quite easily. As for the rest of you, that's an entirely different matter." she finished, looking over each of them. "How so?" asked Rainbow Dash, the rest of the elements seemed to agree. "Well you see..." She began, "When Raven Feather came to me, he was in a very fragile state. He'd trained for years to work as a seamstress, but every time he tried he was treated like either a wounded pup or some... call-colt." She finished with a scowl. "He tried so hard to prove himself. But every time he was belittled or taken advantage of by those mares." Her throat suddenly dry Rarity took a sip of tea trying to stay composed. "And when he finally came to me... He was so scared of being rejected again, he cried when he thought I might reject him." "I don't know what Raven Feathers early life was like, but he seems so cautious of mares he even seems wary of me on occasion. But I've been doing my best to prove I was worth trusting and I believe it's been working." Rarity was struggling to stay composed. "I don't think he has anypony else and he absolutely refuses to talk about his mother. I don't want to risk losing him by forcing a relationship..." She took a steady breath, "But I feel confident, that If done carefully, he may be willing to herd with us." "So were really gonna do this?" asked Applejack, looking at each mare at the table. "I guess so." replied twilight, the princess too looking about the table. "Well I guess I should get back to work then." She told them all. "ill be going first of course. Afterwards, ill introduce the rest of you. Good day ladies." With that Rarity stood and began walking sown the street, a sense of determination in her steps. Author's Note I hope you enjoy I'll try and get the second chapter out as soon as possible, but between school and another story I'm currently working it may take some time, if theirs grammar problems point them out and ill fix them. THX
Chapter Number 3"Alright Rarity, you got this." She shook her head and puffed out her chest, making sure her chest fluff was nice and presentable. It wasn't the largest, being a unicorn and all, but it was still nice and fluffy. "All you need to do is get an incredibly independent with seemingly little trust in mares to sleep with you and agree to herd with you and your 5 mare friends." She froze, realizing the idiocy of what she'd just said. With a sigh, she walked up to her front door. "Well, when you put it like that." she deadpanned. Shaking her head she tried to re-orientate herself. 'Stay focused Rarity, you have a job to do.' she scolded herself. Taking one last deep breath she opened the door and upon entering her home, she was hit with the sweet smell of something cooking. Seeing as she wasnt coughing her lungs out, she instantly knew it couldnt be Sweetie Bells cooking, she followed her nose to the kitchen finding quite the sight. Raven Feather was bent over checking the oven, but what he was wearing almost caused Rarity to have a nosebleed. Raven Feather, dressed in a full Prench maids outfit, garter belts and all. Turning around he seemed surprise to see Rarity. "Oh! Hello miss rarity, I didn't hear you enter." "How was brunch?" he asked giving her thet innocent little smile that made her knees weak. "It was lovely, darling, and the girls are going fantastic." She told him walking around Raven to see what he was cooking. She found a series of roasted vegetables and salad ingredients. "This looks delectable darling, Whats the occasion." "Um, so I uh, I got Sweetie bell to stay at Applebloom's so you and i could have a night alone." He told her rubbing his front forelegs together. "I wanted to thank you for being... for taking a chance on a lone Colt looking for a job." He told her timidly, hiding behind his mane. Rarity just smiled at his behaviour, her eyes scanning over his outfit. Looking down at his outfit seemingly forgetting he had it on. "Oh, uh, I hope you don't mind. I found this among your stallion wardrobe and I thought it would be nice to get all dressed up for tonight." "No, No its fine. I don't mind at all, if anything I think you actually look amazing." she said truthfully. Raven Blushed hard, hiding behind his mane. "Well, uh, thank you. Dinner will be ready soon So go upstairs and pick out something for the occasion." He told her, gently shooing her. "Well alright then, sounds wonderful." She spoke through a smile. With that Raven Feather returned to his dinner preparation, Rarity giving Ravens rear one last peek before she went up stairs. 'what should i wear... hmm. Perhaps my spring gown...? No, I need something simple. Something i can put on. . . and take off, quickly~' she thought through a lecherous grin. Making her way to her wardrobe, she quickly went through her collection until she finally came across the perfect gown. It was a simple black lace gown she'd made for just such an occasion. Easy to put on and take off. Slipping it on and after checking herself in the mirror she hurried downstairs. Just before reaching the finale step, she stopped, composing herself and began walking with the elegance befitting a lady. making her way to the dining room she was confronted with a candle lit dinner, complete with and white tablecloth and roses. Raven Feather still in full maids outfit, stood beside the table. Rarity was shocked, never in her life had she expected Raven to be so... Forward. She expected a nice meal that would maybe lead to intimacy. Not something from one of her more lecherous romance novels. Raven gave a shy smile, holding out a wing, he took a step back and said. "Tad-DA!" Rarity stood in silence for much longer then she should have, as Raven dropped his wing, slumped to the floor. The stallion mumbled to himself, "I knew it wasn't good enough." And before she knew it Raven began weeping gently. Rarity, seeing raven in tears, quickly ran too his side. "No, no, sweet heart, theres othings wrong. I was just so taken aback by the scene I merely froze." She tried to assure him. Rarity was brought out of her thoughts by Raven shaking his head. "No you don't get it. I wanted so desperately for tonight to be special, to be special with you. I wanted to tell you everything, but I've already messed it up." "No, darling you didn't ruin anything. All of this is magnificent." She told him, bringing him to her chest, "I... i just wasn't expecting you to be so forward after being so... abstinent the entire time I've known you, I guess I was just shocked. I mean your so-" "You don't think i want that, you don't think I want to do that kinda stuff with you, huh? You don't think i'd like to Share a bed, or have showers together. Or... the other things Colts do with mares. I DO, Celestia I do. I just... After everything I've been through... I didn't know if I could trust you." He told her somberly. Rarity sighed, gently nuzzling his cheek, "Sweet heart, whatever it is, you can trust me. I know I'm a mare and I know it might be hard, but I want to be there for you." Rarity told him warmly, pulling the colt close. Raven let out weak chuckle. "Rarity *snort* you already earned it, I just, I didn't know if I was ready to admit that to myself." He told her, and without warning, lent in and kissed her. Not the normal peck the stallion would give her in thanks of a humble task. No, this was a full on mare kiss. He even used tongue. Of course Rarity was taken aback by such a move, especially with Raven's track record of hesitance towards mares. But that didn't stop her from enjoying it. They sat their for a while, just kissing for Celestia know's how long before they finally separated for air. Rarity sat there for a moment, in her own little daze before letting out a "wow." The colt just giving a nod. Rarity's little daze was broken when Raven leaned against her, releasing a somber little chuckle. Looking down at the stallion, she found Raven seemed to wear a sad smile. Rarity couldnt really see a reason to be sad at a moment like this, so like a mare she asked "Whats wrong darling?" Raven let out a somber laugh, before replying "Oh nothing, i was just thinking about how my life would have been if I had found you years ago." Rarity, wasn't sure how to take that. Raven, had always been so guarded about his past. Looking up at her and seeing her concern, Raven let out a long chuckle. "Yeah, I guess you out of anypony deserves an explanation." He told her, nuzzling into her neck. Raven stood up and walked to the kitchen, Rarity stood up and took a moment to compose herself. This wasn't how she saw tonight going. Walting to the, kitchen she found the familiar sight of Raven was bent over as he searched a lower cabinet, his tail was swinging back and forth lazoly, showing a good bit of his ball cleavage, the colt even wore a matching lacy ball bra. Before this development could really effect her, her gazing was cut short as Raven suddenly jumped up with a not so hearty "hurrah." Raven had pulled out a bottle of hard cider, the bottle even resembling an apple. So, reaching into the above head cabinet and pulled out two glasses before moving over to the kitchen table. "I was gonna save this for after dinner, but... plans change." He deadpanned. So after the colt took a minute to open the bottle, he poured them each a glass, Rarity sat down. Taking a sip of cider, Raven began his story. "My mother, like so many mares, was apart of a herd." He began, taking an even bigger sip of cider. "And when I was born, naturally my mother and her herd-mates were ecstatic. Or at least that's what they told me." He finished bitterly. "But?" Rarity spoke up gently, with a nod raven continued. "But, my father? Not so much." Raven took a sip of his cider before continuing. "You see my father was a spoiled and jealous stallion. And my mother just happened to be his favorite." He finished with another sip of cider. She wouldn't like it, but if he kept this up, Rarity may need to cut him off. "For the first 11 years of my life, my father never had a kind word to me." He finished with a scowl. "And it seemed like the blink of an eye until my eleventh birthday. When he'd finally get what he wanted." At this point tears were streaking down Ravens face, but he did nothing about them. He took another swig of cider, taking a good long stare at his barely impacted drink. "Lets go to the park' my mother said, 'we'll have a lovely day before your birthday.' she told me. But of course it was a lie. She took me into town. she took me to the orphanage. She pinned a note to my jumper, 'stay right here sweetie, I'll be right back.' she said, tears in her eyes." A sad chuckled filled his chest, "And even as she was abandoning me... All I wanted to do was help. . . then she left." Raven just sat their, tear stained eyes as he just stared at his drink. Rarity was on the brink of tears herself, only holding back to let Raven finish. Raven finally wiped his eyes, taking another drink of cider. "'I'm sorry but I can't care for this colt anymore' is what the note said." Ravens upper lip turned into a scowl, "She couldn't care for me?" He asked incredulously, shaking his head. "Of course, being a colt, it was barely a day before I was adopted." He stopped to take a drink. "She was a noble in Canterlot. I thought maybe I could begin again, maybe have a mother who loved me." Raven was already shaking his head, "It became very clear what her real intentions were when she started sending me on 'Play dates' with her friends." The stallion grit his teeth as he told her, "More or less she would send me to her friends so they could fuck me." He was practically spat each word by the end. Rarity was honestly caught between crying and screaming in rage. The idea that someone would exploit a stallion like that, let alone a colt, filled her with a type of anger she'd never felt before. Raven was swaying slightly, obviously buzzed but he went for another drink only to find his glass was empty. "And that went on for nearly... 2 years... I was just a thing to her. Sure she got me fancy clothes and toys and more socks then you could point a stick at. But she didn't care. She couldn't even be bothered to remember my name." He told her, "She always just called me 'feathers'. I hated that name..." Rarity wasn't sure how drunk about Ravens alcohol tolerance, but if he was anything like most stallions two inched of cider in a margarita glass likely meant he was drunk. As such she stopped Raven from refilling his glass. Using her magic to slide the bottle away from him. Of course that was followed by him giving her perhaps the cutest pouty face she'd ever seen. But he shrugged and with a sigh, he went back to talking. "That went on for nearly 2 years. Until one day, we went to the park, the mare likely wanting to show me off... or something. Anyway, we were walking down the pavement and then... I saw them... I saw my mother and her herd. i walked up to her and asked..." Ravens lower lip quivered, "Why?" Raven covered his face with his hooves. Rarity bolted around the table wrapping him in the biggest hug she could. They sat together for what felt like hours until Raven pulled his hooves away from his face. "you know what she said to me? You know what she said to her son she abandoned?..." Rarity was scared to hear the answer, but asked none the less, her throat was suddenly dry as she asked him "What did she say?" lowering his hooves he said. "She told me... she told me it was worth it to see her stallion happy." He finished, eyes seeming to glaze over. "And I that moment I couldn't.. I couldnt take it anymore. So I ran. I ran for hours and hours. I ran till my hooves hurt and i eventually ended up in some alleyway, in outer Canterlot." "I sat there and cried for, hours? I don't know how long. Bur eventually I was found by one of the royal guards." "Looking back i can see she was just acting like a guard should, like any good pony would. She said she'd take me back to my mother... but at the time I was so angry and hurt and betrayed, I just... POPPED." "I screamed and cursed and yelled at her. I told her I hated her and I wished every mare in Equestria would go to Tartarus. And even after id said all of those awful things, I told her all that awful stuff... she just walked forwards and held me like... a mother would." Raven nuzzled into the crook of Rarity's neck. "Her name was Platinum Shield. She was a respected member of the guard so she managed to get me away from that noble and eventually, she adopt me." He finished with a warm smile gracing his lips. "She was the only mare I trusted since my mother abandoned me... I found it so hard to find a Mare that I could trust. Until i got a job in this little town called Ponyville." He finished with a little eye roll. Rarity whipped her head down to see Raven smiling up at her. "You... uh, you mean yo-." she was stopped by ravens hoof. "When my mother abandoned me and i left that dreadful noble mare, i promised myself I'd never be like all the other stallion. I'd never be a spoiled brat that demanded something from everyone." He told her, seemingly proud of himself. "I promised I wouldn't be influenced or controlled by Mares." He told her firmly. "But you've treated me with respect and self restraint." she could feel his breath in her ear as he leaned in and said. "I think you've earned a reword." leaning back Raven licked his lips. The sight seemed to awaken something in Rarity she'd been trying so very hard to keep suppressed for the last few weeks. "So tonight. is. all. about. you." He purred Author's Note BOOM CLIFF HANGER That was my third chapter and i hope you all enjoyed it. As always please let me know if i messed up somewhere and i always appreciate constructive criticism. The next chapter will be purely lemon as a continuation of this chapter. ill be putting it out soon.
The chapter where Rarity Sex's Raven FeatherSomething has gone wrong. We don't seem to have an archived copy of that chapter.
