second chapter enjoy
i was still jumping roof to roof, trying to dodge the technicolor ponies. then i felt a sharp pain in my chest like a knife. i looked down and saw that my shirt was cut up and i had bruses on my chest. " ouch!" i yelled. i slowed down and the bruses where gone. "gotcha!" the tomboyish voice yelled. then a cyan pegasus with a rainbow mane flew into me. " hey! watch out!" i screamed. then i felt a rope tie my feet. "what do want from me!" i screamed. " We want answers!" the unicorn yelled."First What are you!?" "im a human, we are bipedal creatures like monkeys." i told the ponies. "now can you tell me your names okay?" i told them. "ok! my names twilight,pinkie pie,Rainbow Dash,Rarity, Applejack,and Fluttershy!"
thanks to the critism from my second fanfic i though about another idea and here it is
When i woke up in the morning i was greeted by rays of sunshine. i grabbed my guitar and practiced my favorite song from the band need to breathe. After that i went downstairs and got a pop-tart from the pantry. " i love me a pop-tart!" i told my self. when i turned on the tv i saw that the electricity was out. "probably the rain from yesterday." i thought. "i should go on my bike, i haven't been out in a while." i said with a smile. as i got on my bike i went into the woods to the cliff i always knew since i was little. I was going to try some thing i've never done before. jump the cliff. it was about three feet wide and one thousand feet deep.
i went back to get ready jump the cliff. when i got back enough i started to peddle really fast. getting ready to jump i bent down on the bike and tried to jump! "I'm gonna make it!" i yelled. but i was wrong it was wider than expected. i jumped off the bike, i tried grabbing the edge but i failed. before i knew it i was consumed in darkness but at that moment i saw a bright light. i covered my eyes from the blinding light then i was falling again. but i was falling in the sky? i saw horses, no ponies with wings." um a little help here im falling to my doom!" i shouted to the flying ponies. one must of heard me because it zoomed down and caught me. i stared at it with a blank face then blacked out. i woke up in a treehouse with book shelves?
"ugh,Where am i?" i asked my self. "oh you're awake!" the female voice said. i looked towards the sound. "AGGHHHHH!" i screamed. "Wait, calm down!" she told me. i zoomed out the door into the village with technicolor ponies. suddenly six ponies stood in front of me. i leaped over then like hurdles, i heard one of them say "get my rope.". i looked back and saw an orange pony holding a rope in it's mouth. i though the most obvious choice would to tie my feet. so i jumped at the right time to dodge the rope. still running i saw that a Pegasus was closing in on me. i started running faster trying to dodge the attack. but when i looked in front of me saw a white horned pegasus with a multi-colored mane. "oh shoot!" i yelled. i slid under her large body and got up looking which way to go. i ran left, it looked like traffic so i jumped on the roofs.
