Sunset's Messy Adventureby The Dark WolfChaptersA New WorldA Messy JourneySunset vs. the DazzlingsAftermathA New WorldSunset Shimmer woke up one morning. She was inside a sleeping bag in a tent, as she was on a camping trip with her friends. She stretched her arms, yawned, and got out of her sleeping bag. She changed out of her slightly sweaty pajamas into a tank top the same shade of purple as them, and a short, tight pair of jean shorts. She ran to the camp outhouse to take her morning pee. Afterwards, she headed back to the tents. She was just walking by a nearby cave when a mysterious green light could be seen shining from inside it. Curious, Sunset walked into the cave, and the further she progressed, the brighter the light grew. Eventually, she reached a wall, where the light seemed to be shining from. Sunset put her hand on the wall. It went through it. Could this be a portal to another world? There was only one way to find out. Sunset walked through the wall. She reappeared in another cave which had purple walls lined with gems. It was quite a sight to behold. She just had to tell her friends about it. She turned around to go back to her world, but slammed right into a rock wall and fell on her butt. She could hear some female voices laughing with an echo. For some reason, they sounded familiar to her. They must have closed the gateway. Sunset stood up, rubbing her butt, and walked out of the cave into a bizarre-looking land. The sky was pink, and there was giant food everywhere. Mostly a wide variety of fruits and desserts. She walked over to a giant apple, which reminded her of a story Princess Twilight had told her about Discord. She took a bite into it, and immediately it sprayed her with apple juice. Sunset was soaked through. She was a little uncomfortable at how sticky it felt, but didn't mind too much, because the apple was delicious. After taking a few more bites, she walked over to another one. Before she could bite into it, a giant worm came out. Sunset was startled, backed away, and fell over a ledge, landing in sitting position on top of a giant cake with vanilla frosting. Sunset was very hungry, as she hadn't eaten breakfast today, so she started eating as much cake as she could, not caring that she was getting frosting all over herself. Once Sunset was full, she belched loudly, and blushed, giggling nervously at this unladylike display even though no one was here. She slid down the side of the cake, landing on her feet. She looked at the state she was in, and shrugged, deciding to just explore this new world some more and then figure out how to get back. Suddenly, a large, furry monster walked up to her. Sunset stood frozen with fear. Surely she must look delicious covered in frosting, and she was about to be this monster's dessert! But instead of putting her in its mouth, the monster started to lick Sunset hard. It was drooling as much as Cerberus or an orthros, but Sunset laughed at how much this tickled. Once Sunset's front half was frosting free, the beast turned her around and licked her back half. When it was done, Sunset was no longer covered in frosting, but dripping in slobber. This disgusted her a little, but she was relieved that the monster only seemed to care about eating sugar. Sure enough, the monster progressed to the cake Sunset had landed on and started stuffing itself with it. Sunset walked through the land, taking note of things to try when she wasn't full from cake anymore, until she found two girls sitting sadly at the food area's edge. A desert could be seen outside its boundaries. Sunset walked over to them. "What's wrong?" she asked. The two girls looked up. "You must not be from around here," said the blue girl with the white hair. "Something terrible has happened here recently. I'm Wind Whistler." "I'm Fizzy," said the teal girl with the red and white hair. "What happened?" said Sunset. "I saved my world before, maybe I can save yours." "Our ruler, Princess Tiffany, has been kidnapped by three powerful girls who claim to be sirens from another world called Equestria," said Wind Whistler. "Sirens?" said Sunset. "It must be the Dazzlings! I defeated them once before." "Can you defeat them again?" asked Fizzy, sounding hopeful. "I'm not sure. Last time I had my friends by my side, but the Dazzlings sealed the portal back to my world. Um... what do you call this world?" "Primrose Kingdom." "We call my world Earth, but I'm originally from Equestria as well, and I'll defeat them and rescue Princess Tiffany!" "If you think you're up to the task," said Wind Whistler, "they set up a castle across the desert. There will be a swamp, then a forest which they have total control over. Their castle is just past the forest." "Thanks," said Sunset. She wasn't very confident that she could beat the Dazzlings again, but she had no choice but to set forward. "And by the way," said Fizzy, "if the giant worms or monsters here frightened you, you don't have to worry about them. They're really friendly." "I'll keep that in mind," said Sunset, and she stepped into the desert and walked forward. Author's Note Warning: The rest of the wam won't be this tasty. A Messy JourneyThe trip across the desert took way longer than Sunset expected. She could see the mountain on the other side, but it was so far away and never seemed to get closer. Fortunately, dehydration wasn't a problem here, because the desert was full of vending machines that, strangely enough, dispensed water bottles or sodas for free. So she stayed hydrated, drinking so much that she had to pee every half hour, but since no one was around to see her, she was able to just pull her shorts down and do her business without much trouble. Occasionally she'd find something to eat as well, such as sandwiches or popsicles. The desert heat dried the drool off her, but she soon became soaked with sweat. She was thankful for all this water and soda across the desert. It would take some time getting used to this world. She slept two nights in a row, since the trip took that long. On the morning of her second day, the cake and apple Sunset had eaten caught up with her. Again, she was able to pull her shorts down and go to the bathroom without worrying about anyone seeing her, but she had nothing to wipe with, and it felt very wet, so once her shorts were back up, her white panties felt dirty. On the third day, Sunset finally reached the edge of the desert. She was panting and dripping with sweat. She sniffed her armpit and recoiled. She had not washed for three days, and between this and how much she had sweated, she smelled bad. It didn't help how dirty her underwear was. She found a tunnel that led through the mountain, which came out at the swamp Wind Whistler had mentioned. The water was green and smelled worse than she did right now. The sky here was full of yellowish green clouds, probably from the stench of the swamp. Sunset walked through the swamp water, which was deep enough to submerge her entire feet and a bit above her ankles. She cringed as she felt it soak through her shoes and get her socks wet. This swamp smelled twice as bad as her stinkiest farts. She had been walking through this foul swamp for a little over ten minutes when she suddenly felt her underwear yanked up to stretch out of her shorts, lifting her in the air. She exclaimed in surprise, blushed, and looked up to see who was giving her a wedgie. It was Sonata Dusk. She was flying with bat wings, evidently a result of the power she and her brethren had obtained. Sonata giggled. "I wanted to do that for SO long ever since you took our powers! Your undies look a little dirty." "Let me down!" said Sunset, struggling against her. "Okay!" Sonata let go of Sunset's panties, and she fell butt-first into the swamp water. Sonata giggled as Sunset became soaked in the foul-smelling water. As if she didn't smell bad enough already. Sonata flew away before Sunset could yell at her. Sunset stood up, pulled herself back together, and continued on her way, hoping Princess Tiffany wouldn't be put off by how she smelled when she reached her. Or better yet, that it would rain and wash all this off her. This was one time she was HOPING for rain. She found another random vending machine, this one containing 2L bottles of soda. Despite the overpowering stench of the swamp, she was thirsty, so she took one bottle of soda and drank it like there was no tomorrow, spilling quite a bit of it down her front. Then she continued to walk forward. At one point she tripped and fell facedown in the swamp water again. If there was any part of her that had been clean of this disgusting water, it wasn't anymore. Eventually, the swamp water ended, and she could see a forest ahead. Sunset felt relieved to be getting out of this area, even though its smell would be on her for the rest of the adventure. Just as she was stopping to take this in, she was suddenly splashed from above by fish heads, and a lot of fishy water with it. Sunset looked up to see Aria Blaze with a bucket in her hands, also sporting wings. "Revenge is so sweet," said Aria. "And we're just getting started. Smell you later!" She flew away laughing. Sunset groaned. She was wet, dirty, and smelled of sweat, body odor, swamp water, and fish. She could handle getting soaked in the rain, but this... ... As Sunset walked through the forest, Adagio Dazzle watched her on a TV screen at her castle. Aria returned. "Nice one, Aria," said Adagio. "It'll take her weeks to get both the swamp water and fish smell out." "And now she's in our forest!" said Sonata. "The one we control with voodoo!" Adagio dropped a Sunset doll above a map of the forest. As if by magnets, it immediately fell to the spot on the map where Sunset currently was, and moved with her. "Let me go first," she said, and she flicked the Sunset doll's butt as hard as she could. In the forest, Sunset yelped in pain and grabbed her butt with both hands. The sirens burst into laughter at this. "Where are you?" said Sunset, looking around as she rubbed her butt. No one seemed to be around, but she knew something had hit her rear end hard. "Are you up for another wedgie?" said Sonata, and she grabbed Voodoo Sunset's panties with her thumb and index finger, and pulled. "Waaaah!" Sunset was lifted into the air by her dirty underwear. She looked up, expecting to see Sonata again, but she wasn't there. This was starting to freak her out. Were the sirens invisible? Adagio, Aria, and Sonata laughed more. Sonata was kicking her legs so much you could see her underwear (all three were wearing their original outfits), but she didn't care. Once Sonata stopped laughing, she dropped the doll, and Sunset landed on her sore behind. "My turn," said Aria. She picked up Voodoo Sunset, and in the forest Sunset levitated into the air. Aria threw Sunset into a mud puddle, landing on her back. The mud was nothing compared to the swamp water, but it did nothing to wash it off or mask her smell. When Sunset stood up, she suddenly felt the last soda she drank go through her, and grabbed her crotch with both hands. "She looks like she has to pee," said Sonata. "Perfect," said Adagio. "Sonata, hold her while we get the animals. Let's have a little fun with her." Sonata gave Sunset another wedgie and held her in the air while Adagio and Aria took dolls of various animals, and placed as many around every tree and bush in the forest as they could. Since they had constructed these dolls, the animals were mere drones under the sirens' control, but Sunset didn't know that. "Let me down!" said Sunset, holding herself with both hands. "I have to go to the bathroom!" Sonata released Sunset, and Sunset ran behind a tree, but the tree branches were crawling with monkeys. Sunset didn't want to pull her shorts down in front of any animals, so she ran around looking for a bush to go behind. She found another bush, but then a deer walked up to her, so she continued running around. The whole while her bladder became more and more full. She was already filthy, but didn't want to suffer the indignity of a pee accident. She finally found a big tree that looked like there weren't any monkeys around it. She ran behind it, and had just unzipped her shorts when she heard a loud neighing sound, and four horses ran up to her. Sunset quickly blushed and zipped herself up again. Her shyness of peeing in front of animals went double for horses because they looked so much like ponies. Running a bit away from the tree, she found an outhouse. Perfect! It was her only shot at some privacy so she could avoid going to the bathroom in her shorts. As she ran toward the outhouse, it suddenly moved away. She looked in the direction it had gone, and saw its new position. She ran toward it again, but then suddenly she went moving in the opposite direction. Sonata giggled as she moved the Sunset doll while Aria had her hand on the outhouse doll. When Sunset regained control, she ran toward the outhouse again, but it moved upwards, then fell back down in another section of forest. Sunset found it and ran at it as fast as she could, feeling the pee sloshing around inside her. But unexpectedly, she rose into the air and flew over it, landing on her butt. She ran to the outhouse entrance, but it moved again. "Whoever you are, this isn't funny!" said Sunset, holding herself and pee dancing. "I really have to go!" "Ooh, I wonder how long until she wets herself?" said Aria. She and Sonata continued to keep Sunset from reaching the outhouse. Eventually, Sunset realized trying to get into this outhouse was a lost cause, so she returned to the path and ran as fast as she could, hoping to find another one. Aria placed the outhouse near the path ahead of Sunset. Sunset saw it, assumed it was a different one, and ran for it as fast as she could, feeling she was about to burst. But then it rose into the air, and never reappeared. Sunset groaned and continued to run. "At this rate, she'll be out of the forest soon," said Adagio. "Way ahead of you," said Sonata, and she started to tickle Voodoo Sunset's armpits with her fingers. In the forest, Sunset could feel herself being tickled and started to laugh uncontrollably. Sonata only had to tickle for five seconds before Sunset started to pee full force. Sonata continued to tickle as Sunset continued to laugh and pee in her filthy shorts. Adagio and Aria watched on their screen, and exchanged glances of satisfaction as they watched the pee run down Sunset's legs. Once Sunset stopped peeing, Sonata stopped tickling. Sunset's laughter slowed down and stopped, and she felt her shorts. They had been wet before, but now they were warm, and smelled of pee in addition to everything else. She blushed beet red. She could not believe she had just peed herself. At least she could take a bit of comfort in the fact that it would be hard for anyone to notice with how messy she already was. As Sunset resumed walking forward, Adagio took out a doll of a large forest monster resembling a giant pig and set it on the path ahead of Sunset. "What's that for?" said Aria. "You know that thing doesn't attack people." "No, but what I'm gonna make it do will be unpleasant for Sunset all the same." Adagio started to cast a spell. Sunset found her path blocked by the monster. "You don't want to eat me," she said. "I don't taste very good like this." The monster didn't look like it was going to make an aggressive move. It just looked confused. Then, yellow sparkles appeared around it, and it suddenly started taking deep breaths, in the way that usually only came before one thing. "Oh no," said Sunset. The monster sneezed, showering Sunset with snot. The very texture of it repulsed her more than the swamp water. She could only imagine how Rarity would react in her position. The monster sneezed on Sunset twice more, each time as effective as the first. Sunset wiped the gooey substance from her face. The monster rubbed its nose, sniffled, and walked away. Sunset continued running, wanting to get out of this forest NOW. She finally reached the forest exit, and saw the sirens' castle not far ahead. This was it. This was the end of her journey. As Sunset ran towards the castle, Aria and Sonata suddenly flew in, wearing rubber gloves, and grabbed Sunset's arms, lifting her up. "I hope you enjoyed our little forest funhouse," said Aria. "And me tickling you," said Sonata. "And that monster sneezing on you," said Aria. "You can thank Adagio for that one." "When I get through with you..." said Sunset. "Phew," said Aria. "She smells real bad." "It's about to get worse!" giggled Sonata. And she and Aria threw Sunset down a manhole. She landed on her back in sewage that had her completely submerged. She sat up instantly, sputtering. The sewage smelled worse than the swamp water. She climbed up the ladder out of the manhole, to find that Aria and Sonata were gone. Author's Note The desert scene was inspired by a scene in Digimon where, after walking through a desert and taking a bath, Sora comments that they were getting pretty smelly. The forest/voodoo scene was also inspired by Puppetmon's first big episode, though there wasn't anything bathroom-related there. And the fish heads, Hey Arnold. Don't worry, Sunset will get through it all just fine, though it will take a while to get the smell out. And she's survived worse. Sunset vs. the DazzlingsSunset sprinted to the sirens' castle, ponied up, and blasted down the front door. To her dismay, ponying up did not dry clean her at all. She ran to the sirens' throne room as fast as she could. All three sirens were inside waiting patiently for her. "We hope you enjoyed the trip here," said Adagio. "Of course, you'd probably say it stinks," said Aria. Sonata laughed at this. "Where's Princess Tiffany?" Sunset demanded. "She's in the dungeon with many more of her most loyal subjects," said Adagio. "Then all I have to do is defeat you and-" All three sirens blasted Sunset to the ground immediately. Sunset's pony features disappeared. Aria and Sonata got Sunset into a chair and tied her hands to its arms. Then they tied her feet together. "Surely you don't want me stinking up your throne room, do you?" said Sunset. "We'll just leave you here till we have what we need," said Adagio. "What are you after this time?" "We found a source of magic that gave us power, which still didn't give us our old siren powers back. But I discovered there is an amulet that we can use to regain these powers. Once we have it, we'll turn everyone else in this world against each other and feed on their hate. Then it's back to your world, and then, finally, Equestria will be ours!" Sunset struggled against her ropes. "I will stop you!" "How?" said Adagio. "We sealed the way out. Your friends aren't going to help you. We want you to see us destroy it all before we finish you. Aria." Aria held up two chunks of giant fruit that were each about the size of a regular fruit. One looked like a prune, and the other was a fruit Sunset wasn't familiar with. "Eat these," Aria said. "One of them will keep you full for a week. It's no good if you die before seeing our victory. If we don't find this amulet in a week, we'll be back." She held out the fruit chunks to Sunset, who ate them, and then Aria held out a glass of juice. Sunset looked at her suspiciously. "It's not poison," said Adagio. "I told you we want you to see our victory first." Sunset drank the juice. It tasted unfamiliar to her. "What is this?" "It'll keep you hydrated for a week," said Aria. "But it'll make you pee a lot," said Sonata. "And not diluted pee either like when you drink lots of water in one day." "Have fun sitting like that until we get back," said Aria as she, Adagio, and Sonata flew out their window. Sunset sat in her messy state, unable to move much, as the hours went by. Sonata wasn't kidding; that drink did make her pee a lot, even though she never got hungry or thirsty. Rather than give the sirens the satisfaction of letting her squirm again, Sunset decided there was no point in suffering, and peed as soon as she felt the urge grow strong. Between the state she was in and having already wet herself once on this adventure, there was really no point in trying to hold it. One couldn't even tell what color her shorts and tank top were. That evening, she made a rather nasty mess in her already heavily soiled and smelly shorts. This had to have been why Aria gave her a prune. She had to sit in this state for the entire night, and for another whole day, peeing more times than she could count. But through it all she never lost her resolve to fight the sirens and save this world. As unpleasant as this was, she wasn't about to let it defeat her or break her will. She was tougher than that. Besides, she honestly found the Anon-A-Miss situation much worse. On the third day, the sirens returned. Sonata giggled at the sight of the massive puddle under Sunset's chair. By now the pee smell was easier to notice amidst the other smells. "That was faster than I expected," said Sunset, trying to sound unaffected by what they had done to her. "We found it sooner than we expected," said Adagio. "And now, we shall use it to take control of the other two worlds!" This was it. It was now or never. Sunset thought about her friends. About Princess Twilight. How she wanted their worlds to be free of evil like them. How she didn't want the sirens that had put her through all this to win. She could feel magic stirring within her, with a bit of a glow, but it wasn't enough to even pony up. She tried to channel the magic of the amulet with her mind, hoping she could get it to react to her instead of them. Surprisingly, the amulet glowed and was pulled out of Adagio's hand over to Sunset, engulfing her in a bright light. Sunset's bonds were destroyed and she ponied up again. "This cannot be!" said Adagio. "It reacts to you? How?" "My determination must be stronger than yours," said Sunset, and she released a blast of magic, which hit the sirens and sent them flying out the window, disintegrating their wings. They landed in a large, wet, stinky pile of horse manure. Aria stood up and tried to blast Sunset, but it wouldn't work. She tried to flap her wings, but they were gone. Sunset had taken away their power. Aria groaned and sat back down. Author's Note I know, the way she defeated them seemed a bit rushed and made less sense on her own, but I couldn't really think of how else it would work. We'll chalk it up to the amulet's power and her unbreakable determination to beat them, possibly even increased by what they did to her. AftermathSunset ran down to the dungeon and magically opened all the cell doors. She could tell which one was Princess Tiffany. Both her skin and hair were white and she wore a sparkling purple dress. She almost reminded her of Rarity. "You're free," said Sunset. She quickly checked herself out and blushed when she realized she still wasn't clean, but Tiffany didn't seem to mind. "Thank you," said Princess Tiffany. "What is your name?" "I'm Sunset Shimmer, and I come from Earth. And Equestria. I'm really sorry you had to see me like this." She was covered in sweat, swamp water, fishy water, mud, pee, snot, and sewage, and her shorts were filled with poop. She smelled absolutely horrible. "It's all right. As a matter of fact, as a reward for saving me, I can give you a bath in the sirens' bathtub." "Are you sure you can put up with the smell?" "I will. Where are the sirens now?" "They fell out the window of their throne room." "Guards, if they're still there, lock them in this cell until I return." "Yes, Princess!" said the guards, and they ran out of the room. Tiffany took Sunset to the sirens' bathroom. It was a fancy-looking bathroom with a big bathtub, which had a shower in it, and Tiffany found all kinds of soap and shampoo in the cupboards. "Hold on," said Sunset. "I may have soiled myself pretty bad, which could make washing me awkward. I'll be right back." Sunset ran out the door, and returned about five minutes later. "My mess is now on Adagio's bed." Tiffany laughed. "Well, I don't think she'll be using it again anyway. Are you ready for your bath now?" "Yes." "First let's rinse you off in the shower." Sunset stepped into the bathtub, not removing her filthy outfit as it needed to be washed as badly as she did. Tiffany turned on the shower, and Sunset stood under it, greatly enjoying the warm water as it rinsed much of the gunk and slime off her. When Tiffany turned off the shower, Sunset was still dirty and smelly, but considerably cleaner. Then Tiffany put the plug in the drain and turned on the water. Sunset sat down as the tub slowly filled with water, and Tiffany put soap in there to make it a bubble bath. Once the tub was full, Tiffany lathered Sunset's hair with shampoo. Sunset really appreciated this. Once Tiffany was done, she put some soap on a scrubber and scrubbed Sunset's back, covering her in suds. "Thank you for doing this," said Sunset. "I wasn't looking forward to returning to camp like that." "Thank YOU for rescuing me," said Tiffany. "It really wasn't pleasant being locked in that dungeon for a week, and I'll need a shower when this is done too." Bubbles suddenly appeared around Sunset in the tub. Sunset blushed. "I'm so sorry, Princess. I didn't mean to." Tiffany just giggled. "I don't mind. I actually find it kind of funny. Besides, it's not as unladylike as me peeing through my underwear in the corner because there were no toilets in the dungeon and I really don't want to expose my nether regions. They gave me Kan'u Juice too so I had to pee like every hour." "Oh. I'm sorry to hear that. Are you all right?" "I suppose it's better than what you had to go through, and I'm over it already." Tiffany started to scrub Sunset's sides and smelly armpits. "But when I had to go to the bathroom in the OTHER way, I did pull down my panties, and kept everything hidden under my dress." "Well I'm glad you didn't mess yourself," said Sunset. "It's REALLY unpleasant." Soon Sunset's entire top half was covered in suds. Tiffany tentatively said "Um... is it all right if I..." Sunset got on all fours so her butt was in the air. "If you don't mind. My shorts smell even worse from using them as a toilet so much." "If you don't mind, neither do I." Tiffany scrubbed Sunset's butt really hard, creating more suds than was on her top half. Sunset enjoyed this. She hoped she wouldn't accidentally fart in Tiffany's face, but she didn't. Once Sunset's stinky shorts were covered in suds, Tiffany scrubbed her legs. "All right, you can sit down now." Sunset resumed sitting position, and Tiffany raised her lower legs and washed them. When she started to scrub her feet, this tickled Sunset, who splashed around in the sub, soaking Tiffany. "Sorry, Princess," said Sunset when her feet had been washed and she stopped splashing. "It's all right," said Tiffany. "I really need to wash too." She sniffed her armpit and recoiled. Sunset hadn't noticed Tiffany's smell over her own. Then Tiffany poured warm water over Sunset's head to rinse the shampoo out of her hair. She drained the tub and rinsed Sunset under the shower one more time. Sunset stepped out of the shower, dripping wet and with no visible signs of how dirty she had been earlier. "How do I look?" "Clean," said Tiffany. "And how do I smell?" Tiffany sniffed Sunset and recoiled. "You... might want to wash hard every day if you want to get the smell out." Sunset sniffed herself and sighed in disappointment. "Well, it's better than before, at least." "Now, let me take a shower." Tiffany stepped into the shower and washed herself off. Like Sunset, she didn't undress, her dress was already wet from Sunset splashing her and smelly from not washing for a week. She exited the shower. "How do I smell?" Sunset sniffed her. "Clean," she said. Tiffany walked into another room with Sunset. Inside was a gem similar to the geode. She picked it up and absorbed its power and grew pegasus wings. "It'll take a lot faster to fly back to the kingdom than to walk there. I'll give you a ride." "Are you sure? It's a long way." "I'm stronger and faster than I look. Besides, you're the reason I'm not rotting in a dungeon peeing my panties anymore, and you went through a lot to get here." "Then, thank you so much. Can you drop me off at the cave near the land of giant food? That's where the portal to Earth is." "Sure." "What about the guards?" "Some of them have wings when they get their power back. They'll carry those without wings, and the sirens." Once they were ready, they took off, Tiffany carrying Sunset, and three of the guards carrying the smelly sirens. As they were flying above the desert, Sunset said "I have to pee." It had been an hour since the last time and there were still four days before the effects of the juice would end. "I could set you down and tell everyone to look away," said Tiffany. "No thanks, I'll hold it." It took a few hours rather than days but they reached the edge of the desert at the land of giant food. "There's the bathroom," said Tiffany, pointing to it. "Actually... I don't have to go anymore." Sunset blushed. "Oh. I'm so sorry." "It's all right. The desert heat dried me, and I already smell." "Well, thank you again for saving me, and you're always welcome to return." "I'll be sure to bring my friends here sometime. Goodbye." "Bye." Sunset walked through the cave and through the portal back to camp. She sniffed herself to see if returning to her world would make the smell go away. It didn't. She sheepishly walked over to the other girls. "I'm back." As soon as her friends got near her, they caught a whiff of her. "Phew, you smell just awful," said Applejack. "Yeah, I know," said Sunset. "Did you get sprayed by a skunk?" Pinkie asked. "It's kind of a long story." "You've only been gone a minute," said Twilight. "A minute? I was there for almost a week." "Ooh, I remember reading something about the possibility of other worlds that run on a different time than here." Twilight was really excited about this. "So, if you can put up with my smell, I'll wash hard every day and hopefully get it out soon." "You smell rather foul, but we can put up with it and give you a major wash every day," said Rarity. "Thank you," said Sunset. "So, are you gonna tell us what happened?" Pinkie Pie asked, sounding interested. "Well, I was on my way back from the outhouse when I saw a light inside a cave, and..." Sunset told her story, and allowed Rainbow and Pinkie to laugh when she mentioned wetting and messing herself, or wedgies. Afterwards, they continued to have fun on their camping trip, despite Sunset's stench. They were at camp for another two days. Sunset still needed to pee a lot, but made it to the outhouse every time, except first thing in the morning. But she wasn't too ashamed of it, plus Pinkie told her from personal experience that the pee smell comes out easy. Once they got home, driving with the windows open, they washed her in a wooden tub, still in her smelly outfit, scrubbing her with lots of soap. They washed her for an hour yet still couldn't get the smell out, though it did decrease slightly. That night she put her wet, smelly outfit in the wash as she changed into her pajamas, but it only decreased the smell as slightly as washing her had. So she decided to stay in this outfit the entire time while they continued to wash her every day. After about a week, both she and her outfit were finally clean of the smell and she was able to put the whole experience behind her. And as for the sirens, Princess Tiffany had them put in the stockade for a week, in which they were fed the same drink and fruit as Sunset, as well as another fruit that would give you explosive diarrhea for a few days. Though they were still covered from head to foot in horse manure (which somehow hadn't dried in the desert heat), this didn't make soiling themselves repeatedly any less unpleasant. The horses, elephants, and monsters would also walk by and pee on them often. Once the week was over, they were locked in the dungeon. There was a toilet in the dungeon, as their week of torture was over, but they were so filthy at this point they just went in their pants. After a month, Sonata gave a sincere apology and was released, starting a new life after a major wash, but Adagio and Aria were too stubborn and remained in the dungeon in their messy state to the end of their days. Author's Note Credit to clipclopurpornisaflop for giving me the idea of Tiffany washing Sunset before her return. My original draft had her return to camp before getting a bath from her friends, but I liked this better. Also, the sirens' defeat went through a few phases, I wanted a balance of something not too stretchy and comeuppance for what they did to Sunset.
A New WorldSunset Shimmer woke up one morning. She was inside a sleeping bag in a tent, as she was on a camping trip with her friends. She stretched her arms, yawned, and got out of her sleeping bag. She changed out of her slightly sweaty pajamas into a tank top the same shade of purple as them, and a short, tight pair of jean shorts. She ran to the camp outhouse to take her morning pee. Afterwards, she headed back to the tents. She was just walking by a nearby cave when a mysterious green light could be seen shining from inside it. Curious, Sunset walked into the cave, and the further she progressed, the brighter the light grew. Eventually, she reached a wall, where the light seemed to be shining from. Sunset put her hand on the wall. It went through it. Could this be a portal to another world? There was only one way to find out. Sunset walked through the wall. She reappeared in another cave which had purple walls lined with gems. It was quite a sight to behold. She just had to tell her friends about it. She turned around to go back to her world, but slammed right into a rock wall and fell on her butt. She could hear some female voices laughing with an echo. For some reason, they sounded familiar to her. They must have closed the gateway. Sunset stood up, rubbing her butt, and walked out of the cave into a bizarre-looking land. The sky was pink, and there was giant food everywhere. Mostly a wide variety of fruits and desserts. She walked over to a giant apple, which reminded her of a story Princess Twilight had told her about Discord. She took a bite into it, and immediately it sprayed her with apple juice. Sunset was soaked through. She was a little uncomfortable at how sticky it felt, but didn't mind too much, because the apple was delicious. After taking a few more bites, she walked over to another one. Before she could bite into it, a giant worm came out. Sunset was startled, backed away, and fell over a ledge, landing in sitting position on top of a giant cake with vanilla frosting. Sunset was very hungry, as she hadn't eaten breakfast today, so she started eating as much cake as she could, not caring that she was getting frosting all over herself. Once Sunset was full, she belched loudly, and blushed, giggling nervously at this unladylike display even though no one was here. She slid down the side of the cake, landing on her feet. She looked at the state she was in, and shrugged, deciding to just explore this new world some more and then figure out how to get back. Suddenly, a large, furry monster walked up to her. Sunset stood frozen with fear. Surely she must look delicious covered in frosting, and she was about to be this monster's dessert! But instead of putting her in its mouth, the monster started to lick Sunset hard. It was drooling as much as Cerberus or an orthros, but Sunset laughed at how much this tickled. Once Sunset's front half was frosting free, the beast turned her around and licked her back half. When it was done, Sunset was no longer covered in frosting, but dripping in slobber. This disgusted her a little, but she was relieved that the monster only seemed to care about eating sugar. Sure enough, the monster progressed to the cake Sunset had landed on and started stuffing itself with it. Sunset walked through the land, taking note of things to try when she wasn't full from cake anymore, until she found two girls sitting sadly at the food area's edge. A desert could be seen outside its boundaries. Sunset walked over to them. "What's wrong?" she asked. The two girls looked up. "You must not be from around here," said the blue girl with the white hair. "Something terrible has happened here recently. I'm Wind Whistler." "I'm Fizzy," said the teal girl with the red and white hair. "What happened?" said Sunset. "I saved my world before, maybe I can save yours." "Our ruler, Princess Tiffany, has been kidnapped by three powerful girls who claim to be sirens from another world called Equestria," said Wind Whistler. "Sirens?" said Sunset. "It must be the Dazzlings! I defeated them once before." "Can you defeat them again?" asked Fizzy, sounding hopeful. "I'm not sure. Last time I had my friends by my side, but the Dazzlings sealed the portal back to my world. Um... what do you call this world?" "Primrose Kingdom." "We call my world Earth, but I'm originally from Equestria as well, and I'll defeat them and rescue Princess Tiffany!" "If you think you're up to the task," said Wind Whistler, "they set up a castle across the desert. There will be a swamp, then a forest which they have total control over. Their castle is just past the forest." "Thanks," said Sunset. She wasn't very confident that she could beat the Dazzlings again, but she had no choice but to set forward. "And by the way," said Fizzy, "if the giant worms or monsters here frightened you, you don't have to worry about them. They're really friendly." "I'll keep that in mind," said Sunset, and she stepped into the desert and walked forward. Author's Note Warning: The rest of the wam won't be this tasty.
A Messy JourneyThe trip across the desert took way longer than Sunset expected. She could see the mountain on the other side, but it was so far away and never seemed to get closer. Fortunately, dehydration wasn't a problem here, because the desert was full of vending machines that, strangely enough, dispensed water bottles or sodas for free. So she stayed hydrated, drinking so much that she had to pee every half hour, but since no one was around to see her, she was able to just pull her shorts down and do her business without much trouble. Occasionally she'd find something to eat as well, such as sandwiches or popsicles. The desert heat dried the drool off her, but she soon became soaked with sweat. She was thankful for all this water and soda across the desert. It would take some time getting used to this world. She slept two nights in a row, since the trip took that long. On the morning of her second day, the cake and apple Sunset had eaten caught up with her. Again, she was able to pull her shorts down and go to the bathroom without worrying about anyone seeing her, but she had nothing to wipe with, and it felt very wet, so once her shorts were back up, her white panties felt dirty. On the third day, Sunset finally reached the edge of the desert. She was panting and dripping with sweat. She sniffed her armpit and recoiled. She had not washed for three days, and between this and how much she had sweated, she smelled bad. It didn't help how dirty her underwear was. She found a tunnel that led through the mountain, which came out at the swamp Wind Whistler had mentioned. The water was green and smelled worse than she did right now. The sky here was full of yellowish green clouds, probably from the stench of the swamp. Sunset walked through the swamp water, which was deep enough to submerge her entire feet and a bit above her ankles. She cringed as she felt it soak through her shoes and get her socks wet. This swamp smelled twice as bad as her stinkiest farts. She had been walking through this foul swamp for a little over ten minutes when she suddenly felt her underwear yanked up to stretch out of her shorts, lifting her in the air. She exclaimed in surprise, blushed, and looked up to see who was giving her a wedgie. It was Sonata Dusk. She was flying with bat wings, evidently a result of the power she and her brethren had obtained. Sonata giggled. "I wanted to do that for SO long ever since you took our powers! Your undies look a little dirty." "Let me down!" said Sunset, struggling against her. "Okay!" Sonata let go of Sunset's panties, and she fell butt-first into the swamp water. Sonata giggled as Sunset became soaked in the foul-smelling water. As if she didn't smell bad enough already. Sonata flew away before Sunset could yell at her. Sunset stood up, pulled herself back together, and continued on her way, hoping Princess Tiffany wouldn't be put off by how she smelled when she reached her. Or better yet, that it would rain and wash all this off her. This was one time she was HOPING for rain. She found another random vending machine, this one containing 2L bottles of soda. Despite the overpowering stench of the swamp, she was thirsty, so she took one bottle of soda and drank it like there was no tomorrow, spilling quite a bit of it down her front. Then she continued to walk forward. At one point she tripped and fell facedown in the swamp water again. If there was any part of her that had been clean of this disgusting water, it wasn't anymore. Eventually, the swamp water ended, and she could see a forest ahead. Sunset felt relieved to be getting out of this area, even though its smell would be on her for the rest of the adventure. Just as she was stopping to take this in, she was suddenly splashed from above by fish heads, and a lot of fishy water with it. Sunset looked up to see Aria Blaze with a bucket in her hands, also sporting wings. "Revenge is so sweet," said Aria. "And we're just getting started. Smell you later!" She flew away laughing. Sunset groaned. She was wet, dirty, and smelled of sweat, body odor, swamp water, and fish. She could handle getting soaked in the rain, but this... ... As Sunset walked through the forest, Adagio Dazzle watched her on a TV screen at her castle. Aria returned. "Nice one, Aria," said Adagio. "It'll take her weeks to get both the swamp water and fish smell out." "And now she's in our forest!" said Sonata. "The one we control with voodoo!" Adagio dropped a Sunset doll above a map of the forest. As if by magnets, it immediately fell to the spot on the map where Sunset currently was, and moved with her. "Let me go first," she said, and she flicked the Sunset doll's butt as hard as she could. In the forest, Sunset yelped in pain and grabbed her butt with both hands. The sirens burst into laughter at this. "Where are you?" said Sunset, looking around as she rubbed her butt. No one seemed to be around, but she knew something had hit her rear end hard. "Are you up for another wedgie?" said Sonata, and she grabbed Voodoo Sunset's panties with her thumb and index finger, and pulled. "Waaaah!" Sunset was lifted into the air by her dirty underwear. She looked up, expecting to see Sonata again, but she wasn't there. This was starting to freak her out. Were the sirens invisible? Adagio, Aria, and Sonata laughed more. Sonata was kicking her legs so much you could see her underwear (all three were wearing their original outfits), but she didn't care. Once Sonata stopped laughing, she dropped the doll, and Sunset landed on her sore behind. "My turn," said Aria. She picked up Voodoo Sunset, and in the forest Sunset levitated into the air. Aria threw Sunset into a mud puddle, landing on her back. The mud was nothing compared to the swamp water, but it did nothing to wash it off or mask her smell. When Sunset stood up, she suddenly felt the last soda she drank go through her, and grabbed her crotch with both hands. "She looks like she has to pee," said Sonata. "Perfect," said Adagio. "Sonata, hold her while we get the animals. Let's have a little fun with her." Sonata gave Sunset another wedgie and held her in the air while Adagio and Aria took dolls of various animals, and placed as many around every tree and bush in the forest as they could. Since they had constructed these dolls, the animals were mere drones under the sirens' control, but Sunset didn't know that. "Let me down!" said Sunset, holding herself with both hands. "I have to go to the bathroom!" Sonata released Sunset, and Sunset ran behind a tree, but the tree branches were crawling with monkeys. Sunset didn't want to pull her shorts down in front of any animals, so she ran around looking for a bush to go behind. She found another bush, but then a deer walked up to her, so she continued running around. The whole while her bladder became more and more full. She was already filthy, but didn't want to suffer the indignity of a pee accident. She finally found a big tree that looked like there weren't any monkeys around it. She ran behind it, and had just unzipped her shorts when she heard a loud neighing sound, and four horses ran up to her. Sunset quickly blushed and zipped herself up again. Her shyness of peeing in front of animals went double for horses because they looked so much like ponies. Running a bit away from the tree, she found an outhouse. Perfect! It was her only shot at some privacy so she could avoid going to the bathroom in her shorts. As she ran toward the outhouse, it suddenly moved away. She looked in the direction it had gone, and saw its new position. She ran toward it again, but then suddenly she went moving in the opposite direction. Sonata giggled as she moved the Sunset doll while Aria had her hand on the outhouse doll. When Sunset regained control, she ran toward the outhouse again, but it moved upwards, then fell back down in another section of forest. Sunset found it and ran at it as fast as she could, feeling the pee sloshing around inside her. But unexpectedly, she rose into the air and flew over it, landing on her butt. She ran to the outhouse entrance, but it moved again. "Whoever you are, this isn't funny!" said Sunset, holding herself and pee dancing. "I really have to go!" "Ooh, I wonder how long until she wets herself?" said Aria. She and Sonata continued to keep Sunset from reaching the outhouse. Eventually, Sunset realized trying to get into this outhouse was a lost cause, so she returned to the path and ran as fast as she could, hoping to find another one. Aria placed the outhouse near the path ahead of Sunset. Sunset saw it, assumed it was a different one, and ran for it as fast as she could, feeling she was about to burst. But then it rose into the air, and never reappeared. Sunset groaned and continued to run. "At this rate, she'll be out of the forest soon," said Adagio. "Way ahead of you," said Sonata, and she started to tickle Voodoo Sunset's armpits with her fingers. In the forest, Sunset could feel herself being tickled and started to laugh uncontrollably. Sonata only had to tickle for five seconds before Sunset started to pee full force. Sonata continued to tickle as Sunset continued to laugh and pee in her filthy shorts. Adagio and Aria watched on their screen, and exchanged glances of satisfaction as they watched the pee run down Sunset's legs. Once Sunset stopped peeing, Sonata stopped tickling. Sunset's laughter slowed down and stopped, and she felt her shorts. They had been wet before, but now they were warm, and smelled of pee in addition to everything else. She blushed beet red. She could not believe she had just peed herself. At least she could take a bit of comfort in the fact that it would be hard for anyone to notice with how messy she already was. As Sunset resumed walking forward, Adagio took out a doll of a large forest monster resembling a giant pig and set it on the path ahead of Sunset. "What's that for?" said Aria. "You know that thing doesn't attack people." "No, but what I'm gonna make it do will be unpleasant for Sunset all the same." Adagio started to cast a spell. Sunset found her path blocked by the monster. "You don't want to eat me," she said. "I don't taste very good like this." The monster didn't look like it was going to make an aggressive move. It just looked confused. Then, yellow sparkles appeared around it, and it suddenly started taking deep breaths, in the way that usually only came before one thing. "Oh no," said Sunset. The monster sneezed, showering Sunset with snot. The very texture of it repulsed her more than the swamp water. She could only imagine how Rarity would react in her position. The monster sneezed on Sunset twice more, each time as effective as the first. Sunset wiped the gooey substance from her face. The monster rubbed its nose, sniffled, and walked away. Sunset continued running, wanting to get out of this forest NOW. She finally reached the forest exit, and saw the sirens' castle not far ahead. This was it. This was the end of her journey. As Sunset ran towards the castle, Aria and Sonata suddenly flew in, wearing rubber gloves, and grabbed Sunset's arms, lifting her up. "I hope you enjoyed our little forest funhouse," said Aria. "And me tickling you," said Sonata. "And that monster sneezing on you," said Aria. "You can thank Adagio for that one." "When I get through with you..." said Sunset. "Phew," said Aria. "She smells real bad." "It's about to get worse!" giggled Sonata. And she and Aria threw Sunset down a manhole. She landed on her back in sewage that had her completely submerged. She sat up instantly, sputtering. The sewage smelled worse than the swamp water. She climbed up the ladder out of the manhole, to find that Aria and Sonata were gone. Author's Note The desert scene was inspired by a scene in Digimon where, after walking through a desert and taking a bath, Sora comments that they were getting pretty smelly. The forest/voodoo scene was also inspired by Puppetmon's first big episode, though there wasn't anything bathroom-related there. And the fish heads, Hey Arnold. Don't worry, Sunset will get through it all just fine, though it will take a while to get the smell out. And she's survived worse.
Sunset vs. the DazzlingsSunset sprinted to the sirens' castle, ponied up, and blasted down the front door. To her dismay, ponying up did not dry clean her at all. She ran to the sirens' throne room as fast as she could. All three sirens were inside waiting patiently for her. "We hope you enjoyed the trip here," said Adagio. "Of course, you'd probably say it stinks," said Aria. Sonata laughed at this. "Where's Princess Tiffany?" Sunset demanded. "She's in the dungeon with many more of her most loyal subjects," said Adagio. "Then all I have to do is defeat you and-" All three sirens blasted Sunset to the ground immediately. Sunset's pony features disappeared. Aria and Sonata got Sunset into a chair and tied her hands to its arms. Then they tied her feet together. "Surely you don't want me stinking up your throne room, do you?" said Sunset. "We'll just leave you here till we have what we need," said Adagio. "What are you after this time?" "We found a source of magic that gave us power, which still didn't give us our old siren powers back. But I discovered there is an amulet that we can use to regain these powers. Once we have it, we'll turn everyone else in this world against each other and feed on their hate. Then it's back to your world, and then, finally, Equestria will be ours!" Sunset struggled against her ropes. "I will stop you!" "How?" said Adagio. "We sealed the way out. Your friends aren't going to help you. We want you to see us destroy it all before we finish you. Aria." Aria held up two chunks of giant fruit that were each about the size of a regular fruit. One looked like a prune, and the other was a fruit Sunset wasn't familiar with. "Eat these," Aria said. "One of them will keep you full for a week. It's no good if you die before seeing our victory. If we don't find this amulet in a week, we'll be back." She held out the fruit chunks to Sunset, who ate them, and then Aria held out a glass of juice. Sunset looked at her suspiciously. "It's not poison," said Adagio. "I told you we want you to see our victory first." Sunset drank the juice. It tasted unfamiliar to her. "What is this?" "It'll keep you hydrated for a week," said Aria. "But it'll make you pee a lot," said Sonata. "And not diluted pee either like when you drink lots of water in one day." "Have fun sitting like that until we get back," said Aria as she, Adagio, and Sonata flew out their window. Sunset sat in her messy state, unable to move much, as the hours went by. Sonata wasn't kidding; that drink did make her pee a lot, even though she never got hungry or thirsty. Rather than give the sirens the satisfaction of letting her squirm again, Sunset decided there was no point in suffering, and peed as soon as she felt the urge grow strong. Between the state she was in and having already wet herself once on this adventure, there was really no point in trying to hold it. One couldn't even tell what color her shorts and tank top were. That evening, she made a rather nasty mess in her already heavily soiled and smelly shorts. This had to have been why Aria gave her a prune. She had to sit in this state for the entire night, and for another whole day, peeing more times than she could count. But through it all she never lost her resolve to fight the sirens and save this world. As unpleasant as this was, she wasn't about to let it defeat her or break her will. She was tougher than that. Besides, she honestly found the Anon-A-Miss situation much worse. On the third day, the sirens returned. Sonata giggled at the sight of the massive puddle under Sunset's chair. By now the pee smell was easier to notice amidst the other smells. "That was faster than I expected," said Sunset, trying to sound unaffected by what they had done to her. "We found it sooner than we expected," said Adagio. "And now, we shall use it to take control of the other two worlds!" This was it. It was now or never. Sunset thought about her friends. About Princess Twilight. How she wanted their worlds to be free of evil like them. How she didn't want the sirens that had put her through all this to win. She could feel magic stirring within her, with a bit of a glow, but it wasn't enough to even pony up. She tried to channel the magic of the amulet with her mind, hoping she could get it to react to her instead of them. Surprisingly, the amulet glowed and was pulled out of Adagio's hand over to Sunset, engulfing her in a bright light. Sunset's bonds were destroyed and she ponied up again. "This cannot be!" said Adagio. "It reacts to you? How?" "My determination must be stronger than yours," said Sunset, and she released a blast of magic, which hit the sirens and sent them flying out the window, disintegrating their wings. They landed in a large, wet, stinky pile of horse manure. Aria stood up and tried to blast Sunset, but it wouldn't work. She tried to flap her wings, but they were gone. Sunset had taken away their power. Aria groaned and sat back down. Author's Note I know, the way she defeated them seemed a bit rushed and made less sense on her own, but I couldn't really think of how else it would work. We'll chalk it up to the amulet's power and her unbreakable determination to beat them, possibly even increased by what they did to her.
AftermathSunset ran down to the dungeon and magically opened all the cell doors. She could tell which one was Princess Tiffany. Both her skin and hair were white and she wore a sparkling purple dress. She almost reminded her of Rarity. "You're free," said Sunset. She quickly checked herself out and blushed when she realized she still wasn't clean, but Tiffany didn't seem to mind. "Thank you," said Princess Tiffany. "What is your name?" "I'm Sunset Shimmer, and I come from Earth. And Equestria. I'm really sorry you had to see me like this." She was covered in sweat, swamp water, fishy water, mud, pee, snot, and sewage, and her shorts were filled with poop. She smelled absolutely horrible. "It's all right. As a matter of fact, as a reward for saving me, I can give you a bath in the sirens' bathtub." "Are you sure you can put up with the smell?" "I will. Where are the sirens now?" "They fell out the window of their throne room." "Guards, if they're still there, lock them in this cell until I return." "Yes, Princess!" said the guards, and they ran out of the room. Tiffany took Sunset to the sirens' bathroom. It was a fancy-looking bathroom with a big bathtub, which had a shower in it, and Tiffany found all kinds of soap and shampoo in the cupboards. "Hold on," said Sunset. "I may have soiled myself pretty bad, which could make washing me awkward. I'll be right back." Sunset ran out the door, and returned about five minutes later. "My mess is now on Adagio's bed." Tiffany laughed. "Well, I don't think she'll be using it again anyway. Are you ready for your bath now?" "Yes." "First let's rinse you off in the shower." Sunset stepped into the bathtub, not removing her filthy outfit as it needed to be washed as badly as she did. Tiffany turned on the shower, and Sunset stood under it, greatly enjoying the warm water as it rinsed much of the gunk and slime off her. When Tiffany turned off the shower, Sunset was still dirty and smelly, but considerably cleaner. Then Tiffany put the plug in the drain and turned on the water. Sunset sat down as the tub slowly filled with water, and Tiffany put soap in there to make it a bubble bath. Once the tub was full, Tiffany lathered Sunset's hair with shampoo. Sunset really appreciated this. Once Tiffany was done, she put some soap on a scrubber and scrubbed Sunset's back, covering her in suds. "Thank you for doing this," said Sunset. "I wasn't looking forward to returning to camp like that." "Thank YOU for rescuing me," said Tiffany. "It really wasn't pleasant being locked in that dungeon for a week, and I'll need a shower when this is done too." Bubbles suddenly appeared around Sunset in the tub. Sunset blushed. "I'm so sorry, Princess. I didn't mean to." Tiffany just giggled. "I don't mind. I actually find it kind of funny. Besides, it's not as unladylike as me peeing through my underwear in the corner because there were no toilets in the dungeon and I really don't want to expose my nether regions. They gave me Kan'u Juice too so I had to pee like every hour." "Oh. I'm sorry to hear that. Are you all right?" "I suppose it's better than what you had to go through, and I'm over it already." Tiffany started to scrub Sunset's sides and smelly armpits. "But when I had to go to the bathroom in the OTHER way, I did pull down my panties, and kept everything hidden under my dress." "Well I'm glad you didn't mess yourself," said Sunset. "It's REALLY unpleasant." Soon Sunset's entire top half was covered in suds. Tiffany tentatively said "Um... is it all right if I..." Sunset got on all fours so her butt was in the air. "If you don't mind. My shorts smell even worse from using them as a toilet so much." "If you don't mind, neither do I." Tiffany scrubbed Sunset's butt really hard, creating more suds than was on her top half. Sunset enjoyed this. She hoped she wouldn't accidentally fart in Tiffany's face, but she didn't. Once Sunset's stinky shorts were covered in suds, Tiffany scrubbed her legs. "All right, you can sit down now." Sunset resumed sitting position, and Tiffany raised her lower legs and washed them. When she started to scrub her feet, this tickled Sunset, who splashed around in the sub, soaking Tiffany. "Sorry, Princess," said Sunset when her feet had been washed and she stopped splashing. "It's all right," said Tiffany. "I really need to wash too." She sniffed her armpit and recoiled. Sunset hadn't noticed Tiffany's smell over her own. Then Tiffany poured warm water over Sunset's head to rinse the shampoo out of her hair. She drained the tub and rinsed Sunset under the shower one more time. Sunset stepped out of the shower, dripping wet and with no visible signs of how dirty she had been earlier. "How do I look?" "Clean," said Tiffany. "And how do I smell?" Tiffany sniffed Sunset and recoiled. "You... might want to wash hard every day if you want to get the smell out." Sunset sniffed herself and sighed in disappointment. "Well, it's better than before, at least." "Now, let me take a shower." Tiffany stepped into the shower and washed herself off. Like Sunset, she didn't undress, her dress was already wet from Sunset splashing her and smelly from not washing for a week. She exited the shower. "How do I smell?" Sunset sniffed her. "Clean," she said. Tiffany walked into another room with Sunset. Inside was a gem similar to the geode. She picked it up and absorbed its power and grew pegasus wings. "It'll take a lot faster to fly back to the kingdom than to walk there. I'll give you a ride." "Are you sure? It's a long way." "I'm stronger and faster than I look. Besides, you're the reason I'm not rotting in a dungeon peeing my panties anymore, and you went through a lot to get here." "Then, thank you so much. Can you drop me off at the cave near the land of giant food? That's where the portal to Earth is." "Sure." "What about the guards?" "Some of them have wings when they get their power back. They'll carry those without wings, and the sirens." Once they were ready, they took off, Tiffany carrying Sunset, and three of the guards carrying the smelly sirens. As they were flying above the desert, Sunset said "I have to pee." It had been an hour since the last time and there were still four days before the effects of the juice would end. "I could set you down and tell everyone to look away," said Tiffany. "No thanks, I'll hold it." It took a few hours rather than days but they reached the edge of the desert at the land of giant food. "There's the bathroom," said Tiffany, pointing to it. "Actually... I don't have to go anymore." Sunset blushed. "Oh. I'm so sorry." "It's all right. The desert heat dried me, and I already smell." "Well, thank you again for saving me, and you're always welcome to return." "I'll be sure to bring my friends here sometime. Goodbye." "Bye." Sunset walked through the cave and through the portal back to camp. She sniffed herself to see if returning to her world would make the smell go away. It didn't. She sheepishly walked over to the other girls. "I'm back." As soon as her friends got near her, they caught a whiff of her. "Phew, you smell just awful," said Applejack. "Yeah, I know," said Sunset. "Did you get sprayed by a skunk?" Pinkie asked. "It's kind of a long story." "You've only been gone a minute," said Twilight. "A minute? I was there for almost a week." "Ooh, I remember reading something about the possibility of other worlds that run on a different time than here." Twilight was really excited about this. "So, if you can put up with my smell, I'll wash hard every day and hopefully get it out soon." "You smell rather foul, but we can put up with it and give you a major wash every day," said Rarity. "Thank you," said Sunset. "So, are you gonna tell us what happened?" Pinkie Pie asked, sounding interested. "Well, I was on my way back from the outhouse when I saw a light inside a cave, and..." Sunset told her story, and allowed Rainbow and Pinkie to laugh when she mentioned wetting and messing herself, or wedgies. Afterwards, they continued to have fun on their camping trip, despite Sunset's stench. They were at camp for another two days. Sunset still needed to pee a lot, but made it to the outhouse every time, except first thing in the morning. But she wasn't too ashamed of it, plus Pinkie told her from personal experience that the pee smell comes out easy. Once they got home, driving with the windows open, they washed her in a wooden tub, still in her smelly outfit, scrubbing her with lots of soap. They washed her for an hour yet still couldn't get the smell out, though it did decrease slightly. That night she put her wet, smelly outfit in the wash as she changed into her pajamas, but it only decreased the smell as slightly as washing her had. So she decided to stay in this outfit the entire time while they continued to wash her every day. After about a week, both she and her outfit were finally clean of the smell and she was able to put the whole experience behind her. And as for the sirens, Princess Tiffany had them put in the stockade for a week, in which they were fed the same drink and fruit as Sunset, as well as another fruit that would give you explosive diarrhea for a few days. Though they were still covered from head to foot in horse manure (which somehow hadn't dried in the desert heat), this didn't make soiling themselves repeatedly any less unpleasant. The horses, elephants, and monsters would also walk by and pee on them often. Once the week was over, they were locked in the dungeon. There was a toilet in the dungeon, as their week of torture was over, but they were so filthy at this point they just went in their pants. After a month, Sonata gave a sincere apology and was released, starting a new life after a major wash, but Adagio and Aria were too stubborn and remained in the dungeon in their messy state to the end of their days. Author's Note Credit to clipclopurpornisaflop for giving me the idea of Tiffany washing Sunset before her return. My original draft had her return to camp before getting a bath from her friends, but I liked this better. Also, the sirens' defeat went through a few phases, I wanted a balance of something not too stretchy and comeuppance for what they did to Sunset.
