Equestria's New Order

by Kronos11111

Equestria's first sin

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Author's Note

This is my first published story and I'm still new and will happily except constructive criticism and feed back. Thank you for reading.


Equestria's first sin

Walking around Comic-Con is pretty fun, seeing all the people dress up and buying recreations of items from their favorite shows...just be careful what you buy or who you buy it from. After buying Chastiefol from a mysterious cloaked man I suddenly blacked out.


Waking up and looking around I noticed a small pond some trees and a few flowers here and there. Walking over to the pond I peer into the reflection. I had short orange hair and a baby like face. I've turned into Harlequin, from The Seven Deadly Sins. Hearing the clanking of amour, I turn around only to have a spear shoved near my throat. The tip drawing blood from my neck.

A guard who had a dark blue mane with a light blue strip down the middle, wearing purple armour said, "Put down the weapon now!" I dropped Chastiefol and kicked it twords him, landing near his hooves. Another guard picked it up. The captain start talking again, "What are you doing in the royal gardens?"

'the royal gardens?' I thought. "I don't know where the royal gardens are? Where the hell am I?"

He looked confused for a moment but quickly put back on a stoic face, "If you don't want to answer than fine. You're under arrest under the orders from the princesses." I don't even try to argue and simply nodded my head, then all I saw was black.


I woke up in a damp cell, my wrists in shackles with a ten foot chain in the wall. I look up to see the captain with eight other pony horse things. There was a tall white one who had a horn and wings, her hair I mix of blue pink and green flowing in a nonexistent breeze; she wore a write dress with the sun on the stomach.

She spoke up, "Step forward to the bars." I got up and noticed just how tall she was, towering over me at 8' 9", "this," she hold up a small crystal, "is a lying detection crystal. If you lie it will turn red. Tell the truth and it turns green. If you lie even once you will be executed, understood?"

"Completely," I replied the crystal started glowing green.

"Now, who are you?"

My mind went completely blank. I merely did what felt natural. I bowed and said, "The Seven Deadly Sins, Grizzly Sin, Sin of Sloth, Harlequin, King of the Fairies." I stood back up to see the gem still glowing green.

The blue one, whom also had a horn and wings, with a mane like the night sky spoke up, "You're a king? What are you doing braking in to the gardens?"

I turned to look at her, "I didn't, one moment I'm home the next I'm here. Where is here by the way?"

The gem still glowing green, I was answered by the first one, "you are in Equestria. I am princess Celestia and this is my sister princess Luna. Seeing as you are telling the truth you will be put into a guest room and be the acting ambassador for..." She leads of for me to finish.

"The great Fairy Forest princess."

"Yes well it's nice to meet you Harlequin. Armour let him out please." The guard from earlier stepped forward his horn glowing a light blue. My shackles fell off my wrists and the door swung opened.

As I walked out a purple unicorn wearing a purple button up blouse and a dark blue skirt that reached down to just above her knees, walked up to me. "Excuse me, King Harlequin. I hope you don't mind me asking, but what is the Seven Deadly Sins? I heard you say it but you never explained exactly what it was." She had a scroll and quill in her hands.

I gave a small, sad smile, "The Seven Deadly Sins were the strongest and cruelest order of holy knight in the kingdom. Answering only to the holy knight grandmaster or the king himself. Each member was a diamond rank holy knight. However all seven of us were also huge criminals, which is why we were also know as the cruelest. We disbanded after we were framed for killing the grandmaster. We got back together for a time but we never stayed together." The room went silent. You could hear a pin drop from a mile away. Suddenly the silence was broken.

"Yeah right," I turned to see a blue Pegasus with a rainbow main spoke up. She wore a white tank top and black sweat pants. "You a holy knight. Your a little colt, how could you be a holy knight." She started laughing.

I picked up a rock off the stone floor and threw it at her, flying past her cheek and cutting her it. "Hey, what was that for!"

I merely pointed two fingers at her cut and only said two words, "status promotion." Her cut exploded covering her face and wall with blood. She yelled and covered her cheek, blood flowing between her fingers.

"Medic, we need a medic!" Yelled a pink earth pony. A unicorn came running down in a nurses outfit. Her horn started glowing pink and the wound slowly sealed closed.

I looked her dead in the eyes and said, "that's how I became a holy knight, and for your information I'm 1,379 years old." I turned to the princesses, "I would like to go the guest room now, please."

The princesses just stood there wide eyed. Luna was the first to recover, "Of course King Harlequin. If I remember correctly captain Amour said you came here with a spear. We'll head down to the amoury then head to your room for rest."

She was about to walk away when I said,"it's fine I got it."I held out my hand towards the wall, "Sacred Treasure Spirit Spear Chastiefol, come forth." Large, thick roots started to sprout from the wall. A large flower bloomed with Chastiefol in the middle. I grabbed it and turned to Luna. "Please lead the way princess Luna."

"O-of course. Please right this way," she started walking down the hallway with me following close behind.

We eventually reached the guest room. Luna turned to me, "I'm sure you're tired so please get your rest. I will send for a servant to wake you up for dinner."

I bowed to her, "Thank you princess Luna and please thank princess Celestia for me. You didn't have to do this. I am now in your two's Dept." I stood back up," and I hope we can be great friends."

She stood there for a minute with a blank stare. After a few seconds she smiled, "and I hope we can be too." With that she turned and walked down the hall. I entered the room, put Chastiefol by the bed frame and passed out as soon as I hit the bed.

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