When the Going Gets Tough...
Author’s Note: Hello again all! I’ve undergone extreme changes, and decided to listen to some of my reviewers (Sonic Flameboom, Zach Langstroth, and many others). I made a new goal, I no longer wish to get featured, I want something that means so much more to me, and that’s pleasing the community, and you, the reader. I want you to remember my stories, and be glad you’ve read them. That would mean more than anything, even going to Equestria forever. I love all my readers, and hope they truly do enjoy and love my work. Remember to leave a like, and leave a comment as well, I really wish to hear your thoughts. Now enough on the mushy gushy stuff, on to the story! (All properties of Hasbro ya’ll hear?)
“I guess I was wrong all along, right Doctor?”
“Yeah Derpy, but it doesn’t matter to me, just don’t leave me.....please”
“Sorry Doctor, I did what I did for a reason, tell Dinky mommy loves her”
“Derpy, NOOOOO”
Suddenly Derpy woke up with a jolt. Things had been pretty weird for the mare lately, since she was always having these crazy dreams. The morning sun shone brightly in her room, shining on her body, making her real hot so she got out of bed. She noticed Doctor Whooves, her boyfriend and her daughter’s father role figure, was gone.
“Must be downstairs” Derpy thought as she went to the bathroom to prepare herself for the day.
As she brushed her teeth, Derpy noticed something move in the hallway, since their shadow illuminated on the wall. Although she shrugged it off, and began to spit and rinse. Little did the pegasus know her daughter was sneaking up on her, attempting to scare her.
“MORNING MOMMY!” Dinky yelled behind Derpy, making her jump and take flight, only to bump her head on the ceiling.
“Dinky! You frightened me!” Derpy said still shocked as her daughter began to giggle.
“Sorry mommy, you’re just so easy to scare!” Dinky said as she hugged her mother, as Derpy returned the gesture.
“I guess I am, though let’s get you ready for Breakfast so you have something to eat before School ok?” Derpy said as a frown appeared on her daughter’s face, making Derpy feel bad.
“Mommy, I don’t wanna go to school, nopony likes me there! I have no friends, and they all pick on me, especially Diamond Tiara” Dinky said as she complained.
“Sweetie I know, I told Ms. Cheerilee to watch out for you, and I promise if you go to school, mommy will take you somewhere special after!” Derpy said smiling as Dinkie looked up at her mother.
“You promise?” Dinkie asked.
“Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a muffin in my eye!” Derpy said as she and her daughter hugged and laughed.
“Now you brush your teeth, I’ll be downstairs ok?” Derpy said as she began to leave the room.
“Ok mommy!” Dinkie said cheerfully as she brushed her teeth.
As Derpy walked downstairs, the smell of Eggs, Carrot Muffins, and Toaster Strudels filled the air.
“Oh you’ve outdone yourself today Carrot Top!” Derpy said smiling as she walked to the table, and sat next to Doctor Whooves.
“Thanks for the compliment Derpy, You know I cook larger meals on Friday!” Carrot Top said when she noticed Derpy and Doctor were nuzzling each other, making her sigh.
“Nopony cares to even hear me talk” Carrot Top said smiling at the two as she continued making Breakfast.
“Morning love” Doctor Whooves told Derpy as he kissed her cheek.
“Morning to you too, Doctor” she giggled as she gave him a peck on the lips.
“Eww mommy!” Dinky said as she pulled out her seat and sat in it, making Derpy, Carrot, and the Doctor laugh in unison.
“Oh Dinky, you’ve seen me do this before!” Derpy said smiling at her child.
“I know, but its still weird!” Dinky said, when they all suddenly heard a CRASH! come from the hallway.
“Oh no” Doctor Whooves said nervously.
“Not the vase again” Derpy said as Dinky looked at the adults in confusion.
“What? Who’s that?” Dinky asked as they heard the noise coming closer.
“Its-” Carrot Top said when she was interrupted.
“Hi *hiccup* guys” Berry Punch said as she drunkenly walked (and tumbled) her way down the stairs.
“Oh no, are you ok?” Dinky asked innocently as Carrot Top only snorted in disgust.
“Yeah that drunken waste of a pony is ok, she’s so revolting at times with her ‘late night parties’ and ‘excessive drinking’ every night of my LIFE!” Carrot Top said when Berry Punch came and put a hoof around her.
“You didn’t say that in *hiccup* BED last night!” Berry Punch slurred as Carrot Top blushed hard.
“You drunken fool, go back to bed, I don’t know what you’re talking about!” Carrot Top said as Berry Punch smirked and swished her tail.
“Yeah yeah yeah, you DON’T *hiccup* know what I’m saying Carrot babe, well I’ll wait for “Round 3” in bed!” Berry Punch giggled as she walked casually back to their room, quickly sobered up.
“D-Darn you Berry Punch! I swear that mare can sober up so quickly after a drink; but still likes to act like a drunkard. She could probably trick Celestia herself if she tried!” Carrot Top complained as Derpy uncovered Dinky’s ears.
As Derpy looked at the time on her wall, it read 7:45 A.M, making Derpy’s eyes widen in pure shock.
“Oh Celestia, Dinky you’re gonna be late for school!” Derpy said shocked as everypony stopped what they were doing and looked at the time.
“Oh you’re right! Quick if you leave now you can still make it” Carrot Top said as she handed Dinky her lunch box and a muffin.
“I can’t take her, I haven’t showered yet!” Derpy said frantically as she quickly brushed Dinky’s mane.
“Don’t worry love, I’ll take her to school as I go to work” Doctor Whooves said kindly, making Derpy smile.
“Oh you’re such a gentle stallion! Thank you” Derpy said as she kissed him.
“Uh mom, school?” Dinky said impatiently, as the two adults blushed and smiled.
“Oh right!” the Doctor said as he put Dinky on his back, and ran as fast as he could to her school so she could be on time.
Doctor Whooves ran as fast as he possibly could, as Dinky held on tight around his neck. He saw the school in sight, but knew he’d have to pick up the pace.
“Almooosst Theeerreee” The Doctor hissed through his teeth as he bolted full speed up the hill, passing Big Macintosh and the Crusaders.
As soon as the bell tolled 8 AM, the Doctor stopped right in front of the door, and nearly crashed into a waiting Cheerilee.
“Oh! Good morning Doctor” Cheerilee said smiling as Dinky climbed down from his back.
“Morning Ms. Cheerilee, good day we’re having huh?” he asked the school teacher, as beads of sweat rolled down his cheek. Cheerilee noticed this, and began to smile.
“Wanna come in for a drink?” Cheerilee asked kindly as the Doctor smiled with relief.
“Thank you very much for the offer!” Doctor Whooves said as Cheerilee looked to see if any more kids were coming, then closed the door.
As Cheerilee poured him a cup of Orange Juice, Doctor Whooves looked around the classroom, and noticed Dinky sitting in the back of Filthy Rich’s daughter, Diamond Tiara. He smiled at Dinky, who flashed him the brightest smile he’d ever seen.
“Uh Doctor, I got your drink” Cheerilee said tapping him, as he snapped back to focus.
“Oh! That was quick, um thank you so much Cheerilee” he said smiling as he began to leave.
“Say bye to Doctor Whooves class!” Cheerilee said as the class waved and said bye, especially Dinky, who yelled ‘I love you’ at the top of her lungs.
“Oh be quiet, Derpy reject!” Diamond Tiara said as Silver Spoon snickered.
“Diamond Tiara” Cheerilee said sternly.
“Sorry Ms. Cheerilee, I was just saying what she is. Besides, she’s as big of a derp than her mother!” Diamond Tiara said coldly as the class silenced, and Cheerilee stared in complete shock of what she just heard.
“You take that back, at least my daddy isn’t a fake con like yours!” Dinky said angrily as Diamond Tiara laughed.
“Oh please, you don’t even have a father! He was too ashamed he made a sad excuse for a pony like you, and would have to see your mom’s ugly eyes every day of his life!” Diamond Tiara said laughing coldly as Dinky began to cry.
“Ya’ll better shut ‘yer trap Diamond Tiara!” Apple Bloom said as she got up from her seat.
“Yeah! Leave Dinky alone you brute!” Sweetie Belle said as she got up to comfort Dinky.
“Oh yeah, and why should I?” Diamond Tiara said as Scootaloo came from behind and put her in a choke-hold.
“Simple, because I'll continue to do this you evil freak!” Scootaloo said as she dropped her on the floor and began to fight her, making the whole class cheer.
“Girls, THAT’S ENOUGH!” Cheerilee said as Apple Bloom joined in, and the three froze mid punch.
“Everypony outside, except for you five!” Cheerilee said angrily as the students left hastily.
“All of you find your own corners to sit in right now” Cheerilee said as they all separated from each other.
“Diamond Tiara I am disgusted and surprised at your behavior today” Cheerilee said as Diamond Tiara looked down in shame, and anger.
“I’ll have to call your father to pick you up, and visit later to discuss what you did here today” Cheerilee continued, when Diamond Tiara looked at her in fear.
“Please don’t tell my father, he’ll ground me oh please don’t tell him!” Diamond Tiara cried as Cheerilee and everpony else in the room rolled their eyes in annoyance.
“Sorry Diamond Tiara, but you’ve brought this upon yourself. Now for the rest of you, I’ll be calling your parents/ guardians as well. Except you Scootaloo, you live with me” Cheerilee said as they all cowered in fear of what shall be coming, but this only made the teacher smile.
“Fear not my little ponies, for you all did good, even though the fighting was not needed. Although I’m still very proud of what you did for poor Dinky here, and I’m sure your family and your grades for today will agree” Cheerilee said as the fillies looked at each other and smiled, proud of what they achieved.
“Now you girls go outside and have fun, Dinky I called your mother, she’ll be here for you in a short while sweetheart. In the meantime, go outside and play as well!” Cheerilee told the young filly as she smiled and ran out with her new friends.
“I hope you know you’re in HUGE trouble for what you did here, missy” Cheerilee said sternly as Diamond Tiara groaned and hid her face on the desk with her hooves.
Meanwhile to Derpy....
“C’mon line hurry up! My Dinky needs me” Derpy told herself as she waited with Carrot Top and Berry Punch on line at the Supermarket.
“I know you’re worried Derpy, don’t worry we’ll get to her” Carrot Top told the blonde mare kindly as she smiled.
“Yeah, and we’ll give that little brat and her uptight father a piece of our minds!” Berry Punch said boldly, making Derpy laugh. She loved her friends, they always cheered her up, no matter what. Suddenly Derpy felt something tap her shoulder so she looked around, only to see its Octavia and Vinyl Scratch.
“Derpy!” Octavia smiled as she hugged her long time friend.
“Hey Octavia, hey Vinyl” Derpy said as she waved at the dj, who waved back and smiled back.
“ I see you went shopping too, we just started!” Octavia said laughing as Derpy forced a laugh, making the gray pony stop and stare at her.
“Derpy you don’t seem all that happy, is something the matter?” Octavia asked curiously, as Derpy sighed and began explaining.
“So now Cheerilee wants us there pronto, but this is gonna take forever!” Derpy said as Octavia thought.
“Ok seems like you’ve got a dilemma... Wait I got an idea!” Octavia said smiling as Derpy looked at her confused.
“You guys go, I’ll watch your stuff and pay for it, and I’ll send Vinyl to go do our shopping!” Octavia said as Derpy smiled and hugged her friend.
“That’s a GREAT idea! Thank you so much I’ll pay you later. Meet us at the school!” Derpy said smiling as she, Carrot, and Berry ran out of the grocery store, determined to go get Dinky and take her home.
As the three mares sped their way through Pony-Ville and reached the school, they all stopped outside to catch their breaths.
“Ok guys, be ready for the waterworks!” Carrot Top said as she opened the door, and they all became slack-jawed at the sight. The room was near empty, with only Cheerilee, Diamond Tiara and her father occupying it.
“Oh hi Ms. Whooves, she’s outside playing right now. Do you wish to go get her?” Cheerilee asked as she looked up from Filthy Rich and his daughter.
“Um yeah, I’ll do that” Derpy replied as she went outside through the back, only to see her child laughing and playing with the Cutie Mark Crusaders. The best part was that, for once, Dinky was smiling and truly enjoying herself. Derpy couldn’t help but smile as she saw her daughter play tag and run around the playground without a care. Suddenly Dinky stopped running and noticed her mother at the doorway, smiling brightly.
“Mommy!” Dinky cried happily as she ran and hugged her mother tightly.
“Oh my Dinky” Derpy said as she fought hard to hold back her tears.
“Mommy today Diamond Tiara was real mean to me! She talked mean things about you and daddy” Dinky said as she waved goodbye to her new friends as they began to leave.
“Bye Ms. Whooves, I’ll call you and explain this whole situation” Cheerilee said as they all began to leave the school.
"Bye Filthy and his rude daughter!" Berry Punch said smirking as she stuck her tongue out at him.
"The name is Filthy RICH DARN IT!" he yelled behind her as she shut the door hard behind her.
As they all waited for their two other companions to arrive, Dinky decided to break the silence with a question that had been in her mind all morning.
“Mommy....what happened to my real daddy?” Dinky asked, piercing Derpy’s heart as the bad memories began to flood in her mind of her ex-boyfriend.
“I-I-I’ll explain later muffin” Derpy said with a fake smile.
“I knew this day would come soon, but I wish it wasn’t now.......” Derpy sighed to herself as she hugged her daughter again.
Well that was long, you guys asked for longer chapters, and I hope I pleased. I hope you all enjoyed the first chapter, and will continue to follow this story. Don’t forget to read my other story “My Sweet Burning Desire” as well! Give a like, Please for my sake leave a comment, and give a favorite! I hope you truly do like this story, and don’t forget to review as well, I wanna improve, and be approved as well. Until later brothers(and sisters)!
Author’s Note: Hey there again reader! I’m sorry if I might’ve taken so long with this book, I was busy writing my next book, and had to send out chapter 4 for “My Sweet Burning Desire” early for Mindless Brotaku’s birthday. I hope you guys really enjoy this book, and for you that haven’t done it yet, read “My Sweet Burning Desire”, these two stories cross paths with each other. Do not forget to COMMENT, I love reading your thoughts, and I’m tired of seeing the comments section near empty! Remember to please like, favorite, and comment on this story ok? I love to read your thoughts, ideas, and reviews. I love you guys, you won’t believe how much you all reading and enjoying my stories have meant to me. Now lets get the story going!
“Thanks again for the help Octavia!” Derpy said smiling weakly to the gray mare as they walked from the school to Sugar Cube corner to relax after the recent events.
“Your welcome Derpy, anything to help out a friend” Octavia said as Vinyl raised her head, revealing a frown on her face.
“Hey what about me? I helped out too!” Vinyl said whining as everypony laughed, including her.
“So Derpy, hows the Doctor?” Octavia asked as Derpy’s facial expression turned into a wide smile.
“Oh he’s good, real good” Derpy said dreamily as Octavia shot her a look of confusion.
“What do you mean by that?” Octavia asked Derpy, who began to blush hard.
“Oh I meant that he’s doing great, he’s just fine!” Derpy said as they neared Sugar Cube Corner.
“Yeah, you totally meant that in the ‘dirty’ sort of way” Berry Punch whispered in the blonde mare’s ear as they entered the store.
“I-I did not” Derpy said as she blushed, making Berry Punch smile in victory.
“You DID! OMG Derpy you dirty mare you” Berry Punch said as Derpy blushed harder, making Carrot Top pull her into a seat.
“Stop it Berry you dirty pony! You’re bothering her!” Carrot Top said as Berry Punch sat in the booth and slumped in her spot.
“Welcome to my world Berry” Vinyl whispered into the purple mare’s ear, which caused her to smile and roll her eyes.
Suddenly walking in the store was Derpy’s weather patrol squad. The squad contained Thunderlane, Flitter, Cloudchaser, Firefly, and their leader Rainbow Dash.
“Hey look who it is guys!” Flitter said smiling as she noticed Derpy and her friends.
“Hey guys” Derpy said smiling as they went to her table, shocked to see the mare who’s supposed to be off-duty at the store.
“Derpy, what’re you doing here?” Thunderlane asked while she sighed and pointed to her friends and Dinky, making them all “oh” in unison.
“H-H-Hi Rainbow Dash” Dinky told the cyan pegasus as she waved her hoof nervously. Dinky, like Scootaloo adored Rainbow Dash.
“Hey squirt, your mom tells me a LOT about you” Rainbow Dash told the filly as Derpy smiled at her daughter.
“Really? I’m a huge fan” Dinky said as Rainbow Dash smiled at her, making the filly even more nervous.
“Yeah she told me you were, you should join my fan club! They need a secretary, and YOU seem like the type. Just go talk to Scootaloo about it, and when you join you get a whole load of quality time with yours truly!” Rainbow Dash said boasting as she rubbed a hoof on her chest and smirked at the filly.
“Sure Rainbow dash, I’ll join!” Dinky said as Firefly looked at Rainbow Dash with a dissaproving glare.
“You’re one boastful pony aren’t you? The Great and Powerful Trixie has nothing on you” Firefly said as everypony broke into laughter, much to Rainbow’s dismay.
“Oh gosh ‘almost as boastful as Trixie!’ oh that’s rich!” Pinkie Pie said laughing hysterically as everypony stopped laughing and stared at her.
“Pinkie Pie, what the hay?” Cloudchaser asked in confusion.
“What? It was funny” the pink pony told her as she continued to laugh.
“No Pinkie Pie, I think she means how the hay did you get there? You weren’t there a moment ago” Thunderlane told the party pony as she stopped laughing and started to think.
“Oh! I came around when Firefly told the joke, you all didn’t notice me though” Pinkie Pie said grinning happily.
“Pinkie Pie....you are SO random!” Rainbow Dash said as they all laughed again, including Pinkie.
“Hey guys it’s getting late, I gotta go meet up with Applejack soon. So I’ll see you guys later!” Rainbow Dash said as she waved bye and left swiftly.
“Yeah we should get going too, don’t wanna wake up late tomorrow. See you first thing tomorrow Derpy!” Flitter said as she and her friends left the store as well, but not without some cupcakes for the way home to Cloudsdale.
“Hey Pinkie Pie, mind starting us off with some smoothies?” Vinyl asked, as Pinkie Pie nodded with a quick ‘Okie Dokie Loki’ before heading for the Smoothie machine.
“Mommy why are we waiting here?” Dinky asked her mother innocently, as Derpy smiled and kissed the filly’s cheek.
“Oh Dinky, mommy has to wait for her Coltfriend. Though do you wanna go home?” Derpy asked as the filly nodded before letting out a yawn.
“Alright sweetie, just wait a few more minutes ok?” Derpy told her as Carrot Top spoke up.
“Don’t worry Derpy I’ll take her” Carrot Top said smiling as she yawned as well.
“We’ll leave as well, I got to unpack those groceries” Octavia said smiling as Derpy nodded in approval.
“Let’s go home together, it’ll be safer” Carrot Top said as they waved bye to the grey mare.
“Bye mommy, I love you!” Dinkie said smiling as she waved bye to her mother.
“Bye Dinky, mommy loves you too!” Derpy said as she waved until they were out of sight.
As she turned to look out the window she noticed they left Berry Punch behind, laying her head on the window fast asleep.
“Berry Punch wake up!” Derpy told the sleeping pony as she shook her.
“W-what? Oh hi Derpy” Berry Punch said smiling as she rubbed her eyes softly.
“Berry Punch, Carrot Top and the others left you here!” Derpy said as Berry Punch simply looked at her friend, and shrugged her shoulders.
“Oh well, wouldn’t be the first time she’s done it to me. At least I’ll be able to hang out with you, and not be alone!” Berry Punch said smiling as Derpy smiled back and rolled her eyes at her friend.
“Sometimes Berry you are just too much to handle” Derpy said laughing as Pinkie set down their drinks.
“HEY! Where did they all go?” Pinkie Pie asked as Derpy explained to her what happened.
“Oh, well then...more for me!” Pinkie exclaimed smiling as she left one for the Doctor, and took the rest for herself.
Meanwhile to Doctor Whooves.....
“Darn it I’m running late!” Doctor Whooves told himself as he rushed through the streets of PonyVille.
As he ran he looked down at his watch to check the time, and crashed into another pony by accident.
“Ouch!” They both said as the Doctor rubbed his head, and got back on his hooves.
When he got up and noticed he had hit Octavia by accident, so he quickly apologized and helped her back up.
“Oh goodness I’m so sorry Ms.Octavia!” Doctor Whooves told her as he helped her back up.
“Oh it’s quite alright Doctor, I’m sure it was an...accident?” Octavia replied as she noticed him staring at her, making her blush slightly.
“Is something wrong?” she asked him, only to get no response. So she quickly decided to call his name.
“Doctor!” Octavia called loudly as she finally gained his attention.
“Yes Ms.Octavia?” doctor Whooves asked the mare softly, as he dusted off some dirt in her mane.
“I was asking if something was wrong?” Octavia told him as he smiled at her.
“Oh no nothing was wrong, I was just admiring the way you look and such” he replied smiling at her making her blush hard.
“Oh! Well uh thank you for the compliment! I must be going though, so I’ll catch you later” Octavia said nervously as she began to leave into her home as quick as possible.
“Goodbye Octavia!” Doctor Whooves said as he continued his way down to Sugar Cube Corner, not noticing a orange maned earth pony watching him.
“What the hay was that all about? I better tell Derpy about this later” Carrot Top said confused as she continued her way home with Dinky.
As he finally reached the door, it was 5:30 P.M, making the Doctor sigh in annoyance.
“I’m five minutes late!” The Doctor complained to himself as he walked into the store, and noticed Derpy and Berry Punch in the back booth.
“Hey love” Doctor Whooves told Derpy as he kissed her cheek.
“Hey stud muffin” Derpy said smiling as she kissed him, much to Berry Punch’s disgust.
“Eww you two cut it out! You’re shaming me darn it, I can’t be seen with you two lovebirds; it’ll ruin my party image!” Berry Punch said as she covered her head with her hooves.
As Derpy and Doctor laughed, they noticed Spike, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo enter the shop.
“Hey those are the same fillies from earlier!” Berry Punch said smiling as she noticed Pinkie Pie hug Spike, but this had disgusted Scootaloo so she immediately stopped and began to take their orders.
“Yeah they helped my Dinky, such nice fillies I should really repay them for what they did for her” Derpy said smiling as they suddenly heard Scootaloo mention she wants ‘Berry Punch’ which caught the purple mare’s attention in a flash.
“I meant the drink!” Scootaloo said quickly, making her friends, Derpy and the Doctor laugh. Meanwhile it only made Berry Punch roll her eyes and smile.
“Haha, guess you even attract fillies!” Doctor said laughing as Berry Punch just sighed and looked away in shame.
Soon enough the fillies decided they were finished eating and left the store in a huff, forgetting to pay Pinkie Pie for their snacks.
“Hey what about my bits?” Pinkie Pie yelled after them as Derpy and her friends stepped behind her, trying to leave as well.
“Don’t worry about it Pinkie, we’ll cover it!” Derpy said smiling as she payed the pink pony the fillies snack expenses.
“Oh thank you Derpy! I’ll make sure to tell your boss to give you a higher raise for this!” Pinkie told Derpy as she only smiled and left the store.
“Man has today been rough on me!” Derpy told her two companions as they trotted home, passing Spike and Sweetie Belle.
“Well, it couldn’t get any worse can it?” Doctor Whooves said smiling as the sun began to set.
Meanwhile to Carrot Top.....
“Alright Dinky go upstairs and prepare for bed sweetie” Carrot Top told the filly kindly as Dinky smiled back at her and ran upstairs.
As Carrot Top began to unwind and watch some T.V, she heard some banging from upstairs.
“Must be Dinky trying to dance again” Carrot Top said as she began to watch ‘Snake Bite Towing’, a show about a pony, his wife, and a zebra who repo carriages/taxi carriages from their owners for not paying their bills.
“Stupid Las Pegasus pony, you should’ve payed up, ‘cause now you just got bit!” Carrot Top said as she began to laugh at their silly catch phrase.
“C’mon Robby let’s get outta here! This place is about as crazy as a mare in heat ‘bo” Jon told his partner as they began to drive off.
When it hit commercials, Carrot Top heard even louder banging, and Dinky scream loudly, so she rushed up the stairs to investigate. When she reached the bathroom she opened the door to find the poor filly tied up and shaking in fear.
“Dinky! What in the hay has happened to you?” Carrot Top asked as the filly’s eyes averted to the ceiling.
“why are you-” Carrot Top began to say until a dark pegasus landed on top of her and hit her with a hard hoof to the face, knocking her out cold and making Dinky scream in terror.
“You thought you could run from me forever Derpy, HAH! This’ll teach you not to mess with me you ditzy moron” the dark pegasus said crazily as he left a note on Carrot Top’s body and leapt out the bathroom window with Dinky, running off into the night.
Author’s Note: Good lordy things are getting drastic! I hope this chapter peaked your interests guys. Remember to please give a like, favorite and a comment, I wanna know if this is good, and wanna make sure my writing isn’t going to waste! Make sure to read My Sweet Burning Desire, then this story will make much more sense, and will make it all the more interesting :). I hope you’ll all continue to follow me, and point out my mistakes! So until later guys, peace!
*Also even though it doesn’t relate to my story, I would like it if you guys read Two Best Sister’s Play by Zach Langstroth. It’s a good read, and you can even suggest what game you want done
on there!*
(The show reference was Lizard Lick Towing, property of Tru TV. It may be staged for television, but it's still a good tv show!)
If you can see this, you’re a boss! The reason my story interacts with My Sweet Burning Desire is because something big is happening soon, so all readers from that book will have to flock to this one to find out the ending. Oh and quick spoiler, Trixie WILL be in this book! :)
